Review Request 2.2.0

[Gennadiya Arishina]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Why is the Mint Gone
City/Area: Lyosia (Ne'haer)
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Skill Knowledge
Gardening – What conditions Mint grows best in.
Gardening – Identifying young healthy mint plants verses old sickly
Medicine – Recognizing a Mint plant
Medicine – How to Harvest Mint for herbal use.
Psychology – Using examples to teach a concept
Medicine – Mint Tea helps with indigestion and anxiety

Other Knowledge
Ymiden – You have to forgive yourself
Ymiden – Change doesn’t require you to be a different person

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Varthakh]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Can't think of a thread name
City/Area: Woodstock Hall, The Gleam, Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Swearing I think? Frid was quite tame here
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

1. Hone: Drawing runes with ether.
2. Hone: You have to be careful not to put too much ether into each rune.
3. Hone: using the tip of your finger to draw a rune.
4. Hone: Rune of Touch: Increases sensitivity to touch on whatever part of the body it's drawn on.
5. Hone: Rune of Touch: Can be used for torture.
6. Detection: Feeling the movement of an incoming strike.

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• NPC: Rhostus: Soft.
• NPC: Rhostus: Thinks a show of force makes him less soft.
• NPC: Rhostus: Bastard.
• NPC: Rhostus: Taught you how to make a rune.
• NPC: Rhostus: A cool guy I guess.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience?: Yes, Fridgar drew his first rune in this thread and learned more fundamentals of Hone.

[Varthakh]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Save changes to Untitled?
City/Area: The docks, Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Descriptions of a dead whale.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

1. Hone: Dismissal: Drawing unused ether from a rune of touch that hasn't run its course.
2. Hone: Dismissal: The act of dismissing a rune by reclaiming ether.
3. Hone: Rune of Touch: Using the extra sensitivity to more accurately decipher etchings in the sand.
4. Hone: Rune of Strength: Looks like an upside down spearhead and overlaps at one point.
5. Hone: Dismissal: Doesn't inflict the same damage as flaying despite operating similarly.
6. Detection: The smell of blood in water.

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• NPC: Rhostus: Apparently quite forgetful
• NPC: Rhostus: Thinks its gross to eat meat off a dead animal for some reason?

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience?: Yes, Fridgar both discovered a new technique for Hone in this thread and found a new way to use the rune of touch.

[Jakob Daud]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Of Labor and Trade
City/Area: The Tundra / The Cold Mountain
Notes/Warnings: Some violence; in-detailed medical RP and some nasty descriptions; cursing.
Requested Rewards:
Jakob Daud Knowledge:
Mining: Fire-setting to crack stone
Mining: Effective ways to break stone
Mining: Proper usage of a hand-steel
Endurance: Ignoring the pain of a foot-injury
Endurance: Withstanding pain from medical processes without medication
Endurance: Staying awake for extended periods of time without sleep
Strength: How to carry an unconscious person
Strength: Proper exertion of force for a punch
Intimidation: A good glare can get you far
Intimidation: Firmly restating can get the point across
Negotiation: Drugs and alcohol are decent bargaining tools
Stealth: Sometimes being quiet is a good idea
Axe/Bludgeons: Overhead swings can crush through armor
Axe/Bludgeons: Sometimes hitting a shield is the best way through it
Unarmed: A straight punch to the face is always effective

Sibyl Malach Knowledge:
Medicine: Identifying Frostbite
Surgery: Stitching together a foot
Surgery: Surgery works better with painkillers
Surgery: Resource management is paramount for maximum survival potential
Surgery: Assisting in Amputation
Surgery: Amputation requires followup interventions
Surgery: Maggots Treat Dead Flesh
Caregiving: Basics of Palliative Care
Caregiving: Knowing When to Give Assurances
Psychology: The Nature of Class Superiority
Psychology: The Precariats' Worldview
Psychology: Tantrums of Anger is Used to Dominate
Sociology: Videnese Classes: The Precariat
Intelligence: Read Between the Lines of Paperwork
Intelligence: Do Not Question What You Scribe

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: For Jakob; A treated wound to the right foot.
Renown: To be honest, I do not know. I'd assume a +5 for running medicine, but we did go against the grain quite a bit. I'd appreciate the reviewer giving us what they think we deserve here.
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: N/A

[Yavanna]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name:The Withdrawal
City/Area: Earth Quarter, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:

Discipline: Trying to Stand under severe circumstances
Detection: Knowing when something isn't right
Acrobatics: Falling out the 2nd story window
Endurance: The pain of corrupt ether
Endurance: Fighting against waves of pain
Endurance: All over impact

Non-Skill:
Abrogation Spark: Is highly protective over her
Abrogation Spark: Tries to fight off Chaotic Ether
Aberration Spark: Xerxia has Abandoned me
Aberration Spark: Corrupt ether is a bitch!

Loot: nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Moderate Overstepping which resulted in a mutation{Will put in PSF}, Back tattoos damaged and will need repair
Renown: +5 for falling out 2nd story window.

Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)

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[Pharan]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: New Tasks
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Linguistics: Avrielian Script
Linguistics: Avrielian Script: Stroke direction matters
Discipline: Resisting an obvious provocation
Discipline: Keeping a leisurely pace although you run late
Socialize: Apologizing when late
Politics: Reading between the lines

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: What Remains
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Eh, minor stuff like partial nudity and wounds. Lots of stuff referring to corpses and gore though without explicit detail.
Requested Rewards:

Zarik
Knowledge:
Endurance: Operating with little food
Endurance: Ignoring aches and pains in the aftermath of a crisis.
Teaching: Showing villagers how to make a solution to clean blood with.
Caregiving: Feeding the hungry.
Etiquette: Accepting an offer to stay at a house.
Meditation: Processing complex thoughts with rhetoric.
Meditation: Consideration of becoming a mage.
Meditation: The Discussion of Reality
Rhetoric: Devoting oneself to mutual ambitions.
Rhetoric: Painting a vision of the future.

Alistair: We will rule together.
Alistair: Wants me to be his equal.
Alistair: What we share is spiritual.
Personal: I must become powerful.

Alistair
Knowledge:
Leadership: Taking command over a divided populace
Leadership: Encouraging productivity through grief
Leadership: Some people benefit from atrocities - learn how to use them
Medicine: Creating a proper poultice
Medicine: Using Corrosion to remove unwanted physical objects from a patient

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: +10 or +15 for both. They both took command over a dying village they just save and helped get everyone working together to clean it up and ensure everyone was safe/accounted for.
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A New Traveler
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Had an approved faction NPC join mi faction. That's about it for notes.
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
Leadership: Using common beliefs to recruit others
Leadership: Slowly indulging one's views to retain their interest
Leadership: Onboarding someone

Kekoa: An exiled Burhan
Kekoa: Former Seeker
Kekoa: Joined the Travelers

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Perhaps +5 for recruiting an exiled Noble into my faction.
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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[Varthakh]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Do you even lift?
City/Area: The docks, Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Graphic descriptions of injuries.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

1. Hone: Dismissal: Dismissing a Rune of Strength that hasn't run its course.
2. Hone: Rune of Strength.
3. Hone: Rune of Strength: Hard to control.
4. Hone: Rune of Strength: Doubles the user's strength
5. Hone: Drawing runes improperly results in a waste of ether.
6. Discipline: Holding back in a fit of anger to not attack someone you care about.

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• NPC: Rhostus: Laughed at you
• NPC: Rhostus: Cares about you?
• NPC: Rhostus: Was scared of you

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Maybe some if anyone happened to see the lurker
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience?: Yes, Fridgar cast the rune fo strength for the first time in this thread and discovered the importance of drawing runes properly. Hone Exp.

[Praetorum]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Initiation: Take One
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: The usefulness of the Rune of Sight and the Rune of Sound
Tactics: Enhanced hearing could help in combat
Hone: The initiation process
Hone: The bond between initiate and initiator
Hone: The rune of naming
Endurance: Dealing with the pain of initiation

Magic: The Purpose of a Grimoire

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Uhhhh Prae gets initiated but doesn't really use magic.