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Accidental library trip
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Hinata
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Accidental library trip
Last edited by Hinata on Tue Dec 08, 2020 4:49 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 11
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Re: Accidental library trip
Hinata:
Knowledge:
Socialization 1
Persuasion 4
Endurance 1
Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: Hinata hurt her leg when she bumped into the man with the spectacles. It will be a bit sore for a while.
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Mostly appropriate to level. A bit of “Acting” or a related skill might have come in handy when Hinata put on an innocent smile even though she was squealing with glee on the inside though.
Points: 10
The scene where Hinata ran into another person was fairly amusing. Even though she initially wanted to go to a bar and dance, she seemed to have fun at the library regardless.
The scene with the librarian was a bit contradictory in my opinion. First of all, Hinata apologized for scaring her, and a few lines later, she was squealing with glee on the inside.
It was a funny scene regardless though.
I also appreciate that you had Hinata’s persuasion fail at one point and that it was met with mixed reaction at a different point.
All in all, it was an entertaining little thread. I wonder if she’ll ever meet Bart again. I enjoyed their interaction!
Enjoy your rewards!
P.S.: I might have added “Acting” to the list of skills used as Hinata was trying to look innocent even though she really felt quite gleeful.
Knowledge:
Socialization 1
Persuasion 4
Endurance 1
Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: Hinata hurt her leg when she bumped into the man with the spectacles. It will be a bit sore for a while.
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Mostly appropriate to level. A bit of “Acting” or a related skill might have come in handy when Hinata put on an innocent smile even though she was squealing with glee on the inside though.
Points: 10
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Comments: I found it interesting that Hinata considered having trouble sleeping to be a wonderful thing sometimes. There are probably certain advantages to not sleeping though – as long as you aren’t too exhausted!The scene where Hinata ran into another person was fairly amusing. Even though she initially wanted to go to a bar and dance, she seemed to have fun at the library regardless.
The scene with the librarian was a bit contradictory in my opinion. First of all, Hinata apologized for scaring her, and a few lines later, she was squealing with glee on the inside.
It was a funny scene regardless though.
I also appreciate that you had Hinata’s persuasion fail at one point and that it was met with mixed reaction at a different point.
All in all, it was an entertaining little thread. I wonder if she’ll ever meet Bart again. I enjoyed their interaction!
Enjoy your rewards!
P.S.: I might have added “Acting” to the list of skills used as Hinata was trying to look innocent even though she really felt quite gleeful.
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