Gift of Resistance

[Hina]

I am quitting standing trials. It is clear that nobody here wants to rp with me nor do I think I will be missed in the slightest.

If you are a newbie, you should know that mods and even other players can ruin your character at any time and for any power trippy reason. In my time here, I have had mods simply not reply to my posts for weeks and weeks at a time, had my character waste half a season because a mod made up a rule to have my character thrown in jail, been made pregnant against my will, and also been assigned penalties against my will just because a non mod thought to give me a hard time. You can do a bit of research and find that only staff members have accomplished anything noteworthy in this game, because they are the only ones immune from random bullshit.

I would not reccomend this game to anyone looking to accomplish anything in a roleplaying game.

[Aegis]

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Thread Review

Now that Hina is Expert in Hone, you really REALLY need to start increasing your description and use of magic to continue gaining experience in them. A couple of lines really isn't going to cut it and will cease to give more experience in magic for you. This is the second time I've had to warn you about this.

From the Magic Review Guide "As a Peer Reviewer you are not required to grant the full amount of magic experience to the player if you feel what they have done does not merit a full 10 or 15 points from either the solo or collaborative thread. It is very possible to earn partial experience in some cases.

Players should always be pushing themselves and their skill in magic in order to gain magic experience. It is very possible that the player may only be pushing themselves a small amount but they should still be rewarded partial credit for their efforts. We wish for players to be rewarded for what they do, rather than penalised for not pushing themselves to an extreme. Please feel comfortable assigning at least partial experience if you you feel they deserve a reward for the efforts they have made. "

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Hina

• Skill Points - 10 (5 may be used for Hone)
• Renown - 0
• Skill Knowledges
  1. Hone: Learning the rune of resistance
  2. Hone: Runes only become harder to learn
  3. Hone: The importance of giving others resistance
  4. Unarmed Combat (Boxing): Overly wide stances are no good
  5. Unarmed Combat (Boxing): It’s ok to walk
  6. Unarmed Combat (Boxing): Using your hands as a counter balance
• Non-Skill Knowledges
• Items and Other Rewards

Player 2

• Skill Points -
• Renown -
• Skill Knowledges
• Non-Skill Knowledges
• Items and Other Rewards

Final Notes

If you have any questions, please PM me.

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