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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: The Stars are my Lampposts, the Moon is my Guide
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Navigation: Discerning north, south, east west without a compass
Navigation: Measuring distances by observing the moons and stars
Navigation: The north star
Navigation: Sextant: Doubly reflecting navigational instrument
Navigation: Locating the navigator's position compared to known locations
Navigation: Gyrocompass: Non-magnetic compass based on a fast-spinning disc
Navigation: Astrolabe: Used by sailors to determine a ship's latitude at sea
Research: Using multiple resources
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Started out that way, abandoned by other player
Magic EXP: No
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: In thunder, lightning, or in rain?
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Didn't come out anywhere near what I wanted to write. Worse: it ends in a cheap pun. Shit ahead.
Requested Rewards:
Endurance: Weathering a thunderstorm
Endurance: Braving harsh winds
Transmutation: The Force of Downburst Winds
Transmutation: The Roar of Thunder
Transmutation: The Discharge of Lightning
Running: Running in a thunderstorm
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: a lot of small cuts but it's a memory
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: Probably not enough for it. No.

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Ronan
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Vaelus' Curse (Starter Curse request)
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: This is a repost from here but accessible for anyone as requested. It was approved as a starting story by Jade but she told me it was also eligible for knowledge review. I think it's a little bloody/descriptive on the fighting
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Persuasion: Using your massive size to back up threats.
Strength: Unbalanced = Easier to lift
Strength: An enemy shield is a good weapon
Unarmed: Keep punching, for good measure
Unarmed: Elbows make good weapons too
Unarmed: Low to High, the uppercut

Ronan: Berserking makes it hard to hear
Ronan: Cursed of Vaelus
Ronan: Oathbreaker and Bondbreaker
Ronan: Your blood doesn't clot
Ronan: Killed his Blood Brother
The master: Dead
The master: Changed by money?
The master: Not who you thought he was
The master: Soft from luxury
Quan: Fellow fighter
Quan: Bought out?
Quan: Where is he?
Quan: Worth about 2000 GN
Quan: Broken Bond, Broken Oath, Broken Friend
Quan: Blood Brother
Vhalar: Overpowered you as if you were a child
Vhalar: Unbeatable?
Vhalar: Cursed you

Loot: The money he brought at the beginning was lost in the fire.
Injuries/Overstepping: Stab wound in the back, cut on the forearm, bruised throat, head and back but they all happened several arcs ago. I'm not sure if the following should be here or perhaps under loot but Ronan broke both the Lesser Oath and Blood Bond that he had with Quan, who was a blessed of Vhalar. According to lore, breaking the Lesser Oath results in a series of unexpected setbacks and accidents (Ronan got imprisoned for several arcs, lost his Gladiator title and suffered for many seasons from the beating Vhalar gave him as well as some minor memory loss) and breaking the Blood Bond means his blood won't cloth until someone can forgive him for it.
Fame: Probably negative, if any.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Ronan on Tue Dec 19, 2017 5:01 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 329
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Seeking Sev'ryn Souls
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Bladed Combat: (Longsword) Dropping down to strike from below
Bladed Combat: (Longsword) Keep your blade parallel to where you want to strike
Bladed Combat: (Longsword) Graceful, sweeping arc
Bladed Combat: (Longsword) Use blade and body movement for momentum
Bladed Combat: (Longsword) How to put your full strength into a blow
Endurance: Protecting yourself against the cold.
Ranged Combat: Don't sacrifice accuracy for speed
Ranged Combat: Judge distance at which a bow is no longer accurate
Ranged Combat: Aim for vital, unarmoured locations.

Scalvoris Fauna: Oh-deer

Loot: 1 x oh-deer corpse (head comes separately)
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises to her right shoulder, arm and right side generally.
Fame: Don't think so
Collaboration: Yes

Arlo

Knowledge:
Endurance: Hunting in the freezing cold.
Hunting: Lion tracks
Navigation: Reading a map that changes to reflect your environment
Ranged Combat (Bow): Using environmental clues to pick direction.
Ranged Combat (Bow): Multiple shots can increase the speed of the kill
Ranged Combat (Bow): If you aim low, a falling creature might still get hit
Ranged Combat (Bow): Maintain your stance after you've released
Ranged Combat (Bow): An accidental shot can still be a breakthrough
Strength: Hauling around carcasses


Scalvoris Fauna: Oh-deer
Loot: 1 x oh-deer corpse, +1 tuft of constellion fur.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so.
Collaboration: Yes
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Hanging By A Thread
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Bit of blood etc.
Requested Rewards:

Ronan

Knowledge:
Vaelus: Cursed: Lying makes you sick
Vaelus: Cursed: Lie to find the one truth
Medicine: Bitterness to cure bleeding?
Medicine: Curing bloodloss by taking blood from someone else
Medicine: Bloodloss causes hallucinations
Etiquette: No friends without white lies

Bren (NPC): Green Hooded healer
Bren (NPC): Probably saved your life
Faith: Golden Robed healer
Faith: Came to save you in the middle of the night
Faith: Probably saved your life
Faith: Gave you someone else's blood
Faith: Stayed with you all night
Faith: Knows you are cursed and didn't help
Faith: Can see ghosts
Faith: A very special woman
Ronan: Cursed by an immortal
Ronan: Curse marked?
Quan: Taunted you at your deathbed?

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Multiple cuts and etc, but Faith's healing and capstone should make healing a lot faster
Fame: Reviewer's choice
Collaboration: Yes


Faith

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Gentle touch can be very reassuring
Caregiving:Keep your patient informed
Endurance: Swollen ankles due to pregnancy
Endurance: Sleepless nights
Endurance: Sleeping in a chair whilst pregnant
Surgery: Dealing with blood that doesn't clot
Surgery: Finding a blood match in a hurry
Surgery: Stitching to minimise scars
Surgery: Using coagulants to ensure success
Surgery: After care for blood donors too
Surgery: Use gravity to speed up blood transfusions

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Reviewer's Discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
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Vega Dweeb
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Plans & Plots
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: nope
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Psychology: The important things in life, aren't things at all.
Seafaring: Ships' Wheel
Seafaring: Rudder
Seafaring: Steering
Seafaring: The king spoke
Seafaring: Uses for a bowline knit


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: Don't think so.
Collaboration: Nope
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Thread Name: Stabbity & Blockity - Part 1
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: It's boring. Too much talking about snails and I don't remember why.
Requested Rewards:
Acrobatics: Dodging a thrown boot
Deception: Feigning regret
Deception: Faking contrition
Politics: Basic professionalism
Politics: There’s more to politics than efficient administration
Politics: Knowing when to keep your head down
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: N0

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Guillermos
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Thread Name: Islands of Turning Thread:Islands of Turning
]City/Area: Rharne - Earth Quarter
Notes/Warnings: Rharne Bounty Board Mission/Solo Thread: Khael Gordon
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
#1 Investigation: Outlining a plan of action
#2 Etiquette: Importance in choice of words
#3 Interrogation: Clear & Concise Questioning
#4 Persuasion: The best choice is not always the easiest choice
#5 Socialization: NPC - Basic - Magdalinde Gordon - Khael's Mother (Earth Quarter) - Rharne
#6 Socialization: NPC - Basic - Yllek Ismerhill - Guardsman (Earth Quarter) - Rharne
Loot: (if applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: (if applicable)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Guillermos on Wed Dec 20, 2017 3:41 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 96
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Noth
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Thread Name: Date at the Museum
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Didn’t get to pull of the big scheme at the beginning, because Nero kind of vanished. :(
Collaboration: Yes
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Noth
Tactics: Making Plans in Advance
Tactics: Ensuring Everyone Knows the Plan
Intimidation: Growl When You Wake to Ward Off Evil
Seduction: Compliments Go A Long Way
Etiquette: Walking Like a Gentleman
Night: Went on a Date with You

Night
Etiquette: Dress Up for a Date
Etiquette: Some People Take Dresses Very Seriously
Etiquette: Walking Like a Lady
Detection: Noticing Something is Off
Detection: Recognizing When People Know One Another
Blades: Different Qualities Depending on Creators
Noth: Went on a Date with You.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A

Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Noth on Wed Dec 20, 2017 4:56 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 131
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Stabbity and Blockity - Part 2
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Swearing, sure
Requested Rewards:
Transmutation: The Palate
Transmutation: Identity: Immersing into the star-bound properties of Malorite
Transmutation: Identity: Touching Admantite
Transmutation: The Edge of Admantite
Transmutation: The Toughness of Malorite
Discipline: Snapping out of a trance
Loot: Nein
Injuries/Overstepping: nupe. 2 seasons past.
Fame: nupe
Collaboration: nu
Magic EXP: yes
word count: 66
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