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1st of Ashan 719

The surrounding lands of Rharne boast several towns and settlements that lie on the northern shores of the River Zynyx. This includes Mistral Village, Caervalle Town, Zynyx Market and Volta.

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1st Trial, Ashan, 719a
Volta, South-West of Rharne
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He couldn't kill them, and that limited him. His eyes were unused to the suns, the brightness, the burning in his retinas, and this required time to adjust to. They were unknown to him and he needed scant moments to know what they were capable of, but those moments would be painful, if instructional. Finally, he'd known since the previous night that this would be more than just a fight: it was to be demonstration and warning, both. He needed to show these people he was not a soft touch for the voyage home; a timid traveler who could be pushed around. So he'd need to stretch it out... and that meant taking a beating.

All of these things were true, and they played their part. But Kasoria just wasn't willing to admit that, maybe, he was just getting old, too.

Not that it matters now.

It didn't. Whatever leash he kept over his self-control, he cut it off and threw it away as he hurtled towards the two men. His leg throbbed and his face sent shards of pain into his brain with every movement, every breath, but he could ignore it. He'd survived far, far worse than them. He'd been tortured and stabbed, shot and burned, sliced and drowned. Yet there he was, a thousand leagues from home and still stubbornly refusing to die. A pair of cocky sellswords weren't about to change that.

Especially not now I have your number, lads.

He knew they liked to hit him at once, from the flanks, so he came in fast and to the side. Shaz was the hardest mark, as far as he'd been able to tell, so that who he went with first. The two younger men were still recovering from their surprise when they reacted, Kasoria almost upon them, and Shaz immediately retaliated with a right-left combo-

-the former thudded uselessly against Kasoria's left forearm, and before the second could even land-

CRACK

-his right elbow swung into Shaz's face with a sound like an ax handle smacking against a tree trunk. The watching crew made that unmistakable "oooooh" sound of feigned, sympathetic pain as Shaz went reeling back-

-into Raader's path, stopping the kick-boxer from launching his own counter-attack. He pushed his comrade away with a snarl, seeking the little cunt that had vanished behind his stumbling partner-

-only to reappear as a whirling figure of leather and sweaty, bloody flesh, spinning around and aiming for a high kick-

he'd duck it, he's not stupid, but he still doesn't think much of you

-that Raader ducked under, but the little man didn't stop, he just kept spinning, only now it was lower, wounded leg screaming and he screamed along with it, drowning it out, numbing the pain with feral blood-lust as his second kick came in so low his foot almost scraped the deck as he-

-swept Raader's ankles from under him and knocked him onto his back, just like he'd been mere trills before. Surprise and incredulity did more to keep the sellsword down there than pain, disbelief that he'd been felled by such a combination, and just as Kasoria braced himself for a finisher-

-Shaz came in from the side with a bloody bellow, cracked cheekbone and scarlet lips making him a daemons mask as he launched a flurry of punches at the smaller man-

-who wasn't even in the same air to feel them. He stepped back with every punch, body swaying left and right and back as he did, not allowing a single blow to land on him. Until his back hit the railing at the edge of the deck, the crew around it clearing the way for the two fighters. Grunting, wide-eyed Shaz kept punching, kept up the pressure, knowing the little bastard had nowhere to go and now he was trapped-

And you're far away from your friend, too. Mistake, that.

Shaz reared back for another punch and Kasoria was already lunging forwards, one-two combination of short, vicious punches slamming into his chest like a hammer, stunning him-

-left forearm coming up to knock away the shaky punch-

-right hand snapping up and around the back of the kid's neck, yanking him close down into a clinch, almost bending him over-

Shaz's whole visual world became the blurry, sweaty, stinking skin of Kasoria's chest as he was held tight and fast. He had about half a trill to get mad about this before he saw the little man's knee snap up-

CRACK

CRACK

CRUNCH


Three time. Twice into his stomach, the third time between his legs. The first couple were enough to make his eyes flash and swim with pain; the last killed his legs and sent him sinking down to the ground. But still he raised his arms, trying to fight back-

-only Kasoria was no longer there. He let go of his neck and instead sidestepped, bringing both hands to the back of his head-

CRACK

-and swung his hips as hard as his shoulders, smashing Shaz's face into the wooden railing of the main deck. Even the hardier members of the crew looked away with a wince and some vague, likely religious hand movement of protection. A handful of teeth skittered and splashed into the water below, and Shaz sunk down to the deck with glassy eyes. Behind him, and already back in Kasoria's vision, Raader was on his feet. The smaller, older, lighter man grinned as he saw a fresh face atop that lean, hard body. No confidence this time. Just anger warring with fear, as the ruse was cast aside and brutal reality was made clear to him in the shattered form of his barely-conscious friend.

"Lesse how good y'are on yer own, mate."
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He refused to panic. He'd fought before, he'd been bloodied before. He'd fought for his fucking life, against uglier and bigger bastards than this one, not just for cheers and a little extra coin. But so much had changed, and so quickly. Raader didn't have time to put it all together during the fight, but he would later. At the time... it was just a feeling. An inkling. A whispering voice that mocked him, though it stank of the same fear that he was barely holding back.

You underestimated him. You thought he was old and slow and stupid. But he's only one of those things, and it doesn't matter.

"Fuck that."

The young sellsword charged the older man and launched a kick to the leg he'd nailed last time, hoping to break it, now that permanent fucking damage was apparently all par the course-

CRACK

-only for Kasoria to jerk up his leg and face the incoming blow, Raader's own swinging limb crashed into that blocking bone and he screamed out as a supple, vulnerable joint was replaced by oak-hard bone wrapped in leathery skin, and actual leather. He hopped back a few steps before bringing his foot down, forced back on the defensive as the little man approached him... slowly. In no rush. Sensing no danger.

He looked around and found only laughing, jeering faces. Those who'd been praising him moments before now relished his suffering. This was theater, after all, and who doesn't love a good twist to the plot? The Captain and his cronies were glaring down from the forecastle, the boss himself apparently unimpressed by this unexpected turn, but... interested. This was a potential new recruit, after all.

Your replacement.

The thought filled Raader with rage. He was not some over-the-hill sellsword unfit for anything but guarding stables or watching market stalls. He was twenty-three arcs in the world and in his prime. No, no, no. This would not come to pass.

So get creative.

He surged forwards again, and the crowd roared its approval as Raader feinted with a kick, drawing Kasoria's knee up-

-only to really snap out a punch, knocking the old man's head back as his knuckles connected. He lashed out with another, a left hook that sent the man stepping back in surprise. Confidence filled the boy anew. He was fighting back. He was causing damage. He was so abuzz with confidence he grinned, and did not see there was no actual pain on the man's face. Just a vague annoyance and stoic endurance. He pounded at him with left and rights, forcing his guard up, exposing his bare belly and-

-finally nailed the old man with a push kick to the stomach, knocking him back, almost sending him skidding across the deck until he was down on one knee. Panting... wheezing... no....

No. He's not.

"Heh heh heh heh..."

Kasoria looked up through stringy, sweaty hair, and Raader could see him smiling. He straightened back up without looking away, without the smile wavering or twitching from the pain rippling through him. Oh, Raader knew he was hurting. He was covered in bruises and his face was bloody; probably a few broken bones. But none of it was stopping him. He rubbed his stomach and grimaced, as if judging the finery of a garment before shrugging.

"Better'n I thought. Time t'end it, though."

The old man came at him, and after, Raader would think on something else. He'd see the man's stance as he flew across the deck, right arm drawn back for a punch, left barely moving up into a guard. It had seemed to obvious, so clear, so... tempting. It was easy to believe the old man was simply over-confident; that he was dropping his guard to deliver another hammer blow to end the fight. So, of course, Raader tried to capitalize. Work the opening. Swung one of his trademark kicks into that gap and knock the old fuck's head off.

Later, in bed and pissing while sitting down, he'd wonder if that hadn't been exactly what this "Thagoras" had intended for him to think.

He swung his right leg up into a high kick, hamstrings and ligaments screaming as he ground his teeth. His shin launched up, so close to connecting with Kasoria's head and then-

-his left hand came up. Like a blur. Like it had been waiting, not idling without use. His shin smacked into his open palm and Kasoria grunted as he held the leg in the air. Raader's lips parted for just a fraction of a trill, shock writ all over his face .Kasoria didn't waste his chance with mocking or grinning or winking. He had the boy frozen, one leg in the air, and really, in that position, what other blow came to mind?

Raader screamed and the crew howled with him as Kasoria's right smashed into his crotch. Something seemed to pop in his breeches, and he wondered what just before his mind was so overridden with pain that he wasn't concocting anything so fancy as "thoughts" anymore. But Kasoria wasn't quite finished with him. His right hand didn't drop, nor his left let go. Instead he tightened his grip, and his right hand grabbed a handful of Raader's shirt. Then with a screaming cry that seemed to roar up from every fiber in his muscles, Kasoria heaved and twisted at the same time, lifting the agonized Raader off his feet as he went, spinning him around-

-letting him go as soon as they were at their fastest-

-and sending the boy crashing and rolling across the deck. The crew skittered out of the way as he came to a stop at the edge of their arena, drinks forgotten in their hands, jaws slack as they looked down at the brutalized sellsword. Him and Shaz, Fists and Feet, best of the crew when it came to barehanded brutality. Now Shaz was almost toothless and battered into the ether. And Raader-

-had just enough time to glimpse the suns above him. So long removed from his sight, and so welcome. He blinked at the blinding light until a shadow swallowed them. Something that stank of blood and sweat. He could just make out two cold eyes, like dead lumps of coal. A tone was light and yet the words still growled, as if he was always chewing gravel.

"Sloppy. Be grateful this ain't fer real, boy."

Raader never got a chance to retort. A smaller, faster shadow flew down at him, and Kasoria's boot stomped him into blissful, painless sleep.
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"You were fuckin' playing with them."

Kasoria looked up into the accusing glare of the Captain, and then looked back down to the precious cold rag pressed against his stomach. His face was more of a worry, but he wanted that swelling to go down. The crew of the Lucky Lady were milling around, but with purpose. The suns had risen full and bright, and that meant soon the harbor would be clogged with ships seeking the sea. Senter had no intention of being left behind or having to wait; he'd beat the rush.

"Not quite," the assassin, the bounty hunter, the sellsword answered. Whatever he had to be to get home, so be it. "Needed t'know what they were made of, though. So the first round had t'go t'them."

"You could have killed them both, if you'd wanted to."

Again, it wasn't a question, and Kasoria favored his new master with a thin smile. The man knew how to read a fight. He shrugged and dipped the rag back into the bucket next to him. Wrung it out and watched as the two men who'd thought to beat him were carried off the deck. A man on either side of them, arms looped over their shoulders, taking them down the gangplank, onto the dock and... that was it. Left there in the shade of the nearest building like garbage, with whatever coin they were owed stuffed into their pockets.

"Wasn't necessary. Just needed to beat 'em, not kill 'em."

"Would you have? If I gave the order?"

Kasoria didn't so much pause, as he studied the man asking him that question. He'd not thought of Senter as the sort of man to hire killers, at least not for the sole purpose of killing. He needed men familiar and adept at violence, for piracy and mayhap mutiny were hardly alien on the Orm'del Sea. But a hatchetman, and assassin? He simply didn't strike Kasoria as the type. Old and familiar instincts shuffled awake in the bottom of his soul. Something that slid under his skin like a coat he'd worn for years... and yet, he shrugged it off.

"No," he said firmly, looking at his reflection in the water and grimacing. "Ain't a scratcher. Jus' a sellsword."

"A what?"

"Scratcher. S'what we call an assassin back home."

Senter opened his mouth to ask another question but before he could, the little man dunked his whole head into the bucket. Bubbles gurgled up to the surface as he either exhaled or screamed, then came rocketing back up with a gasp and an arc of cold water splashing behind him. The Etzori coughed and rubbed his face, groaning and parting his hair as he did. Then he grabbed the rag again, and turned to his Captain.

"Got anythin' I could use fer these?" He pointed to the cuts on his face. "Somethin' strong?"

"Mister Fisk?" A young man with chubby cheeks stopped next to Senter. "Get the man a bottle of ether from the doctor."

"Aye, sir."

Kasoria smirked as the man scuttled off, then nodded back to the Captain. "That what I'm callin' youse now?"

"Well, you are part of the crew, Mister Thagoras," Senter said with a small smirk of his own. "So sir or Captain will be expected."

The little man looked around the deck, and felt the brig start to rumble under him. The sails were unfurled above them both, white wings spreading out and crackling and snapping in the breeze. Captain Senter inhaled noisily through his nostrils, grinned and clapped his hands together. Kasoria knew a man who relished his work, too. One who couldn't wait to get back to his beloved oceans, his endless, glistening sea. Mister Fisk scuttled back and handed over a bottle of liquid that could kill plagues with a mouthful.

"What'll y'want me t'do once I'm mended?"

"Keep your eyes peeled and your weapons ready, of course,. It's ten trials to Foster's Landing, and you never know who'll cross our path." The Captain paused as he started to walk away, a new thought occurring to him. "Tomorrow, though... we'll start you in the crow's nest."

"The what?"

Kasoria looked up and up and up, following the Captain's finger. Then he sighed as he saw the giant bucket that seemed nailed to the top of the mast.

"Wonderful."
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Renown: +20 (for putting on a heck of a show, yet leaving the opponents alive with plenty of witnesses to tell the tale).

Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises, bruises, and more bruises. Same injuries as previous thread: Badly bruised face, bruised right leg, split lip, lost a molar, bruised left rib cage and two broken ribs.
Wealth Points: None
Loot: None

Skill Knowledges:
  • Acrobatics: Flexibility to Launch High Kicks
  • Tactics: Leave an Obvious Opening, So Your Opponent Will Attack As You Plan
  • Tactics: Fight Singularly Enemies Who Prefer to Fight Together
  • Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Clinch Fighting:
  • Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq - Combo): High Kick, Leg Sweep
  • Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq Combo): Kick Catch, Groin Strike, Throw
Non-Skill Knowledges:
  • none requested.
Notes: n/a.

Awesome. Plain and simple awesome. Kasoria is obviously an effective and disciplined fighter. The flow of the fight was incredibly successfully written, and I enjoyed the use of dashes at the start and stop of paragraphs. It kept the momentum fast-paced, but not confusing, between changes in movements and character focus.

Similar to the last thread, the POV shift to Raader expertly accomplished an increase in story tension and created an immersive experience for the fight itself. While the conclusion was inevitable, the way that you got it there was entertaining and surprising. I thought he was going to kill the sellswords, but he didn't.

Great job and enjoy your rewards!

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