Neutral Dealings (Graded)

The cities and villages of Melrath are as varied and diverse as they come. The capital of Raelia is the the jewel of this western kingdom, playing host to a merchants, artisans, Aesir priests, as well as a cut throat political landscape dominated by the nobles of Raelia. To the south in the depths of the Myrkvior Forest lies Melrath's second largest, and oldest city, Fensalir. Here people have learned to live alongside spirits and the natural world by maintaining their loyalty to traditions laid down the first Melrathi. To the east lies the small fishing village of Noatun, and to the western mountains rests the Mer city of Verimeer, the brewing town of Alivilda and the alpine village Vormund.
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Neutral Dealings (Graded)

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Abra crossed through the Untold and into his room in Raelia the previous night. He had slept pretty hard but now he woke up to a very familiar sound. It sounded a lot like raccoons he had dreamt of just the other day. In that dream he had hit the raccoons with a rock, empowered by Governing. Then he had gone and tied them up with a knot. It was like history was repeating itself, except in Idalos instead of Emea. He quickly opened the door and peered outside. Lo and behold there was a raccoon rummaging through his trash. “I know how to deal with you,” Abra said angrily. He threw a snowball at it and missed. It scared the critter away but he felt vengeful. Memories of that dream came back to him, including how to tie that overhand knot.

The sounds of furniture falling over came from Abra’s home while he hurried to put his heavy winter clothes on. He burst out of his home and started chasing the raccoon around. He threw snowball after snowball at it, actually hitting it from time to time. The problem wasn’t hitting it, it was piercing the thick winter fur. The one saving grace Abra had was that the raccoon was pretty fat. It was supposed to be hibernating, “maybe it hasn’t had enough to eat for the season,” Abra thought. He had just enough luck to corner the raccoon and there he blinked on top of it and squashed it under his body weight. The critter bit into his leg but only got a mouth full of tough leather. “You didn’t expect me to come with my armor too did you?”

The raccoon squirmed and squirmed but Abra was the victor. He waited for it to pass out then he drug it back to his house and experimented tying its little limbs. He tried making a half hitch knot. To do this, he would loop the rope around a metal post and pass the end around the first bit. Once he did this, he would push the end of the rope through the loop bit before pulling as hard as he could to tighten it. The design of this knot was such that the raccoons would have to literally pull the rope apart if they tried to run. Or the could just knaw at it until it ripped apart but that was something Abra didn’t even want to think about.

Lastly, he would attempt to tie a noose around the raccoon’s heads so that they would literally choke themselves to death before it would even be able to attempt running away. Applying the noose was very difficult and dangerous to even try because the raccoon kept stirring from its slumber every time he touched its head. So he couldn’t really do a proper noose but he did his best with trying to make a double loop. With any luck his poor rope use skill would be enough to stop these raccoons from causing too much trouble around his neighborhood.

“Abra, is it?” He had just finished tying up the raccoon when someone came up to him. It was a brown eyed merchant that he recognized but his name eluded him.

“Yes,” he said defensively. Strangers usually didn’t come to visit him for no reason.

“I’m in need of a loan. It’s a little more than I heard you usually give but I’m sure to make it your while.” He handed Abra an envelope with an expensive looking seal on it. Abra tore it off and nodded his head while he read. It was a letter that detailed the man’s request. It was a contract which meant Abra had to be extra careful when reading it. He knew how rich slobs liked to screw people over. It was especially a problem in Raelia when politics weren’t at play.

“The loan would be for a new business venture and I’ll happily pay your interest. I couldn’t get a loan at the bank but I’m so sure of my idea that it’ll be easy to make the money back. The contract is just signing away the right to give loans to a similar business.” There it was, the fine print that detailed the point of the contract. He wanted exclusive access to Abra so that nobody else could compete with him. This was all awfully suspicious. It was clear to him that the contract was meant to add clarity to their deal but this was the wrong kind of clarity.

“What business do you have deciding who I loan money to,” Abra said, holding the contract in his hands. His anger bubbled within him, controlled just enough by his spark to prevent from showing on his face. He felt like ripping the contract right in half and he felt the Sombran blessing surging through his hands. He didn’t know what he had just done but he knew he had done something to that piece of paper. He decided against ripping it and held it back to the customer. He begrudgingly accepted it except it ripped while he took it from Abra’s hands.

“I swear I didn’t mean for that to happen,” Abra said just as shocked as the customer. He wasn’t holding it so tightly that it would rip but now it looked like he was an asshole. “Anyways I am duty bound to remain neutral when it comes to trade. If you would like a loan or even help with your business I can be of service. Being prejudiced against other potential customers, however, is something I cannot do.”

“Just as well,” was the up and coming businessman’s response after some internal deliberation, “I’ll take the loan, but if it takes longer to pay that’s on you.” He drew another envelope. It was a backup for this very situation with terms and conditions that Abra favored over the last one. It included a downpayment , guaranteeing that he wouldn't lose that much money in case things went to shit. They both signed the document and then a copy as well, for Abra’s records. The man’s name was Reitn, apparently.

“Pleasure doing business with you, Reitn” Abra said calmly. The paper didn’t break this time.
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Re: Neutral Dealings

Not five bits passed after the businessman walked away with a large chunk of change when another man came to Abra’s home. “I’m looking for a loan,” he said, “I heard you help those who can’t get help from the banks.”

Abra nodded and gave a side glance at a bunch of kids who were packing snowballs. They were preparing to fight another group of kids on the other side of Abra’s house. It was only a matter of time before his yard became a god damned war zone. He wasn’t going to show weakness in front of a customer though. “You wouldn’t happen to be interested in starting a business would you? And your competitor wouldn’t happen to be a stout man with brown eyes would he?” He had a feeling that things were way too coincidental for this guy to be here for an unrelated reason.

“He beat me here did he?” The new man said with a heavy sigh, “well I’ll be on my way.”

“I’d be happy to give you a loan. He couldn’t talk me into an exclusivity deal but I’ll do to you what I did to him. Give me a downpayment on the loan and we can consider this matter solved. Did you bring a contract or should I draft one up?”

“No, no contract. I don’t have the know how for that. It’s awfully kind of you to not take sides. It’s true then? That you’re a Sombran? A follower of Chamadarst? It gives me a nasty feeling asking for your help but if you're better than the banks then I have no choice.”

“Tis true,” Abra said while copying the contract from the last guy onto a piece of paper. “I do the best I can in this city that hates associating with immortals. It’s paid off pretty well though.” He was so focused with his writing that he didn’t notice that the snowball fight was happening already. Snowballs soared inches from his body but they didn’t seem to hit. He felt the divine magic welling up within him and he noticed that the snowballs never made their mark, almost as if he wasn't even there. The same mercy wasn’t extended to his customer who caught a few right in the head.

“Pipe down you brats!” the customer shouted. Abra tried not to laugh and handed him the contract which they both signed.

“Everything’s in order then,” Abra said with a smile, “what business are you two starting anyways?”

“Clothes, lots of clothes,” the man said, “we come from the same master who passed and we couldn’t come to terms with succeeding him. It’s a race to see who can establish first and draw in the most customers. It’ll be a bloody war, this’ll be.”

“Interesting,” Abra mused, “well I know where to find you. I’ll come see how things are going. I can’t have you two getting too bloody or I’ll be out a large sum of money. There might just be a way for you both to thrive.” The customer walked away having agreed with Abra but he wasn’t very hopeful. “What should I do Sombran?” Abra asked the sky, “neutrality really does have a price.”
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Re: Neutral Dealings

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Abra:

Knowledge:
Torture: Half hitch knot
Sombran: Pass Unnoticed (1/3): I can avoid conflict when I’m doing business
Sombran: Glass Touch (1/3): I can weaken objects to some degree
Business Management: Business Management: Written contracts aid clarity
Business Management: Being neutral is a good policy for avoiding ire of competitors
Business Management: Asking for a down payment on a loan

Loot: -
Wealth: 1 WP
Injuries: -
Renown: 5
Magic XP: -

Points: 10
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Comments: I was rather amused by Abra, the powerful mage, throwing snowballs at a raccoon and chasing it around. He would have benefitted from a few points in the “Ranged: Snowball” skill!

Poor raccoon though! It probably didn’t expect things to end like that when it rummaged through Abra’s trash!

Abra is quite the businessman, by the way. Chamadarst is probably proud of him!


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