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A Dream of Spring

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Vhalar 51, Arc 720

In the waking world, winter had finally arrived, after an unusual heatwave that had constituted the cause of some concern in the Mortalborn’s opinion. The streets outside the Obsidian Prism where he lived were covered with a thin white blanket that seemed to be made of countless shimmering crystals. When he awoke to Emea that night though – he had decided to call the process of moving from the waking world to a lucid dream that, even though the comparison was lacking – he found himself in a meadow that was covered with lush green grass though.

Flowers bloomed all around him, flowers in pink and white and pale red that were shaped like stars and that he didn’t know the name of – he knew very little of matters of botany – but that smelled sweet. He could see bees and butterflies, and somewhere in a small grove that was not too far away, birds sang. Next to him there was a small stream. He looked at it for a moment and listened to the sound of the water before he turned away and walked on, silently wondering what this particular dream meant.

Normally, he dreamt of the Obsidian Prism, or the Academy, and sometimes of the fortress in the Cold Mountains where he had first met Llyr – it only existed in his dreamscape so far, but not in any permanent fashion. He had never dreamed of spring though, of the return of life after a long winter. Maybe that was the answer though? Were his dreams influenced by his mental state? Did he dream of flowers and fresh grass because he had been reborn again, in a way, because he had changed, because he had been transformed in a way, because he had become a mage and learned to walk in dreams?

He pondered that question for a few moments before he turned towards a path that he had detected. As he walked down said path, he slowly began to recognize his surroundings. It had been … it had to have been nearly four centuries since he had been in that place, nearly four centuries since he had lived in Rynmere. He had been twenty-five or thirty then, and not yet familiar with what exactly being a Mortalborn entailed. He had not developed any abilities yet, or realized that he didn’t age normally, although he had already known who his father was.

A lot of his memories had faded over the course of his exceptionally long life – he had met so many people, and done so many things – but certain memories remained, and always would. He had forgotten some of the details of the faces of the people that he had been close to, how they had moved, the way that they had dressed, but he could still remember certain conversations, and the last words that those that he had been close to had ever said to him.

Certain places, and certain events had been engrained into his memory. He did not remember every single house anymore, or every detail of those houses, or every person that had lived there, but he knew that he would reach the small rural settlement where he had worked as a doctor and alchemist at the beginning of his life would be just around the bend.
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The houses only had a single floor, for the most part, and were made of stone, with thatched roofs. Only a few houses that were located in the center of the settlement were a little higher – and his own, that was located some distance away from the rest – or had been. He was aware of the fact that this was not the real house, that the real house had long fallen to dust, and so had the people that had lived in them once upon a time.

Once upon a time, the sight in front of him would have filled him with pain; nowadays, there was curiosity instead though, about what exactly he would find and why he had found himself in such a dream, of a place long gone. He had come to treasure his Mortalborn nature and the fact that he didn’t age. He did not wish to become human anymore, and neither did he wish to be like his father. In his opinion, his father’s people were not free.

He decided to walk on. As the first houses came into view, he noticed something that was quite surprising. His dreams were empty at least half of the time, if not more frequently, maybe, because he enjoyed the silence and the peace which carried over from the waking world. This time, he could hear voices though as he walked down the path that led to the valley where the village was located. He could hear laughter, and music.

There had always been some sort of festival back then, to celebrate a birth trial, a wedding, the passing of the seasons, or … it seemed as if he had arrived just in time for the spring festival. He stopped for a moment and leaned against a nearby tree, arms crossed over his chest and watched – he could see the settlement better now. A stage of sorts had been set up in the town square, and men and women wearing their best clothes were dancing on it.

All around the stage were tables and chairs where people enjoyed their food and drinks, and children ran around between them, laughing and playing. The sight in front of him momentarily brought a smile to his face, and it made him wonder why he was dreaming that particular dream again.

Apparently, he had just been about to return home when he had become lucid (although it was not the home that he owned in the waking world).

Why was he dreaming of a dance though? Did it have anything to do with the ball in Rharne that he had been invited to and that would take place in less than two seven-trials?
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The son of Ziell pondered those questions for a few moments as he watched the stage in the distance and the people that seemed to be having so much fun. A part him wondered if trying to analyze his dreams was counterproductive – maybe he should not question them, but enjoy them and live through them instead – but he could not resist doing so entirely. Throughout his life, he had been someone who wished to understand and bring light into the darkness, and the world of dreams was more confusing – and fascinating – than most of the things that he had studied before, and a source of endless wonder.

As the bits went by, he could not help but wonder if he should close the rest of the distance to the settlement and join the dance, or if he should just continue to watch it from a distance. There was something in him that wished for a bit of harmless entertainment, for something that had no impact on the world as a whole, even if it was just in a dream. Another part of him was quite content where he was though.

Finally, he made a step forward though, and then another one until he had reached the settlement. As he approached the square where the stage had been set up, a young woman, with red curls and rosy cheeks extended a hand towards him, smiling at him, and a man, dark-skinned and with black hair, soon joined them. Together, they walked onto the stage. The musicians at the edge of the stage, he noticed, had just started a new song.

The Mortalborn had never been a particularly good dancer. He had never been particularly interested in such activities before. His training in armed and unarmed combat had ensured that he was not entirely graceless, but he had no illusions as to the fact that the effect of his training was limited, even when it came to a very simple dance such as the one that he was taking part in. That didn’t matter in the least though. It didn’t matter if he got the moves wrong, if he was too slow or too fast, or momentarily stopped because he didn’t know how to continue and because his sense of rhythm was negligible at the best of times.

This was not about perfection, and there was nothing to gain or to lose. There was no competition, and the people around him just laughed at each other’s mistakes and were having fun. They were hardly masterful dancers either. In fact, very few of them seemed to have had any kind of formal training. This was not a competition. This was about entertainment, about forgetting all the worries of the world for a few precious bits and about celebrating the start of something new, and that was something beautiful and something to treasure. There had been too few events like this one in his life recently.

He danced, first with both the woman and the man, and then with both of them separately, until the world around him began to fade, the dream ended, and he woke up to the sound of a knock on the door. His servant Elias was there, telling him that breakfast was ready. He would have to be at the Academy a bit earlier this time. A lot of work still needed to be done before the start of the science fair that would take place a few trials later - and his upcoming trip to Rharne.
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Doran's use of dreams continues to surprise me in the manner of his utilizing them for introspection. As always, your descriptive writing is beautiful - but I truly enjoy reading what's going on in Doran's mind. You do an excellent job of taking the reader on that journey from watching the dancing to joining in and how that became his decision. Even the thoughts about the seasons and why he settled on Spring for this retrospective was intriguing.

As a side note, I commend you on your ability to move between writing for Doran and writing for your other characters. Each is distinctly different and it's not an easy task to do and do well....but you do!

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