Unexpected Visitors

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26 Ymiden 720

Horse-apples dried into disks of fuel burned in Dan's small hearth, giving a thicker, muskier, scent to the rising smoke than woodsmoke offered. More disks sat on a makeshift rack in the sun, drying into more fuel, the output of a good morning's work. He'd parked his open cart and pitched his tent upwind of the hearth to reduce the risk of fire, and the slight breeze rippled the hanging sides of the tent. His two ponies, Cloud and Smoke, as grey as their namesakes, grazed nearby, tails swishing occasionally to ward off flies.

Dan himself was seated on the ground near the fire, ruefully examining the worn out sole on one of his battered shoes and hoping he could manage to patch it somehow. His only other footwear was his boots, and although they were cosy and comfortable in Zi'da and Cylus, they were rather too warm for the Hot Cycle. He sighed, and fetched one of his cured rabbit skins, as well as his leather-working kit, and reminded himself to keep an eye on the sun - he needed to check his snares while there was still light to see by. There was a bowl or so of bone broth left in his pot from yesterday that he could reheat for tonight's meal and as yet, only scant food stored for the leaner, colder seasons, that he would rather not dip into during a season of plenty like this one.

He carefully traced the outline of the shoe onto the cured hide with a bit of burnt twig, and cut round it with his knife, trying not to spoil the hide by wavering off the traced line. The leftover pieces, he cut into thin thongs to use to fasten the new sole to the old upper part of the shoe. This meant poking small holes in both the sole and the upper with his leather-working awl, and then poking the thong through the holes and pulling it tight. It was harder than it looked. The pieces kept sliding against each other so that the holes went crooked, and the thong wasn't the easiest thing to thread through the holes in the first place. Sinew might have been easier, but he was almost out of decent sinew. When the weather cooled enough that the meat wouldn't spoil before he processed it, he'd try hunting deer again, and success there would re-supply him. For now, he made do with what he had, tongue poking out of his mouth in concentration. He was three-quarters of the way round the shoe, when Cloud snorted and he looked up.

Both ponies' heads had come up. They definitely heard something out there, coming closer to his camp and they had their ears forward in interest rather than back in fear, which meant people, or horses, or both. Dan dropped the shoe well clear of the fire, and snatched up his spear as fear curdled deep in his gut. People always meant judgement and expectations he couldn't meet. He shaded his eyes and peered out across the grass for whoever it was. He must look a sight, he knew, with his cloud of pale hair like the dandelion clocks he'd named himself after and the scars lacing his tanned skin, barefoot, wordless, and wary in leggings and a ragged shirt under the afternoon sun.

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Verbena was perched on the crown of Dollop’s head, reins slack in her hands as the elderly sway-backed mare waddled her way along the treed path. It was the duo’s first day on the road and Verbena was radiant with misplaced confidence; although perhaps a more appropriate emotion should have been trepidation over how to properly care for the ox and horses, set up camp, or any of the usual traveling tasks. However, it was early afternoon and that evening’s tasks were the last things on Verbena’s mind.

Instead the little Tunawa’s attention was on a difficult line to the travel song she’d been working on since leaving Rharne at dawn. She swayed as she sang, the throat latch she had rigged to secure her to the bridle straining to keep her wiggling form in place.

“Ho He Ho He!
I spot a little chickadee,
He chirps at me,”


She threw her voice, imitating the trilling Chickadee-dee-deep of the helmeted passerine.

“Ho He Ho He!
I spot an Eastern Phoebe,
She whistles at me,”


Again she threw her voice in typical Tunawa style imitating the raspy chip FEEE-beee of the black beaked and footed common bird.

“Ho He Ho He!
I spot a collared towhee,
He chewinks at me,"


Drink Teeeea! she trilled the two-part call with a querying sharp pitch change. “This is where I get stuck….” She moaned.

“Ho He Ho He!
I spot an Antpitta?"


"That doesn’t really rhyme in Common now does it?” She asked Knives as they crested a small hill that teetered on a glen. Verbena was so caught up in her own head she hadn’t noticed that Dew, the younger of the mare’s, had caught a stone that had embedded itself against her frog laming her for the last few legs and didn’t notice Dollop’s ear flick when she noticed, without exuberance, the scent of other horses.

It wasn’t until she saw the long grey faces of two ponies, ears attentively swiveled on the loud group, that she realized they’d come upon another traveler. It wasn’t often anyone noticed her atop Dollop’s head. At only a few thumb lengths tall she was almost undetectable if it weren’t for the brilliant plumage of purple flowers on her head. It was usually her obnoxious nattering that made her presence known first.

She drew Dollop up short, scanning the undergrowth for the ponies’ owner and immediately dropping her eyes to the pale haired man hunched with spear in hand. He had a healthy tan, was barefoot and had none of the flattering accoutrements common in Rharne. Instead, his aesthetic was reminiscent of the less opulent Desnindian style – albeit a tad more ragged.

While Dollop was less than interested in the strange horses, Dew was nickering and pacing with youthful exuberance at the strange smell. With the pressure of several tiny tugs the slipknot that had been struggling to keep Dew attached to the caravan finally came loose. The mare wandered her way past her mother toward the strangers dragging the lead along the ground.

“Sorry sir!” Verbena called out, straining to project her voice over the distance.

“I think we lost a soldier!” She joked at Knives, nudging Dollop towards the trio in the bushes to retrieve Dew. Meanwhile, the mare had taken the opportunity to introduce herself to the strange greys.

Uh Oh! Verbena gulped as Dew pinned her ears and gave the closest mare an unfriendly nip on the neck. Why are horses never polite to strangers? They could learn a thing or two about courtesy. Verbena thought as apologies bubbled from her lips. Dew, however, had other plans and had turned around to try and bully the greys with her broad ass swinging into them threateningly.

What do I do? she fretted, not wanting Dew to instigate a fight.


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Two horses, and a caravan, and someone with a cheerfully apologetic tone, Dan realised, his gaze flicking from one to the next. Even as that much registered, one of their horses pulled free of its ties and came ambling forward towards his own ponies, ears pinned back, in an unfriendly manner. It also appeared to be going short on one leg, which meant it was hurt somehow, or at least needed inspecting. The combination of the lame leg and the ties that could pull loose that easily spoke of inexperience somewhere along the line and he gritted his teeth on a wave of exasperation. You looked after your animals, always. They were as essential to being able to travel on land as fire was essential to living out in the wild. You could manage without for a while, if you had to, but only a fool thought it was a good idea.

The exasperation put extra snap into the sharp warning hiss Dan gave through his teeth, a sort of "Hzzt," sound, but it wasn't enough to prevent the strange horse nipping Smoke and trying to swing its hindquarters into the older Cloud. Cloud sidestepped, as if she was avoiding a protruding branch in the forest, then came back to shoulder the strange horse away from her daughter, sending out strong "boss mare" signals with the carriage of her head and tail. The strange horse resisted for a moment, then reluctantly surrendered to Cloud's authority, even as the second of the strange horses hurried over, a knot of something bright purple nodding on its poll.

Dan scowled, set his spear down where it would both be safe and easy to grab again, and reached for his horse care kit. "Your horse," he signed with anger and almost insolence in his gestures, as he jabbed a finger at it to make quite clear which he meant, "is lame. No foot, no horse. No horse, no traveling. Don't you know anything?"


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He stopped long enough to jam his feet into his boots, because going barefoot around strange horses was a good way to get himself hurt when they put their very hard, heavy, hooves, down on your soft, unprotected feet. Then he walked up to the four horses, doing his best to project calm confidence, and gathered up the trailing tether rope that the lame horse had dragged along with it, before any of the horses could trip on it or get tangled in it. To be fair, he did sometimes ground tie his own ponies, but for one, they were trained not to move around much when he did that (part of the 'tying' business), and for two, ground tying didn't involve long ropes trailing all over the ground.

The new ones were also mares, he saw, when he got close enough. That made four stroppy mares, but thankfully no competing stallions. Cloud was already bossing them into line as he held out empty hands for the new mares to sniff so that they could get his scent before he started to handle them.

He addressed the lame horse first, still with a grip on her tether, and ran a hand gently but firmly down the lame foreleg from shoulder to fetlock. His probing fingers didn't encounter any warm spots that hinted at inflamation, which narrowed the issue down to the hoof itself. He eyed her, saw the pinned back ear, and was braced and ready when she shifted to knock into him. He hissed back through his teeth, a softer, gentler sound than his earlier warning, and tapped the lower leg in the usual signal for a horse to lift its foot. She shoved him a second time, and then grudgingly complied. He took a firm grip on it and began to clean out the dirt, finally locating a stone wedged up against the frog and prising it free.



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Dandelion:

Knowledge:
Leatherworking: patching a shoe
Leatherworking: cutting narrow thongs
Leatherworking: punching holes with an awl
Leatherworking: stitching two pieces together
Detection: spotting a limp
Mount (Equine): no foot, no horse
Animal Husbandry: checking for inflammation
Animal Husbandry: cleaning a horse's hoof

Loot: -
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Wealth: -
Injuries: -
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Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

Verbena:

Knowledge: -
Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
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Magic XP: -
Skill Review: -
Points: 15

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Comments: You write a wilderness survival/field craft PC very well in my opinion, Dandelion. Your posts were quite detailed, and I enjoyed the atmosphere that you created. I also found Dandelion's thoughts as to how people always meant judgement and expectations he couldn’t meet interesting. I wonder what his experiences with other people have been like so far.

Enjoy your rewards!

Verbena, if you come back and want knowledges, send me a PM, please, and I’ll edit this review request.
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