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Wealth thread for Ymiden, 720. Also, Kieran's first IC thread!

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Hoofing It

2 Ymiden 720

Kieran woke to the clattering of hooves on flagstones; as his heart raced, his first thought was that the bastards had found him. He rose stiffly from his bed to peer cautiously out the narrow garret window onto the innyard. He saw eight horses, and could hear more. They were all bigger and more heavily equipped than his field hunter: warhorses. Their coats glistened and steamed in the early light, and they were breathing hard, having clearly ridden far and fast through the night.

A squadron of unhappy thoughts galloped through Kieran’s mind. Since deserting, he had shaved his hair and grown a beard, and had taken the alias ‘Wilfrid’, but too late he realized that it would be no use: his pursuers would recognize the horse in the inn’s stable, and then they would never believe he was the wrong Yari. He had been a fool to think that his threadbare ruses would save him. His game was up.

Turning away from the window, he looked at the estoc leaning against the foot of his bed, and his mood went from dismay to defiance. It had only been a matter of time before it would come to this, that he would need to make a last stand, and this cramped attic was as good a place as any for doing so. Perched strategically atop the narrow stairs he could stab anyone coming up. Let those assholes try and take him! he thought, as he grasped the scabbard.

Kieran heard voices outside, and with the sword in hand he edged back towards the window to listen. The newcomers didn’t sound Yari, though Kieran made out only one phrase of their Common clearly: “We’ll find out when we get there.” So apparently these riders were in transit to someplace else; maybe they weren’t looking out for him after all.

Time passed, and the deserter had just started to relax when the door at the bottom of the stairs creaked open. It was a quiet, unthreatening sound, yet it caused Kieran to bolt upright and tighten his clutch on the estoc’s scabbard. ”Master Blackash?” called the innkeeper’s voice from below. ”Are you awake?”

Kieran, not stirring in the garret’s shadows, called down in response: ”Aye. Hard not to be with that cavalcade outside. Who are they, anyway?”

”Lightning Knights, en route to Rharne,” the innkeeper answered. Several silent trills passed. Then, nervously, the innkeeper cleared his throat and asked: ”Mr. Blackash, you wouldn’t by any chance be a farrier, would you?”

It was all Kieran could do not to draw the estoc and run the innkeeper through right away. ”Who wants to know?”

”Partisan Skalar Brachland wants to know,” cut in a deep, harsh voice from behind the innkeeper, ”and he don’t like to ask twice. Are you, boy, or not?”

Kieran stood rooted to the spot as he slid the estoc about a hand’s breadth out of its sheath. He was just about to form a denial on his lips when he heard the Lightning Knight make an aggravated snort. ”I don’t have time for this fool. Probably hung over. Where did you say this Dunburg was?”

”About ten miles, sir.”

”Bloody skies! That’ll take breaks! We have to be in Rharne today!”

Hearing this, Kieran realized something and spoke up: ”Aye, I’m a farrier, sir.”

”Why didn’t you say so before, squib?” groused the Partisan. ”The Lightning Knights have need of your services, assuming you’re not too hung over to work.”

”Not at all,” answered Kieran. ”Just give me some bits to get my things together.”

”I’ll give you five,” called up the Lightning Knight. ”Any longer, I’ll come up there and drag you down.”
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De-stablizing the situation

Lightning knights? wondered Kieran as he rummaged through the gloom to find his tools. What were they in such a hurry to return to Rharne for? Not looking for him, at least. The notion crossed his mind that this might all be a ruse to get him to come down quietly, so that they could nab him without a fight. Somehow, though, he didn’t find it likely that such a heavily-armed band would care if he put up a fight, nor, in that case, would they then leave him unbothered for several bits on the pretense of getting his tools together. Why give him a chance to attempt escape? By the time he was ready to come down, he had convinced himself that it wasn’t a trick. He walked down the rickety stairs and ducked his head under the doorway into the common room of the inn, where he stood blinking for several trills adjusting to the light.

”There he is!” came the strange, gruff voice he had heard earlier. Kieran could now see that it belonged to a middle-aged, red-faced man nearly as tall as he was, and just as broad. Partisan Brachland looked the farrier up and down. ”Big strong lad, I see. Good! What’s your name, son?”

”Wilfred,” muttered Kieran.

”Have a seat, Wilfred. Eat some breakfast first. Can’t have you working on our horses with shaky hands. Innkeep! Get this man some grub!”

Brachland sat opposite and watched silently as Kieran ate his breakfast. The deserter suspected this was because the knight wanted him to hurry up and finish eating, so he did; he was quite hungry, anyway. Five of the other knights were in the common room as well, also eating silently and quickly.

As soon Kieran had eaten enough, Brachland took him out to the innyard, where he could see four Lightning Knights feeding and watering the horses. ”So what do you need me to do?” he asked, dreading the idea that the knight expected him to attend to all the horses in a few bits; he counted ten. The Yari realized that the knights must be tending to their companions’ mounts as well as their own.

Partisan Brachland pointed at the stable. ”In there. One of our horses threw a shoe on the road.”

Oram scowled. ”I’ve got tools, but I don’t have a bag full of new shoes. I’ve got a couple worn ones that would last you to Rharne, though.”

The knight grumbled wordlessly for a few trills, then said: ”Do what you can.”

Brachland led Kieran to the stable and swung open the door. ”Cemel!” shouted the Partisan into the doorway, ”We found a farrier for Arcus!”

”Ilaren be praised!” came a deep, soft voice from the dim interior. ”Bring him in.”

Brachland snorted. ”I didn’t ask your permission, Defender Cemel.” The Yari deserter didn’t know anything about Lightning Knight ranks, but he knew the I’m-pulling-rank-but-being-nice-about-it tone when he heard it. The voice inside the stable grumbled something the farrier couldn’t make out. Brachland and Kieran ducked into the stable.

”This here’s Wilfred. He’ll be fixing your horse up so you can stop malingering.” With a sharp pat on Kieran’s back, Brachland went back outside. Wilfred blinked and peered at the man that stood before him. His eyes had grown accustomed to the light outside, so he could make out little. The knight, who had been in the stable some time, could see Kieran just fine.

”You’re Yari, or I’m an old woman,” he stated. ”Mercenary, I bet?”

Kieran nodded. He had had time on the road to hone his cover story, even try it out a couple times, so it went fairly smoothly by now. He felt that had figured out which elements of the truth to incorporate -since he couldn’t really hope to hide them- and which to deny. Still, the Lightning Knights were more savvy and astute than the typical random tavern patron, so he needed to be on his toes.

”Which company?” asked the knight.

”Tower of Crows,” answered Kieran promptly. Which was a real outfit, though as far as Kieran knew it was still in Yaralon.

”That so? Why’d you leave?”

Kieran shrugged. ”Didn’t have a choice. Drank and fought too much, and we weren’t getting paid, so the Captain wouldn’t renew my contract.”

”Skinflints!” spat the knight. ”I’ll say this for the Lightning Knights; they pay regular.”

Kieran gestured towards the stall his own field hunter was in. ”They didn’t want to keep feeding the horse, either. I asked for it in lieu of payment of my back wages.”

”Well, I’d say you did well, son,” answered Cemel. ”It’s a fine hunter.” He gestured towards the hulking shadow of his warhorse, which practically filled the small stall. ”Horse’s name is Arcus. He threw a shoe at some point. Don’t know if there’s anything else wrong.”

Kieran looked a moment, then said: ”We should go outside. More light and more room.”

”Fair enough,” said Cemel. "I think he’s had enough time at the trough, anyway. Don’t want him getting spoiled.”
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Does he bite? What about the horse?

Cemel backed his huge courser out of the stall with difficulty; Kieran had to squeeze back into Snippy’s stall to give Arcus room to maneuver out the stable door. A trill later, Kieran followed, after he had looked around the stable to see what sorts of gear they had. There was an anvil, but no forge; that meant he’d need to cold shape the shoe, which would take longer than it would with heat.

Kieran walked out into the innyard and blinked while his eyes re-accustomed to the light. Cemel, he could see now, was a solid-built human about medium height and balding, his remaining head hair pressed flat around his bare crown from wearing a helmet. The knight’s bushy mustache was edged with grey. Kieran put him at just under fifty arcs.

But the farrier was more interested in the horse. It was a solid-built stallion, with an iron gray coat so sooty it was almost charcoal, relieved only by a faint star on its forehead and a pair of half pasterns on its rear legs. Kieran walked up to Arcus, slowly but confidently. ”Heya, big fella,” he murmured smoothly. Then he glanced over at Cemel. ”Which foot?”

Cemel pointed straight down, practically at his own feet. ”Front left.”

Kieran patted the horse on the shoulder, then carefully bent down to lift the indicated foot and examine the hoof. Apart from the tear in the hoof wall where one of the nails ripped out, the foot seemed uninjured, and the farrier saw no abcesses. Retrieving his hoof knife from his tool bet, he scraped the dirt and frog out the sole, then switched to his nippers to clip down the hoof wall. Mid-way through, he noticed a broken-off bit of nail, which he pulled out with his nail pullers before continuing the clipping. Arcus stood calmly and tolerantly the whole time. ”Your stallion is well-behaved,” Kieran pointed out.

”Trained by the best,” responded Cemel. ”He’ll do what you want and not give you any trouble as long as I’m holding him.” He smiled proudly and patted the horse’s neck ”Arcus is a good boy.”

Kieran nodded. The horses all seemed well-tended, which meant they likely saw farriers pretty regularly. Nonetheless, he remained aware of where the horse’s head was the whole time. When he was done with his nipping, he switched to a rasp and started filing down the hoof.

Just then another knight walked up. ”Your turn for grub, Cemel,” he called out. The mustached knight glanced meaningfully at the farrier bent under his horse. ”I’d better stay here a bit holding Arcus here. You almost done down there, Wilfred?”

‘Wilfred’ straightened and nodded towards the new knight, who was younger than either Brachland and Cemel, and probably junior in rank as well. He answered Cemel matter-of-factly. ”I need to file all the hooves so that they’re balanced,” he answered. ”Better if you’re hold the horse, especially when I do the back feet.”

Cemel clearly wasn’t pleased by that news, but he also understood it, and accepted it philosophically. ”Alright, but move with a purpose. I can’t steady my horse if I faint from hunger.” Not his first campaign, thought Kieran as he put Arcus’ left front foot down and picked up the right. This hoof still had a shoe, so he used the nail puller and the hoof hammer to remove that first, before using the nipper and rasp to file down this hoof to the same length as the other one.

”I have to cold-shape the shoe, and that takes awhile; I won’t need the horse held while I do that, so maybe eat then,” suggested Kieran as he nipped the hoof.

”Defender Cemel will eat when he wishes; he doesn’t need your leave, boy,” growled the newly-arrived knight sharply. Cemel put a warning hand on the junior knight’s chest.

”Defender Cemel will also speak for himself,” the senior knight responded in his soothing tone. ”Wilfred here was just being practical. That said, do mind your manners, son.” Kieran nodded, and continued to work, answering only with a soft: ”Yes, sir”. With difficulty, he remained calm and agreeable, mainly to avoid agitating the horse. Had this exchange taken place in a tavern, the junior knight might have gotten a fist in the face for such an attitude. Fortunately, said knight withdrew and started talking to his other companions instead of arguing.

After that interruption Kieran worked as quickly as he safely could on the other feet. These required removing the horseshoe before filing down the hoof, then reattaching the shoe. It took a while, and both Cemel and Arcus were quite patient with the process, though Kieran sensed that the other knights in the yard were starting to get restless. At length he went back to the left front foot and held up his spare horseshoe up to the hoof. He put the foot down and looked up at Cemel. ”Thanks for waiting,” he said. ”Now I’m ready to start shaping.”

”Wyril!” the Defender called, whereupon the younger knight from earlier reappeared and Cemel handed him Arcus’ reins so that he could go eat something. Kieran was already withdrawing towards the stable to use the anvil, happy that he would not need to intereact with the young knight while he shaped.
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Did I mention the bit where Kieran nodded?

Back inside the warm stable, Kieran paused in front of the anvil he had seen earlier and waited for his eyes to readjust to the dim interior. The anvil looked to be a portable anvil, rather than a shop anvil. That was good; he preferred to work outside in the natural light. Kneeling next to the anvil, he rocked it back and forth, both to get a feel for how heavy it actually was, and to work it loose from the ground it was sitting on. Then he rose back to his feet, planted them on either side of the anvil and cautiously lifted it with a grunt. It felt to be about eighty pounds.

He waddled outside and set the anvil down next to the door, then went to retrieve a stool he had sat on earlier. It had held his weight solidly, so he reckoned it could support the anvil. At last he had things where he wanted them, and went to work. He took out a flat stick with charcoal marks on it that he had used to measure the size of Arcus’ foot, and held it next to the horseshoe he intended to shape. Then he started shaping.

The first few hammer blows got some startled looks from both the knights and their horses, but they settled down quickly once they realized what the sound was and where it came from. Gripping the horseshoe in his tongs, he would drape it over the anvil’s horn and hammer on one arm, then the other of the shoe. He hammered inside-out, to make the shoe wider, since Arcus had such a large foot. Without the softening effects of forge-fire, the cold iron shoe was reluctant to alter its shape, but it eventually yielded to the farrier’s persistence. Kieran almost had the shoe right when he recalled something.

Putting hammer and shoe down, he went into the inn, nodding briefly to Cemel as he looked for the innkeeper. ”I need some hot water, just a small cup” he said when he had found the man. Seeing some tankards hanging over the bar, he pointed. ”One of those would be perfect.”

”Those are for regulars,” the innkeeper responded.

Kieran rolled his eyes impatiently. Either the proprietor thought he was being funny, or he was really was just dull. The deserter didn’t have time for either. ”Doesn’t need to be one of those specifically, he insisted: ”Just something like them.”

A few trills later, the farrier walked hastily back out to the innyard, rapidly passing a steaming hot cup back and forth between burning hands while grimacing and breathing in and out sharply. The bastard had given the hot water in a cup with no handle. It took all of Kieran’s willpower not to break into a run. When he set the cup down at last, he blew on his hands. Several of the Lightning Knights watched him with obvious amusement, and he bit back his resentment with difficulty. He got the impression that Arcus was watching him, too.

Ignoring his audience, Kieran rummaged into his toolbelt and pulled out an oblong lump of some translucent, amber-colored material, which he tied with a piece of string and then dipped into the hot water, leaving it there like a steeping teabag as he went back to shaping the horseshoe. By the time he had finished hammering, the cup was giving off a smell like fresh-cut pine. Kieran was testing the rosin with his fingers when Cemel emerged from the inn and came up to him. ”Done yet, Wilfred?” he asked. ”What’s the damage?”

The rosin had softened, but not quite enough yet to use, so the farrier dropped it back into the hot water. ”Horse’s foot is uninjured,” he told the Lightning Knight, ”but the hoof is torn. He’ll be fine to walk once I’m done, but I wouldn’t ride him for a while.”

”Can’t ride with us, you say?” came another voice. This was Brachland. The Partisan looked expectantly at both Cemel and Kieran. The farrier shook his head. ”He’d come up lame for real before you got there, most like,” he said. Kieran waited apprehensively. He wasn’t sure yet whether this knight was the sort to shoot a messenger.

Fortunately, he wasn’t, although he clearly wasn’t delighted by the news. He scowled and scratched his cheek for several trills, in thought. ”I can stay here at the inn until you send back another horse,” suggested Cemel. Brachland snorted.

”Oh ho! I bet you’d like that. No, you’re not staying here swilling mead for the next three trials. You’re still going to Rharne. Just slower. Wyril!” he shouted, not realizing the knight was standing right behind him.

”Yes, sir?”

”There you are! You and Cemel are now a detachment. His horse can walk but not ride. You and Cemel are to walk behind us at your own pace the rest of the way to Rharne. Report to me after morning mess tomorrow.”

”Yes, sir!” answered the two knights in chorus.

Brachland stepped away from them and shouted: ”Everybody else, gear up and mount! Then head out and wait for me on the road.”

The innyard clattered and clanked as Lightning Knights mounted their coursers and steered them over the cobbles towards the exit. After watching them with a satisfied look, Brachland walked over to his own horse. He had just put his foot in the stirrup when he remembered something. He turned and walked towards Kieran. ”I suppose you should be paid -what was your name again, son?”

”Wilfred,” Kieran answered promptly. He was getting too good at this, the deserter thought. Would he even remember his name after a while? he wondered. For that matter, would Kieran even really be his name after a while?

Before he could spend much time with these musings, Brachland counted out some nels and offered them to him. ”That enough, Wilfred?” the Partisan asked. The farrier looked at the coins. It was actually a good offer, better than he had been expecting. He nodded.

”Yes, thank you, sir,” he said.

”Right! You’re a good man, Wilfred. Maybe we’ll meet again. The Lightning Knights always need someone trusty to take care of their horses. I’ll be seeing *you* two tomorrow. Ha!” Without awaiting a response, he sprang onto his horse and followed the other Lightning Knights out of the innyard.

After he had left, Kieran headed back to check the rosin in the hot water, decided it was finally soft enough. ”Cemel, sir -Defender Cemel,” he said, ”I need you to hold your horse one last time. We’re almost done here.”

Pointedly ignoring Wyril, the farrier took the warm, dripping lump over to the horse. Taking hold of the left front hoof, he cut a hunk of the rosin off and began to work it into the rent in the horse’s hoof wall with the flat of the hoof knife. He heard a sniffing sound. ”Smells like retsina,” commented Cemel.

”It’s the same stuff: pine resin.” Kieran answered. He lowered the hoof. ”It’ll harden in a couple bits, then I’ll put the shoe on. Then you’re good to go.” He turned towards the stable, then turned back quickly. ”I’m gonna put that anvil back into the stable. I’ll be right back.” Cemel nodded. Wyril frowned. Kieran nodded back at the former and ignored the latter.

By the time he came back and re-checked the hoof, the rosin had already cooled and hardened noticeably. ”Close enough,” Kieran muttered.

Wyril came over and peered at the patch suspiciously. ”That stuff safe for the horse?” he asked.

Kieran nodded. ”Some horses don’t like the smell, but apart from that, it’s harmless. It hardens and sticks to the hoof. Forms a patch until the hoof wall has time to grow back.”

Not wanting to continue the conversation with the ill-mannered knight, Kieran pointedly took the shoe that moment and started nailing it into place. Wyril harumphed and walked back towards his own horse. Cemel looked at the hoof just before Kieran lowered Arcus’ hoof for the last time. ”That’s a worn shoe,” he said.

”All I had. It’ll last you to Rharne, but you’ll want to replace it as soon as you get there.”

Cemel patted Arcus’ neck. ”We’ll take care of him good, won’t we? Well, Wilfred, I supposed this is farewell. Keep up the good work. Let’s go, Wyril!”

The Defender started to mount Arcus and stopped himself. Grumbling, he started walking it out of the yard. Wyril, seated on his own horse, scowled at the deserter. ”You’d better not have done shoddy work, farrier,” he said warningly. ”Be sure that our farrier will be taking a look at it and let us know.”

Kieran peered up at the knight. ”Maybe I’ll get to Rharne some day and ask him myself,” he answered. Wyril made an annoyed noise through his nose and turned his horse around, walking alongside Cemel and Arcus.

And maybe you and me will meet face to face in a tavern, he thought as he watched the Lightning Knight’s back, where there won’t be any horses to upset.
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Knowledge:
1 x Deception
1 x Strength
1x Discipline
2 x Animal Husbandry
1 x Smithing

Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
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Renown: 5, for helping a Lightning Knight.
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Comments: My first Kieran thread!

I liked how you started the thread, with Kieran waking up to the sound of hooves. You described his fear of being found and his defiance very well. And what more, those opening paragraphs made me curious about his history and why exactly he had become a deserter!

The conversations with the innkeeper and Partisian Brachland and the other knights were well-written and quite entertaining, and I liked the headlines that you added to each post.

You called Kieran “Oram” once though!

You described Kieran’s helping the horse and working on the horseshoe in detail which makes me wonder if you have done some research or some actual experience in that regard. Either way, I found it interesting to read, and I wonder how Kieran’s/Wilfrid’s story will continue!

Enjoy your rewards!

P.S.: I would have added “Discipline” to the list of skills used. You described Kieran remaining calm and agreeable with difficulty when he was working with the horse, for example.

P.P.S.: Could you include your skill levels in the review request next time, please? I know that Kieran’s only Novice now, but that is bound to change!
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