Mature Waits and measures.

Faith carries out an autopsy and has a chat with the dead person while she's doing it. Deals with death etc. Licentiate #2

40th of Ashan 719

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Waits and measures.

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40th Ashan, 719
Death had been her companion from the time that she was born. She had never understood why people felt uncomfortable around death, in fairness - it was the most natural thing. There was no fear or discomfort for her here, in the morgue, it simply was what it was. But then, Faith knew without a doubt that death was not the end. To-trial she was going to be performing an autopsy on the body of this young woman. She had died suddenly, with no apparent cause. As far as it had seemed the woman had got a headache and then passed out and died almost immediately. That probably meant, Faith knew, that there was an issue in the brain, but she wasn't prepared to make any assumptions. "I'm so sorry this happened to you," the young priestess whispered. Reaching out, she gently stroked the woman's cheek.

The room was cool, the body was laying on marble and all the equipment she needed was laid out. The young woman was covered in a sheet and Faith looked down at her. "I know how confused you are," she whispered, and reached to get the balm she used to anoint the body before she made any incisions. Gently, Faith moved the honey-blonde hair out of the way, revealing the forehead. "Your name in life was Hennie. It's such a pretty name. You were twenty three arcs old when you died. My name is Faith, and in the name of Vri, who holds dominion over death, Famula, who presides over souls, Moseke who held you in life and Ymiden who brings you the dawn of new experiences I'm going to find out what happened to you. " She marked Hennie's forehead, then lips, with the balm. "If you have questions, ask them. In Vri's name, since you are not here in ghostly form, I believe you have crossed over and for that, I am so grateful." Putting down the balm, she looked at the young woman and sighed. For all that Faith was relaxed about life and death, seeing them the way she did, she recognised that there were some deaths which were more tragic than others - and this was one of those.

"I will do everything I can," Faith promised, earnestly, "to give the answers your family need and deserve. They love you, and need to know, to understand the reason behind their grief. I'll help them." It was so much part of what her job was - to attend to the family and loved ones of those who had died. Love, death, sorrow and remembrance, after all, were what she worked with whenever she worked with a corpse. Now that she was confident that Hennie's soul was taken care of, it was time to address the wider picture and find out what had happened here.
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In many ways, this was the beginning of her Licentiate studies. Faith knew this, quite certainly. She had spent a lot of time thinking about just what details she wanted to record, what she needed to. Because she could not make a mistake here, she had to ensure that the information she gathered was correct. "What I'm going to do," she said, to the dead woman, "Is to make sure that I get every bit of information about you I can. It means that I'll be able to start building up pictures of things which will help me help others. Maybe, one trial, I'll be able to stop people from dying from what you died from. But either way," Faith said, as she began to draw blood. "I'll make a difference, and give you and your family some closure, I promise."

First of all, she needed to take samples. Hair, blood, all the things that she could do before she could begin the incisions. Everything she did, she spoke about with Hennie, even though the woman's ghost wasn't there, Faith knew that it was her job to do so. "I know," she said, as she cleared away the last of the tools she'd used in order to keep the space clean and make it ready for the cutting and removing of the organs. "That you are worried about your family, but I'm going to help them the very best that I can. It's hard," she had dealt with so many people who were grieving that she understood it in a way which made it almost palpable to her. That, and she had spent some time feeling Padraig's emotions when she had amnesia - that was a particular kind of sorrow which helped her understand, now.

"I'm going to cut you, now. When I'm done, I'll make sure that you're sewn back up. They'll be able to come and visit you, see you. I'll make sure that the last time they see you, you'll look just like the person they know, Hennie, the person they love. I promise." Her hands moved deftly as she made the incisions needed. "We'll be able to give them answers, and that's so important." Love was what it all came down to, Faith knew. The sorrow of grief was fuelled entirely by love, Faith firmly believed. Vri had told her, after all - love was the most important of his Domains. So, with a prayer to Vri that this woman's soul was safe in his care, she got about her job.

Faith was meticulous and careful in terms of detail, and she was deeply respectful of the person she was dealing with. This meant that performing an autopsy was not a quick thing and Faith took the time she needed to. It was the right and proper thing to do, after all, and she made sure it was done properly.

Which meant that it was some three breaks later and she was sitting, writing her notes. "It was a bleed in your brain. I've taken each of your organs," she said to the woman who she had just autopsied. "I think, judging by the size of the bleed, there must have been very little or no pain for you. I'm so glad about that. It's a good thing, to not be in pain." She smiled slightly. "I've recorded all the details I can, as much detail as possible, on all of your organs. I have them recorded and, as you are the first of the people who have given details to this study, the method I use to record things, the argument I am trying to make about what we can do to push medicine further? I'm going to call that the 'Hennie Technique', with your family's permission. They'll know whether that's something they want."

She had checked and re-dressed Hennie, made sure that she looked the best she could. Faith knew that it was important to the family that this was the case and, so, Faith then rummaged in her bag and began the process of applying light make-up to the woman. "Rest, now. Famula and Vri watch over you." The last was a whispered prayer as she lifted the sheet back up over Hennie's head.


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"Your children are beautiful," Faith said to the pale man. He was, quite obviously in shock and she knew that he hadn't really heard anything up until now. She knew that she had to break through that - although it was very common. He had, after all, woken up in the morning of the trial his wife died, and he had gone about his life as though it was perfectly ordinary. And then, he'd heard that his wife had literally dropped dead. It was not something which he was ever going to get over, Faith knew. But equally - he had to know, had to understand the very best that he could. "So, I imagine that very little makes sense to you right now," Faith said and he looked up at her from where he had been gazing on the ground. She watched him with a calm expression and she spoke in a soft tone. "I understand why and how Hennie died. So I think we should start there." He needed to hear this first and so, Faith told him. There was a disease on her brain, Faith said, it had probably been there all her life. Had Hennie been prone to headaches, she wondered, and he nodded. But they'd been since she was a child, she'd seen people about it. Faith nodded and replied in very clear terms. "There was no way to detect it, no way at all" Faith looked at him to make sure that he had heard that.

Breathing in, she spoke again. "But, I have a theory. There was an issue with Hennie's heart, and I think maybe the two things are linked. No one has really looked at the links between having a disease in one organ, like the brain, and what it does to other organs. I'm going to do that as part of the qualification I'm studying." Faith paused, gave him a moment to think about what she had said and then spoke again. "I'd like to suggest a new thesis, a new idea at the end of it, and with your permission, I'd like to name it after Hennie."

Hennie's husband looked at her in surprise as the words Faith said sunk in. He frowned, thinking about it. "She shouldn't have died," he said and Faith touched her hand on to his arm. "I agree. I want to make it so that no one does. Ever. No one should die the way she did. So suddenly." He frowned and nodded. "You can use her name. But tell me. If you'd known - if anyone had known the disease was there. Could we have saved her?"

Faith looked at him and shook her head. "No," she said, honestly. "Not yet. But one trial. One trial we'll know enough. Until then, we just have to wait, and measure every bit of information, until we find the right one. Then, we'll beat it." He considered her words and, when he replied he sounded almost angry. "You won't let her be forgotten?"

"Not if I have anything to do with it." Faith promised. He nodded. "You can do it," he said and then, he stood to leave. "But it's not good enough. She deserved more."

Watching the door close behind him, Faith sighed. "She did," she said, softly. "But I have no better to give. "
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Re: Waits and measures.

This was intriguing. I've heard of coroners speaking to the bodies they work on in real life, and this caught my interest.

The content of your work is good. There are no glaring grammar issues, nor punctuation issues. I particularly enjoyed the look into the topic of death, how it's taboo for some, but rather natural for Faith. That sort of cultural relativism is always appreciated in seeing portrayed. Gives the character an extra layer of depth, where it could be easily overshadowed.

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