Snap, Crackle, Oink!

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Snap, Crackle, Oink!

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“Have you never witnessed a dissection before?” Balen asked from across the table.

Zur shook his head. This was his first time. Balen Helvin, head doctor at the Infirmary, had allowed Zur to observe a dissection today. It was of a newborn pig, but the internal organs and external extremities were not dissimilar to those of a person.

Balen stood at one end of a metal examination table and Zur stood at the other. They were in the back room of the Infirmary where the head doctors performed their special duties. Zur didn’t have any clients today, so he had asked Balen if he could be of any assistance, as he was interested in medicine and wanting to learn more about the subject. He still had yet to attend classes at the academy in order to obtain any proper training, but he figured watching a professional first hand would be one of the best forms of experience.

Balen was holding a scalpel in his right hand. A cloth mask covered his face, muffling every word he spoke. Sometimes it was hard to hear exactly what he was saying, but Zur was able to grasp the basics.

“It’s actually quite extraordinary,” Balen continued, waving the blade in the air.

Zur nodded his head. He, too, was wearing a mask as he had been instructed to do so. Something about the strong formaldehyde smell that caused headaches if inhaled directly, or just standard sanitary conditions, he couldn’t remember.

“The first thing I’ll do is cut down the middle of the pig like so.” Balen pressed the scalpel into the pig’s flesh and drew downward starting from just under the chin. The skin made a sickening snap, crackle, and pop as he did but Zur was not perturbed. Science didn’t make him feel that way.

“You don’t want to apply too much pressure, though. You want to make sure you don’t cut into any of the internal organs that lie underneath.”

Balen stopped the scalpel right before the lower part of the pig diverged into the legs. Continuing from the original incision, he deftly made two short cuts around the umbilical cord and down the legs. He did the same for the arms, but needn't maneuver around any umbilical cord.

“It’s called the Y-incision,” Balen announced in a chipper voice. Aside from the offshoot into the legs, Zur could see why it was called that; it really did look like a Y. What he didn't see, however, was the reasoning as to why dissections required that specific incision.

“Why do you cut the pig like that?” He asked, unable to come up with a better way to phrase his question.

“It’s easier to get to all the important parts.” With gloved hands, the doctor reached his fingers into the newly made opening and wrenched the two flaps of skin apart.

Another crack.

The sound of boots prying themselves out from the mud. Squelch.

The incision was no longer an incision but a gaping hole in the belly. It was a stark contrast to how small the rest of the pig was. Upon seeing such a grotesque image, Zur was glad the pig was dead.

Balen retreated to a small cupboard behind him where he extracted a tool that oddly resembled a pair of gardening clippers.

“It’s not always necessary to use these when cracking the rib-cage, but I find it to be less messy,” he explained before snipping away at the fragile looking bones.

Snip.

Crack.

Crunch.

He did nothing more than make a few cuts here and there with the scissors before placing them aside. For later use, Zur presumed.
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Zur bears the mark of Yvithia on his right eye. It appears as a scar-like impression and is the colour of a pale, metallic blue. This blessing grants him the ability to be significantly more astute than his peers, especially in the art of linguistics. He has also been granted the ability to perform minor telepathic communications with those he is in eye sight of.
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The young man leant forward to get a better look at their patient. While dead and an animal, Zur preferred the term patient over specimen or victim. He believed animals shared some dignity like their human relatives. Perhaps it was his sentimental side or his whimsical intellect, but he tried to regard every living being as equal.

Had Balen not been there to lead him in the dissection and point things out as he saw them, Zur wouldn’t have had a clue what he was looking at. Everything was covered in a thin slimy coat of some unidentified residue. Balen mentioned it was a form of connective tissue that kept things in place. However, this was not to be mistaken for mesentery which was the particular tissue that kept the intestines in place. It took merely five seconds or so for the doctor to explain this to him, but it seemed like an entire hour’s worth of research. Zur wished he would have brought with him something to take notes. He wasn't the one getting his hands all filthy with viscera; he could have used his hands for something important.

As Balen prodded at the entrails, something popped out at him from the mass of reddish, slimy gruel. It was dull green in colour, and unlike the other parts of the body, it was slightly more matte in texture.

Zur pointed tentatively to it, making sure his finger didn’t get too close. He wasn’t wearing gloves like Balen was.

“What’s that?”

“That, my dear man, is the gallbladder.”

Zur knew of only one bladder, and for some reason at this very moment felt the need to use it. “What does the gallbladder do?”

The doctor’s eyes crinkled. Zur could tell he was smiling behind mask that covered his face.

“What an excellent question! Not a lot is known about the gallbladder. It’s kind of like the appendix in that it may have served more use earlier in our evolution. What is speculated about it, though, is that it holds the bile used by the intestines to break down food.”

Zur tried to conjure an image of his own gallbladder holding such vile contents. He shivered. Science was cool until you tried to apply it to yourself. Then it just got a little uncomfortable.

“Then there must be a tube that connects it to-“

Balen held up such a tube and moved his fingers down it until he reached the spot where it connected to the small intestine. “Isn’t she beautiful?” he said as he held it in a way that was more obvious for Zur to see.

Zur wouldn’t exactly have called it that, but the mechanics behind the organ and the connection it had with another was oddly fascinating. The body was so intricately crafted, had so many important parts and functions. It was incredible how it worked properly most of the time.

Balen continued to examine the body, contorting limbs and twisting tissues. All the while, a sickening sound erupted from his manipulation.

Suddenly the table began to move. It swayed on its legs shifting from left to right. The floor seemed the grumble underneath Zur, unless it was his stomach. His vision blurred, his breathing quickened and a thin veil of darkness began to form on the outside of his vision. The ground continued to quake.

What was happening? Was this an earthquake? Zur had never experienced one before, but he didn't think it felt quite like this. His fingers were tingling and gradually become numb. His head started to fill until it was heavy with lead. The skin of his face buzzed like a swarm of bees were attacking him with their rambunctious bodies. Like the table in front of him Zur, too, began to sway.

“Whoa there,” the doctor said. He quickly removed his soiled gloves and grabbed Zur’s arm to steady him. “Take a seat there, lad.”

He was led to a chair in the far corner away from the examination table. A small window hung open above his head to the left. Through his daze, Zur was able to remove the mask from his face so he could breathe a little better.

“Perhaps some fresh air will do you good.”

It hadn’t been an earthquake after all. Just some random act of dissociation brought on by what? Anxiety? Repulsion? The smell of formaldehyde becoming too pungent? Zur cursed himself for not being more professional. He began to apologize when Balen cut him off.

“Don’t apologize. It happens to the best of us. I wasn’t always so confident. In fact, I believe I vomited the first several dissections I witnessed!”

Zur tried to smile, an acknowledgment to a shared experience, but he couldn’t. His head was still spinning. He moved closer to the window, shoveling in large gulps of fresh air.

“You’ll get used to it if you have as strong of a passion as you say you do.” Balen patted Zur’s hand before returning to the pig, still lying dead and exposed on the cold metal examination table.
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Zur bears the mark of Yvithia on his right eye. It appears as a scar-like impression and is the colour of a pale, metallic blue. This blessing grants him the ability to be significantly more astute than his peers, especially in the art of linguistics. He has also been granted the ability to perform minor telepathic communications with those he is in eye sight of.
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After Zur had spent some time breathing in some fresh air, Balen encouraged him to come back over and finish the observation. There was one more thing he wished to show his student before he was needed elsewhere.

As Zur reflected on his getting sick, he couldn’t help but kick himself regardless of Balen’s reassurance. He had stitched up Ash not many days prior and hadn’t had much issue with it. Perhaps it was because that injury wasn’t nearly as… detailed as this was. Perhaps it was also because it was his lover he was helping and it had been because of that that he needed to keep a clear head. He tried not to dwell on the fact much longer as he found his place at the table across from the doctor.

Balen already had something in his hands. He had put new gloves on after having taken them off to assist Zur, but now they were just as blood stained as the previous pair.

“The heart,” he stated. His voice was filled with awe. Zur guessed even after countless surgeries, the novelty never quite wore off.

“It’s not how I pictured it,” the young man said after taking a deep breath through his reattached mask.

The heart Balen held was covered in blood, yes, but ranged in a variety of colours other than the normal red. There was purple and pink and hints of blue. It was oblong and ovular in shape. There was a thick line down the middle of it and an arch coming out of the top. If Zur squinted, he could see how it resembled the customary design of the heart, but it was in no way obvious.

“It never is,” Balen said in a whisper.

Zur continued to ponder how the common drawing of the heart came to be. Surly the identification of the heart first originated from the organ itself and not the design. While never enthralled by history, this was a particular history Zur wanted to know more about. He would make it his goal to research it when he returned home.

“I won’t get into the specifics of this masterpiece, but whoever or whatever designed such a thing did a miraculous job.”

Who or what did] create everyone? And did everyone’s heart look exactly like this one? These were questions Zur mentally added to his list of things to research.

“It is this that keeps us alive,” the doctor continued. His eyes twinkled in the light as he held the heart up like a prized possession. “It is this thing right here that pumps the blood through our bodies. The valves and ventricles push the blood in and out, like clockwork, to give you life.”

Zur had a new appreciation for the heart now. Not just the anatomical heart that beat inside his chest, but the drawing as well. The curve and dip and then the point at the bottom represented more than just love as it usually did, it represented life.

Zur had a strong urge to draw numerous hearts all over a piece of paper and hand it to Ash. He wanted to let him know that Ash was not just his love, but his life.

“She’s beautiful,” Zur said, picking up Balen’s earlier use of the term. “Truly beautiful.”
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Re: Snap, Crackle, Oink!

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Zur'lei:

Knowledge:
Surgery: Y-Incision
Surgery: Physiology of the Valves and Ventricles of the Heart
Surgery: The Gallbladder Stores Bile for the Intestines
Surgery: Dissecting Requires a Light Hand
Surgery: Mesentery Keeps the Intestines in Place
Psychology: Experiences of Dissociation

The Customary Heart: How Had the Design Come to Be?
Passion for Knowledge Overcomes Obstacles

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Injuries: -
Renown: 5, for having a rather strong reaction in front of Balen.
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Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
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Comments: I’m impressed by the detail in which you described the dissection. I think I actually learned something from this thread. You seem to have conducted a bit of research for this.

I also thought that it was interesting that Zur’lei was not perturbed at first, but had a rather strong reaction at the end of the second post, after all.

I would have added “Discipline” to the list of skills used because of that scene. There were other occasions throughout the thread where that particular skill might have applied as well though.

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