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Thesis II

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That trial, it was raining again, Doran noticed and furrowed his brow as he walked over to one of the large windows of his study and opened it in order to let some fresh air in as that helped him think clearly and focus. It was a freezing kind of rain that only made the current situation more unpleasant. It was … in Scalvoris, people would have called the weather unusually cold, but in Viden where the temperatures tended to vary between very low and very, very low, such weather constituted a heatwave. Already, much of the shimmering white snow that had covered the streets once had been replaced with mud and slush.

Places that had been almost impossible to reach before that season were easily accessible now, the water level in the rivers and lakes and in the bay was rising, and then there were the bugs. To his knowledge, Viden had never had a bug problem before, at least not in the time that he had resided in the city. He couldn’t help but wonder where the bugs were coming from – and when the heatwave would finally end. The heatwave in Scalvoris, an island that he had visited the cycle before in order to hold a series of guest lectures, had only lasted a handful of trials …

He stood in front of the window for a while, watching the street below and listening to the rhythmic sound of the rain hitting the roof (it was louder than the sound that rain normally made, due to almost being made of ice, as if countless tiny needles were hitting the roof). There was something almost calming, something almost meditative that made his thoughts retreat a little into the background about it.

Eventually, he abruptly pulled his gaze away, closed the window again and sat down behind his desk, a desk that was made of expensive dark wood, in order to continue his work.

A couple of trials earlier, he had started to wonder if he might be able to stop heating his apartment soon, but this morning, he had told his servants to light the fireplaces again.

It was warmer than it had been before, warmer than it should be, but he doubted if it would ever get warm enough. Maybe he would add another piece of wood to the fire soon …

With that thought in mind, the son of Ziell who was garbed in comfortable dark pants and a shirt grasped the pen that was on his desk and turned to the thick stack of papers in front of him, his thesis, the final part of his Licentiate. Over the previous two cycles, he had researched the use of the blood of different races in alchemy – and proven that a Lotharro’s endurance or an Ellune’s resistance to cold could be put into a potion, for example. Now all that was left for him to do was to read over what he had written so far again and make a few edits here and there before he delivered the thesis to his superiors.

He was, of course, quite proud of what essentially constituted the discovery of a new branch of Blood Magic and a scientific breakthrough, incredibly proud, in fact, and he was quite happy with what he had accomplished so far, but he had reached a point where he couldn’t wait to finally be finished writing and focus on something else for a while.
Last edited by Doran on Wed Jul 08, 2020 7:29 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 582

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He had already read over his thesis a couple of times over the course of the previous couple of trials, at least a dozen times, in fact, but no matter how often he read it, there was always something that he thought needed to be worded better, clarified or worded differently. His thesis was without a doubt already acceptable in its current state – it had to be, he had made a new discovery, and he had the potions to prove that it worked; his endurance potion was already being used by people – acceptable just wasn’t good enough for him though. It needed to be better.

That was why he persevered, in spite of the fact that his patience that he had previously considered to be nearly unlimited was being tested.

Besides, throwing himself into his research like that did at least keep him from thinking about other aspects of his life, most of the time at least (those thoughts were always at the forefront of his mind in the early morning or in the evening, when there was nothing for him to do and nothing else to focus on).

He took one of the pages that he was not content with yet and started to rewrite it, on a previously empty piece of paper. He wanted to make it clearer to his readers that he had not only proven that racial traits could be replicated with alchemy, but also that the blood of mixed-bloods was just as effective (the first person whose blood he had worked with had been a young woman of mixed Eidisi and Ellune descent who had inherited her abilities from her Ellune parent).

Such things were self-evident and logical to him, but he had come to the realization that not all people were capable of logical thought, at least not all of the time, or familiar with matters of medicine in particular and science in general (or how their own bodies worked).

There was another matter he started to consider as well though. He would not simply deliver the thesis as well as the potions that he had created to the Academy and wait for them to make a decision; he would have to defend his thesis and answer questions. He was not sure who would be present when he did so. Ocraloch would likely be there. He had been the one who had granted him his Certificate, after all. Trandino, the man he wanted to replace as Dean, might be there as well. But who else would want to talk to him?

He decided to write a list of possible examiners and note down the fields that they specialized in as that might have an impact on the things that they would want to talk about (he would not leave anything to chance). It was highly likely that not all of the people that would be present would be alchemists. He needed to make sure that he answered their questions in a way that they could understand (he had already written his thesis so that it was understandable to people that did not have a degree in Blood Magic). Perhaps it would be a good idea to make a list of possible questions on top of that first list?

He grasped another piece of paper in order to fill it with his handwriting before he finally leaned back in his chair for a couple of bits, in order close his eyes, relax, calm down and try to clear his mind, to some extent at least (which would subsequently hopefully help him focus slightly better again) – and finally turned to his thesis once more.

By the time that he was done, it was late afternoon. At least he thought that it was late afternoon. He had begun to lose track of time. He took one more look at his thesis before he put it away and rose from his chair, craning his neck and stretching his arms as he did so as they hurt slightly because he had been sitting relatively still for such a long time. When he looked out of the window again, he noticed that it was still raining. It had been raining for breaks at this point, and it seemed as if it would not stop anytime soon, judging by how heavy the freezing rain still was.

Furrowing his brow and worrying slightly (he couldn’t help but wonder how much more room was in the various bodies of water that surrounded Viden), he made his way over to the marble fireplace in order to see how the fire was faring (it was still burning brightly) before he finally opened the door and stepped into the hallway.

His thesis was finished. He would take it to the Academy in a bit, but for now he wanted to unwind and relax (and maybe have a drink and eat something delicious) – and reward himself for his work.
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Re: Thesis II

Racial Blood Magic:
On the Use of Racial Blood in Alchemy

A Thesis By

Doran Thetys

  1. Introduction: In this section, the author talks about how he aims to prove how the traits of different races can be replicated with alchemy and create a new branch of Blood Magic.
  2. State of Research: This section deals with the existing literature and the state of research and appraises it. There is a lot of literature on alchemy in general, but none on the use of racial blood in alchemy as this is something completely new, something that has never been attempted before.
  3. Research Questions and Research Goal: The aim of this research is to prove that racial blood has a use in alchemy and that the traits of different races can be replicated and put into a potion. The author also lists a number of questions that he intends to answer over the course of his thesis.
  4. Definitions: Here the author deals with the definitions of alchemy and Blood Magic and explains how those sciences work. He also proposes a defintion and explanation of the new field of Racial Blood Magic.
  5. Methodology: This section contains a description of the methods that were used as well as the protocols that were followed when it comes to animal tests and clinical trials.
  6. Lotharro and Ellune: This section contains a description of the Lotharro and Ellune race as well as their abilities that the author of this thesis aims to replicate with alchemy as Lotharro and Ellune are the main focus of this work.
  7. Racial Blood Magic: This chapter contains information on the experiments that were conducted with Lotharro and Ellune blood as well as their (successful) results. The author created an andrenaline and endurance potion based on Lotharro blood that can be used to treat anaphylaxis and heart conditions and a potion that temporarily gives the drinker an Ellune's resistance to cold, among other things. He also proves that the blood of an individual of mixed-blood is just as effective as that of a full-blooded Ellune, for example, provided that they have inherited the resistance to cold from their Ellune parent.
  8. Conclusion: In this section the author concludes that racial blood can be used in alchemy and that the traits of different races can be replicated and put into potions which leads to the creation of the new field of Racial Blood Magic.
  9. Outlook: Here, the author mentions future research projects such as potions based on the blood of races other than Lotharro and Ellune.
  10. Bibliography: This chapter contains approximately a dozen pages worth of titles of books, essays and newspaper articles.
  11. Documents: This section of the thesis contains research protocols, contracts and information given to the volunteers that took part in the clinical trials, interviews, various permissions etc.


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Meditation x4
Writing x2

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Other: A finished thesis! Probably needs to be rewritten by a clerk with nice handwriting though. And copies need to be made! But, the manuscript is finished!


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I'd never have imagined I could enjoy a story about a man writing a thesis so much. Yet I do. I can only cringe at the many frustrating hours Doran must have put into this piece of work, and then the re-write! No computer to easily cut parts out and replace them. Rewrite the whole section that needs to be reworked, and likely the parts that didn't need to be altered but were on the same page as well. Ugh. Horrible. And then there's a spelling check required... Best hire someone to take care of that, else Doran might suffer an aneurysm!

I did see the alterations you made to the thesis! I'm very pleased with the changes, though I'm somewhat disappointed there wasn't an excerpt of the actual thesis itself hidden in your thread. Still, great work! Fingers crossed, I hope his defense goes perfectly!


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