Review Request 2.1.1

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Breathe
City/Area: Serenity Garden, Faldrass, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.

Requested Rewards:

Kali’rial

Skill knowledge:
Meditation: Using breathing to focus your thoughts
Meditation: Visualising your happy place
Meditation: Compartmentalizing distracting thoughts
Meditation: Doesn't always need to be a still activity
Meditation: Everyone has their own style
Discipline: Keeping someone else on task
Teaching: Explaining a process in detail
Teaching: Using your experiences to help another

Non Skill Knowledge:
Location: Faldrass
Location: Serenity Gardens

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Good deed? (Teaching?) Reviewer’s discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

Pash Vy’Ryn

Skill Knowledge:
Meditation: Using breathing to focus your thoughts
Meditation: Visualizing your happy place
Meditation: Moving your body to still your thoughts
Meditation: Finding your personal meditation style
Discipline: Not succumbing to your desires
Discipline: Recognizing an opportunity to focus
Endurance: Physical exertion in the heat
Strength: Slow movements require concentrated strength

Non Skill Knowledge:
Location: Faldrass
Location: Serenity Gardens

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

[Ilinis]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: (Name with link included) Dirty information by Chance /viewtopic.php?f=88&t=8339
City/Area: (Where is this taken place in?) Ne'haer / The Crazed Corner
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?) N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

1. Stealth: Looking busy to avoid detection
2. Stealth: Keeping a safe distance from the target
3. Psychology: Examining someone's face to tell if they're lying
4. Deception: Telling them something unexpected to throw them off
5. Detection: Look out of the corner of your eye to see if being followed
6. Intimidation: Take away their escape routes
   
   Non-Skill Knowledge:
7. Location: Ne'haer (The Crazed Corner)
8. Misc: A treasure by Ironridge?
9. Location: Ne'haer (The Crazed Corner)(Etiquitte)

Loot: (If applicable)

• Map scrap

Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) N/A
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) Positive for doing his job
Collaboration: (Yes/No) No
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) No

HAS BEEN REVIEWED

[Kyin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Special Request
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Mild Language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kyin:
Leather Working: Cutting Straps of Buckskin
Leather Working: Measuring for Wearables
Smithing: Filing Barbed Weaponry
Smithing: Forging Short Edged Weapons
Negotiation: Ask for Personal Favor for Discount
Appraisal: Ask One Question to Answer Another
Night:
Doesn't want your stinkin' knowledge.
Loot: Night got Talons
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Moon]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Acquiring the Totem:Great White
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: My character moon talks in telepathy, which I guess might throw people off.
Requested Rewards:

Moon:

Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Patience is a virtue
Linguistics: Repeating words to understand their meaning.
Metamorphosis: Thinking of nothing but slime.
Metamorphosis: The tingling feeling that shows you're doing it right.
Metamorphosis: Dire consequences if you stay on land too long.
General Knowledge:
Fridgar: A very strong Lotharro
Fridgar: Has a strange magic.
Lotharro: Not a tribe of humans
Lotharro: have claws and fangs.
Loot: nope
Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Fame: He helped Fridgar
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Fridgar

Knowledge:
No Requests
Loot: Totem of Great White
Injuries/Overstepping: not that I know of.
Fame: He helped Moon with communication, and while he did do magic he was in a secluded area and Moon thought it was cool.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Becoming

[Tei'serin Nji'ryn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Treth] Holiday Traditions
City/Area: Ne'haer/Treth
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge

Language: Ancient Language
Ancient Language: language of the Immortals
Ancient Language: language of the Eidisi
Linguistics: the Ancient Language originated in Viden
Linguistics: children learn languages more easily than adults do
Teaching: the value of knowing more than one language

Other Knowledge

Ne'haer Holiday: Feast of the Heavens
Feast of the Heavens: is a holiday that is devoutly celebrated by the whole region
Feast of the Heavens: is considered to be one of the most important dates of the arc
Feast of the Heavens: Feasts are held throughout the cities. The Immortals are very carefully referenced throughout the feasts, and much care is taken to ensure that each and every immortal is represented and referenced in one way or another.

Race: Eidisi
Eidisi: are blue
Eidisi: are obsessed with knowledge, and are ruthless in the pursuit of it
Eidisi: originate from Viden

Location: Viden
Location: Viden Academy
Viden Academy: Institute of Languages
Treth: Flutterbus

Tei'serin: wants to learn the Ancient Language
Tei'serin: is fascinated by the language of the Immortals

NPC: Rousin
Rousin: an Eidisi scholar
Rousin: fluent in the Ancient Language

Loot: Free Item: A statuette of your chosen Immortal (Moseke), +2 Bonus Skill Points


Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: Potentially positive for helping with the play her students put on.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Padraig]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Alchemy
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:

Faith

Skill Knowledge: (9 Maximum)
Psychology: Symbolic gestures can be very powerful
Psychology: Freedom is a long, slow process
Rhetoric: Analogy to make a point.
Rhetoric: Symbolism in speech
Rhetoric: Words have power

Non-Skill:
Padraig: Marked with Greater Servants' Mark

Loot: Money deducted from ledger for cake & gift
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Gift: Cake (+2), Gift: Silver Tool (+2) Helping out with boring science stuff (+2)

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

Padraig

Skill Knowledge: (9 maximum)
Mathematics: Angles and trajectory
Mathematics: Perfect and irregular shapes
Physics: Consideration of specifics
Physics: Shadows give clues to trajectory
Physics: Study two stars in isolation
Research: Techniques for recording movement of the sun(s)
Research: Need for meticulous attention to detail
Research: Observation by secondary means
Writing: Meticulous recording of results.

Loot:
+1 handmade box with silver hinges, lock & key
+1 multi-functioning silver tool

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

[Noth]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Mercenary Misadventures
City/Area: Outside of Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Plenty of Violence, but not much gore.
Collaboration: Yes

Noth

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mace: Swinging Too Hard Means You're More Likely to Miss
Mace: Can Get Stuck In Tree Trunks
Longbow: Aim for Vitals to Kill Quickly
Longbow: Shooting from Cover
Detection: Spotting Enemy Shooter
Tactics: Ambushing Caravans from Woods
Tactics: Chasing Down Survivors to Prevent Reinforcements

Loot: Caravan Loot (Reviewers Discretion), Portal Anklets(PB Item)
Injuries/Overstepping: A few cuts and bruises, bloodied eye, nothing serious.
Fame: Negative 5-10 for raiding/several murders
Magic EXP: No

Neronin

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership: Ordering men to kill
Leadership: Taking command when the Leader leaves
Torture: Taking the most useful phalange
Intimidation: Attempting to use witchbrands to intimidate
Tactics: Attacking on three sides
Tactics: Dividing forces to conquer
Tactics: Ambush best when surrounded by cover

Loot: Caravan Loot (Reviewer Discretion)
Injuries/Overstepping: Wounds were healed in thread.
Fame: Negative 5-10 for raiding/multiple murders/necromancing it up.
Magic EXP: Yes (Rupturing)

Rocan

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cutlass: Hacking Through Foundation Bones
Cutlass: Parrying Slashes
Unarmed: Putting your Weight into Blows
Unarmed: Dodging Away from Attacks
Tactics: Strategic Withdrawal
Tactics: Sending a Dying Man to Get Help
Mount: Retreating through the Woods on Chestnut
Mount: Calling Chestnut to Attack an Enemy

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Forearm Bite and Slash from Undead.
Fame: Positive 5-10 for protecting a caravan against all odds, combating the undead, and rescuing a young girl from a cruel fate.
Magic EXP: No

[Quio]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Alone.
City/Area: Uleuda.
Notes/Warnings: Not marked mature, but mention of and thoughts concerning suicide, depression, and torture.
Requested Rewards:

Yanahalqah

Skill Knowledge--
Interrogation: Needn't be aggressive
Rhetoric: Attempting to comfort others
Etiquette: Offering to kill those who suffer

Other Knoweldge--
Quiome: Broken
Quiome: Was on the Humble Son?
Quiome: Renewed resolve
Ulehi: Written form

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Positive fame, probably? Whatever you see.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Quio

Skill Knowledge--
Resistance: Using the Uleuda to avoid trauma in the waking world
Resistance: Finding resolve in the toughest of situations
Meditation: Using meditation to remain calm
Meditation: Using meditation to overcome pain
Meditation: The Mother crystal helps Yludih meditate
Ulehi: Fleshlings, a derogatory term for the "waking" people of Idalos
Ulehi: Fleshlovers, a derogatory term for Yludih who love the waking world or its people
Ulehi: Atuih, meaning possessed, a synonym for fleshlovers

Other Knowledge--
Yanahalqah: Was on the Humble Son?

Loot: None.

Injuries/Overstepping: Quio's shoulder/collarbone is 'broken'; though this is not stated clearly in the thread because Quio does not yet know, his captors in the waking world have taken an axe and given Quio forty a couple whacks. Though a Yludih doesn't have bones (and so 'technically' he's not actually 'broken'), I'm playing this as a rather serious injury (mostly due to pain and bloodloss) which, especially in the first few days, could be life-threatening. This is going to interfere with his ability for some time to use his arm. Because he's a Yludih I'm not quite sure for healing time, but I assume it'll take at least the rest of Saun and into Vhalar, with possible long-term effects.

Fame: Not sure, probably nothing.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Tio Silver]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dirty Deeds Done Cheap
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This thread was sadly abandoned .
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Acting: Acting like a Knight
Animal Training: Cats are naturally evil
Deception: Lying about your Profession
Deception: Pretending to be a treasure hunter
Deception: Pretending to be a Knight
Fieldcraft: Tents are not always stable
Fieldcraft: Knowing when to head back to civilisation
Intelligence: Prophesy of your own death?!
Intelligence: Asking the right questions
Intelligence: The layout of Almund's Streets
Intimidation: Staring down a cat
Seduction: Flattery will get you everywhere
Seduction: Be a Knight in Shining Armor

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Hans]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Speaking In Tongues
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:

• Empathy: Recognising Significance of Colours in the Tangle
• Empathy: Using The Tangle to Locate Others
• Ne'haer: Festival of Languages

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes

This thread was abandoned so I don't mind re: skill points. Up to the reviewer!