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25th of Saun 716

The seven Duchies of Central Rynmere and their respective baronies, cities, towns, villages, and landmarks each overseen by a Duke of one of the seven noble families and ultimately controlled by the King of Rynmere.
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[Venora] In Saun, Everyone Suffers

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The man watched Duncan stride for him. The mercenary's horse galloped violently through the ranks as the man leaned and turned to rip through the undead with his blade - the very gladius Alistair had given him as a payment for his excellent service. He admitted he felt a lot better knowing that the man was fighting valiantly for his life. But it wasn't enough.

Alistair was on the verge of being lost. The minions not being slaughtered by Duncan had finished splitting through Marcus' forces that had converged to defend the Venora. He was alone, surrounded by the rotting corpses of the Coven, his faction. The danger they posed to him would momentarily be lethal. This was a gesture by the ones who controlled them - now is your time to escape. This momentary pause in their advance was his ticket to Andaris, alive and well, while Marcus's band would endure the suffering that came with the convergence of the undead horde.

The nobleman kicked his horse on the side and yelled, Hyah! as a command to the beast to move. He turned to look at Duncan and beckoned for him to follow, slash through the undead if he needed to. Alistair trailed past the group and ahead of the traveling retinue, far removed from the Coven and Marcus both. As his horse beat through the road at an alarming pace, the man steered it the best he could to duck into the tree-line. The last he'd see of what laid behind him was a full view of the carnage; it was likely that the majority of the group was now dead or dying, and while the undead were beginning to be driven back, the harm on Marcus' forces was evident. It was an utter bloodbath. The road was soaked in red. Horses and men laid on the floor, ripped through, their guts torn out.

The Venora faintly grinned as he could see Elyna from a distance, guarded by Faith, now no longer quite as disadvantaged as she had been before. Marcus' party was no longer an overwhelming majority standing over the Lady and her slave. Alistair's work was in fact complete. The man dove into the trees and continued to his left, eastward, considering they had been marching south. He went further and further for a time, ensuring that Duncan had followed behind. As they finally came to a clearing, the man looked to his guard and companion somberly into the eyes. He said nothing, merely staring as he pulled a conduit of magical power from his pouch and lit it up with energy.

The mage recalled his memory and knowledge of the outside of Andaris, locations that few or none would dwell. His arms waved forward as he used ether to rupture the matter before him apart, leaving it open and exposed, the colossal sound of ripping being cast onto the clearing. A large portal with the appearance of a blazing gate appeared before them, a compression of space and distance both. It would take them to the great city they had begun to tread towards, his conduit stabilizing it for the vast distance.

It was the first time Duncan had seen his magic. Would he accept it? Would this be the end of their dalliance?

He could not know. A look of utter defeat overcame him as his face turned from the mercenary, and the man quietly marched on, he and his horse stepping through the portal he'd prepared to send them off to Andaris. Duncan would hear only the quiet and restrained voice of his Lord. "I'm sorry," the man said, "but you must follow. You will die if you do not." With those words, he and the animal stepped through the Rupture, and the smallest of gallops became many miles. They were propelled - though when they came out of this tear in space, the mage did not imagine things would be as they were now. He consigned himself to heartbreak, accepting it without tears or aching. It was the path he chose.
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In the aftermath of the battle, it was the silence which was most noticeable. Having heard nothing but screams for a heartbeat which lasted an etermity, Faith was in a state of utter panic. She had jumped, fallen and otherwise scrambled on to Lady Burhan's horse and she had done her best to stab at the zombies that were there. But they had been dissipating by the time that they got there, their numbers depleted and their lines broken. It was over, she recognised and she stood, having slid down off the horse at some point and just.... looked. It was carnage.

There were dead bodies everywhere, and Faith knew dead bodies. She did. She knew them and she understood them but by Famula she didn't understand ones that carried on moving! That was beyond her ken and she stepped one foot forward and then stopped. She lowered her head and she prayed, calling on Famula to take these souls now, to allow them rest now, even though their rest had been denied them before. To cleanse this place and those within it whose souls should be in Her Blessed Embrace. As the cacophany of noise in her head died down and she found the silence that was her devotion, she closed her eyes and just.... breathed.

It gave her the calmness she needed to look around, lifting her head and seeking out Lady Burhan and catching sight of her with a smile and then turning to look for Lord Venora. She looked, and she looked and as the realisation ignited around the camp that he and Duncan had disappeared, Faith heard the noise start again. It was different noise, this, it was shouting and people getting organised, but still. She looked down at the knife in her hand and it was then that she realised.

She was covered in blood.

Faith had stood, elbow deep in the blood of the dead many, many times, but this was different. She couldn't quite place why it was, but as she looked at Lady Burhan and the knife fell from her shaking hands, the realisation of how it was different started to hit and she saw the droplets on the blade as it fell, tumbling to the ground whilst her body almost convulsed with the shock of what was, effectively, the girl's first proper experience of combat.

It was warm. The blood was warm.

She didn't understand how it could be and, as that thought travelled through her shocked mind, Faith took a step towards Lady Burhan then fell to her knees and threw up.
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Duncan was relieved to see that Alistair had no plans to stay and fight, and the mercenary sheathed his sword, retaking the reins in both hands, snapping them to guide the horse around the horde to go after Alistair. Tac took little urging to follow the noble and his horse into the tree line, his tail whipping violently as he galloped after, ears pointing forward. Instead of guiding the horse through the monsters, Duncan instead made his wag around where they had gathered, allowing Tac to pick up more speed and momentum, but also lengthening the distance between himself and Alistair, if only for the moment. Duncan risked a quick look over his shoulder, eye's finding Elyna and Faith quickly, the two woman in full gallop atop their horse, looking valiant and powerful as they made their way through the chaos.

His horse gained on Alistair's steadily once they'd cleared the road, drawing up behind the other man steadily, until they were almost shoulder to shoulder, though Duncan kept Tac behind enough so that he may follow Alistair's lead. Now that the two were out of direct harm, the adrenaline of the fight was beginning to turn Duncan giddy, and a wide smile split his face as he thundered through the tree's beside Alistair. His gaze fixed to the lord for a moment, and a swell of affection and admiration rose in him as he took in the striking figure he cut atop his horse, his sword at his side. He looked noble and handsome, hair a mess from the wind and blood flecked up his boots and his horses legs.

They reached a clearing and Alistair stopped. Duncan steered his horse closer, wanting nothing more than to grab for the other man, perhaps pull him into an embrace, or even better, pull them both down to the ground where they stood, consequences be damned. He was halted in his tracks when he met Alistair's eye's, smile faltering somewhat at the look of sadness there. There was something in his fist, and all of a sudden in blazed. Tac fell back a step, surprised and Duncan didn't try to stop him, feeling much the same as his brows furrowed and his gaze snapped from Alistair's face to his hand and back again.

Duncan flinched back a incredible sound that Alistair's actions drew forth, nearly slipping out of his saddle and falling to the hard ground. He saved himself though, clutching at the horn, mouth agape and his eyes as wide a saucers. Tac whined in fear, stepping side to side anxiously. Duncan was blinded a moment by the immense light, and all he could do was stare, totally unable to comprehend what was going on before him. He watched Alistair go ahead, unsure of what do think or feel.

It seemed the horse wanted as little to do with the portal as Duncan did, but when Tac's ears began to twitch toward the sound of beasts howling and snarling from the way they'd come, he took a few hesitant steps forward, which Duncan encouraged with a jab of his heels, not stopping until they'd reached the mouth of the gate. At least one thing he's said is true. Duncan thought, frowning heavily and a pit forming in his stomach. I will die if I stay.
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"Let your plans be dark and impenetrable as night,
and when you move fall like a thunderbolt"
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Faith

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

Fame +2

Deception: Using Chatter to Hide Important Information
Deception: Truth is the Best Cover
Deception: Hidden Weapons
Medicine: Soothing Herbs
Medicine: Don't Scratch that Itch
Medicine: Pregnant Women Need to Eat
Persuasion: Getting People to Look After Themselves
Psychology: Unobtrusively Helping People Who Don't Want Help
Construction: Making a Wagon More Comfortable
Investigation: Reading Body Language
Intelligence: Watching Contacts
Sewing: Difficult on the Move
Cosmetology: Lemon Juice and Water on Hair for Shine
Strength: Flinging Barrels is Easier with Adrenaline
Necromancy: Flipping Horrifying
Blade; Dagger: A little too up close and Personal for Undead
Meditation: Your Faith Can Calm You

I noticed a little bit of.. awkward wording, but it was mostly in the speech portions, so it may just be Faith style of speech, as I've not read a lot of your recent posts to my shame! An example of this would be in the first post with the knife in the corset. Nothing technically wrong, just a bit.. off. Since most of it was fantastic however, and you write Faith very well! Her need to please and serve, and how quick and keen she is. The most observant and knowledgeable person in Rynmere may wind up a humble slave, love it!

Also 'Jolly good, oh my' might be my favourite line.

Elyna


Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

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Medicine: Soothing Herbs
Medicine: Don't Scratch that Itch
Psychology: Fear, More Effective than Chains
Sewing: Difficult on the Move
Sewing: Can be Comforting
Sewing: Using a Lucets for Lace or Braids
Mount: Horses May Shy at Undead
Mount: A Known Mount is Preferable
Blade; Long Sword: Swinging A Sword for a Quick Warm-Up
Blade; Long Sword: Proper Balance to Start a Fight

Elyna, I always have trouble coming up with comments for you, because you're writing is just all around enjoyable. Although she's grown, you keep Elyna as a person consistent. If I saw a post without knowing the poster and with all names removed, I would still know if it was Elyna, and that is pretty amazing.

You did miss a tiny bit of editing though! "Then man threw her sword across at her, still in its sheaf before turning his horse."

Alistair


Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

Fame -2

Field Craft: Using (Gross) Trail Signs
Deception: Pretending to be an Ally
Politics: Coordinating with Allies
Logistics: The Details of Coordinating with Allies
Leadership: Stepping Up and Taking Control
Necromancy: Undead Can Take More Damage
Necromancy: Undead Taking Blows to Disarm Opponents
Tactics: Keeping Track of the Battlefield
Tactics: Kill the Leader and Use the Confusion
Blade; Sword: Mounted Height Aids in Cleaving Skulls
Coven: Will Kill You if You Prove Unworthy
Rupturing: Fast Travel for Tactical Advantage
Rupturing: A Decent Escape Route
Psychology: Magic Scares People

You sneaksy manipulative bastard, I approve! As a side note, obviously given your subtle and blatant uses of magic, you may feel free to use these points for magic skills.

I will mention because I have to be extra hard assed with staff.. Please be careful with rupturing. You wrote the sucker, you know how it works, but you're pushing it a bit here. The smallest of gallops became many miles? From your write up;

"When utilizing Chasing - quick and easily casted portals - they can maintain a portal on both ends within seventy feet of one another, and can blink this distance as well. Compression-based portals are finally available to the Rupturer at this point, but they are dangerous to cast and require a deal of focus, preparation and memory (or vision) of the specific location. Compression-based portals at this point can travel within one kilometer of your location, but they drain quite a bit more ether than other portals and due to their slow wind-up time are nearly impossible to use to escape dangerous situations."

You did mention remembering some out of the way places but... It was right on the edge of suss.

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Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

Fame +2

Mount: Long Hours Make Sore Butts
Mount: Displeased Horses Will Misbehave
Mount: Horses May Shy at Undead
Mount: Trampling, Effective in a Melee
Mount: Galloping Through a Battlefield
Logistics: Enough Mounts for People
Animal Husbandry: A Friend Animal and In Control Human Helps Calm
Blade; Gladius: A Bit Short For Mounted Combat
Blade: Striking Spines Effective Against Undead
Rupturing: For Fast Travel
Rupturing: Horses are Not a Fan
Alistair: Is a Mage

Theres a bit where you marked out the word hours, because you knew it wasn't what you wanted in the Idalosian setting, but then you never actually went back to fix it. Otherwise all was good! Tac might be my current favourite mount on the site.

Also your formatting makes me happy. Look how neat it is! So neat <3 Pedantic, but I do not care!
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