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30th Cylus, 717
She was stuck here. It had been three trials and she had admitted to herself that she was stuck here. In truth, Celeste Andaris had known it the trial that she arrived and found out that she had been sold off to Lord Xander Krome. Celeste Krome, is that what she would become? Or would he take her name, as she was first in line and he was not? There were so many questions but the thing which really wasn’t lost on the young noblewoman was that she had accepted it. It was not surprising, of course, she had been born to be married to a man for the gain of the house, but what gain the mighty house of Andaris got from selling her off to a Krome dog she did not know. She had, quite literally, been thrown to the wolves she considered.

Wolves, though, were the prey of the dragon and Celeste Andaris was a dragon; so she had been told from her earliest memories, the silver dragon of Andaris her mother had called her and she would survive. More than that, she would flourish because she would not allow anything other than that to happen. They were going to have a formal dinner this evening and Celeste wanted to look her best; she had requested a maid to help her get ready and a young woman by the name of Anna had been sent.

Celeste had picked out a blue dress which was simple and figure hugging. It had sleeves but a deep neckline and Celeste knew that it looked simple and elegant. Which was, of course, not at all what was fashionable, but Celeste did not care about what others wore, she was a leader, not a follower when it came to fashion. So, she handed Anna the dress and looked at it somewhat critically. ”Do you think it would be best to press it, Anna?” She looked at the young maid with a smile.
“I think so, Lady Andaris. I’ll see to it whilst you’re having a bath, shall I?” The maid and she were of much a similar age, Celeste thought.
”Yes, please Anna. Thank you. Do you normally act as a personal servant?” Celeste asked as she and Anna made their way into where the bath had been drawn.
“Yes, Lady Andaris. For the Baroness.” Celeste nodded and checked that everything she could want was here.
”Thank you, Anna. I’ll take it from here.” The young servant looked surprised, like she had expected Celeste to need or require help getting into the bath, but Celeste had no intention of being in such a position of vulnerability.

Of course, Anna left and so Celeste dropped her robe and lowered herself into the bath with a sigh. She was quite content to stay here and pretend that there was nothing outside the room than warmth and comfort. The scented water lapped against her and the room was warm from the roaring fire in the hearth. Celeste lowered herself down so that only her head was above the water and she lay back and closed her eyes.
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It was allowing herself to relax that was the mistake, of course. The feeling of the water lapping against her, the gentle crackling of the fire and the warmth of it caused her to almost doze off before she felt, as she always did, the hands wrap around her throat. Celeste’s brown eyes shot open and she sat up in the bath with a splash as she remembered, vividly, the feeling of her brother’s hands in her hair as he dunked her head beneath the water again and again. His words, whispered into her ears as he promised that he would break her, Gasping, Celeste breathed in a great whooshing gulp of air and as she did she could smell it, the alcohol on his breath as break her he did.

She couldn’t breathe, Celeste realised as she clutched at her chest and gasped for air. Her heart pounded in her ears and she felt herself boiling in the hot water. It was boiling beneath and around her, it must be. That was what it was, she realised, that was why she felt like she might be dying. Celeste clutched on to the side of the bathtub and continued to gasp for air as the panic attack took a firm hold. Her chest tightened, her heart thudding and she gasped, desperately trying to suck in what air she could.

Somehow, she scrambled out of the bath, believing that the water around her had been the problem but as she fell to the floor, slipping out of the bath and hitting her leg against the side of the tub with a sickening thud, the feeling did not subside. It was everywhere, it was all around her. It was in her heart and her blood and it was Peake, she knew, who had put it there. Peake who had done this to her and yet it was her weakness, her foolishness. She had pushed him, pushed him to do it and then when he had come to try and apologise to her, she had been so cold. A snake, not a dragon, that was what he called her and now he was dead. Celeste let out an enormous breath and in so doing, she started to sob.

Ten bits was how long she lay there, sobbing. She didn’t care that she was naked and soaked from the bath and more than she cared about the bruise on her leg which was already coming to surface from where she had fallen out of the tub. She gasped for breath, she gulped and she sobbed her way through those ten bits fighting desperately to stay alive. However, soon, Anna would come back Celeste knew so she got up and pulled her robe around herself.
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The room was a mess and Celeste could not, in good conscience, allow that so she wrapped a towel around her head to keep her hair in place and stop the wetness dripping on to the floor. Then, she started putting down towels and mopping up the chaos. It was like that, on her knees in the room with a towel as a mop that Anna found her and the young maid rushed forward.
“Lady Andaris! What’s the matter? Are you alright? Here, let me help you.” She moved to help Celeste up and, as much as Celeste didn’t want it, she had to admit that she needed it. “Lady Andaris, look at your leg,” Anna fussed and insisted that the noble woman lean on her as they made their way to the chair.

Once there, Anna knelt in front of her and looked up at Celeste with concern in her eyes. “I should ask Badon to get a doctor to look at this, Lady Andaris.” Celeste was already shaking her head.
”No, Anna, it’s fine. I was getting out of the bath and I slipped, that’s all. It looks worse than it is, but that’s just because of my complexion,” she lied. ”I’ve always bruised easily. Like a peach”
The serving woman frowned but did not argue, exactly. “Let me put some arnica on it, Lady Andaris?” Celeste had no idea what arnica was but it if would stop the throbbing agony, then she was happy.
”If it will make you feel better, Anna, of course.” She gave in, gracefully. Anna moved to the bedside table and fished out a small pot of salve. Celeste wondered why they kept it in the bedside cabinet but then decided that she was happier, at this point, not knowing.

Anna applied the salve which started to work to ease the throbbing a little and Celeste smiled at her. ”Thank you, Anna. I’m so sorry, I didn’t mean to make a mess.”
“Don’t you worry about that, Lady Andaris. We’ll get that cleared away in no time.” Anna said and she fussed around a little more, drying off Celeste’s legs and checking that there was sufficient salve. “There we are, now I’m going to get a cold compress to put on that leg, Lady Andaris. Stay there, please?”
Celeste nodded with a wry smile. ”I will behave myself, Anna.” It was the best she was going to get out of the young noblewoman by way of a promise but, when Anna came back a few bits later, Celeste was where she had been previously. In the meantime, of course, she’d stood up and felt the pain in her leg, but been pleased to know that she could hold her weight and so the leg wasn’t broken.

However, she sat back down before she got told off by the servant. Celeste considered with a smile that it was true, that statement. When Anna returned, Celeste smiled at her and tried not to wince as the maid applied a cold compress to her shin. “I’m sorry, Lady Andaris, I know it hurts.” Anna apologised earnestly.
”I’d think we can get to the point where you call me Celeste, Anna, don’t you?” Anna looked up in horror.
“I… how about Lady Celeste?” The idea of calling a noble lady by her first name was quite astonishing to her and Celeste smiled. This was, after all, Baroness Krome’s personal maid. It would do not harm if she was positive towards Celeste. No harm at all.
”That is better, at least. Thank you, Anna.” Celeste gave a wry smile.

Anna looked at Celeste’s leg and asked, although she suspected she knew the answer. “Shall I tell Lord Krome that you will not be attending dinner, Lady Celeste?” Celeste’s eyes registered her answer long before it came from her mouth, although that only took trill.
”Absolutely not. We’ll get me dressed then I wonder if you’d help with my make up, Anna?”
“It would be my pleasure, mi’lady.”


After Anna had helped her dress, working efficiently to get her into the blue dress she had chosen, Celeste was sitting at the dressing table, looking at herself in the mirror. Baroness Krome had made sure that there were many cosmetics available, but Celeste had brought her own. ”I have no wish to be too made up, Anna. I like my make up subtle.” Anna looked at her in some surprise and Celeste smile. ”I know that it is not the fashion, but I would much prefer it. Just a slight accent to the eyes, please and a tint on the lips?”

Anna complied, of course, and she had to admit that the young noble looked beautiful. Celeste chose the dark grey eyeshadow, the light pink blush and a gloss for her lips. Anna applied them carefully and Celeste watched how she did. ”I like what you’ve done with the eyeshadow, Anna how did you do that?” Anna smiled and showed her.
“Most people go from the inside out? With the shape of your eyes, Lady Celeste, we can just emphasise the corners. You see how lightly I’ve put it across the lid? There’s no need.”
She then moved and brushed Celeste’s hair, arranging it so that it was sleek and looked like it fell naturally, even though it was coaxed into falling the way it did and she was done.

Celeste looked at the finished product and she smiled to Anna. ”Thank you. Really. You’ve been very helpful and I will be sure to mention it to the Baroness.” Anna smiled in gratitude and asked if there was anything else she could do. No, Celeste told her, other than to take this cold compress away. When she was gone, Celeste lifted the skirt of her dress and bound the leg tightly so that she would not show that she was in pain when she accompanied Xander to dinner. Thankfully, the walk was brief and so she thought it would be fine.

Then, she waited for her intended to knock the door, signalling that dinner was ready.
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Name: Celeste Andaris

Knowledge:
Cosmetology: a subtle makeup
Cosmetology: with certain eyes it's sufficient to just emphasize the corners
Deception: Lying about the cause of an injury
Discipline: Getting up and carrying on in spite of everything
Discipline: Hiding the fact that you are in pain
Endurance: The will to survive and flourish
Etiquette: If you are going to have a formal dinner, you want to look your best
Psychology: What a panic attack feels like
Psychology: Experiencing a flashback
Self: A leader and not a follower when it comes to fashion

Loot: -
Injuries: a bruise on your leg that will eventually go away on its own
Fame: +1 for being nice to Anna and allowing her to adress you by your first name
Devotion: -

Magic: These points cannot be used for magic!

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 0/5 (solo)
Structure: 5/5

Comment: I loved the way you described Celeste's panic attack. I felt as if I was right there with her. I always thought that Celeste was a very arrogant young woman, and truth to be told, I wasn't sure if I liked her very much, but in this thread she was anything but arrogant. I pitied her. She seemed so vulnerable - but strong at the same time. She's a great character, and I can’t wait to find out how her relationship with Xander develops!

Structure-wise your thread was good. Here and there I felt like a comma was missing, but I didn't notice anything major.

If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions, please don't hesitate to send me a PM.




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