Closed Order from Chaos 4: Supplies and Demands.

15th of Cylus 719

Seated on the shores of Lake Lovalus, Rharne serves as the home of the Lighting Knights, the Thunder Priestesses, and the Merchant's guild. This beautiful trade city is filled with a happy and contented people who rarely need an excuse to party.

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Race: Lotharro
Profession: Yari Runner/Mercenary/Assassin
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Re: Order from Chaos 4: Supplies and Demands.

☠ Order from Chaos 4: Supplies and Demands ☠

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Points awarded:
- Faith: 15 regular points
- Qit: 15 ghost points

Knowledge:

Faith
Drawing: Using diagrams to emphasise or explain
Drawing: Sketching doesn't need to be accurate
Drawing: Visual representation of hierarchy
Drawing: Creating a crude spear
Drawing: Creating a crude face
Drawing: Using a charcoal pencil
Negotiation: See the person, not the language barrier
Qit
Detection: I can feel Caza's tears while I'm a ghost
Discipline: Controlling your ghostly emotions is harder than while alive
Discipline: Using an emotional distraction to return to normal
Drawing: Creating a crude spear
Drawing: Creating a crude face
Drawing: Using a charcoal pencil
Leadership: Taking on an important duty
Logistics: The organizational structure of the Order of Adunih
Materialization: Channeling stubbornness to become more solid
Materialization: Picking up a pencil


Notes: I like this thread, it was sweet and endearing from Faith and insightful on Qit's side of things. For faith I'm sure, it was just another day in the life of being a Zuuda, but more in she was just doing what Faith does, helping people; living or dead. As for Qit, I like seeing the emotions she feels and how vivid her experiences are as a ghost. She is really dealing with the mental effects of realizing "holy shite I'm dead" and it's done very well.

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