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The seven Duchies of Central Rynmere and their respective baronies, cities, towns, villages, and landmarks each overseen by a Duke of one of the seven noble families and ultimately controlled by the King of Rynmere.
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20th Ymiden, 711
16th Bell

“We’re almost there, my Lord.”

The servant had said that almost a break ago, time which Peake was apparently counting as there was nothing else for him to do. Watching through his carriage’s window got boring quite fast, especially when what waited outside was the ugly Burhan landscapes. Traveling on his own carriage, which was stripped from every droplet of alcohol that may have waited in the small cabinet beneath Peake’s seat. His father, a strict man that disliked a shameful son, had thought about everything. If Peake was feeling melodramatic, he would notice that even the curtains of the carriage were missing, his father having ordered them removed as if his son was to hang himself rather than accept his fate. Alas, the Lord had not realized he could’ve hidden the sight of the Burhan countryside if only the curtains were in their place.

In truth, Peake’s mind was divided in thought on this hot Ymiden afternoon. Most of his thoughts revolved around his upcoming promotion to Captain within the Moseke Knights. The rumour was out, and whenever the Andaris heir recalled the scared eyes of his work associates, a devilish smirk manifested on his lips. They all knew how he had gotten the promotion, with whom he moved down the street, the name of his superior… It had been an interesting couple of arcs for Peake, he recalled. Ever since his superior laid eyes on him, they saw the opportunity to help each other. An Andaris to help a Captain get away with his vices, and a man that helped a lost nobleman find his way into a life. Together, with name and skill combined, they slowly made their stamp onto the Kingdom: a stamp forged with extortion, assault, rape and even some murder. Peake was alienated from most of those crimes, of course. His mentor had changed Peake’s life, given him a confidence he never had before, while at the same time offering him a bright future. Peake was happy with the direction of his life.

He wasn’t happy, however, about the endeavor he was to endure on this day. His father Benji, a stubborn and logical man, kept spinning his web in Peake’s absence, and finally the web had captured another victim: another bride-to-be. Some Burhan girl had gotten the ‘honor’ to marry the infamous heir of Andaris, a twenty-three year old Peake that remains unmarried for all these years thanks to the strength of his will. Peake knew he didn’t want a marriage, and so he knew he wouldn’t have one. In these matters, the heir was a terrorist. Few families offered their daughters to this monster of a man, whose head was apparently too thick to recognize that he, as a son and heir, had no right to decide whom to marry. Thankfully, Peake was too old to fall victim to his father’s beatings, which in a way made it easier to get his own way. If only his deeds were witnessed by poets or novelists he knew a franchise would be born. Alas, his mischievous adventures were to remain as a memory only available for himself.


Not a few bits later and the carriage came to a halt. Was this it? Peake glanced through the window, and immediately sighed as he spotted the sight of the Burhan village rising in the horizon. Not too far nor near, it was at the ideal distance for Peake to ride into town. A sigh escaped him, before Peake himself escaped the limits of the carriage. Outside, the heat was far more powerful, especially under the intense sunlight that seemed about to boil Peake’s flesh right off. The nearby servants hurried to retrieve the umbrellas, which they struggled to rise at Peake’s height, whom needed to be protected by the sunlight. The caravan had halted for the moment, as preparations needed to be made before the convoy entered the village. Men and women needed to dressed up, guards needed to clean their armors and their spears needed to have the black banners attached. The ugly servants needed to hide, and the slaves had to be healed enough to avoid a disgusting sight with the gashes in their flesh. Sighing once again, Peake moved down the line of animal-drawn vehicles to find the carriage of his parents, which surely wanted to warn him about the importance of this day.

It would take a while.
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17th Break


Finally, the Andaris caravan approached the Burhan Village with its slow pace, an almost funerary sluggishness that made Peake roll his eyes many, many times. Being the main doll in this charnival, the nobleman was dressed in a ceremonial armor as black as coal itself, salve for the silver colours that adorned and contrasted with it, giving him a rather imposing if not scary appearance. House Andaris was like that, thought Peake, as their fame, wealth, and influence was something minor houses like House Burhan wouldn’t be able to easily dismiss. To get the honor to house these guests, and even have the opportunity to have someone as low as a Burhan opt to marry the Heir to the Andaris Duchy was no small deal. Everyone in the Andaris caravan expected the Burhan to have prepared something grandiose to receive them, otherwise they could easily turn around and go back the way they came.

Peake would be thankful if that happened, of course. Peake, riding his black stallion between two guards that traveled on foot carrying the Jacadon banners of House Andaris, felt like the center of attention. The fluttering of his black silk cloak behind him reassured him of that, yet that was no excuse. He did not want to marry, no matter to whom or how many riches would he be given. Thus, as stubborn as he was, the center of attention knew he had to sabotage this as soon as possible. Peake’s clean-shaved face and perfect haircut were unnoticed, as instead his face –or his expression, to be precise- were the main point of focus. The riding man entered the town with an expression proper of a very, very slow man that wasn’t just hit on the head as a child, but instead it was bashed several times to accomplish the dead eyes, the open mouth, and the longest line of drool ever recorded in the history of Rynmere. To call Peake simple with that expression on his face would be a grave offense to simple men and women. Peake’s act transported him so deep into the character that suffered from a severe retardation that he felt he needed a round of applause for this masterful act.

He did not want to marry. Even if he had to ridicule himself, he would never agree to an arranged marriage. Thus, it was better to pretend to be retarded.
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"LORENA!!! You must look your best, Mr. ANDARIS is coming to town," Lorena's mother had frolicked "You are to marry one of the kings cousins!"
Elegantly dressed in long blue silks laced with silver, Lorena stood awaiting the arrival of the pompus Lord butt-face from the city of little kings, she'd forgotten his name already. The only thing she knew about the man arriving on the horse other than the fact he was a noble (probably because her mother was talking and she very rarely paid any attention,) was that he was known for being 'charming' in the least friendly of fashions. Anora, one of the servant girls had been sure to remind her to be careful of her manners.

Don't say this, don't stand this way, make sure your hair is a certain way. Surely for a person you were forced to be stuck with, they wouldn't give a damn. Whatever logic that had to her family had apparently gone out the window and instead they'd done the best job they could at making the best appearance of the house. Back and forth, break after break the servants ran about checking the flowers, cleaning the floors, putting new sheets on bed, dusting while her mother went of screaming like some kind of rabid monkey and her father stood watching her like a hawk, silently judging her like he always did.

"Remind me why you don't want him to marry my sister?" Lorena whispered to her mother, kneeling toward her ear as she impatiently eyed the entrance.

Unimpressed with her conduct the mother raised her nose "You are fine young woman, you will make a good wife."

It was bollocks. Complete-And-Utter-Nonsense. As far as Lorena was concerned, she was coming of age and her parents had probably had just about enough of her, what better way to do so then give her to the least desirable noble in the Kingdom. "That's a cute joke mother," she replied, jumping in her boots "It's awfully cold. Maybe we can kiss their butts more and then go inside quicker."

"LORENA!" her mother said, raising a hand to slap her around the face if not for being halted by the fact their visitors had finally arrived on large, beautiful dark steeds and among them was the man to be her future husband.

Curious to see whom the might Mr. Buttlord might be, the young woman had a wild glint in her eyes when she spotted the younger well dressed individual adorned in Andaris colours. Welcoming the men with a bright smile, Lorena was quick to break formality and ran over to them "I can't fault your timing sirs!" she exclaimed, cautious when approaching the horse as not to startle it "Any longer out here with present company would grow loathsome." The corners of her mouth lifted into an impish grin as she eyed the stoic, silent men at the noble's side "One might say you would suit me if the knots in your brow were not so deep my lord. Is it the view that hinders your happiness or the thought of arranging to be married to a child?"
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Peake’s acting was… not well received. To state he was hoping for shocked gasps and delicate hands going before the painted lips of the ladies was an understatement. He wanted to look so moronic that whoever made the marriage arrangement fell over and pulled at their hair, which obviously did not happen. What did happen, however, was that some sort of girl in some pretentious blue dress approached Peake and his stallion by surprise, thus causing Peake’s concentration in his play to be broken. His eyes gained focus, and so his simple-minded façade was destroyed as he quickly swiped the thread of saliva he had let hang from his mouth for more than three bits. Just like that, Peake was defeated, which spawned some rage within him, staring with fury from his high seat down at the pompous lady. She seemed as overblown and irrelevant as any other Burhan.

As much as he wanted to spit directly into the girl’s face and slap her afterwards, the Andaris servants that carried banners interrupted what would’ve been a good solution to this personal crisis with a loud cry.
“Lord Peake Maxos Andaris, Firstborn of Benji and Mary Andaris!” They announced, ending whatever chance of an irresponsible reply from Peake’s part.

Soon after, the horses of both mother and father crept from behind before they positioned themselves near their sons’ steed. Their eyes immediately shot towards Peake, a silent warning being sent with their lack of speech. The Andaris and the Burhan haven’t been in good graces, but a marriage could open the opportunity for future cooperation. As so, Peake had to behave, even when he gazed down upon the devilish brunette.
“Are you Lady Lorena Burhan?” Peake glanced towards his father, whose indifference clearly stated it was he was well aware of whom he had chosen to have his son marry. In a swift and well-executed dismount, Peake left the back of his black steed to instead plant his armored feet on the ground, his height making his presence known with not only elegance to serve as a lure for stares. His eyes immediately leered towards the female, her frame quite easily spotted under the well-sewn dress that tried to hide her curves. “You seem like a woman to me, if you don’t mind me saying…”

Just as Peake said this, and his eyebrows wiggled a moment later, Benji Andaris appeared from behind to deliver a harsh and dry slap on his son’s shaved head. The sound itself was enough to shut Peake, and perhaps half the fort. Benji, a dark haired man with a poise that demanded respect even from the dead, shined a smile as he gazed towards a familiar face nearby. Having recently attempted to form a friendship with Naoko Burhan – Lorena’s mother -, the Baron was eager to get rid of his son. Having ruined the best matches already, Lorena was not that great of a choice for marriage, but she was still a noblewoman. Despite her not being an heir of any kind, her family still held titles, and their marriage could open the doors to new business opportunities between the regions. Stepping towards her, with Mary by his side, Benji would kindly bow towards Naoko.
“Baroness Naoko! It is so nice to see you once again.”

Peake, already becoming moody after his father’s public humiliation, limited himself to stare at the brunette donned in blue. Mary sent her son a warning glance from afar, to which Peake rolled his eyes and bowed elegantly before Lorena, even asking for her hand if she was to allow him to kiss it. If she did not offer it, Peake would gracefully faint his hand’s motion and use it to compliment his bow. However, if she was to offer it, Peake would gently take her palm and, instead of kissing it, he would shamelessly spit in Lorena’s palm.

Whatever happened, Peake would stand up straight afterwards, a great white grin shining on his face.
“You must be the cunt I’m supposed to marry…” Peake whispered, already accepting the challenge of sabotaging this marriage.
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Neither polite nor plain enough to comply to the account of Peake's thoughts on her, Lorena was quickly put off from the men on knightly looking horses. There was something off about these people that she couldn't fathom, not that she was fond of the idea of being forced into a relationship with the oh great and might lord dickhead-daris of the capital. Even if she was (and quite clearly so,) amused by Peake's countenance or there lack of.

The young girl raised a brow and grinned at him "And I suppose you the woman basher," she mocked, stepping away from him "people talk of you Peake as much as they do me. A self absorbed man who is arrogant, violent and completely repulsive. If that's what you are ready to consider me as then we want this wedding as much as each other. Not at all."

Blunt and bored of being polite, her astute dark hues studied Peake for a moment. He wasn't an ugly man, in fact man women might have considered him handsome if not for the dull, drained look on his face. Not particularly interested in him any more as a person, the girl figured she'd make light of the visit and at least try and talk to his guard.

"Did you hear that Burhan?! Under the supreme judgement of our Lord Peake Andaris I am a CUNT," Lorena cried to the high heavens, shouting for all to hear. All eyes turned to them with mouths agape in confusion "humour me Lord Benji. Why did you ride all the way out here if this is how we were to be received?" she asked of Benji whose eyes sharpened at her words, her mother equally as so.

"A marriage of peace?" Lorena spat at Peake's feet "No marriage with a man that pertains to address a stranger with a foul mouth as yours Peake Andaris is one of a peaceful nature." Once again Lorena would probably cause trouble with her household and instead of giving Peake time to react she ran a few paces away from him, only looking back once more so she could see the fury on the face of her betrothed "I will consider your son when he is worthy of consideration."
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Come and get your Loot!

(There's plenty more where that came from)


LORENA:
Rewards:

  • Story: +5
  • Collaboration: +3 (2 posts)
  • Structure: +5

These points can NOT be used for magic.

Knowledges:

  • Etiquette: Proper Behavior to Meet Your "Intended"
  • Etiquette: Proper Dress to Meet Your "Intended"
  • Negotiation: Trading Insults to Achieve an End
  • Peake: His Entourage Has Some Fine Horses
  • Peake: Willing to Share in Marital Sabotage
  • Politics: Making a political Microcosm of a Single, Rude Exchange
  • Psychology: When You Know You're Being "Married Off"
  • Tactics: Mouth Off When You Know They Don't Dare Strike You

Loot, Loss, Injuries, Devotion:

Nothing to speak of.


Fame:+/-5

Peake is well-known enough that this will surely be talked about.
And where some will be taken aback by a mouthy bride-to-be, others will love her for it.


Comments:

Too bad Peake retired.
I'd have loved to see this "debate" continue.
I could have made notes of the insults for later use, I bet. ;)
You got good mileage out of only 2 posts, so I gave you 5 for story.
No Structural problems and 3 Coll. for 2 posts is per the guide.
PM me with any comments or concerns :D
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