Review Request Thread 2.1.8

[Pegasus]

Peer Review Requests

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Loot: (If applicable)
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[Mads]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Relevant Vhalar Thread 5
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

intelligence -
following up on a lead
allowing others to make assumptions to better gather information from them
don't push too hard when trying to get information

detection-
the scent of a purifier
finding a location based on specific details
noticing a shift in emotion

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: not applicable
Renown: none requested
Collaboration: no

[Oberan]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Full House
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: A bit sweary.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
KASORIA:

Acting: Feigning Concern for a Man You Just Assaulted
Deception: Looking a Man in the Eyes When You Lie to Him
Deception: Making Up a Lie on The Fly
Deception: Don't Pause or Hesitate Before Lying
Detection: Tell-Tale Signs of a Pickpocket's Hands at Work
Detection: Noticing When Details Don't Add Up
Intelligence: The Old "This Is Important" Wink
Intimidation: Running a Blade Over a Victim's Face
Philosophy: No-one's A Traitor, Until They Are
Philosophy: Always Honor a Life Debt
Tactics: Masking a Coming Attack Behind a Proffered Drink
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Rear Arm Lock
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Brass Knuckles Make a Painful Punch a Crippling Blow

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Magnus: Oversees the Books and Guestlist of The Floating Fancy
NPCs Shaun and Efram: Feuding South Side Racketeers, Now at Peace At Vorund's Order
NPCs "The Lads": Gorch and Larry, Bibliophile and Stoic Respectively, Vorund Muscle Comprehensively
NPC Vorund: Mediates Disputes on the South Side
NPC Vorund: Unofficially Endorsed By "The Powers That Be"
NOC Vorund: Murders and Dismembers Cheats at his Games (No Exceptions)
PC Oberan: Smooth Mage, Gambler, Cheat, Actor... and General Wanker
PC Oberan: Gifted Liar and Surprisingly Brave
Location: The Floating Fancy, Vorund's Roaming Casino


OBERAN:

Acting: Displaying confidence
Acting: Taking the role of a ‘security specialist’
Acting: Improvising your lines
Acting: A convincing heart attack ‘act’
Deception: Using a fake name to get into a building
Deception: Chique clothes make you look more refined
Pickpocket: Picking every pocket catches attention
Pickpocket: Steal the contents, not the whole purse
Pickpocket: Easier when you’re somewhere they’re not expecting it
Pickpocket: slower when you steal what’s inside the purse
Pickpocket: Replacing lost coins with stolen ones
Pickpocket: choosing your hunting ground
Pickpocket: Requires a lot of coordination

Kasoria: the raggedy man
Kasoria: Bagun Vorund’s loyal dog
Kasoria: real fast
Bagun Vorund: old fox
Bagun Vorund: intense
Location: The Floating Fancy, Vorund's Roaming Casino

Injuries/Overstepping: Up to reviewer
Renown: Eh
Collaboration: Yes

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: I. Auditing Season
City/Area: Bolstrum, eighteen days South of Etzos Prime
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language, that's about all.

More of a scene-setter than anything else, getting things in shape for a four- or five-part story. Enjoy, and thanks!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Deception: Hiding Embezzlement in a Blizzard of Paperwork
Detection: Guessing an Object By Feel of Its Shape
Detection: Recognizing a Familiar Street Name
Disguise: Just Another Traveler, Enjoying a Meal
Disguise: Leaving Separately, Avoiding Suspicion
Investigation: Inquiring About Potential Hiding Spots

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Francis: Bookkeeper for Vorund Trading and Transport (Bolstrum Office)
NPC Francis: Doing the Right Thing, and Signing His Boss' Death Warrant
Location: Bolstrum, Booming Town South of Etzos
Location: Crosstown, Formerly a Bustling Town, Now Sacked By Invaders and Steadily Being Rebuilt
NPC Pelham: Former Etzos Scratcher, Now Bodyguard-Cum-Security for Yancy
NPC Yancy: Manager and Legal Counsel for Bolstrum Office of Vorund Trading and Transport
NPC Yancy: Thieving Bastard
NPC Vorund: Wants Yancy Dead, Quietly, And His Money Reclaimed

Loot: No)
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No

[Kira]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Creating a masterpiece
City/Area: Outside of Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Failed mark ability quest. Submitting this for pity points
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Smithing: It’s difficult to find errors in someone else’s work
Endurance: A very long walk
Endurance: Standing for a long time
Discipline: having patience
Discipline: Accepting your own skill level
Discipline: Taking advice from your betters

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: no

[Kira]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Creating a masterpiece 2
City/Area: Outside of Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Failed mark ability quest. Submitting this for pity points
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Design: Giving a work your personal touch
Design: Conflict makes a piece interesting
Drawing: Crude figures
Meditation: finding peace in your mind’s creativity
Meditation: staying focused on a single task
Discipline: Not complaining while doing grunt work

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Kira's name is attached to a good work of art. This should be worth some renown
Collaboration: no

[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Storytime
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: no
Requested Rewards:

KYREEN:

Knowledge:
Skill
Detection: locating the source of a sound
Detection: trying to work out the meaning behind words
Discipline: keeping a straight face
Discipline: staying wary in the face of charm
Socialisation: deflecting through humour
Socialisation: saying one thing, meaning another
Storytelling: offering ridiculous options
Deception: obscuring insults with a joke
Logistics: planning ways to cool down
Logistics: practical methods to prevent staining good clothes
Logistics: overlapping shift patterns
Logistics: creating products in time to fulfill requests

Nonskill
Alchemists enchant things to change their nature and properties
Devin Thorn: bard at Cally's
Devin: pretty boy with practised charm
Devin: offered a makeover
Devin: told a good story

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: yes

DEVIN

Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Picking a color that suits someone
Deception: Making yourself seem more important than you really were
Deception: Claiming that you have a special power
Deception: Claiming that the ending of the song that you haven't composed yet is a secret
Etiquette: Inviting someone to sit with you
Musical Instrument (Lute): Drawing inspiration from your own adventures
Musical Instrument (Lute): Composing a new song
Musical Instrument (Lute): Changing the pace
Musical Instrument (Lute): Enhancing a story with music
Storytelling: The adventure in the Sweetwine Woods
Storytelling: Creativity is an important trait for a storyteller to have
Storytelling: Letting your audience guess how the story continues

Kyreen: Baker
Kyreen: From Darbyton

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: I told Kyreen a story and offered to give her a makeover. Do I get renown for that?
Collaboration: yes

[Aneka Tristal]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fields of Flame PT. 1
City/Area: Rharne, Dust Quarter and Earth Quarter
Notes/Warnings: Dead body, dried blood. Nothing major
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

• Intelligence: Piecing things together
• Investigation: Looking at a dead body
• Investigation: Checking for injuries
• intelligence: Finding a lead
• Persuasion: Haggling the price
• Persuasion: Paying Extra for better relations

Loot: -10 Gold for information
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Still not quite sure how Renown works, but looking into a murder case might garner some renown
Collaboration: No

[Rey'na]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Preparing for War
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence, but not major in any way
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearms - Combat Spear: Stabbing through the stomach
Polearms - Combat Spear: Attack while they're unaware
Polearms - Combat Spear: Momentum helps a swing
Endurance: A punch to the gut
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No

[Zana]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Homework
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:

Zana

Knowledge:
Alchemy: No hard and fast rules, especially in terms of reagents.
Singing: Acoustics make a massive difference
Singing: Shifting tone and pitch for different cultures.
Singing: Remembering the basics for advanced techniques.
Singing: Singing outdoors is very different
Singing: Hiding emotions is as important as injecting them.

Loot: Not Applicable
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: nope
Collaboration: No