Playing the Hero

[Hina]

I am quitting standing trials. It is clear that nobody here wants to rp with me nor do I think I will be missed in the slightest.

If you are a newbie, you should know that mods and even other players can ruin your character at any time and for any power trippy reason. In my time here, I have had mods simply not reply to my posts for weeks and weeks at a time, had my character waste half a season because a mod made up a rule to have my character thrown in jail, been made pregnant against my will, and also been assigned penalties against my will just because a non mod thought to give me a hard time. You can do a bit of research and find that only staff members have accomplished anything noteworthy in this game, because they are the only ones immune from random bullshit.

I would not reccomend this game to anyone looking to accomplish anything in a roleplaying game.

[Aegis]

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Thread Review

I've chosen to not give you Hone Experience for this thread. You're not pushing the magic and are barely even describing its use. Your actual uses amount to the following:

1 - "Armed with the power of magic, Hina used strength runes on her legs to give her extra lifting power but even those didn’t do much."
2 - "Hina had never placed strength runes on others before. She had never placed runes on multiple people either. Her spark was excited to try it out though and was practically salivating at using its magic to help someone. To be a savior was its ultimate reason for existing. Hina had her reservations but this seemed like an emergency so she let the spark use up her magical energy and embued four pairs of legs with somewhat powerful strength runes."

You need to be much more detailed in your use of the magic if you wish to gain the experience for it. Hone is heavily based around the creation of runes, and simply stating "Hina imbued" won't cut it for earning experience.

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Hina

• Skill Points - 10 (May not be used for Hone)
• Renown - 5
• Skill Knowledges
  1. Hone: Runes amplify based on base ability
  2. Hone: My spark loves to share runes
  3. Hone: You might not know you’ve overstepped until it’s too late
  4. Leadership: Teamwork makes the dream work
  5. Unarmed Combat (Boxing): Refereeing a fight
  6. Acrobatics: Jumping Rope
• Non-Skill Knowledges
• Items and Other Rewards

Player 2

• Skill Points -
• Renown -
• Skill Knowledges
• Non-Skill Knowledges
• Items and Other Rewards

Final Notes

If you have any questions, please PM me.

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