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“Doesn’t ring a bell, sorry,” the merchant said, shaking his head. He gave the Eídisi an apologetic look, then moved away to serve one of the customers checking out his stall. Yana simply moved to the next one.

“Excuse me. Have you seen this woman?”

She raised one of her arms, a sheet of paper clamped between her fingers. The girl tending to the stall took it gingerly, studying it for a couple moments, a frown creasing her brow.

“Perhaps this one might be more familiar?”

The Yludih handed over a second sheet of paper, but it was met with the same reaction as before. Just a furrowed brow and squinting eyes. The girl shook her head, then tapped the woman next to her on the shoulder to get her attention. Yana’s expression soured momentarily.

“Ma, the Knight wants to know if maybe you’ve seen this person,” she interrupted the older woman’s chattering with the customers. Just like her daughter though, the woman couldn’t tell Yana anything. She just stared at the document for a brief while, then shook her head and handed the papers back.

“I’m afraid I can’t help you,” the woman spoke, “what’s this about?”

Ah, there it was. She’d expected as much. Mongering gossip as well as vegetables.

“She ran away from home,” the Yludih lied smoothly, “we are pretty sure she left wearing a hooded cloak.”

“Her family must be pretty important for you lot to be out and about yourselves, huh.” Gauging the expression on her face, the vegetable dealer believed she had it all figured out. “But I guess they must be worried sick. I’m sorry I couldn’t be of help. Best of luck, though.”

As she turned away, Yana caught the start of a hushed conversation starting up, gossip already beginning to spread under her very nose. While she and her colleagues were doing their best to search quietly, there simply was no way to stop the turning of the rumor mill. If people wanted to talk, they would, no matter if they were paid not to. Or if they were contractually bound to zip it. Since the containment of information was out of the question, they’d decided on misinformation. Perhaps she’d get in trouble for it, but knowing how rumors got out of hand, she could easily dismiss it as the truth being twisted along the way.

Besides, it was better this way. If they wanted a chance to find this criminal, they couldn’t make a fuss before she was in their sights. Just quietly follow the tracks, closing in one step at a time, and pounce when they were close enough. Slow and steady won the race. Haste made waste. All that jazz.

For that reason, Yana had asked one of the artists hired by the Hand to draw up five copies of the criminal’s description, provided by one of the Storm Breaker’s crewmembers more than happy to see the tormentor be chased by the long arm of Justice. It had taken a while to get the initial drawing right, with the artist constantly having to edit and change certain details as they popped back into the sailor’s mind, but eventually the end result had been satisfactory. Another five copies had been made of the drawing, this time hooded, as it was very likely she’d be trying to keep her face hidden.

Ironically, that only made it easier to find her.

While cloaks were common enough, people only ever wore the hoods during rain, snow or hail, more often choosing hats or bonnets when temperatures dropped. Hoods were just one of those articles of clothing that were generally accepted as a cheap way to hide your identity, just like a scarf wrapped around the lower half of the face. No doubt both plays and stories had something to do with it, since almost all thieves and other shady figures wore either one or the other. Sometimes both. It had become visual shorthand for ‘hey, this character is up to no good’. And hoods in particular screamed ‘I am trying to be inconspicuous’, rather than full on criminal, but that didn’t change the fact that it attracted attention.

Speaking of, the woman they were after really wasn’t good at laying low either. The Black Cat Inn had been trashed, the owner harassed and beaten up. Furniture had been broken, pewter mugs dented. According to the innkeeper he had been visited by a fury in a hooded cloak. A fury looking for a certain Francis Higglebottom who supposedly would be staying here. Yet, when he told her he didn’t know who she was talking about, she’d grabbed him by the shirt, spewing threats of violence. When he said there wasn’t a Francis staying here, she had gone to town on his face. He’d shown her the ledgers then, intimidated enough to just want to get her to leave. Sadly, the absence of the name she was looking for, the fact that the poor man had been telling her the truth all along, well, it hadn’t done him much good. The tavern had suffered for it.

More damages to add to the list. More assault, more battery, more vandalism. No arson this time.

In all honesty, it was surprising that Francis Higglebottom wasn’t staying at the Black Cat’s, but on the other hand it really wasn’t. People assumed that the Black Cat’s reputation came from the fact that the Knights didn’t come there, but nothing was less true. The Inn simply promised the anonymity of the customers renting a room. They didn’t tell any Jim or Joe who asked whether or not a certain person was or wasn’t staying there. Even the Knights weren’t exempt from such treatment, unless they had a warrant. Reputation or not, obstruction of justice wasn’t worth it.

It seemed that Francis hadn’t been satisfied with just that, which implied that the man wasn’t entirely pure and innocent either. However, as long as he didn’t start causing trouble as well, there was no real need to go find him. If the Knights couldn’t find him, then the one hunting him wouldn’t either.

Well, should it become necessary to go talk to Mr. Higglebottom, Yana had a couple locations in mind he could be hiding at.
Though that wasn’t a priority at the moment. Finding the woman, however, was.

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“I’ve seen her, yes.”

Partway through formulating an expression of gratefulness for the cooperation, and kept out the feelings of disappointment for the non-helpful nature of the expected answer, Yana’s mind had to do a double take, needing a moment to process what she’d just heard.

“You have seen her?” she echoed, somewhat incredulous.

The old woman nodded, adjusting the handbag slung over one shoulder.

“Yesterday, in fact. I was peoplewatching from my window – I live by the market, you see—and she was leaning against a wall for a while. Watching people as well, I imagine. Didn’t look very happy though –ah, I couldn’t see her face at that point, but the way she was holding herself? Impatient, angry… Like a, an animal. Yes, a wild animal recently caged.”

“Where was this?” Yana prompted, eager to sink her teeth in any little scrap of extra information she could get her hands on.

The woman pointed one boney finger northwards, gesticulating as she spoke.

“Right over there, you see that house with the door that looks as if it’s been overgrown by moss? She was standing right next to it.”

It was a whole lot more detailed than the Captain would have dared hope for, but maybe there was still more to be had. It never hurt to ask, and she had a feeling that if anyone would know anything else useful, it might be this person. Some called them spying old hags with a penchant for seeing things others did not want to be seen, mostly because they would gossip about it –Yana’s neighbor back in Etzos had been cut of the same cloth, and she’d cursed the nosey gran many a time-- but they proved useful every so often. No-one could deny that.

“Do you know how long she was there for? Did she do anything while she was there?”

“How long? Oh, it can’t have been too long. I can’t say for certain, but I wager about fifteen minutes to half an hour, I suppose. Something like that. She wasn’t doing anything, no. Standing, watching. She left eventually.” The woman shrugged.

Yana tapped her jaw with her thumb, staring past the old lady for a few moments, then nodded.

“Thank you very much. This has been very helpful.”

“You’re welcome, dear,” came the response with a smile, then she turned back to continue her shopping.

As she made her way to the indicated spot, the Yludih figured that the arsonist was still looking for her quarry. Higglebottom hadn’t been at the Black Cat’s, the owner hadn’t even heard of the man, and as a result, the woman was without leads. It made sense to look for clues in densely visited areas such as markets or something along the lines, but not for a couple minutes. Staking out a location could take dozens of days, even if you could cover all hotspots of a city with sufficient manpower.

She’d left after a brief moment, which could mean any of three things: she’d gotten lucky and come across a lead right away, she’d given up, or she’d gotten impatient of waiting and had decided on a different approach. The old woman had said she looked antsy, after all.

There wasn’t anything which pointed to one scenario or the other, but that much was expected. Still, it wasn’t a dead end, far from it. If she’d been standing around here, someone should have seen her, so she could concentrate the search on this point, which should dramatically increase the effectiveness compared to asking around almost randomly.

A tap on the shoulder brought her back from scrutinizing the door and the wall. She turned to find one of her Knights standing there, something of a smug smile playing around his lips.

“She’d been standing over here yesterday,” the man, Ser Tayne, informed her, “though I’m guessing you found out as well.”

“Indeed. Anything else of note?”

“The spice merchant says he saw her leave yesterday, not even a full minute after one of his customers left. Tailing them, I think. Said he thought she was a hired guard at first, but then realized she’d been here a little while before his customer arrived.”

“Does the customer have a name?”

“He does,” Ser Tayne confirmed, leafing through his notebook. His eyes flitted back and forth over the pages while his finger moved up and down. “Here it is. Douglas Sulgaod. I’ve got his address here too. This is our next stop, yes?”

“Maybe the vendor was wrong about her tailing this Douglas,” Yana said, copying the address in her own notes, “but we have no other trail to follow. If she did not, well, all the better, but if she found a clue in him…”

“Then we have another mess to sift through,” ser Tayne finished her thought. “While I’d loathe following a dead trail, I do hope this isn’t another Black Cat.”

“Or a Stormbreaker. Though that is a worst case scenario.” She sighed. “Either way, mere speculation and conjecture will not help us catch her.”

She began walking, her companion falling in step beside her.

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Knowledge:
Investigation: using a composite sketch
Investigation: Look for witnesses
Investigation: Trace the suspect's steps
Investigation:Keep details hidden from the public if necessary
Intelligence: the usefulness of people watchers
Intelligence: lying so your target does not catch wind of your activities

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Comments: I didn’t read all the threads that took place before this, but I think that I got what this one was all about more or less, nevertheless.

I liked that you included a bit of background information.

I also found the dialogue quite enjoyable to read.

I think I’ll go and read the sequel now!

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