An Ittie-Mittie Problem II

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An Ittie-Mittie Problem II

2nd Vhalar, Arc 271

With Vhalar underway, most of the villages were harvesting crops and produce. It was no surprise that Shl’drei was up and about early- he tended to start the day as soon as possible to get in every bit of work he could. Not to say he couldn’t get tired or sleep in, but he preferred to get up with the sun touching the clouds or earlier on any trial he could. Rest was important but it filled him with purpose and, with that purpose came will and motivation to keep going. He’d done a lot of moping and wallowing, it was high time he took those trials back for himself and his pack.

He hummed to an unknown tune as he dressed for the day- nothing too fancy, just a pullover sweater and some nice warm pants. He supposed if he were traveling he could wear heavy boots, but for now his shoes would do fine. Totrial he’d be training again with Mittie- his aim to at least get on her back without too much trouble. He always got nervous on her back- his first experience with a steed like her he’d almost fallen to his death in the air. Though Mittie was a sweetheart, he doubted she’d be comfortable with Shl’drei on her back if he was panicking.

Shrugging his thoughts off, he rolled his shoulders and set out to start the trial. Starting with making sure everyone had food and water, he then made sure to give everyone some affectionate petting before he headed to the stables. As expected, Mittie snorted at his arrival and trotted toward him to nudge her face into his waiting hand. “There she is,” he babied with a smile. He used his free hand to set up the shield toad, bringing a nice training area for Mittie to roam in. Grabbing her lead the tamer guided her through the threshold all the while giving her mane firm pats to keep her from nudging him.

Once inside Shl’drei released the lead so the scalvwing could roam the area freely. Once she’d trotted around for a bit, Shl’drei whistled for her attention to draw her back. He set to work placing the saddle and reigns around her body, giving it a small check for tightness around her limbs. Satisfied, he moved to pat her mane as he spoke. “Let’s see if I can manage it totrial,” he grinned. One foot in the hold, he gave her a small pat to get her to start trotting. He wobbled a bit, trying to keep his balance as she moved with only one foot in its hold. He gripped the reigns and she protested, a sign he’d had too tight a grip, and he moved to jump off before she could buck him. Once his feet were on the ground, he turned to the steed who had fluffed her wings just a bit at the rough treatment.

"Alright, it’s okay,” he cooed softly as he approached her. When she finally folded her wings back into her back, he smiled and put a small hand on her snout before rubbing down to her nose. “Sorry sweet girl, you’re okay,” he whispered as she swiveled her head to look at him. Mittie nickered, but relaxed soon after. Once more, he put his foot into the hold. When she tried to trot he tried his best to calm her as he swung his other leg over her back. Immediately, she whinnied but stayed grounded save for a few experimental trots. For a moment, Shl’drei smiled triumphantly. Then the scalvwing spread her wings and his nerves went off like fireworks.

"Mittie, Mittie it’s okay,” the tamer soothed, nerves seeping into his words as she beat her wings and then again. He tugged her reigns just as she stood on her hind legs, forcing him to lean into her neck to keep from falling and she folded her wings back into her body as she landed with all fours. “What’s gotten into you?” He wondered out loud, as he tried to dismount. One foot still in the holds, he used his upper arm over her back until he could safely place his leg on the floor before the other.
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Shl'drei spent the next thirty or so bits trying to piece together what had gotten into the steed. Every time he successfully mounted her back, she'd begin to spread her wings and his nerves would get the better of him. He figured that if she wanted to fly he could let her do so without being taken along - he very much liked to keep his feet on solid ground after all. Raking a hand through his hair, he knew she was trying to fly with him on her back - he just didn't have the confidence - discipline rather - to go along with it. He wasn't too weak in terms of strength, but he was weak in mental fortitude. He knew that was holding him back - holding her back, but he couldn't help it.

He couldn't rightfully deny her the desire for flight, but did it have to be him on her back? Right, stupid question. Regardless, he'd have to teach her to walk before she could fly - especially with someone as inexperienced as Shl'drei on her back. Just showing his discomfort did nothing, so he took a different approach, and walked up to stroke through her mane. Inhale, exhale, speak. He put his head to hers as she turned to face him, gaining her attention. She bumped his head happily, a soft whinny leaving her throat.

"You can't randomly fly with me on your back, Mittie." He began slowly. "You have to wait until we're both comfortable, okay?" A nicker and a stomp - He sighed knowing she was showing her displeasure. "Mittie," He started again, placing another soft bump on her forehead with his own. "I promise you can fly, but not with me just yet, okay?" Another stomp. "No." He said firmly, looking directly at her. A nicker. "Absolutely not."

She let out a displeased nicker - almost disappointed, but he stroked her main as he spoke. She then bumped her head against his and Shl'drei smiled. He reached around for the reigns, keeping contact with her in case she decided to buck or attempt flight again. He put his foot in the first hold, and finally swung his leg over her back, and settled into the saddle. He gave her a few trills to adjust before he put his foot in the other hold once he was sure she wouldn't take off.

Taking a moment to squeeze her sides with his legs, he gave the reigns a soft ripple and set Mittie into motion She snorted and then began to trot around the training area. As she began to acclimate, she got more experimental with her trot, testing speeds so long as Shl'drei allowed her. With another ripple of the reigns, she started to jog around in a large circle. Shl'drei kept his posture loose so he could adjust to any sudden changes, but kept his feet in the holds the best he could while trying to follow Mittie's momentum. With a good grasp on her comfort with him on her back, Shl'drei tried to get her to stop and maneuvered the reigns to signal her to trot backwards slowly. As taught, she waited for a moment before reversing her steps and then turning in a circle with the tamers cues. He clicked his teeth to grab her attention if she strayed, but after a a full thirty bits he figured she'd done enough for the day.

He dismounted before rummaging around and catching the steed's attention, a small carrot in his hands when he lifted from the floor from his bag. He gestured her over, and watched with childlike delight as she moved forward and gently took the carrot from his offering hand. He praised her as he gave her another, thanking her for being cooperative through the training and practice. For the majority, Mittie was pretty docile and very much a sweetheart. She wasn't so mischievous but she was a bit smug when she had unfurled her wings with him on her back. Shl'drei figured she'd eventually come to terms that it would take time before he was comfortable riding her back as she flew.

Until then he'd keep her grounded but allow her to fly herself so long as she remained in his sight. With Mittie's training for the day taken care of, Shl'drei lead her back to the stables and out of the training room as he picked up the shield toad. Putting her back into her stable was a bit of a hassle as Mittie wanted more time with him, but Shl'drei always promised to visit her in the morning and he'd yet to break it.
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Re: An Ittie-Mittie Problem II

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Comments: I love in how much detail you described Shl'Drei working with Mittie and building a relationship with her, and I appreciate it that he's decided to take things slow.

He gives me the impression of being very reasonable.

The way that Mittie greeted him and nudged him was adorable. You created a horse with personality.

I also like that you didn't make things too easy!

I was a little concerned when Mittie spread her wings at the end of the first post as well, I have to admit. I like the reason for her behaviour - she just wants to fly.

Hopefully, she'll get the opportunity to do so soon!

With that being said, when I checked your CS I noticed that you have the "Mount (Land)" skill in your Skills List. According to your Skill Points Ledger, you have spent points on "Mount (Air)" though. Can you change that to "Mount (Land)" please provided that "Mount (Land)" is indeed your basic specialization?

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