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I. Breather (Graded)

2nd trial, Saun 719
Six trials North of Rhakros
22nd break



Eat, drink, rest, gamble, laugh, and sleep. For tomorrow you might well be dead.

Such was the collective mind of every army that had every heard the call from officers and squad leaders throughout history, that they were stopping for the night. With their feet sore and and their legs cramped, their bellies growling and throats raw, the endless snake of humans and animals seemed to sigh as one. The High Marshal had apparently found a good enough spot for thousands of men to bed down, carve out some sort of camp from the jungle, make is defensible and fit for their baggage train. And then, after all that was sorted, worry about pitching tents and letting the army sleep.

It didn't take long. There were still enough enlisted men to speed the work. The word "veteran" wasn't much used anymore. Everyone was a veteran now. Every man and woman had known war that arc, up close and brutally. They'd all lost people. Every single one had a friend or lover or kin or whole swathes of all the above wiped out. Those that marched south that Saun, they were the survivors of the wrath of an Immortal that practiced genocide as sport.

There were no greenhorns, no rare recruits, no new fish or fresh meat. And the officers could tell the difference come nightfall, too.

"I've never led men so furious," muttered Braxton Hughes under his breath, bushy mustache twitching for a second as he smiled under it. "When they weren't angry at me, anyway."

"I'm sure you have," murmured back his oldest friend, Flightmaster Brumnott, newly-promoted and in less than ideal circumstances. "Knowing you're mob, they were just better at hiding it."

The two officers chortled as they made their rounds, sharing good humor and a little bottle of liquor as they weaved between tents in their quadrant of the camp. One-hundred and sixty men and women, from career soldiers to city militia to Blackjacks to people who were civilians a season ago who'd never even touched a sword or spear. Now they all squatted around their fires and went about the business of living on the march. Clothes were being changed. Bodies were being scrubbed. Food prepared. Whenever they passed a tent, a clutch of soldiers would acknowledge them in some way. The older hands saluted, stiff and sharp. The newer mob would nod or bow, still unsure as to the etiquette.

If the times had been different, Brumnott would have bristled as such laxity. But he was willing to be... permissive. A season ago, he'd been a Mastermark. Then his Wingmaster had been bloated up to the size of a boulder by fever and he'd been promoted. He'd led his Wingblock into battle and watched it annihilated by hordes of insects and monsters they spewed from. But he'd survived. Scarred and sickened and missing two fingers, but alive. And up for promotion again to Braxton.

"Evenin' to yeh, sirs!" A rangy man with a rough, decidedly non-regulation beard called out. He was working above a vast pot of stew that smelled somewhere between foul and delicious. It truly was that far of a variance. "Hungry, I hope?"

"After ten breaks in that blasted heat, you bet your arse I am."

Officers and ranker laughed, and Hughes silently envied his friend yet again... but also pitied him. He'd been there, outside the city, when the final assault had come. Both of them green Braxtons, no clue what to do, desperate to just survive and do their duty, whichever came first! Their officers died. Their men died. Screaming and begging them for help, but they couldn't. Nothing could. Until that tide of glowing, raging fury exploded from the walls and the dead of Etzos came for their vengeance. Even now, ghostly figures glided around everyone, some talking, so animated you'd think they didn't even know.

Maybe they don't
, he thought, as the cook poured them a bowl each. What's even worse? We're not even noticing them anymore. They're just... part of how things are now.

"Here's to your new command, Hughie!"

"Yes yes, if you must..."

The Braxton felt another twinge, and smothered it. Brummie was the best man for the job, and he knew it. But the older man didn't want command, not yet. He wanted to take his career slowly, learn all he could before advancing, make sure every step was solid, every level of the foundation firm. Then the war had come and he'd shot up the ranks by virtue of just surviving. He didn't like it. Neither of them did. But they hid the discomfit, the fear of failure, because damnit, they were officers now, and that simply would not do.

"Fer the dregs, cook?"

"Yeah, yeah, hold yer water..."

The sharp change in tone caught Hughes' attention. A skinny man in cheap clothes was holding a tray and waiting as the cook loaded it with plates of stew. He watched as the tray was filled and the little man with tattoos across his face turned on his heel and walked away without even looking at them. Hughes frowned, feeling a flesh spread over his face. The damned cheek! He knew the man had seen them! But before he could stand and bark out an order, the cook came back over, sighing dramatically.

"Bloody irregulars," he said, in that vaguely smug tone of men the world over who think they're sharing their prejudice with like minds. "They never eat with us. Never sit around the same fires. Always sit out by the shadows, actin' like they're better."

Both officers studied the queer clutch of wraiths, indeed camped out a little beyond the rest of the Flight. Armor was gleaming on most, but not much. Clearly economy of movement and the ability to hide without anything shiny giving you away was more important to them. Some men were polishing swords, daggers, axes, maces, a plethora of weapons. Others took care of bows, checked arrows and crossbow quarrels. Both men watching were experienced enough to know the look of the men, though. The inherent, restless energy. The quick, shifty eyes. The cold eyes and the broken knuckles. The way they didn't even bother keeping to the regulations about tattoos or facial hair or even proper uniforms. But every day, they marched with them. Grim as granite and keeping to themselves.

"Don't look too friendly, what?"

"Oh'Pee militia. South Side." The cook almost spat the words, and Hughes wondered what history that spoke to. "Most of 'em are gangers. Sellswords. Street daemons, they used t'call 'em. Back when... well... back when there was any gangs..."

There was a glow in from just behind the group. A white-blue ball of light, flecked with black and green. A mage's cast, they knew instinctively. Coming from a figure they hadn't seen before, sitting cross-legged in the darkness, now silhouetted by his magic. The dozen or so "irregulars" paused in their work to watch the free light show. The officers and the regulars did much the same, and Brumnott couldn't help himself.

"Who's that?"

"The Raggedy Man, sir." Both officers looked at him, and the cook just shrugged. "You asked..."
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He wants to sleep. He's not a man to whine, but even he think he deserves to sleep. Ten trials of marching, broken up by a mere handful of rests. Under brutal suns and dry air without a hint of wind. Water passed up and down the column; a frantic gulp here, a swig there, then on it went until next time. He'd chewed dust and dirt with the rest of them, marching in the ragged ranks him and the others scum of the Oh'Pee had made. In that part of the army they'd just... decided was their own.

They'd marched with everyone else. In silence. Not complaining. All across the length and breadth of the vast column, he strained to hear one grumbling voice. All he could hear was the pounding off feet and a deep wheeze, like a giant puffing for breath. When they stopped for the night, he looked about and saw the reason was the same as yestertrial. And the one before that.

The anger was still there. It burned in the eyes of every man marching south. It couldn't be quenched or dimmed by mere exertion, piffling discomfort. They were an army of grieving widows and mourning children; who'd seen their families and homes torn to pieces by monsters. The jungle loomed ahead of them, the last great natural barrier between them and the lair of Lissira. None of them showed much fear, not even the young. He found faces turned that way now and then, registering nothing but slow, implacable hatred.

Armies have marched for many things. Greed and the whims of the mighty most of all. Revenge, too. But never has an army hated like this.

That was why Kasoria did not sleep. Because the trial was not yet ended, and he had breaks enough to hone his skills. He would need every dram of them come the siege approaching them. So he ate a quick meal of biscuits and gruel, slaked his thirst and then plopped his arse down in the grass (after checking for ants - damned if he'd be making that mistake twice). Oh'Pee voiced groused and hissed around him. Sometimes he heard the sharp "K" and "s" and then the soft "oria" of his name, but he ignored it. They knew to let the mage work his magic, train his powers as they would their sword arms.

The younger ones had learned so, anyway. The older ones didn't need to be told, and had been quick to educate.

What sounded like officers were visiting. Plummy, rich voices, used to command and long words. Kasoria tuned them out, as well. Focused solely on his breathing. Flaring his nostrils wide and filling his lungs until his chest stretched under his tunic. He held it. Five beats of his heart. Then opened his mouth and let his lungs empty, in one long, breathy sigh. Over and over, he repeated this process. Until his heart was slow and he could feel every inch of the flesh wrapping his bones. His Spark seemed to beat in time with the pulsing organ; he could feel every bit of that, too. He smiled, and raised his hands-

Come.

-calling his power into the world, through glowing light and silent command.

He could see it bloom into life beyond his closed eyelids. Feel it crackling and hissing over his skin as he slowly stood up. There was a cloud of it surrounding him like morning mist, but he wasn't satisfied with just that. No, he had an objective that night. Things that needed to be tested, tried, attempted, perfected. Nothing less would suffice for the trials to come. He raised both his hands and started to moved them. Back and forth, up and down, in front of his torso. The mist started to swirl and close in around him. He commanded it to settle on his skin, from toes to the top of his head...and it did.

Kasoria felt it settle across him like a silken shroud, covering him... and then he made another layer. Laid it down atop the last one. Then another. Keeping track of them until a dozen layers had been replicated and fashioned around him. Only then did he open his eyes.

"... well, fuck me."

The little man chuckled as he looked himself up and down. His body was... the same, but what he beheld was different. It was like he was looking at it through a dozen windows, all of them smudged and one or two perhaps a little broken. He held up a hand and turned it around in front of his eyes. His fingers were odd and shimmering under the replicated layers of ether, seeming larger in some places and fuzzy in others. He caught movement at the corner of his eyes, and saw... shite, what was his name... ah-

"Fazil?"

"Y-Yes?"

"Cum'ere." The street rat did as he was bid and Kasoria noted the sword at his hip. "Youse any good wi' that?"

"Hmm? Oh, aye, well, mebbe, I mean-"

"That's good. A'right, pull it."

"Wh... What?"

"Pull yer sword."

Fazil did, and even the scrape of metal on leather sounded confused. Once it was released into the air, Kasoria nodded in approval, as if that simple action was worthy of praise. Then he opened his arms and sent one more pulse of mental command into the ether flowing and hardening around him. It seemed to hiss at the instruction and Kasoria knew he was ready.

"Now. Run me through."
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"What the bloody hell did he just say?!"

"Wants the other fellow to run him through, I think."

"Damnit, Hughes, I know..." The officer struggled for words and took a step forwards. "I'm putting a stop-"

"Wait a moment, sir," the Braxton said lowly, putting a hand out to stop his friend as gently as he could. He was a superior, after all. Had to be subtle. "I've seen this before. He'd a mage. He wants to test his abilities."

"By having someone stab him?!"

Hughes favored him with a knowing look, and jutted his chin back to the strange spectacle.

"If I'm guessing right, old son, that blade won't get near him..."

Fazil did not share his Braxton's confidence. Not even remotely. He looked at Kasoria, then at the sword in his hand, then back again. The older, smaller man cocked an eyebrow and made a gesture with his hands. As if to hurry him along, for the night was waning. The former thief (well, "current but temporarily retired", if we're being honest) swallowed hard and frowned.

"Er... Kas, youse feelin' a'right?"

"Aye." Kasoria spread his arms a little wider, gesturing to the glowing energy covering him. Distorting and blurring odd parts of his body. Wreathing him in etheric protection. "Dunn'I look a'right?"

"Kas, I can't-"

"I'm testin' me magic, Faz," Kasoria said with a weariness that bordered on impatience. Studiously so, in fact. He didn't want to browbeat or intimidate a man he might have to rely on in a few trials. But he still needed this done. "See all this light around me? S'like a shield. Shield ain't no fuckin' good if it don't stop shit. So I'm findin' out if it will."

"Erm, well, maybe I could jus'... give it a poke, then?"

Kasoria chortled, and Fazil swore he saw his breath come out as white, crackling fog. "Smart man, but those cunts in Rhakros wunt be pokin' me, will they? Nah, mate. Has t'be the real thing."

Fazil warred with himself for a moment, and Kasoria watch the battle rage. He knew him, of course. Knew of him, at any rate. They didn't move in the same circles, Faz being an East Side boy, but Kasoria knew his name had gotten around plenty over his career. Now he was stood before the Raggedy Man, and he might actually hurt him. Not kill him, he didn't think that possibility really entered the thief's mind. Because hurting Kasoria and leaving him alive was probably the stupidest thing a man in their world could do, outside of shagging Vorund's wife and leaving your name written on the wall in piss.

But Vorund was dead. The Raggedy Man was here, not in the Oh'Pee. But still, that fear. That reputation...

"Um... Kas, I dun' feel good about-"

Money jingled. Like trained dogs, a dozen heads bobbed up at the sound of it. Oh'Pee instincts still good and strong, even with the whole fucking place burned mostly to the ground. Fazil was no different. His eyes greedily tracked the little pouch in Kasoria's hand. He caught it as it was tossed with ease, never one to let free coin go to waste. Only, it wasn't quite free...

"There. Now yer compensated. An' if yeh look behind yeh-" he waited until Fazil did just that before continuing "-you'll see some of the toffs're watchin'. So I won't be takin' yer head off after if yeh hurt me, will I?"

"Nah, you'll do it later!"

"Bollocks I will. Now c'mon, son. Ain't got all fuckin' night."

Fazil looked at the sword, then the money. Then the officers. Especially the officers. No, they wouldn't take kindly to someone running about killing their mates, even if it was the fucking Raggedy Man. He tossed the purse up, and as he caught it... hmm... he'd guess about ten nels. Gold, by the sound of it. Not bad. He shrugged and let his fear sink back down into his guts. Seemed pretty reasonable, and if by some tragic misstep he was wrong, well...

You're the bloke that killed the Raggedy Man. Could be know for worse things.

"So... ready?"

"Aye."

Kasoria watched Fazil step back sharply, sword coming back and tight to his side in the same movement. Man clearly had some experience with it. That was confirmed when the man burst forwards, lunging at the same time, sword flying straight for his heart-

CRACK

The mage almost gasped as he saw the tip of the sword crash into the first layer of replicated magic. Pierce it was a crack like thick glass being hit by a rock. Then it pierced another, with a sound like that same glass being scraped with a razor. Not quite as spectacular, but still a failure. Keep going and then... stop. All forward momentum robbed from the blow, the weapon, the man behind them both. It just... stopped. Like Fazil was trying to stab it through a brick wall.

"Fuckin' hell..."

Kasoria chuckled as the little man lowered his sword, gawping at the magic barriers swirling and winking around Kasoria. The Raggedy Man of Etzos breathed in hard, raising his hands as he did, and when he exhaled-

-pushed his hands down and out, forcing more ether from within him as he did-

-adding another layer, strengthening the rest, then barking-

"Again!"

Fazil snarled and thrust again. Higher this time, for Kasoria's throat. The mage smiled softly. The man was getting the right idea. The blade cut through another field, then another, and another, and at the fourth-

CRACK

-stopped cold. Fazil twisted the short sword and pushed, but the blade barely moved forward, like it was stuck in a tree. With a grunt he yanked it free and without waiting for another order he swung this time, aiming to take Kasoria's arm off at the elbow-

CLANG

-with a sound like he was beating a bell with that sword, or maybe plate armor, Fazil's sword bounced off Kasoria's fields. He felt another one shatter under the attack, but he had six more left. He decided to leave them as they were. He was learning much, and didn't want to spoil his practice with overstepping. He'd learned that thrusting attacks did more damaging that slashing, for one. For another, it paid to keep track of how many replications you had working for you.

"That it?" He said to a panting Fazil with a sneer. "All dat, fer not even a scratch? C'mon, boy, at least fuckin' try-"

"Shut up!"

Fazil hurled himself at the mage again, thrusting for his belly, all he body behind the blow. Another series of popping, clanging, cracking sounds as one barrier after another failed. Kasoria maintained his magic, but did not reinforce it. He would not always have the time in battle. He needed to focus on his enemy, not just his own talents. Four fields were destroyed. Two remained. But they were enough to exhaust Fazil, and he staggered back, sword almost limp in his hand. Kasoria strode forwards. Smirking.

"I... I can't-"

"I paid youse fer a task, son," Kasoria said, reasonable tone at odds with the way his smile died. "An' the task ain't done. One more. Youse've got dat in yeh, I'm sure."

Fazil got a hold of himself. Breathed hard and ragged, but still gripped tight his sword. He swung it two handed, looking to take Kasoria's head off. The sword hammered through one barrier, shattering it like silken glass that went popping and dissipating into the air. Kasoria noted how it slowed as it hit the second barrier and smashed that, too. But it took longer. It took more energy, more strength, more time, and by the time all the fields were down-

-he had time to duck-

-slowed hacking strike sailing over his head-

-and sweep Fazil's legs out from under him before it had even finished. The thief landed on his back with a "whoof!" of air escaping his lungs, and there was a smattering of chuckles and satiric applause from the scum watching. Kasoria spared them but a look, including the nobs, and concentrated instead on Fazil. He leaned down... and offered a hand. Fazil grasped it, hesitantly.

"Thanks."

"Yer... kff!... yer welcome."

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Skill:
Abrogation: Replicative Fields
Abrogation - Replicative Fields: Can Be Cast Over Oneself Multiple Times, Like Etheric Armor
Abrogation - Replicative Fields: Needs to be Restored or Replaced After Shattered By Attacks
Discipline: Foregoing Rest to Properly Train (your magic)
Meditation: Controlled Breathing
Meditation: Lowering Your Heartbeat to Steady Yourself


Non-Skill:
Etzos Army: Comprised of Career Soldiers, City Militia, Black Guard, and Irregulars
Etzos Army: Many (ostensibly) Former Criminals Marching with the Enlisted and Militia
Etzos, Saun 719: Marching South to Wipe Rharkos and Lissira from Idalos Forever
NPC Fazil: Oh'Pee Thief and Etzori Army Soldier
Rhakros: Home to Lissira and the Bulk of Her Followers


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EXP: 10 can be used for abrogation

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My favorite part about this post was the dialogue. Your characters are very well fleshed out and I can tell how much work you put into development. It was a treat to read how you played out abrogation and I hope you make it to the higher levels soon. Enjoy your rewards.

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