Doorways and Domains (Graded)

The hunt for Lisirra continues - this is for members of both the eastern and southern hosts to take part in. The north did not get off the ground, and the west has a whole different thing going on.

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Continued from here and here.

The goal stood before them. All the weeks of horror and death, marching and vengeance, culminated in this last confrontation. Every scrap of instinct and evidence confirmed that Lisirra was hiding within or beyond the tunnel mouth before them.

There was no doubt in anyone's mind that trickery would be afoot. But the mirrored expressions of resolve and resignation that showed in every set of eyes that looked at each other stated clearly that this was not going to stop the Etzori from exacting their revenge. Many had been lost already, the likelihood was that that there would be many more yet. But to rid the world of Lisirra was too noble a calling to be stalled by the fear of sacrifice.

A small column of ghosts went first, their focus on the door allowing them to maintain travel at a level just above the pooled surface of the standing water. Even a few inches of water, with virtually no current, could still be quite damaging to a ghost that sank into it, essentially conveying into a medium that could swirl them apart if given any splash motion whatsoever.

The living watched as their phantom brothers-in-arms disappeared into the tunnel mouth. There was nothing noticeably odd abut their progress, or the simple disappearance into the dark opening. The current commander nodded, having feared an ambush fashioned specifically to target ghosts. With no apparent repercussions along that line, he now felt better about sending in living troops. With a ghostly presence already established, an ambush intended to target the living would now have ghostly back-up in defense.

The soldiers began to move toward the tunnel's mouth. As soon as boots hit the water, the rippling of the image began. But it was not the water's surface that rippled. It was all else that wavered and distorted. Trropers tried to cry warnings as they felt their bodies become like liquid, slow, but irresistible currents now stretching and pulling them toward the tunnel mouth, which yawned widely now to receive them.

Those that tumbled in such a way as to see back the way they came saw the landscape bubble and swirl, the troops waiting in the rear no longer visible. All was a maelstrom of distorted imagery. But to that cauldron of distorted reflections now came added despair, as additional troops came charging in to rescue those they realized had encountered some sort of trap.

A funnel of swirling inertia captured all that entered, the victims realizing too late that they were already in this radical domain, and had not needed to enter the tunnel. It now advanced upon them.

It was impossible to tell how many were taken, as even the swirling patterns of jungle and stone were lost to the eyes. The lighter colors coalesced into tiny motes that were strewn about as thousands of pinpricks of light, as the darkness took on a sense of endless emptiness.

The troops tumbled slowly, aimlessly, as they drifted steadily apart, the terror of this unknown weightlessness, and the sense of there being no end to it bringing many to panic. Their thrashing seemed only to make them drift a bit faster.

And of course, under and over it all, was the voice of Lisirra, remembered from her taunting at the gates of Etzos when all seemed lost to her siege, promising a slow lonely death of starvation and dehydration as their bodies scattered over the incalculable distances in the void of space.

With no science on Idalos having even the remotest hint of what space was like, none of these soldiers had any reason to realize that the very fact that they were still warm and breathing gave the lie to the Immortal's words. Some though, saw her figure on a point of land far below and wondered how her voice could be so loud and so clear if she were truly that distant.



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8 Saun 719 | Ulric | The Doorway
As the two forces converged and advanced into Lisirra's domain, Ulric took care to remain close to Arthur who was once again carrying Ulric's sword. Ulric's body began to feel a little weaker as they moved further from the city of ghost metal but the sum they'd taken with them seemed to sustain him enough. His body had been battered by the onslaught of copper laden bugs and soldiers from the southern front but he was still standing- or hovering. As Ulric marched his feet seemed to fade in and out of sight as his form wavered from entirely materialized to hardly materialized at all. His skin went from firm and rigid to something more akin to silk. Feeling his body weaken and his ectoplasm loosen, Ulric possessed Arthur's body again and began moving among the soldiers.

He syphoned plenty of raw emotions from the warriors around him. Enough to help him regain a measure of his strength for the battle to come in a way that would not affect those around him too negatively. He moved through the crowd slowly leeching the emotional energy he could through small touches that went more or less unnoticed in the moving crowd. He could feel their anticipation, the sense of standing at a ledge and peering off the end waiting for something to happen. He could taste fear in the emotion of a smaller man whom was entirely unaware he was being syphoned until his fear faded into passivity and Ulric released him.

When they finally arrived at what the collective seemed to believe could only be the entrance to Lisirra's domain, Ulric stepped out of Arthur's body and materialized his own. He didn't volunteer to go with the initial wave of the dead because he had no desire to separate with Arthur in such an unknown place. He'd promised to do his best to bring Arthur through and he would keep his word. He always had... hadn't he? The ghosts went through seemingly undisturbed and Ulric grinned an overconfident grin. He could pass. Yet when the living soldiers moved in the world seemed to turn against them. Their forms began to rippled like the water should have been and Ulric stepped forwards as if he wanted to help.

Before he could get to the water, Ulric felt a hand firmly grasp his shoulder and pull him back. His head whipped around to find Arthur's eyes transfixed on the water and the living who had rushed in to aid their sinking friends. As they ran in the water seemed to consume them just the same and Arthur thought that he could prevent Ulric from being trapped by simply stopping him from moving forward but this was Lisirra's domain and not bound to Arthur's hopes. It was too late for them.

As the world began to swirl away into the nothing Arthur shouted "Merge!" and Ulric quickly fled into his body. There was no battle this time, no struggle for control of the body. They'd become proficient at this routine. When Ulric stepped into Arthur he began to understand why Arthur suggested they merge. Now they could not be separated. Not while Arthur lived. They fell through the emptiness as did the rest who were caught in the immortal's domain. The falling was more disorienting for Arthur than for Ulric who was lashing out with his tendrils to try and grab hold of something for the first few moments of falling before he thought it fruitless and because there as little else to do- opted to look around. In the darkness there was one distant figure and a voice. Lisirra's voice.

You still have your sword? Ulric asked Arthur in his mind. Arthur's voice croaked back.

Yes.

Don't lose it.
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In hindsight, Maude could only recall that she and the others had followed the orders their superiors had issued and moved on through the chaos as best they could. Everything else was already like a black hole in her memory. All their efforts had led them to this. At the end of the road, no matter all your efforts, your strife and the goals you may imagine that you have, the exit always waits.

She watched the ghosts of the Etzori, loyal to their city and their people even after death, march into the entrance. She saw the soldiers who went there first begin to ripple and disappear. She felt the tunnel swallow her and all the others as well.

It felt like the body began to ripple and swirl ... but Maude didn’t associate the feeling of it with water. To her, it felt similar to when she had ignited and shifted into a swirling, flaming fire-being. That had been during the bug attacks on the way here. That felt so long ago now. It was still a previous experience that made her able to endure what happened to her without losing her mind. She felt like she rippled, swirled and travelled out into infinity until she was everywhere and nowhere. It seemed to her like she was only one dot among the billions of dots she saw. A law of large numbers seemed to have counted her life to eternity...

Still.

A voice that spoke to her was a voice she recognized. This was a voice she had heard in the past. It was the voice that had made her come this long way. It was the voice of the malady monger Maude Coaley had sworn to blow up if she could, even at the cost of Maude’s own life.

The threats issued by the immortal echoed everywhere. It mattered not. Dehydration was a laughable threat to a fire-being like Maude. Starvation? She didn’t feel cold either. Her own death had been her companion ever since she had decided to join the army. Like all others in the army, she had come here prepared to sacrifice her life in favour of ridding the world of Lissirra, if that was what it would take. She had prevailed during the long battle and endured all the ordeals the immortal had subjected them to. It felt like it was a bit late for threats now ... especially this kind of empty threats.

The voice of Lissirra echoed everywhere. But, far down below her, Maude could see a tiny figure who stood there shouting. It was her, the plague pest herself, looking much smaller than her mighty voice implied. A grandstander, big-mouthed and loud and proud, but tiny behind the grandiose façade? That was how the immortal came off to Maude Coaley at that moment.

Oh, Lissirra was so inferior to the great Zanik, Maude’s beloved deity who she worshipped with all the secret ardour of a fellow musician. Compared to Zanik’s enormous glamour and charisma the ugly little bug-lady down there had very little to recommend her. No wonder they said that Lissirra’s only way to gain followers was to give them poisoned water that enslaved them.

Maude began to laugh. Her laughter was soundless, but she laughed all the same.

If Lissirra really was as small as she appeared, wouldn’t it be an easy case for a resolute aukari like Maude to bomb that tiny pest to pieces? Had Maude not felt like she was so spread out, rippling and swirling she might have felt tempted to attempt. Besides. The memory of how the tunnel had surprised them flowed trough her rippling awareness. It had sucked the bravest of them in and then advance to swallow the sceptics who had stayed back as they suspected a trap. Even in her current state, Maude felt that it was best to not take anything for granted. Appearance could deceive. This had already been made very clear to them.

For now, she went with the stream, coalesced with the others and felt that she became more like her normal self again. The surroundings were ripe with the panic of others. But, unlike many others in the Etzori army, Maude had a religion. In her god she trusted. Even now, she believed that Zanik, the lord of strength and music would shelter her and keep her safe, at least until her purpose was fulfilled. She didn’t question his power in the domain of Lisirra, as religion has nothing to do with logic and even less to do with other (inferior) deities). She believed and so, she faced the events with the nigh insane lack of fear that is the privilege of true believers.

Perhaps this was the reason for why Maude saw her violin come flying to her like a peculiar vehicle carrying its bow as an eager passenger ready to be put to use. Maybe the reason was something else. Had the faithful instrument followed her all the way from Etzos on its own accord? But, Maude didn’t for a moment doubt that it was Zanik himself who had sent her a sign. She didn’t know what to play but she felt compelled to do so. She put the fiddle in position and pulled the bow over the strings tentatively. This created a sound that could make anybody cringe... and then ...

“Hey, your violin, I like that sound!”

Surprised, Maude looked around for the person who had spoken to her. A female officer floating nearby in the void they all travelled through caught her attention. Maude recognized her when she had a closer look. It was Hinda Velora, that officer who had taken so smart decisions during when the bugs had attacked. Even though Maude was a low-rank archer and hadn’t personally been involved with Hinda, she knew it was her. A hero of the Etzori army is never anonymous.

“You do? It was a false tone though. It didn’t ring true.”

“It didn’t ring true?” Hinda sounded thoughtful.

“No, it didn’t ring true. It was false. It wasn’t real music.”

Maude saw the expression on Hinda Velora’s face change and so did the woman’s voice. “All this isn’t real. It’s false. It doesn’t ring true. This is ... what we are dealing with, I can see that now. Illusions. Deception. Lies! ”

Hinda Velora fell silent for a moment and nothing special seemed to happen. But, then she spoke to Maude again. This time she issued orders. “So play real music! Play the true tune, the one that tears the lies to shreds and shows who we really are ... we are the Army of The Etzori, and we are here to do our job!”

Maude obeyed orders like she had done all the time. The music streamed out from her violin as she moved the bow over the strings, her fingers moving at high speed on them. What the music would accomplish or not accomplish wasn’t known to her, but her trust in Zanik was unquestioning. As he obviously (to Maude) had chosen the hero Hinda Velora as his tool for telling his marked worshipper Maude what to do, Maude would do his bidding!

She played.

The energetic tune was brand new because Maude improvised it on the spot. It was named “One more bug to burn”.
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"Fate's Teeth. Another fuckin' portal."

"Wossat?"

Kasoria made a dismissive little gesture with his hand. He was in no mood to regale Faz with the events of the last year. Not at that particular moment, with both of them and hundreds of others staring into the shimmering, swirling void. First the Rupturing portal, seasons ago, an arc ago. Then into the Emea with Zarik, crossing through that realm of dreams and covering hundreds of leagues in a handful of trills. The orb, after that, wielded by Graeslin. That feeling, that crawling, unnatural sensation on his skin as the whole ship just... shifted, from one spot in reality to another... he had no desire to repeat it.

What's wrong with just taking a horse? Or walking through a door?

"Sorta like a door," he mused, turning idly as the troops mustered. "S'the thing wiv' magic, Faz, it-"

He turned and Faz was not there. It was another of the irregulars. Younger, chubbier, but with a face still lined and hard from tough living in the Oh'Pee. Ganger tats peeked out from the top of his chain-mail vest. A thief's brand was burned into one cheek. But here, he was still a soldier, still a son of Etzos, and that's all that mattered. Kasoria opened his mouth to ask the obvious... then he remembered.

Faz is dead.

He'd died on the short march from where they'd crushed that final charge of monsters and started to follow the swarm back to its nest. Now and then, dark and frenzied creatures would explode from alleys, sewers, mounds of corpses, even dropped from the roofs. Their demented, suicidal efforts were a trifle against the column as a whole. Barely a handful of dead and wounded, so swiftly did the soldiers react, every one of them now seasoned and hardened by fighting monsters they could have scarce imagined trials before.

But one of them had been Faz. Throat torn out along with his jaw by the dying lunge of one of the beasts. He'd died choking through a hole that looked like a snake trying to swallow an egg, only to spew up blood instead. Kasoria had knelt by him and even as he reached for it, Faz's hand dropped to the bloody stones. He died quickly, at least. Shock, and pain, but only for a few trills. Then his eyes turned to glass, to marble, to lifeless jelly, and Kasoria turned away from him.

"Faz is-"

"Yeah. I remember."

The ghosts went first. A platoon of them, walking on useless feet or gliding across the wet ground. Kasoria would have marveled at the sight, another day, Morty-born though it clearly was. A blending of ancient masonry and gorgeous, vivid green foliage. Circles upon circles, working smaller and smaller but only thanks to the perception of the human eyes. The tunnel could have been a hundred yards or a hundred thousand. Kasoria felt his Spark stir as he approached, warning him there was power here, arch and looming in potency.

Aye. Figures. Wouldn't be as simple as finding the wee cunt on a throne.

The cry to advance went up, as the ghosts vanished into the tunnel. Literally. They seemed to become one with the reflected water, as if a mirror had come to life and swallowed them. A tremor of fear went through the ranks... and Kasoria kept walking. All they'd suffered for, died for, fought for. All they'd lost, from friends to kin to home to sanity. The architect of it all was on the other side of that portal. They needed but to walk through it, face the bitch in her own domain, and they could end it all. Kasoria walked forwards, and saw not beauty or wonder nor felt the fearful awe of a mortal before the presence of a god.

His face was grim, and set. Mutated by the Spark that mewled within him, for it knew it would be without power in the place they were approaching. That did not slow his tread, either. His copper-capped boots ground into stone until they splashed with water.

He did not see a portal. He saw yet one more path to vengeance. He saw the line of his people, back to the founding, with the High Marshal pulling a burning blade from the breast of a slain Immortal. He would dearly love to emulate such an act, such a legend of justice for all his species... but failing that, he'd be happy with holding the cunt down while someone else did it.

"No more runnin'," he snarled, and heard the remnants of his block follow him. "Only one place t'hide, yer fuckin' majesty. An' we're gonna burn it down along wiv' ev'rythin' else..."

The Raggedy Man walked through, and the mirror shuddered like a living thing. The water under him was still, impossibly so, but no less impossible than the walls of the tunnel that shook and fell in upon him. He felt it in the space of a blink. Water, surrounding him, drowning him only he still had breath within him. He started to thrash instinctively, but the act only dragged him further inside. He looked back and saw a chubby face with a brand upon it, falling away from him along with hundreds of black shapes, shrinking to insects in the void.

Then he breathed again, and Kasoria knew he was no longer in Rhakros... and someone was speaking to him.

He didn't need to be told who it was. He'd never heard its voice, nor seen her in the construct she wore to walk Idalos. But he knew, deep in the curdled core of him, that he was listening to the Plague Mother. Crowing and bragging with the sounds of siege long ended as an accompaniment to her rants. The assassin-turned-soldier felt every hair on his body vibrate in anger. Oh, how childish she sounded. Her petulant. Yet so assured. So confident that all her rambling threats would come to pass. Then the Raggedy Man smiled.

But they didn't, did they? You burned and you poisoned and your massacred. But you never broke us. You never took Etzos. You ran back here like a child, like a weakling. You ran, and we followed. You hid, and we took your walls and slaughtered your slaves. Now you're here, in your last hole, and you threaten us with memories we smirk at... because you lost.

With a growl that seemed to issue bubbles into the air... the water... the whatever he was floating in, Kasoria started to... swim, for want of a better word. Arms and legs moving with power but not much grace, he started to kick and churn his way towards the spike of rock and stone she stood on. As he descended, more shapes came to him. Black figures growing color and features and voices. Calling to him, bidding him to aid them. He ignored them all. This was the final fight, and he would not be moved by their calls. He kept swimming, kept moving... until he heard the music.

The Stomp?

No, not quite. But a melody he'd heard on the first night of the siege, when dozens of celebrating soldiers had stomped and stamped and whirled around their campfires. The Rhakros Stomp was born that night, a mad parody of a dance that still lasted for longer in Etzori culture than any of them men present. Just like the legend of where it had come from. Kasoria had sat outside his tent and watched, but not danced. He'd smiled, though. Feeling a strange swell of... appreciation, for the men he was among. So long, so very long, since he'd felt that way. Back when he was a boy, before his rage had killed any faith he'd claimed in justice and the works of man.

Kasoria hissed as the feeling seemed to crackle through him. His head turned and found it within moments. Pure and lilting and real, in this place of reflections and uncertainties. He squinted at the fiddler and...

"... well, bugger," he said as he drifted into the area around where Maude played, along with a handful of other Etzori. All of them spellbound for a moment, Lissira still beneath them, cackling and promising destruction, but forgotten as they got their feet. So to speak. "Never figured youse fer a minstrel, girl."

There was the barest approval in his voice, and a smile that was gone almost as soon as she recognized it. Then the lethal little man looked down at the prancing speck they'd com to murder.

"Fuck d'we get down there, anyway?"

"Excuse me?!"

Kasoria flicked a glance to his side, then blanched slightly and wondered if a floating man could salute properly. After an awkward moment, he gave up the attempt, but still injected some respect into his voice. "Ah... I mean, how'd we get down there, Braxton Velora."

"Better."
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Like the voice of their tormentor, the music powered through the cosmic miasma with seemingly unnatural insistence and volume. Ghosts were using their emotion-syphoning abilities on those they could reach that were clearly panicking. But there were far too many that they could not seem to reach. It was all too easy to believe that the vast emptiness pulling them away was the true environment in which they scrambled, and the ghosts as well found it impossible to overcome this belief and reach them.

The notes recalled the soldierly camaraderie to those minds; the brotherhood of those who bore arms against a common enemy, the knowledge that they had each other's back, the security in the competence of their training and the resolve to use it. It pierced the bubble of panic surrounding these individuals with tunes of parade ground and tavern, dance hall and ceremony. None were present that did not have some connection to one or more, even "The Rhakros Stomp" floated on the starscape.

And it was perhaps the most effective tune of all, being the freshest embodiment of the violent rejection of Lisirra's will currently indulged in by these same troops. Those at home in Etzos would not have this same familiarity, but these soldiers had already bettered the streets of Rhakros with bug guts many times to this rhythm. Cheers began to accompany the music. Images not too far distant began to shimmer, and retake form among their fellow troops on the ground.

Commander Velora waved them to silence as she addressed those almost lost to sight, "Hear my voice and consider! How can it be this loud? You know how far from you I appear to be. But it is only your eyes that tell you this. Close them! Ignore them! Trust in my words and feel the Stomp beneath your feet."

She turned to those troops already re-grounded in reality, but kept her volume sufficient to address the missing, "Parade ground ranks! And Sound off! Hear the voice calling the number of those you know to be beside you at attention! KNOW that they are there! Know that YOU are there! Right Arm's Length! Begin!" she shouted, giving the parade order to stretch out ones' right arm to the shoulder of the soldier beside you. This was to give elbow room for weapon drills.

Eyes widened in joyous shock as indentations from invisible sources pressed into the shoulders of those already restored and in parade ranks. As they sounded off, the voices of those still floating adrift took on a curious but hopeful reverberation and stereo effect as their voices seemed to come from two locations, but not entirely rooted yet in either one. The degree of this effect was of course widely varied from one missing soldier to another, but you could hear the hope blooming in all the voices as they called out their number.

Some forgot their discipline as they resolved beside their comrades, turning with emotional hugs to those they had gotten to know on the parade ground, and stomping their feet with almost desperate laughter. Velora allowed them this "transgression", making a noticeable effort of her own to hide her smile; but only briefly, as there were still others to save. "AGAIN!" she commanded.

By this time, Lissirra had already fled the field, through a second membrane, into some other chamber. Whether it was by her design, or by the currently shared experience of the Etzori soldiers, the doorway took on the aspect of the parade ground, and was shaped as an open archway straight out of the Crescent Arena in Etzos. Commander Velora gave a motion to halt progress as a voice sounded beside her.

Many would have gasped or fainted in their boots to find Sintra standing beside them, in all her Immortal glory. A massive, but still magnificently adorned spider, with a human-like torso atop its midpoint, dressed in silken finery. A headband circled her head, jeweled with what looked like eyes to see in every direction at once. A giant scorpion tail and two massive pincers jutted from front and back as she complimented the human commander, "That was well done, Commander.Your troops clearly respect you and heed your words."

Velora turned to give a courteous bow, "Thank you, my lady. She has passed beyond that veil, what should we expect?"

Sintra raised numerous eyebrows in response, "You surprise me, Commander. It is to your credit that you ask what you rightly assume I would know best. Not many of your kind would deign to ask an Immortal for advice, especially in your city."

Velora's voice did not acknowledge the compliment, "My city has good reason....As to my question...?"

They began to stride forward as Sintra continued, "Anything and everything. She is on the run and she knows it. She knows now that I aid you, but trusts that I will be unable to open her veils to allow you to pursue. But she will guard herself nonetheless. She has to know that I would not have promised what I did if I did not have some means at my disposal."

"Can you open the veils within her domain?" the Commander asked with hopeful skepticism.

"No." the Immortal responded, indulging herself in a brief enjoyment of the commander's puzzlement. She was impressed by the Commander's silence, indicating that she knew more would be forthcoming. "But she can."

Commander Velora looked briefly around for some mystic figure of unknown power, only to return to Sintra. "You mean Lisirra? What reason could she possibly have to open it for us?"

"There are some differences between myself and my kin. Some are more like cousins, and some are virtual siblings. Lisirra and I were borne of the same source, and are virtual sisters. This negates a number of the obstacles. Still, I would need her to touch the membrane as I seek entry for it to allow me through." the Immortal explained.

"And again..." Velora began.

"Why should she do this, you ask? She has no say in the matter." Sintra crowed, rifling through some pockets in her attire to pull forth what appeared to be a small, withered plant stem of some sort, with a round flange of flesh or rotted petals encircling the end. "I was given this by none other than your own Nightshade Eld. It is the antenna from Lisirra's insectoid-form head, cut there by the avriel herself in Oscillus three arcs ago. So you see, Lisirra WILL be touching the membrane as I seek entry."

The soldiers were gathered closely, weapons in hand as the great spider leaned in close to mutter some incantation in a language unknown to all present. The membrane, which gave a swirling distortion to the darkness beyond, did not so much open, as thin, until it became obvious that the swirling was due to the darkness having been moving. An oily torrent of darkness poured through the opening to engulf the front ranks of troops. It quickly morphed into a large squadron of dark figures with all manner of weapons in hand.

As they struck the Etzori troops, they took on an identical appearance, making it very difficult to isolate friend from foe. Only by taking some time to observe one could someone find the subtle inconsistencies of movement and reaction to give away which was false Etzori and which was true.

Commander Velora hissed, "Shadow beasts!" and drew her sword to wade into battle. "It makes perfect sense!"

Sintra was genuinely shocked to see this and clamped a hand on her shoulder, "No! You must not risk yourself! The troops need a commander!"

The human wrenched the hand from her shoulder with a look that warned never to touch her again and spat back. "Yes, and they need an example too! These monsters killed my whole family!"

She charged in, laying about with keen, deadly insight. "These are like ghosts with great tendril power!" she shouted, "Insubstantial except when they strike, and what they strike with! Fight them like enemy ghosts! As for their impersonation, call out, or raise your arm on every count of three! They will not do it and it will betray them to you." She knew that shadow beasts had no voice and understood no language. They would not realize that the cries and motions of their mortal enemies was revealing what they were.

In short order, the fight was over, but not without some serious losses. Again the ghosts had had a great impact on the fight, but they too had suffered badly. Now the doorway stood open to what appeared to be a vast flat grassland. Small shifts in the surface betrayed an underground presence. Lisirra could not be seen. Sintra blandly stated the obvious, "She will be on the far side."


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Maude played like it was the last tune she would play in this life. She played for the remaining people of the Army of the Etzori and for Hinda Velora. But, most of all she played for Zanik. Her music was loud but her worship was silent. The immortal was in her mind and in her dreams and this how she wanted to keep it. If this would be the end it was for Zanik she would die. Without him, she was only a jester of suspect race. But she felt that his mark made her be something more.

For a moment a hiss blended with the music. Looking in the direction she had heard it come from, Maude spotted the mage she had seen that first trial. She recalled it all. The attacking warrior, already dying of the spider poison, the mage’s elaborate cruelty, the way he had gone down that ramp like he had seen nothing to fear, only a job to do. She had noticed him later too, at the salt trap, when he had fought against the ghosts. Later too when the army had encountered to giant insects. But from the occasion when she had ignited and burnt up all those insects she only recalled her own experience of being a living dancing flame of fire.

His words were few and his smile briefer, so fleeting that it almost didn’t exist. But, Maude laughed when she heard him say “well, bugger” as it felt like the right thing to say. In response to his surprise to find that she was a minstrel, she did as her Elithem mark made her do. Regardless of it all, she added a short but forceful extra salute to the tune as the warrior and mage already turned his attention to their task and made ready to go for Lissirra.

Minstrel, he had said, that nameless mage, “the boss” ... At that moment a great and awesome holy vision exploded in Maude’s mind. Finally, she understood what the purpose of her life was. She was Zanik’s Minstrel in Etzos. If they would win this war, if Lissirra would die and others would live, Maude Coaley would create immortal music and songs about the heroes of Etzos so that they would never be forgotten. In Zanik’s name and to his honour, she would embark on a mission bigger than anything else she had hitherto figured herself capable of. By her music, she would secretly spread the influence of her god in the godforsaken city Etzos and convert them all.

When Hinda Velora asked for silence, Maude lowered the volume of her music. She witnessed Hinda Velora take charge and act like a supreme commander for them all and bring them together. To be honest, Maude didn’t understand a thing when they seemed to be heading to the parade ground. Were they at The Crescent Arena of Etzos? Absurd ... but so many absurd things had already happened during this war that Maude was unable to care. What would happen would happen. Maude would once again follow her orders and tag along as an unknown low-rank soldier in the wake of the great leaders.

She paid attention to the conversation between Sintra and Hinda Velora and memorized their words. It could be an important input to future songs, in case of victory and survival. She still had her fiddle but found it best to fasten it on her belt and grab the crossbow.

Then came the opening of the veil and the attack of shadows who swiftly turned into look-alikes of the Etzori. It was nigh impossible to see who was friend and foe. Staying back, Maude wasn’t involved at once but she made herself ready to shoot with the crossbow. Not that she knew how to do now when all the fighters seemed to be her own fellow Etzori soldiers. If she would shoot she might hit one of her own instead of a foe. Hinda Velora gave them all an amazing example though and it became easy to reveal the false Etzori.

And there he was all of a sudden, right in front of her but still at a distance, as recalled him, The Boss himself, a powerful mage and elite warrior of Etzos. He locked eyes with her as he ran towards her like there was something he wanted to tell her. Meeting his cold gaze, Maude lowered her crossbow a bit because she couldn’t shoot at the enemies without hitting him. She waited for the man to shout an order to her, but he didn’t. And then the Etzori all called out again and raised their arms, but the man who came at her did not. The truth struck Maude like lightning and she acted in the automatic way she had made a habit of during the war. Without even thinking of it, she aimed the crossbow with its copper tipped bolt at him and fired. The bolt went into the place where his heart ought to have been if he had possessed a heart. While Maude watched the shape of The Boss rippled and broke. It reminded her a bit about how it had been that trial when people had exploded from inside and spewed out swarms of bugs. It wasn’t quite the same thing though. This was more like seeing a ghost be torn apart, a shadow turning into shreds ...

For a brief moment, she felt like she had taken down one of the most dangerous people she had seen during this war.

She had killed The Boss!

But, then reality caught up with her. It hadn’t been him. Only a copy. Maude was shaking but forced herself to compose and continue. She would do what she could and try to shoot more of the shadow beings. She hated them. She hated them more when she saw Hinda Velora fight their own spitting image, a false twin commander, a beast of shadow ... but the tactics of the Etzori revealed the foul being soon enough and it was taken down like the others of its kind.

And ... so It was over. The doorway stood open and Sintra said: "She will be on the far side." Maude, as a low-rank archer armed with a crossbow and a fiddle, was so not going to go first into what awaited them on the other side. As usual, she would leave that to those who were better suited for it, then try to have their backs and support them as well she could. Nothing was over. It was never over.
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He'd never been a man for camaraderie. Even in the misty past, when he'd dedicated his youth and the future ahead of it to what he understood to be Law and Justice. Doing so meant commending himself to a unit, a hierarchy, a brotherhood in black cloaks. He made friends in those trials, comrades that he valued. He ate and drank and laughed with them. That was the closest he had come to the feeling of belonging, beyond his own blood. Yet even then, there was a wall he erected between himself and the cadets. Something impenetrable that his suspicious mind couldn't overcome.

Kasoria felt a ghost of that feeling when Velora called together all those lost souls in that hellish place.

Not a place of brimstone and fire, but one of an Immortal's design, thus infernal by Kasoria's understanding. They were flailing and separated. They knew not what was real or illusion. She brought them together again. Fashioned a real, solid base under them, around them, between them. Kasoria followed her orders and joined that reunification. He found stones under his feet, or at least ground he could rest them on. He stomped and he shouted, a queerly terrifying figure with black eyes and bloody weapons, doing the Rhakros Stomp alongside fellow soldiers. He looked to his side when he felt the touch on his shoulder, almost reaching for a weapon-

-and found yet another Etzori. His brother in birthplace. A face among thousands he would not notice any other day. Tired and grimy and lined by exertion. Had they passed in the street, this man may have shirked from Kasoria, or averted his eyes. Now he gave the Raggedy Man a solid nod. A simple jerk of the chin that said "you are my brother here, in this place of war and confusion".

Kasoria returned it. Then he turned his head and did the same to the man to his right.

"AGAIN!"

As ordered, the chorus of voices echoed throughout a place supposedly so large such a thing should have been impossible. But Kasoria heard it, as his voice roared from his lips and came back to him. Scores, hundreds of survivors did the same. A deafening explosion of defiance. By the time it had faded away and they realized the Arch-Fiend had vanished into a yet deeper hole, all they could see was the Arena. They didn't need to be told it was the Crescent. They were all Etzori; they knew such architecture by smell and color of stones alone. Kasoria almost smiled at the sight of it. The senses and memories and pride of his people, crafting this place of Lissira's into their home, their city, their blood and birthright.

Then a shadow moved through them, and ruined that moment.

It is impossible to forget meeting an Immortal. No drug nor drink nor trauma can remove it from the mind. Something so unnatural and inhuman, striding before the eye like it dared to have a place in reality... it sears itself onto the very flesh of a man. Kasoria's eyes widened as a vast bulk stomped through them. Ranks parted in mingled horror and awe as a many-legged monster stalked towards their commander. Yet all knew that attack wasn't needed. This was not the monster they sought. It had, in fact, aided them for trials. Whispered to their leaders, lent her children to their assaults, supplied information and tactics that had helped break the walls of Rhakros and smash its armies.

Kasoria knew all this, and still he had to fight, truly fight with himself not to unsheathe his enchanted sword and skewer and torch and immolate the creature that dared speak to Commander Velora as an equal. As the two women spoke (woman, heh, there's a fucking joke), he felt his muscles bunch and strain under his armor. Why not take this opportunity? The war was nearly won. They were here, in the inner domain of the Arch-Fiend. They did not need her anymore. Why not kill two rather than one? Ridding the world of two monsters in the same moment... how could they ignore such an opportunity?

No. Not yet. The words were almost soothing in his mind. As if not quite from himself. She is still needed. Look. She provides something we need. A way to follow the Plague Cunt. No... not yet.

"One war at a time."

"Huh?"

Kasoria flicked a look right. Thief's Brand was still there. "Nothin'."

Then, of course, it all went to shit, thanks to fucking Sintra. She touched the severed trophy of her sister to the doorway under the arch, and a deluge of oily foulness that had nothing to do with natural chemicals gushed from the opening. A rank of Etzori were swallowed, screams drowned under the foulness in an instant... and Kasoria's gladius flew into his hand as they came charging back out of it. Towards them. Vast and hunched and caked in muck, they seemed formed by the mud itself. But when swords and spears clashed together, in but a blink, they were their friends again. Comrades and fellows.

Kasoria didn't need to be told these were Lissira's creatures. They'd taken the forms of their friends to trick them, buy precious moments to get them to lower their guard. Around him, men died, stunned and disbelieving, as those they'd fought and saved and been saved by cut them down. But not him. His sword came up and parried a savage blow from a sword that was not quite a sword. The little man snarled as yet further intelligence was forthcoming. He pushed away his human-like enemy and sheathed the gladius. Flexed his fists inside his copper-tipped gauntlets instead.

Ghosts. Of course, it would be ghosts. A-fucking-gain.

"... eh?"

But it wasn't all to his annoyance. As he unconsciously called on his Spark to aid him, Kasoria realized it was still obeying him, even in this domain. Grinning with surprised delight, the Raggedy Man delved deep and poured magic into his limbs. His arms seemed to glow with ether, chain-like marks pulsing with the stuff, whirling cloak becoming solid around him, as if restored to glory. Something that was never a man came charging wordlessly at him and he threw out a hand-

-Barrier absorbing the impact of an "ax" that shattered into ghostly ether the moment it struck home. The shadow-beast behind it gave a silent hiss out outrage and pain, but before it could strike again-

-Kasoria's right hand hurtled through the sparkling shards of his cast and slammed a copper-tipped punch through its head. There was a brief explosion of noise, almost like a scream of pain, as the monster fell back without a head, dissipating into nothing before it had even fully collapsed.

"ETZOS!"

He called out on three, not wanting to rob himself of a limb by throwing up an arm. There was no time to relish a victory, even a minor one. The shadow beasts were outnumbered, but possessed the power of ghosts against mere men, and the Etzori did not have enough of their own spirits to counter them. Kasoria flung himself into the midst of them, fighting his way towards Velora. Replication fields crackled around him, forged into existence as quickly as they were shattered by the ghostly tendrils of the shadow monsters-

-and every time one was, Kasoria knew exactly where they were. On his right, a spear that jabbed at him, blunted and splitting into smoke as his shield stopped it-

-little man twisting and hammering a left hook into the attacker's chest, smashing a hole into it, following up with a-

-right cross that took off what passed for its jaw, sending it staggering back, mortally wounded-

-then he yelped as an errant tendril finally pierced his layers of shielding. He roared out the name of his city, turning as he did, and the human face that he found did not do the same. As the two of them stared in that brief instant, he saw the thing's eyes... move. As if someone had thrown rocks into a pond. They rippled, expanded and shuddered and then were still-

-Kasoria let out a shriek and his uppercut obliterated the tendril that took the form of a polearm stabbing into his side, following jabs a blur, copper-capped knuckles a bronzed blur as they bashed apart unnatural flesh masquerading as an Etzori soldier.The shadow-beast fell back and Kasoria breathed deep, exhaled-

-and a dome of Abrogative energy poured from his body, coating him like armor, shimmering and opaque. He rounded on the vicious melee ahead of him, seeing Velora fighting for her life amidst her guard. Every three trills, human voices shouted their presence into the air. Every three trills, less of the shadow-beasts were there to be found, until finally...

The Spider-Goddess spoke, and Kasoria wanted to tell her to shut the fuck up. Stating the completely bleeding obvious. How very like an Immortal. Instead, he focused on Commander Velora. She was bloodied. Pale. Weary beyond words as they all were, yet more so. She had given every screed of herself, not just to fight, but to lead. She had been everywhere. On the march, the walls, the ramparts, the bitter and savage street fighting. Waves of ghosts and monsters and deranged human citizenry, she had survived and kept them all fighting, too. Kasoria could see how much that weighed on her now... and yet... and yet... still she was their bulwark. The one they rallied around.

Kasoria made a decision. A practical one. For he was nothing if not a pragmatist. He could not lead. Nor inspire, unless it was fear. That would not suffice here. He breathed deep, and strode forwards. He stood not quite next to his commander, for that would have been too bold. But he made it clear that where she went, he would follow. His gladius was in his hand again. His other glowed with Abrogative power, ready to cast Shackle or Barrier or Shield or whatever was required of him. His Spark ached; whispered at him to go easy. But Kasoria shook his head and ignored it. Just like the cuts and bruises and aching, seeping, eerie pain in his side from where the shadow-beast's tendril had sapped him.

Commander Velora turned to him for just a moment. They locked eyes. He nodded. Then the moment passed, and Kasoria looked into the deceptively green field beyond the archway. It was no meadow or pasture. It was where Lissira waited for them. And his commander would not be facing her alone.
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The strings of a violin reminded Ulric and Arthur of a time when Ulric had been alive and they'd both been younger. Corvus had joined their group with a small town's local militia and they marched towards the neighboring village with sword and torch in hand. As the melody continued is drew the man and phantom back to when they'd marched with the Etzori. They marched to bring death to the one who had poisoned them. They marched to bring vengeance. All at once the sense of weightlessness seemed to wash off Ulric and by extension Arthur's body. They heard Commander Velora beginning to shout of commands to the soldiers and in response to them Ulric left Arthur's body and materialized to his right. Ulric reach out and wrapped a tendril around Arthur's waist so they would not be separated and he began marching along with Arthur.

They found themselves- very suddenly, in parade ranks with the other soldiers. While Arthur's discipline gave way and he embraced the soldier to his right, Ulric reached out as discretely as he could with as many tendrils as he could manifest to syphon some of the emotions from the soldiers nearest to him. It may have seemed like he was trying to lull them back into order and the march but he was merely taking advantage of the abundant emotion. He was trying to bolster his ectoplasm for the battle to come. Velora continued giving her commands and Arthur found his way back over to Ulric.

"Are you alright?" Arthur asked Ulric as he further solidified his body. He'd maintain a solid form as best he could in this domain while they marched. Ulric merely nodded and Arthur handed Ulric his longsword. Ulric waved it around carefully a little to get a feel for the weight of the blade in his materialized hand before a intense presence arrived beside Commander Velora.

Sintra.

Her arrival drew Arthur and Ulric's attention completely and for a moment they forgot their purpose in this domain but as Sintra spoke to the commander the duo managed to refocus. The great spider leaned in with Lisirra's antenna and Arthur looked to Ulric. "I have a bad feeling about this." Arthur whispered.

"Steel yourself. There is no turning back." Ulric replied, his eyes watching the Immortal act. In an instant the front rank were swarmed by shadows. Ulric's materialized body tensed and he looked towards Arthur just as the shadows reached them. In an instant Ulric lost sight of his friend and he felt the tendril linking them suddenly jerk forward and snap but he had no time to do anything about it before battle reached him. Ulric brought up his blade in time to parry an incoming mace swing from what appeared to be an Etzori soldier and when the man drew his arm back to swing again Ulric pulled the beasts right leg out from under him with a tendril before driving his longsword through the beasts. He heard Commander Velora's orders but he was distracted looking around for Arthur among the beasts.

The Etzori called out, but Ulric did not and in a moment a friendly blade was turned on him. Ulric parried the strike, then another, and this time he called out when the other soldiers did, but that didn't stop the shadow beasts in their stolen forms from striking. Now it became a little easier to tell friend from foe but Ulric still moved about the battle frantically looking for Arthur. Another mute figure in the form of an Etzori charged at Ulric wielding two axes. Ulric blocked a high swing of the first axe with his sword but was a little slow in his effort to avoid the second and so it slipped across his chest, just managing to slice into Ulric's materialized skin. Ulric made a pained grunt as he stumbled back and when the Etzori imitator charged at him again Ulric wrapped a tendril around each of the imitator's axes and pulled them from his hands before sheathing them in it's skull.

Ulric turned from that battle and glanced down at the gash across his chest which didn't quite bleed but was there all the same. His ectoplasm burned where the cut sat but Ulric tried to endure the pain and call out on time with the rest of the soldiers until finally he saw Arthur. "Arthur!" Ulric called out on the three count but his friend did not seem to hear him. Ulric moved toward Arthur almost unimpeded- one man attacked along the way but after Ulric blocked his blow the attacker was attacked by another and so Ulric was free to continue advancing to Arthur. When Ulric reached his friend, Arthur lashed out with a swing of his blade.

Ulric parried the opening blow and stumbled backwards. "Arthur stop!" He shouted but his friend charged him again. Ulric brought his blade around in a sweeping motion to parry Arthur's second lunge and after he'd parried the blade to the left he brought his own in and arc around his head and swung it downwards at Arthur- only to suddenly stop short of hitting the man. Arthur quickly recovered, smacking Ulric's sword back with his own and advancing forward with a wild swipe that Ulric sidestepped. "Arthur!" Ulric shouted again but the swordsman kept coming so Ulric changed his tactic.

When Arthur lunged forward again, Ulric parried his swing to the right and stepped forward passed Arthur's defenses and into his body- only he didn't. When Ulric attempted to merge with Arthur he was suddenly, violently, repelled. Ulric stumbled backwards, lost his footing, and fell onto his backside but he didn't stay down. Arthur seemed dazed as well thought he kept his footing. "You're not Arthur." Ulric said just before the imposter advanced. Ulric rolled backwards and was rising up to his feet by the time Arthur brought his sword down in a wide overhead arc. Ulric brought his own sword up to block the strike and as he did he drove two tendrils into Arthur's stomach, causing the swordsman to double over just long enough for Ulric to swing through the back of his neck- well not all the way through... just through enough that it killed him.

"Ulric!" A voice chimed from behind the phantom who turned with his sword ready only to find Arthur cutting down another of the imposters. Ulric breathed an entirely unnecessary (as he was dead and did not need to breath) sigh of relief at the sight of his ally. Arthur crossed the field to Ulric and said "Together." Ulric nodded and the two went about cutting down whatever shadow beast came their way until at last the battle was won and Sintra pointed the way.

Ulric stepped forward immediately- his mind having no space for fear or logical concern in the wake of the battle. He only felt the drive for vengeance. It Lisirra was there, that was where he'd go to take her head... but Arthur gripped his shoulder and stopped him. "Fools rush in." The three words seemed to stop Ulric for the moment who looked to Commander Velora for the order.
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The ground swelled and shifted with the movements of objects beneath the surface. The displacement sufficient to suggest objects of a long, thick build. Waffling disruptions along the sides of the primary shifts was indicative of multiple legs. Commander Velora made hand gestures to indicate the numerical identities of a few squads and pointed a direction, with a last gesture of her hand being placed over her ear:

Blocks 13, 52 and 141 were to head along the east edge of the grassy plain, and to do it quietly!

The very start of the soldiers compliance brought immediate reaction from below the surface. Military instinct brought Commander and Highmark eyes to meet with silent acknowledgement that they should cease all movement. Before them rose a huge mound of the grassy surface, undulating with what appeared to be the swaying of massive heads. It did not break the surface...not quite, but definition of the insectoid structure of the hidden monstrosity was unmistakable.

The Commander held a fist high to confirm that all action should be held. "So they are drawn to sound." The immortal beside her observed quietly. "You have that at your disposal, Commander." she continued, gesturing to the violinist that had been so "instrumental" in thwarting Lisirra's first challenge.

Velora was of that rare characteristic which valued the survival of her troops more than the glorifying of her name. She would not reject a good idea simply because it was not HER idea. She pulled her sword and slowly and carefully drove it into the ground. then she bid the violinist to set the side of her instrument against the haft as she played. She had experienced how the sound would travel through an item abutting an instrument, making it, in effect, an extension of that instrument.

As well, this time, she asked the young woman her name. She smiled to hear it and responded, "Trooper Coaley, your violin is turning out to be one of my best weapons. Will you wield it for me one more time?"

Naturally, it was not really a question, nor was there any doubt that the soldier would obey. The sound waves traveled along the blade and into the ground, and the subterranean beasts responded. Those on the far side, near the troops that had halted their slow progress, now swayed away from the mortals, the crowning carapaces breaking the surface enough to see that they looked back to from where the music emanated.

There was indecision apparent in their bobbing, back and forth from where they'd initially detected movement, and where they now plainly heard this new, appealing sound. Commander Velora did not know if Trooper Coaley had her eyes shut as she played, or if the sudden rearing of a thirty foot section of massive insect torso, only ten feet in front of her, did not bother her. The Commander realized she had made somewhat of a tactical error in having used her own sword for this experiment, but the concern passed into wonder as the centipede-like creature began to sway in appreciation of the sound.

She looked back to the far side and saw the creatures there also choosing this music over the disruptions that had first drawn them. Velora made another series of gestures when those creatures gathered with the first one before her, and the troops again moved slowly out. Rank after rank passed across the far side of the field as Sintra, Commander Velora, and trooper Coaley stood before what was now four gargantuan centipedes. The musician now glowed a soothing aura.

Velora motioned to the new leader of the ghostly horde and gave them instruction. They floated silently over the ground, and took up careful contact with the creatures, slowly draining them of emotional hostility. Sintra grinned and nodded, "Amazing. Credit to Zanik, I must admit. You have his mark. I had thought only to confuse them. Not to actually subdue them."

It was possible that the Commander was also overly calmed and drawn into the music, as she did not respond quickly enough to gather her wits and give order when one of the soldiers on the far side caught his boot in one of the loosened pits of dirt where the great insects had swayed. He fell forward with a yelp. And even though his brothers-in-arms surged together to catch him, their collective rattle of metal, and heavy boot steps sounded their presence.

Immediate hostility grew in the disposition of the monsters, and the ghosts took it as an assumed command to attack with their own capabilities. The carapaces of the insects were hard enough to thwart all but the most furious and perfectly directed impacts of ghostly tendrils, and those attacks mostly served only to anger them further. Trooper Coaley and Comander Velora were suddenly in dire peril as the creature that had been before them the entire time now looked down with frothing mandibles.

A whip-like tendril uncoiled from the back of the creature and snapped toward the Commander, as an odd node on the edge of the carapace, between two of its legs, bulged and shot a dark, wet spike toward the musician. The same massive pincer that snipped the whip tendril that would have snared and injured the Commander, also ended up, by happy coincidence, in the line of fire of the venomous spike.

It was not happy for Sintra however, as the spot where the spike struck her pincer now smoked and began dissolving the flesh around it. The immortal screamed in rage and pain and assaulted the huge insect as she herself grew in size. "GO, Commander! Take her with you!" she bellowed, gesturing toward the now fully alarmed Trooper Coaley. "I will take this one, and help against the others as I can."

Each of the four massive beasts was a good twenty yards long, each with a good twenty legs on each side. They all had four such coiled whip tendrils on their backs, and a spike node on the side, between each set of legs. The legs themselves were weapons of a spear-like capability, and they were used as such as the monsters tore through the mortal ranks in an attempt to spear, whip and impale them with acid spikes as they did. But the bulk of the Etzori host had now gathered in well-ordered ranks as the music had served its purpose, and were as prepared to meet this threat as they were likely to ever be.

The fight was on, and Lisirra now smiled as she abandoned this section of her domain for the next.
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Trooper Coaley did her utmost to follow the orders of Commander Hinda Velora. She drew her weapon (the fiddle) and went down one knee to be able to hold the instrument to the haft of the sword. Then she played for all she was worth.

A massive bomb explosion of music streamed from the violin into the ground. The sword enhanced the volume to amazing heights.

This did it!

The audience of huge insectoid monsters arrived and joined the show.


The sight was hideous. Albeit Maude had seen many horrific sights during the campaign, it still shocked her. Seeing what they faced, she felt that this might be the last time she would play in this life. She gave herself free reins and added in the aura Zanik had granted her. This was an ability she had never used in public before. She had wanted to conceal that she worshipped an immortal. But, right now it seemed unimportant to keep up the secrecy. She used it! come what may! If Maude would die she would do so in the name of Zanik and for Etzos.

Sacrificing her life to serve Zaink and save Etzos, wasn’t this what Maude Coaley had imagined once upon a time, before the war? Hadn’t this been her plan before she had come to understand how unrealistic she had been? During the trials that had passed, the reality of the war had eroded her vision. But, now, it resurged in a new shape ... if she couldn’t bomb them in a conventional manner she would bomb them with music and with the power Zanik’s mark granted her.

One with the music, Trooper Coaley continued to play like obsessed. She leaned over the violin, tossing her red hair like a cloud of fire around her. It was true that the war had made her understand that her plans had been nothing else than a jester’s ignorant illusions. Yes. But, even though she now saw herself as only a small cog in the army’s big machinery, she would make that little cog work as long as it didn’t break.

The extreme terror the monsters inspired soon began to shift into its opposite. Inebriated by the music and a crazy feeling of being invincible she laughed. Her laugh blended with the tune as she watched the monsters begin to dance to it.

When she heard Commander Velora praise Zanik, Maude laughed like Zanik himself. She laughed the way the immortal had laughed when they had played together in that tavern that evening when Maude had earned his mark. Oh, if this would turn out to be Maude Coaley’s last performance she would make them dance, dance, dance... she would make them dance until they died!

Alas, her dream scenario wasn’t going to happen in Emea this trial.

There’s always some clumsy fool or another who stands ready to sabotage a brilliant plan. This occasion was no exception. The commander’s strategy had worked. Many had been able to pass by the insect monsters without any troubles. But, one soldier stumbled and yelped. Next, some plate-clad goofs were “stepping in the accordion” as Maude’s parents had used to say. The random percussions they added wasn’t a hit. The sound was disruptive and ugly. Maude couldn’t blame the monsters for not liking it.

As a result, little Trooper Coaley and Commander Hinda Velora found themselves face to face with the huge monsters ... and the monsters were angry. It seemed possible that the last trill of the brave Commander and her violinist had come!

How COULD Maude be in this terrible situation? The answer was of course that Hinda Velora had caused it by putting Maude in the front line. But, this didn’t stop Maude from blaming someone else for it. In passing by Maude was irrational enough to make a silent note to herself. If she would survive she would find that nasty “drummer” after the war and teach it how to play, so to speak.

It didn’t seem like the monsters wanted to dance any more. In Maude’s experience as a jester, an audience which felt disappointed wouldn’t want to get more of the same. They would be too enraged for that and impossible to speak with. If the monstrous insects had been people they would now have been on the verge to throw rotten eggs and tomatoes. One more tone from her violin and the attack could be a fact. Well. It was a fact anyways.

A whip-like tendril shot out toward Commander Velora and a mean-looking spike missile was on its way toward Maude. If not Sintra had intercepted both the tendril and the spike it would have been over for Hinda and her violinist trooper. The turn of events was beyond what Maude's mortal mind could grasp. When she Maude watched the effect the spike had on Sintra’s pincer she felt like she had never understood a thing ...

What if Lissirra is stronger than Sintra?

When Sintra ordered them to go, Commander Velora showed her pragmatism again. She did as Sintra said. Her trooper followed. But, Maude hung the violin on a convenient dream-like hook that materialized in the air of Emea. She hoped the instrument would be within reach in case she would need it again, because now ...

She was ready to fall back on her last resort.

The inner fire. It felt like it was crackling in her ...


What would happen to the small cog Trooper Coaley, this unknown ant in The Army of The Etzori, was insignificant compared to the impact Commander death would have. It might undo them if they would see the monsters kill Hinda before Lissirra had even shown herself. So. It seemed like this was the moment when the circumstances might transform Maude’s original plan from utter rubbish to something meaningful. If needed, she would follow through, here and now.

She saw none of the glory she had imagined back in the times. Maude wasn’t that childish anymore. Instead, she would only do what she as a small cog could do. She would try and give Hinda Velora a few trills more to live and save her commander’s sorry ass. Maude hoped that turning herself into a being of fire would give them a chance to make the terror run they were in for. Burning, she would try to go between Hinda Velora and the tendrils and spikes sent the commander's way, if any. If the fire would stop the insects, or if being in the fire shape would make a difference in case Maude would be hit ... she didn’t know. She could only hope.

The death of one aukari jester seemed like a low price to pay for the commander's life. Thus, the war had now made Maude understand two essential things. She knew the purpose of her potential life as Zanik's Minstrel. She knew the meaning of her potential death as fire shiel for Hinda Velora. But, if she would live or die remained an open question.

All this was something Maude felt deep down without any conscious thought. She wouldn’t rush forth and attack the monsters in foolish heroism. But, if she would need to defend Hinda Velora Maude would be ready to act as a reflex. For Zanik, for Etzos and for the brave Hinda Velora, she prepared to ignite and turn herself into a living torch. If it would come to that, she would burn. It might be only for a while, or it might be the final journey into the eternal fire where all aukari go at the end of the day.

For Zanik. For Ezsos. For Commander Hinda Velora.

So be it.

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