• Memory • Trial of the Makubwa Lori

During his youth, Sor'an finds himself in a sticky situation while playing a game of hide and seek.

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Trial of the Makubwa Lori


38th of Saun, Arc 710

Sor’an stepped quickly and quietly, his body crouched low to the ground. His eyes, crisscrossed with a fresh witchmark, scanned his surroundings. He knew his quarry was here somewhere.

Something caught his eye: an imprint on the ground. He paused, body tense. Tracks. His head swiveled, following the prints to a patch of bushes at the base of a tree. They had been disturbed recently. This might be where-

His quarry bolted from the brush, startling some passersby on the streets of Desnind. The figure was making a last ditch attempt to lose Sor’an. The young half-human leaped forward, grabbing his friend by the arm “Got you Ok’yan!” Sor’an laughed as Ok’yan let out a sigh and dusted off his hide pants.

Ok’yan looked to be the same age as Sor’an, about 13 arcs. With dark bronze skin and long black hair tied back, Ok’yan was a full Sev’ryn through and through.

The Sev’ryn cracked a smile before adopting a facade of anger “You only found me ‘cause of that fancy-pants magic” Ok’yan shook his head in mock disappointment “Never thought you would stoop so low as to cheat during hide and seek Sor’an, wait till the Elders find out.”

Sor’an scoffed “I did not cheat! I don’t even know how to use it like that” he said in defense. A sly look overtook him “Besides, I don’t need it. I could pick up your stench from across Idalos” his face contorted in disgust, holding in his breath ”It lead me right to you.”

The two boys burst into laughter as they starting roughhousing.

“Hey! You two!”

The boys turned their heads, their bodies frozen mid takedown. A familiar figure made her way through the crowded street, bolting between individuals and giving out apologizes along the way. Her black braided hair whipped past her as she came to a quick stop a short distance away. Before them stood Chi’eja, the final third to their triumvirate. They had all been friends since they were children. Her green eyes looked them over for a moment as she regained her breath.

Her body tensed, ready to start running again. “There you are. Come on, everyone is waiting at the Itoju” she said between heavy breaths.

Sor’an scrunched his brow. The entrance to the Makubwa Lori? They were supposed to meet back up at the Temple of Moseke in the center of Desnind. “Why the Itoju?”

“I’m not sure, Ki’won and the older kids wanted to go there,” she said rolling her eyes. “He probably has something planned.”

Sor’ans’ expression hardened. Ki’won was always trying to cause trouble.

“Well, let’s go see what he's got in store for us” Ok’yan smiled. He shoved Sor’an off and made a dash for the Itoju. “Race you!” he yelled back, laughing as he ran.

“Hey! No fair!” said Chi’eja as she ran after him.

Sor’an stood there for a moment smiling, silently thankful for his friends, before taking off.

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Ki’won stood before the assembly of youth, ranging from 10 to 14 arcs old, totaling well over a dozen members. The dynamics of playground politics in full swing. Ki’won and the oldest kids stood before the Itoju.

His hair was long and light brown. It bounced around freely as he gave a speech. His skin a dark earthy tone, and his eyes a piercing light brown.

“I’m well aware of the bravery gathered here," he said as he paced about like a general before his troops. Sor’an and his friends listening intently along with the others. "But now is the chance to prove it. We stand before the Itoju" he looked towards the earthen tunnel, held up by two trees known as the Twins. "Beyond this point is the Makubwa Lori. My proposal is simple. We will take our game out into the wilds" he pointed out into the forest with a flourish. "Same rules. We split into seekers and hiders, seekers must find and capture the hiders.”

His young peers considered the proposal. Speaking amongst themselves in hushed tones. Sor’an spoke among his friends. He shook his head "I don’t know guys. This seems dangerous. Why go into the Makubwa Lori when we could just play in Desnind?”

Ok’yan grinned at Sor’an "Come on, where’s your sense of adventure? We can lookout for each other.”

Chi’eja, however, agreed with Sor’an and was the first to speak up. She met Ki’wons’ gaze and frowned "The Makubwa Lori is filled with monsters and beasts. Besides, the suns will set within the next few breaks. We can’t be out there when it gets dark. It’s too dangerous”

Voices of approval could be heard within the assembly. Some of the kids saw the sense in her words. A few even began to stand as if to leave. If this continued and Chi’eja could sway the others so easily away from Ki’won, he would be letting his authority as eldest go to a child! He had only one avenue of attack. Ki’wons’ eyes narrowed, suspicion painted across his face as he addressed the crowd "Hmm, could it be that Chi’eja is… afraid? No braver than a common Masallaci?" A collective gasp ran through the youth. Being compared to such a skittish rodent creature? Chi’eja was too headstrong to let such a thing go. She was cornered.

Chi’eja sat there aghast before jumping to her feet with her brows furrowed "Me, brave as a tree rat?" She strutted up to Ki’won, poking him in the chest "Well, I’ll have you know I plan on marching right into that forest." She crossed her arms, still brewing with anger.

Ki’won raised his hands up disarmingly, a smug smile on his lips "I knew you would come around." He looked to the others. Those who refused to go were now splitting from the group, but they were few in number.

Ok’yan walked up beside Chi’eja "I’ll go to, no sense in breaking up a perfectly good hide and seek company" he looked back to Sor’an, a silent question passing between them.

Sor’an sighed. If he had his way, they would all stay here. The forest was too dangerous to go alone. Which is exactly why he had to go with his friends. They could stick together and watch each other's back. He couldn’t stay behind. Sor’an nodded as he stood "Fine, I’ll go." A smile cracked across Ok’yans’ face. He laid his arms across his friend's shoulders, pulling them in as the group made their way under the Twins and into the Makubwa Lori.


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The remaining kids gathered in a small open glade within the forest. The thick canopy gave way in a wide berth here letting the sunlight shine down. Surrounding them, they were met with the dimly lit, densely packed forest where they would be hiding.

Sor’an bit his lip, his eyes darting around the dark treeline. He turned to his friends, Ok’yan and Chi’eja, and said "Just be careful. We should try to stay together, if we can." The Makubwa Lori was vast and held creatures left over from Lissra’s plague. There was a reason hunting was done in parties as opposed to hunting alone.

Volunteers were asked to be seekers. After a series of rock-paper-scissors games, two people are left to seek. One of those seekers being Ok’yan.

Sor’an and Chi’eja stood side by side as the seekers took their positions in the center of the glade. Ok’yan gave Sor’an a determined look before covering his eyes and belting out the countdown.

Sor’an sprinted as fast as he could away from the center of the glade. He heard Chi’ejas’ feet pounding against the ground behind him. They reached the treeline and bound into the forest. He started to slow once he was out of sight, the sounds of the countdown fading slowly behind him.

Chi’eja came up beside him as best she could in the densely packed trees "You see a good spot?”

Sor’an slowed to a stop "We shouldn’t go too far. We could get separated from the group." He looked around and spotted some trees with large roots that bulged out of the ground. "There! We can hide between the roots of those trees”

Behind them, the sounds of the countdown ceased. It had begun. Chi’eja started toward the roots quickly "Good enough, let's go!”

The two nestled into the roots, Sor’ans back to one tree and Chi’ejas to the other. They crouched across from each other, a small earthen path between them.

Sor’an was still, ears straining to hear if anyone approached.

He thought back to what Ok’yan had said about using attunement. He didn’t know how to find people with his powers, but supposedly he could mask his own frequency. Would that help him hide? He had no idea. Only one way to find out.

Attunement was a strange discipline. It was often described as being perceived through sound, or some other sense, but to Sor’an it was something entirely new. Saying that a frequency sounded like something was pure simile. It made as much sense to say red was hot, angry, and violent as it was to say the same of any frequency or note. Words did not exist to properly describe the feeling of attuning, it just was.

The fledgling mage clenched his eyes shut, concentrating as he painted a picture in his mind. He could feel his own frequency, as he had been able to soon after initiation. It was like a clear pond. Notes, like fish, swam under the surface, making it ripple and churn ever so slightly. The notes would reveal their meaning, all one had to do was pluck them from the water.

Sor’an didn’t care to discover new notes today. He wanted to try something different. He reached out to the pond, unsure of how to use the power of Static. His fingers graced the water, sending out circular ripples through his frequency. Something like this maybe?

He reached into the depths of the water. It felt warm warm and almost... alive. Scales brushed against his hand as fish swarmed around him, ready to be plucked out and asked for their secrets. He moved them aside even as he felt the young spark within him reach out for the new notes. He thrashed his hand about, splashing the water around. The fish scattered. Sor’an felt the strange tug of his ether being consumed. It was still unfamiliar to him. The ripples propagated, building on one another until the water was no longer clear but a churning mass, obscuring all the secrets it had to tell.

Sor’an let the image go, and opened his eyes. Did he do it? He didn’t feel particularly different. Though his frequency did seem more… chaotic? He looked up to Chi’eja, who gave him a weird look.

She opened her mouth to question him, but as she did footsteps sounded nearby. They both pushed themselves against their perspective trees, trying to remain unseen.

Sor’an heard the voices of Ok’yan and another kid drawing closer. "Oh! Look there, that would be a great place to hide." The rustling of nearby brush made Sor’an and Chi’eja tense. They were going to be found if they didn’t move.

Chi’eja mouthed to Sor’an "Run." Before Sor’an could react, Chi’eja burst from her hiding spot and ran in the opposite direction of the voices.

Ok’yans’ voice rang out "There’s Chi’eja!" Sor’an could only remain still as the seekers ran past him.

After a few trills, Sor’an let out a breath he hadn't realized he had been holding. Did this mean that, with Static, he could hide himself? They didn’t find him, but they also only showed up after he had done… whatever he had done. He would have to ask his mother when he got home. Sor’an shut the flow of his ether off, like the dam of a river. He felt his frequency calm from its chaotic state, returning to normal.

That was too close. He looked into the depths of the woods. He would have better luck if he went further in. He bit his lip. Ok, only a little further in.

Sor’an listened a moment longer. Hearing no one around, he left his spot and quickly went to find another, this time deeper in the Makubwa Lori.

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The young mage poked his head out from under the moss covered log he had found. It had been a few bits now since he had found this new spot and hadn’t heard anyone nearby.

Sor’an slowly crawled out of his hidey-hole. Maybe he should head back, after all, the game could be over now for all he knew.

He looked around and searched for where he had come from. Was it… that way? He started walking.

He kept walking for a time. The oppressive sound of the forest surrounding him. The bustle of the city had long been replaced with the song of birds and the movements of unseen animals.

Wait, he didn’t recognize that patch of vines. Sor’an stopped. Or any of these trees. This path was all wrong.

He groaned at his own stupidity, burrowing his face in his hands. This was so stupid. He was stupid. Now he had gotten himself lost in the feking Makubwa Lori.

The reality of the situation started to sink in. His heartbeat started to quicken. Ok, retrace his steps then. He turned around and stared into the forest, the light from the sky dimming.

His eyes wide and darting, he started forward, trying to retrace his steps.

This way. Or was it this way? No, it was over this fallen branch, right? Sor’an quickened his pace as his heart beat faster and his surroundings grew less familiar.

No, no, no! This was all wrong. The low-pitched screech from a bird much too big to be friendly sounded off in the distance. Sor’an looked in all directions, his head darting around as every sound became a potential danger.

His breathing was ragged. He could barely hear himself think over the blood rushing in his ears. He could yell for help. Would that draw in predators? He looked up, trying to get a glimpse at the low hanging suns. Of course not, it’s too late in the trial. He couldn’t figure out cardinal directions from suns he couldn’t see. Attunement. It could find things. Maybe he could find his way back that way?

His grasped at his spark desperately, letting his ether flow. He felt around with his spark blindly as if reaching out to a frequency. It was all blurry, undefined, bland, grey, and textureless. He could feel nothing unless he attuned to a specific frequency.

He started running through the forest. He searched with eyes and spark, looking for anything to lead him back to safety. His spark gave him nothing.

The path before him opened up, revealing a small clearing. Here, light shone dimly onto rocky terrain where the trees wouldn’t grow.

He walked to the center where a large boulder resided and leaned against it, resting the back of his head against the cold stone.

Tears full of terror and frustration threatened to boil over. He took a deep breath, trying to calm himself down. He had to be able to think straight if he was going to get out of here.

First, he was wasting ether. He would overstep if he continued. He released his spark, cutting off the flow of ether. He knew Attunement could help him get back, but he needed to try a different approach. For that, he needed to focus.

Sor’an climbed up onto the boulder and sat with his legs crossed. His breathing was rapid. He closed his eyes, trying to bring his emotions under control. He pushed the frustration down, the terror, the self-doubt.

The sounds of the forest pulled at his thoughts. He furrowed his brow in concentration and tried to tune them out. As the bits passed, the sounds faded from a gnawing cacophony to a gentle whisper.

He took a long deep breath. His heart slowed as he exhaled. He focused on his breathing, it was all there was. In and out. Rhythmic. Hypnotic. Meditative.

Inhale.

He gently reached for his spark, his will steady. The image of the pond slowly came into focus. Its surface moved with his breath.

Exhale.

He looked down. The shore was wet, the impressions of his feet lead away from the pond and into the… forest. The pond was surrounded by the forest.

Inhale.

He left his perch and followed the tracks. His feet making more even now. He opened himself up to the power. The small pool of ether that resided in the young mage flowed forth.

Exhale.

He could feel it now, the bigger picture. It wasn’t just the tracks in front of him. He sensed where he had been before. He almost smiled through this trance as he realized how he had been walking in circles.

Inhale.

Here was where Chi’eja and himself and hidden before. He was getting closer.

Ringing.
Ringing.
Ringing.


It all shattered.

Sor’ans' eyes fluttered open. He felt… bad. Like he had been stretched too thin. But that was a much more distant feeling. The more pressing feeling was the constant, high-pitched squeal in his ears. Was this overstepping? He let go of his spark.

He clasped his ears. The sound didn’t go away. He snapped his finger and heard it faintly. The ringing was overpowering, but he wasn’t deaf.

He could just made out something in the distance. A scream? Chi’ejas scream?

Sor’an raced forward.

He broke out into the glade and looked for Chi’eja. He spotted her chasing after someone else in … a mask?

It seemed most of the others had already made their way back and were now standing around laughing at the scene. Some of Ki’wons gang had masks on or were holding them while Ki’won himself was being chased around by Chi’eja wielding a particularly hefty stick.

Ok’yan noticed Sor’an and shouted something at him with a smile. Sor’an tried to piece together what he said for a moment.

Ok’yan must have noticed the confused look on Sor’an. His face drew concerned and came closer. The mage just barely made out what his friend said: "You ok Sor’an?”

Sor’an offered up a weak smile and nodded "I’ll be ok. Got a little lost. What’s going on?”

Ok’yan let a laugh escape despite himself. "Ki’won tried to scare us," he said, looking back as Ki’won was pleading for a truce. "Chi’eja didn’t like it very much.”

The two laughed for a moment and joined the others. After a few bits, the last of the group returned to the glade and they started moving back to Desnind. Sor’an began to explain what had happened after Chi’eja and himself had been split up.

Ok’yan looked on at Sor’an with a mixture of awe and concern for his friend "So how exactly did you get back to the group?”

Sor’an stuck out his tongue, a sly look in his eyes "I told you, It’s your stench. It led me right to you.”

They laughed together, walked back through the Itoju, and overcame the trial.

Only to be met by another when they awoke the next morning. And the next. And the next.

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Attunement: Static
Attunement: Static: NOT an Invisability Cloak
Attunement: Compass
Meditation: Fading Out Background Noise
Meditation: Helpful With Domain Magic
Meditation: Focusing on Ones Breathing

Makubwa Lori: Easy to Get Lost In
Makubwa Lori: Location: The Glade We Played In as Kids
Desnind: Location: Hiding Spots

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Injuries: Light overstepping penalty. Sor'an will experience persistent blurry vision for three trials after the date of this thread.
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