Luka Magnus

Luka Ricmor Jadran Gofrith-Magnus

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Luka Magnus
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Luka Magnus

LUKA MAGNUS
LUKA RICMOR JADRAN GOFRITH-MAGNUS

"On what slender threads do life and fortune hang..."
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Full Legal Name: Luka Ricmor Jadran Gofrith-Magnus.

Other Titles: The Argent Lord's Son. The Wise Fool's Babe.

Race: Mixed (Biqaj/Sev'ryn/Human).

Gender: Male.

Age: 24 (going on 25).

Date of Birth: 7 Saun 694.

Birthplace: On the banks of Vynmur River, midway between Fensalir and Raelia.

Current Location: Raelia, Melrath.

Blessings: None.

Language(s):
Common: Fluent.
Rakahi: Broken.

Faction(s):
House Magnus
House Gofrith
The Ragnari | The Syns.

Profession:
Noble.
Acolyte of The Syns.

Partners: Anastasia Katya Magnus (Wife).
Children: Adeline, Audley, Eline, Hartwin, Mihail.

Family:
Cecilia Mathilde Namdalen-Gofrith (Mother).
Henrik Luka Slava Gofrith (Father).
Orson Wilburn Magnus (Father-in-law)
Klara Piia Bo Magnus (Mother-in-law)
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Appearance

A P P E A R A N C E

“It is absurd to divide people into good and bad. People are either charming or tedious.”
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Silver-speckled copper blood flows through Luka’s veins, a testament to his mixed heritage of Biqaj, Sev’ryn, and Human linage. Angular tips to his ears, not round nor pointed, and eyes which gently change between precious metal tones over his consistently blue eyes, hint to a casual observer that Luka is not human. The more literal light that is placed on him, the more this fact is obvious as his skin shimmers with coppery hue and the warmth or coolness tones of his eyes brightly exhibit.

Luka does not appear like other people. Not only in the display of his blended blood and fine-boned visage, but in his refined decorum and exquisite dignity. The way in which he carries himself extends far beyond that of nobility training, but suggests an innate devotion to the artistry of a romantic life.

An artistry which includes his own handsome style. Consisting of long robes of elegant fabrics, silken sashes, and precisely selected accessories, Luka conforms to Raelian trends with finesse. When he visits Fensalir, he will wear soft leathers and furs. If he visits any of the other locations, he often assures that his attire suits the respective culture.

When an individual observes long enough, or interacts with him, they will soon discover that it isn’t flamboyance that causes this seeming pride in his guise. Poise in his oft-calm expressions appears unwavering, even in the rare moments of a smile or glare. Every motion of his genteel hands, every step of his aristocratic figure, every cultivated manner of detail possesses an endless courtly dance of Luka’s personal design.

With a sleek build more muscular than one would expect from a Raelian noble like himself, his figure of 6 foot 2 inches and 165 pounds affords him a slim silhouette. His dark brunet hair is kept short along the nape of his neck, with bangs that frame his brow to his cheekbones.

Embla: While he has tattooed the embla of runic pattern that adorns his wrists, he will occasionally include gold leaf along the design regardless. It is a design suitable for a noble, and he has added to it since his ceremony as a young man when he received the markings. His tattooed embla winds around the Mage's Marks that are on the back of both his hands.

Updates: As of 5 Zi'da 719, Luka is missing his right hand.

Faceclaim: Luke Powell
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Personality

P E R S O N A L I T Y

He watched the inky black of the thunderstorm journey across the sky and in each flash of light that sparked near him, he felt as if the world around him was his very soul, sculpted by his own watery depths of shadowed logic, and a calm sense of profound delusion conjured a rare smile to his lips.
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Luka possesses an intrinsic magnetism, which many who know him regard as a gift from the spirits. He never seems to need to strive, instead other people seem drawn to him and his ambitions appear easily fulfilled.

Perceptive, he takes to education as both student and teacher. Nothing is safe from his philosophical musing. No tradition, no discipline, no theory, no culture, and no person can be considered exempt from his reticent, analytical mind. Including himself.

Though rarely discovered by casual outsiders, Luka is a conflicted, self-centered, and emotionally sensitive young man.

He views the world as a pessimist and indulges in brooding over perceived injustices. Though he avoids blatant offense, he feels contrary to the common Melrathi folk who populate the wilds and places outside of the capital city of Raelia.

Despite his critical perspectives and quiet mannerisms, he retains immense passion. Integrated with his personal beliefs, he considers his own values superior to others; and if one dares to dive into Luka’s labyrinthine logic, they will find he is intensely arrogant with a martyr complex. He considers himself as having to fulfill the role of being the one who must do what must be done, the person that does what others are unwilling to.

So involved in himself, for even those closest to him, he seems incapable of sincere attachment or devotion to other people or causes outside of his own. He’d rather spend his time contemplating his own woes than spend a mere moment in consideration of others.

Despite his frequently shared Modernist viewpoints, written for documents to use in Melrathi politics, among the majority of nobility he is considered rebellious in thought due to expressed distaste for the social institutions and norms of Melrath. It is, then, perhaps a grace that many of his beliefs currently align with those in power among the Circle. If they were to ever fall out of status, however, he would find himself in a precarious position.

Quick Notes: Philosophical, critical, emotionally distant.

Strengths: Analytical, artistic, discreet will of stone, excellent leader, polite, punctual.

Weaknesses: High expectations, inflexible, moody, pessimistic, rigid, self-righteous, sees the worst in people (including himself).
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History

H I S T O R Y

“As the future ripens in the past,
so the past rots in the future --
a terrible festival of dead leaves.”

Born too early, along the Vynmur river during travel, he was the first child of his mother's. Through a vision she had during labor, she believed him to be a gift from Vynmur himself, a blessing that he lived despite being premature. Named after his great-grandfather, Luka Gofrith was a boy bred to fulfill a role. Before he even reached his first arc, he was arranged to marry a girl born soon after in House Magnus.

A perfect pawn, tutored from an early age in all manner of studies so that he would have all the necessary education for what his father, Henrik, required him to be. He had, on average, twelve tutors and three caretakers at any given time. With a life consisting of lesson after lesson, for a time he got along with his older half-brothers - those sons of his father's first wife and chosen for the Gofrith name - but as he grew older, it became clear that Luka was not like the other boys... or any child for that matter.

Luka was far too delicate.

At the age of thirteen, he received his noble gold leaf embla along his wrists. Soon after, he received his first spark from his father's right-hand guard in the domain of Attunement.

He had little choice in this decision. His father had greater plans for him and his role in society, and thus he had just as little choice when five years later, he received his second spark of Abrogation from one of his father's contacts in the Syn.

Soon after, he was married and instructed to relinquish the name of Gofrith for the House name of Magnus instead. It was a show of good faith and part of the bartered arrangement. Him and his wife, Anastasia, came to terms with each other, learned to share a bed and dine together in reasonable peace. She focuses on her alchemy and he focuses on his magic. As soon as he'd moved into the Raelian estate and provided a first child, he joined the Syns.

Between providing the next generation of Magnus and Gofrith branches to the noble trees, writing for political means, and training in the Syns, Luka has had little time left in his days to do much else but contemplate the life he leads, the choices he makes, the world around him, and if one day he'll be able to step outside the shadow of his father - and no longer be simply known as one of The Argent Lord's many sons.
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Luka is writing in his study one day, when he hears a giggling, bubbling up from the nearby washbasin. For a few moments, no sound issues afterward, and perhaps he goes back to writing. The more he turns to what he was doing, though, the louder the giggling becomes. If at last he allows himself to be distracted from his work, and goes to look into the washbasin, he'd find a small serpent-like creature.

It smiles with its fangs at him, if such a thing were possible, and tells him "Welcome to the Doldrums Hostel, no vacancy. On your right you'll find the river Vynmur, along with it's myriad stunning vistas as it winds its way through the valley, the woods, and down into Raellia. Come and play a while, and see what you can see."

Then, as strangely as it appeared, it faded from view. All he was left with was a basin full of water, in his lonely study. Would he continue his work for the good of the House, or entertain something in all likelihood that was a strange figment of his imagination, stress, or weariness.

Maybe, just maybe, there was something out there for him. Only one way to find out.
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Skill Point Ledger

S K I L L S

Skills
Skill NamePoint Expenditure Proficiency
Domain: Attunement 15 / 251 Novice
Domain: Abrogation 25 / 251 Novice
Etiquette FT 25 / 100 Novice
Detection RB 25 / 250 Novice
Tactics 10 / 250 Novice
Meditation 5 / 250 Novice
Dancing 5 / 250 Novice
Deception 5 / 250 Novice
Politics 5 / 250 Novice
Writing 10 / 250 Novice
Leadership 0 / 250 Pending
Swimming 0 / 250 Pending
Seafaring 0 / 250 Pending
Skill 0 / 250 Pending
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A - E

Skill: Total
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Dancing: 02
How to find the rhythm
Ancestral sacred dance.

Deception: 01
Hiding your disappointment as you learn how it all works. (PB)

Detection: 07
Listening to inflection in tone
Visions in smoke.
Moving Shadows.
Through a Forest at Night.
Looking for the right book
Reading in the dark is tricky
Observe carefully

Discipline: 07
Listening to instructions.
Getting up and carrying on in spite of everything.
Go through with your father's plans, even if you don't like it.
Keeping focus when casting in chaos
Focus on making the bug go away
Not running away can be hard
Focusing on order in chaos

Etiquette: 08
Respect to Others is Important in Most Cultures
Knowing your place in the world. (PB)
Don't track in mud.
Etiquette 1/5 (Bitter Sun)
Etiquette 2/5 (Bitter Sun)
Etiquette 3/5 (Bitter Sun)
Etiquette 4/5 (Bitter Sun)
Etiquette 5/5 (Bitter Sun)

Endurance: 07
Physical exertion in the heat.
Bugs bite. Lots of Bug Bites.
The feeling of your hand being melded to someone else
Physical discomfort + adrenaline
The experience of losing a hand
Physical shock
A missing limb via magic

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Meditation: 01
Regulating breathing

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Research: 02
Browsing through books
First, scan the titles

Socialization: 01
Bitter Sun

Stealth:02
Hiding among the bookshelves
Gather things quietly

Strength: 02
Holding your arms above your head.
Carrying a bucket of water.

Tactics: 02
The importance of trade
How the world moves around you. (PB)

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Renown: 60
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Ledgers

L E D G E R S
Skills Point Ledger
Thread/SkillPoints AddedPoints spentTotal
Detection (RB) 25 25 0
Starting Package 50 0 50
Etiquette 0 10 40
Domain: Attunement 0 5 35
Domain: Abrogation 0 5 30
Tactics 0 5 25
Meditation 0 5 20
Dancing 0 5 15
Deception 0 5 10
Politics 0 5 5
Writing 0 5 0
Etiquette +5 (PB) 5 5 0
Tactics +5 (PB) 5 5 0
Writing +5 (PB) 5 5 0
Intonation 10 0 10
Attunement 0 10 0
I. Don't Move 10 0 10
II. Can't Move 10 0 20
Bitter Sun 15 0 35
Etiquette 0 10 25
Black as night, black as pitch 20 (abrogation) 0 45
Abrogation 0 20 25
Thread Title xx 0 xx
Skill 0 25 0

Renown
Renown+Total
Starting Awarded 50 50
Intonation 5 55
I. Don't Move 5 60
Black as night, black as pitch 10 70
Thread 3 33
Thread 3 33

Wealth
Wealth Points+Total
Starting (Nobility Pack | Tier 5) 66 66
Thread 0 0
Thread 0 0
Thread 0 0
Thread 0 0
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D O M A I N
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Attunement

General

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Knowledge

Magic - Spellbook: 00
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Magic - Notes: 05
Note - Sacred
Note – Dance
Note – Smoke
Note – Ignorance.
Note – Mystery.

Magic - Specific: 01
The Initiation
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Domain Magic:Abrogation: The experience of chaotic ether
Domain Magic: Abrogation: Immortal curses can impact casting

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The Ragnari | The Syns

Current Rank

Acolyte: (0 Points): This is the starting rank for a member of the Syn. These mages are solely focused on learning to control their magic and work with other mages on the battlefield. There is intense focus on working together as a group, and learning the value all of the other magical domains possess. Typically an Acolyte is assigned a mentor to help them with this education. (This mentor may be used as your mage mentor and after PSF approval can also initiate you into other magics)

Gleam Sight

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Upon reaching the rank of Magus and being anointed with their first tattoo, Syns are granted the ability known as Gleam Sight or the “Gleam” most commonly. This name comes from the eerie faint luminescence that now softly glows from their irises. (The color of this glow is up to the player) This ability allows the Syn to physically “see” ether and energy of all forms around them. This forever changes how the person sees the world. Plants, trees,animals, and mortals will radiate with swirls of life energy, ghosts and spirits will glide past with whispers of ephemera and ectoplasm spiraling around them. Sources of ether divine or otherwise will be most clearly seen, either in mortals or in items such as wells and artifacts. This makes it especially easy for Syn’s to sight other mages, or even Immortal Marked individuals. They also have been known to use the “Gleam” to hunt down and flay sources of energy in order to fuel their magic. Since the Fall of Emea this ability has been indispensable for the Syns, allowing them an edge in hunting down sources of energy in order to keep their Sparks active.

To see the world with the "Gleam" is to see a sight far more breathtaking and beautiful than another other mortal could imagine. Syns can wax eloquently about how their ability changes them and how they regard the living things around them. It's as if they can see reality breathe and move around them. In a way, having the Gleam Sight is a way of reminding Syns that they are part of the world, and that they have a duty to defend it by way of their magic.

Though disciplined and respected, some Syns look down on other mages and Melrathi who cannot see the world as they can. Arrogance can be the downfall of some Syns, but who can blame them when they can see a world brimming with exquisite color, life, and energy.

Rankings

Magus: (20 Points): Upon becoming a Magus the Syn is granted their first tattoo. This appearance and shape is always of their choosing however it must be displayed somewhere that it can always be seen. Magus are considered capable spellcasters and trustworthy enough to manage handling the whims of their Spark(s) on their own.

Warlock/Witch: (40 Points): There is an air of mystique that comes with being a Witch or Warlock of the Syns. These elite mages are especially talented in their chosen domains and possess a comprehensive knowledge of working with other mages who possess different kinds of magics. Witches and Warlocks are forces of nature on the battlefield and can easily change the course of a battle if allowed to unleash their powers upon Melrath’s enemies.

Enchanter: (60 Points): Many Enchanters of the Syns play a unique role in this particular branch. Often considered great repositories of knowledge and wisdom, it is the enchanters who are responsible for teaching less experienced Syns and mentoring the Acolytes and Magus members. While some prefer to teach, others remain in the military arena of combat. Enchanters are known specifically for their exquisite use of tactics and the sheer power wielded in their magics. They are sharp, wholly focused and deadly.

Spellweaver:(80 Points): The Spellweavers of the Syns are considered the rare elite of this Ragnari branch. These are battemages through and through, capable of enduring extreme odds and even turning the tide in wars. Spellweavers are especially rare, and are considered masters of their magics, and wise in the ways of working with their Sparks. These Syns sometimes seems alien and otherworldly in nature, as if they are not quite fully mortal any longer.

Archmage: (100 Points): Only a handful Archmages have existed throughout Melrath’s History. Those that have reached this rank are the leaders of the Syns and decide where and how the skills of their subordinates are used by Melrath. It is the duty of the Archmages to protect the rest of the Syns, and ensure that their magic is never used for anything other than the defense and good of the nation. More than once Archmages have turned down the government of the nation when asked to use their abilities in ways that they did not approve of.

Beyond their political power, Archmages are considered to understand the very essence of magic and Sparks. They power is nigh unrivaled and more often than not these mages have Revealed. It is rare for an Achmage to remain unrevealed for long after ascending to their position. However it is not unheard of.
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Profession: Acolyte of Syns
Renown: 60
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Housing

Location: Raelia, Melrath

Shares a Room with wife in a House Magnus family estate.
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Mundane Items

1) Clothing: Everyday Attire, Training Attire, Syn Uniform, Formal Attire
2) One Set of Toiletries: Soap, brush, razor, toothbrush, toothpaste,

Key Items

1) Heirloom: Two signet amulets enchanted to never be lost; one of House Gofrith, the other of House Magnus.
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My Dismembered Hand: Your hand has been sheared off - however, it's still moving around (think "Thing" from the Addams family). Over the course of the next few days, it will keep trying to attach itself to Luka's wrist (which literally looks smooth and flat. Every time it does, you find that there's a feeling of pulling - like your arm wants to be re-attached to your hand - and vice versa. You have two options. You may keep this as it is (it will obey simple commands etc, but you can't see through it or anything - think of it like an intelligent dog just ... it's your hand). Or, you may seek to re-attach it. If you do this, then you could end up with Idalos' first (as far as I know) detachable hand which can be either / or. However, to do this you will need to undertake a story of some kind - perhaps visiting a grafter who agrees to reattach your hand if you retrieve his stolen treasure, for example. PM me if you want more details. I'm happy to approve the plot and / or oversee it. (Black as night, black as pitch)
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