A Royal Tragedy

The premiere of Tristan's play. All welcome!

The capital city of the of Rynmere, here is seated the only King in Idalos.
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The King of Rynmere nodded assertively when the young Knight stared at him and, eventually responded. “This is what I want, friend,” Cassander knew that the man was a Venora: there was something in the way he carried himself, even when he was nursing a wound, that marked him as a nobleman of high birth. And the man’s features reminded him of every other Venoran-born noble he had had the fortune to meet. Tristan recognised him… from some function or another, too. But he did not know which Venoran the Knight was. He could not pin a name to the face… so he became ‘friend’.

He did not ask for the Knight’s name, though… at this stage, he could not risk appearing uncaring of his subjects, especially one who had saved his life. “You will serve me well, I know. Nothing would make me happier than to have the kin of Tristan watching my back. You will join the Ouroboros Guard!” His voice still carried, as if making a proclamation across the city for all to hear.

Sitting, the King watched for a moment as the medic worked quickly and efficiently on the Knight, before turning to face the playwright. He shared a private smile with his friend, his eyes once darting back over the exquisite form of the slave briefly, “beautiful…” be murmured softly as the play resumed, even though it did not answer the other entirely. “A truly remarkable creature. Yes, Tristan. Please, I am not so arrogant as to make this a one-time offer!

They quieted, and the King tried to ignore the hitched breathing from the Knight, as well as the general anxiety from an attempted assassination, and watched the play. For the most part, he could not concentrate on the final act, though he schooled his features - a trick learnt through hours of careful tutoring in etiquette and politics - into one of interest, even rapture. To anyone watching him, he would be the perfect audience member.

Gregg worked quickly and silently on Andráska’s leg, securing a bandage around it to keep the wound securely closed for now, until he could seek proper medical assistance. “You should have left the blade in, M’Lord…” the medic whispered, though his voice was clearly chastising, “Leaving the embedded object in a wound such as this one acts as a plug of sorts. Removing it is what has caused this blood loss.” Only then did he turn to the slave, who had not made a sound, and was clearly trying not to become a nuisance.

Ordinarily, he would not have dealt with a slave. But the Lord had asked it of him, so he roughly grabbed her hand and eyed it. “Wrap this around it. It will heal in a couple of trials.” He ordered her gruffly, pushing a second bandage into her uninjured hand and turning away. He had to ensure the prisoner was well secured, ready for the King.

The final act continued, and the King stood, followed by a ripple of movement from the sea of audience members behind him. Loudly and obviously, he clapped. He did not woop or cheer - such things were beneath him. But he smiled genuinely at Tristan, and even laughed a little when whistles were heard behind them. “Well done, my friend. A masterpiece!” He called over the noise of clapping, even though he had barely paid attention the last act. He was on edge; the remaining guards knew that, and they worked quickly to usher the audience out of the theatre. Cassander felt a pang of guilt for the Venoran... this was not the ending he had envisaged, ushering out the audience and barely having time to greet and congratulate the cast members as he had intended. He had hoped to honour Tristan properly.

But there was a man upstairs. “I must go...” he finally said, glancing to the two men on eather side of him. “I must know why. Please, you are welcome to accompany me. Though I am aware you may wish to meet your deservedly adoring fans, Tristan!” He clapped the man on the back, though it was forced slightly, his smile strained, and then he turned to Andráska, “And your leg... perhaps it should be properly looked at.

He turned to leave, though was halted by the sight of a figure at the auditorium doors. "Tristan Venora..."

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Lord Andraska directed the medic towards her and then Master did the same. It was kind of them both to treat her so well and she felt a swell of gratitude towards the two of them. Master and the King spoke about her and Faith's silver eyes met Tristan's when he said that she was 'great'. She wanted to be, for him, but the king's eyes on her did make her uncomfortable. Master didn't seem to mind it, he certainly noticed it and he looked at her then shook his head like he did not approve. Did he want her to respond differently? Faith recognised that he wasn't happy with her reaction, so she would do her best to change it. With an apologetic glance to Master she tried to let him know that she wouldn't let him down, but whether he understood that she was not sure.

She heard the King's words, of course, to Master about her although she did not say anything. After all, he was complimenting Tristan on his property, it would not be appropriate for that property to respond. However, mindful of Tristan's reactions and his apparent displeasure at her reaction to the king, she kept her face in the carefully neutral expression which was appropriate, eyes down to the ground and not being in the way.

The guard took her hand, grabbing it roughly and she simply relaxed and allowed herself to be pulled. It was strange, but it had been a long time since anyone had handled her so roughly and it surprised her. She did not show it, though, simply acquiescing to what he said and did. "Yes, sir. Thank you, sir," she replied and did as he commanded, awkwardly bandaging her hand whilst Master, the king and the others sat and watched the play. Where they went at the end, of course, was up to Master and Faith just went where he did. Although, aware of the attack on the king, she kept a close eye around, in case she needed to defend her owner in some way.

So, when someone said his name, she was ready to defend him should she need to.
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Even though the real king was sitting next to him, Tristan felt like a king as he watched the rest of the play. He had saved a life, his slave was awesome, and his actors did their job perfectly despite the assassination attempt. Well, there was one thing that he had a problem with, he decided, as Gregg simply rudely handed Faith a bandage rather than treating her. He understood why he did it – because she was a slave – but she was his slave, and she was more skilled than most of the people in the theatre, himself included.

His irritation only lasted a moment though. As the king stood up and clapped, he turned away from Gregg and Faith and looked at Cassander instead. He wondered if he should clap as well because everybody was doing so, and he really felt like congratulating himself on a job well done, but then he decided to just sit there and look thoroughly pleased instead. He proudly raised his head and smiled at the people that surrounded him.

“Thank you, Your Royal Majesty”, he replied. If the king had really liked his play – which he without a doubt had – Tristan decided, it might be a good idea to write a sequel. Of course he would invite Cassander to the premiere of that as well! He was facing a bit of a dilemma though. He really wanted to find out why the man had tried to kill the king, but he also wanted to be admired by his fans. He absolutely loved being admired!

He was just about to open his mouth and tell Cassander where he would go, when he heard the voice. He stopped dead in his tracks and looked from Faith to the king and back. For a moment he was seriously worried that Peake had come to beat him up because the character that had been inspired by him was gay and didn’t even get the guy in the end.

But then he realized how stupid that was. Peake was probably nowhere nearby - he didn’t seem like the kind of man that enjoyed going to the theatre - and the figure was just one of his many fans. He thus smiled and straightened himself. “I’m Tristan Venora”, he informed them and came closer, preparing himself for another round of praise.
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The medic instructed him that he should have left the weapon in his leg, but Andráska was too busy controlling his pain to fully deliver his next line with as much lightheartedness as he would have liked, “Yeah,” he whispered, realizing that the play would be continuing, and even with a bleeding leg and a slightly faint head, he doubted he was supposed to make much noise, “I've never been stabbed before but I'll remember it for next time.”

Andráska hoped there wasn't going to be a next time, but after that official declaration by the king, he doubted he had much choice now. He'd probably have to take some vow – and the thought made him anxious. He was more than happy to sit back and be tended to, but as the play was being instructed to continued and he hobbled to an empty seat, he settled in. More than once he found himself glancing towards the door, or his eyes were scanning the audience. It had been by sheer luck he had found the assassin after his musical solo and thought to ask for an audience. As he recalled the memory, he still felt the sheet music pressed in his back pocket, folded under his weight as a reminder. He had been on his way to bid farewell to Tristan and go home. But that began the question....

The assassin wasn't originally going to the box seats where the king sat. He had been... leaving? Where was he going? Andráska's mouth settled into a serious line, and his fingers rose to press on his lips in thought. His eyes glazed over in deep thought, focused not on the play but each head in the attendance. And then from the corner of his eyes he could see the face of the boy king.

Something in the way he sat made him also look uneasy. 'Good', Andráska thought. It meant the king knew how serious this was and wasn't taking his luck for granted. It also meant if he was being tasked with the new role of protection, he wasn't overseeing an idiot. Amusing, considering how reckless he was with his own health. With that being said, he really needed to tell him what he knew. As soon as the curtain dropped and the king rose to congratulate Tristan and pat him on the back, Andráska was gritting his teeth but forced himself to stand. He pushed off and used the railing to support himself.

“I must go,” the king said, looking at both him and his cousin, “I must know why. Please, you are welcome to accompany me. Though I am aware you may wish to meet your deservedly adoring fans, Tristan!” Then to him, “And your leg... perhaps it should be properly looked at.”

Andras tried to straighten up, to appear nonchalant as the tight bandages on his leg strained, “Andraska Venora," he started gently, "And I would like to accompany you, your Highness.” Was it rude to accept the offer? There was so much detail in etiquette that he could overlook. It was impossible to remember it all and as far as he was concerned, if the king wanted to go alone, he shouldn't have offered, “The smarter choice might be to rest, but if I am to be entrusted into your guard, I would like to know what I'll be up against.”

The king was already beginning to turn and Andráska's eyes looked to the doors. A man stood there, and the noble couldn't help the incredulous look that rested on his features. Was it just him,or were the guards tonight the most incompetent people on the planet? And then you had Tristan, who happily announced his presence and stepped forward. There had just been an attempted murder! What was wrong with these people?

Guarded, Andráska was weary to this new individual and his eyes glanced around, looking for anything he could use as a weapon if necessary, and held his breath – waiting for the worst.
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The new arrival was tall, tall and handsome. He looked every bit like a God… and, in a way, he was. The Immortal of Music had been aware of Tristan’s exploits for some long time, and had taken the time to come to watch the premier of his play. It wasn’t perfect - and the attack on the King had not helped in any way - but it was very nearly there. Zanik had been pleasantly surprised by the performance, and even more impressed by the way in which all of the players had staunchly continued on, despite the disturbance during the final act.

And while it had been the actors who saw the play through, it had been the playwright who had brought it all together, seen it through from start to finish. As the audience enjoyed it, and the King, so had he. Zanik was impressed, and could appreciate why he had felt the need to come and witness this spectacle.

Stories of your gifts have spread beyond the city of Andaris, through Rynmere and the North, and even further, Lord Venora.” As Zanik spoke, he ignored the remaining Ouroboros Guard, including the freshly-injured new recruit, who all watched wearily, hands readied at the hilts of their weapons. He ignored the slave, and even ignored the King. He had eyes for only one.

He began to approach, coming further into the light. It gave him a slight golden glow, much like those he had marked, leaving him with a distinctly not-human look. Anyone who knew of Zanik would know who they stood before. He smiled; he was no threat to anyone in the auditorium. “A man with many artistic talents, turning to writing was only to be expected. A play like this is fully deserving of the praise your King had just bestowed upon you.

He gave a small bow of his head to the boy-king, acknowledging him at last, for it would be rude not to. Then, he turned back to the playwright, “But I would see you honoured further, Tristan, if you will allow me.” He extended his hand to the lordling, still smiling. His eyes danced with something akin to pride.

If Tristan took the hand, it would be all that it took to Bless the young man with the Aura of Elithem. as energy seeped from the Immortal into his quarry. Tristan would feel a welcoming warmth spread from his extremities into his very core. It would last mere seconds, and then it would be done. “Congratulations, Tristan. It would be selfish of you not to share this rarest type of magic with the world. In such dark times, the Kingdom is lucky to have one such as you.
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The new arrival was definitely not Peake Andaris – unless Peake Andaris had somehow transformed completely and ascended to godhood which was highly unlikely in Tristan’s opinion if one considered the man’s more than questionable lifestyle. He was tall and good looking – so good looking that it didn’t even leave him entirely unaffected - and he was surrounded by a slight golden glow that gave him a distinctly inhuman look.

The young noble was suddenly at a loss for words. He didn’t try to make a witty comment, he didn’t try to prank anybody, he didn’t grin stupidly, he just looked at him for a moment, and then he abruptly inclined his head in a rare gesture of humility and respect. Even though the stranger had not introduced himself, he recognized him instantly. He had dedicated the play to him and prayed that it would find his approval.

“Zanik”, he spoke. His eyes were wide with surprise. He had already gotten a lot of praise for his plays and his sculptures, from colleagues as well as fellow nobles and a few bits ago even the king, but never from an Immortal. He hadn’t even dared to dream about that happening because there were so many talented artists in the world. “I thank you for your kind words. They mean more to me than you could ever imagine.”

As the Immortal spoke of honoring him further, he raised an eyebrow. He was confused. He had already been given one of the greatest gifts a mortal could possibly get from an Immortal – his praise. What could possibly top that? He glanced at his cousin and his slave behind him, as if he were suddenly a little self-conscious, and then he took Zanik’s hand. He wasn’t sure what he had expected, but definitely not what happened as their hands touched.

He could suddenly feel a pleasant warmth spread through his body. It only lasted a few trills, but it was unlike anything he had ever felt before or would ever feel again. As the warmth dissipated, the young noble simply stood there for a few moments, and then he began to smile. Surprise, shock and uncharacteristic self-consciousness made way to pure and utter joy as it occurred to him what had just taken place. He had been blessed!

“I’m grateful for this honor”, he replied. “And I will try to do your gift justice and use it in a way that finds your approval.” Having said that, he fell silent again, wondering what he should do now, whether he should drop on his knees or start to dance and sing because he was just so very happy. In the end he did no such things. If he continued to thank Zanik, he would probably start to get on his nerves, but it also didn’t seem right to just let him go again without giving him anything in return, so he remarked,

“You probably come from far away, Zanik. You are invited to stay with us for a while, relax and enjoy our food with us before you continue to do your work for Idalos. It’s among the best that the kingdom has to offer. There’ll be more music as well!”
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So his quarry, at the very least, knew who he was. Zanik’s smile grew wider as he regarded the impressive fellow in front of him. “It is no great toll on me to say that which is true, Tristan,” Zanik spoke slowly and calmly, his voice deep and gentle, despite his impressive - almost formidable - appearance. “It this is what inspires you to strive for your true potential - because you have not yet hit it - then the honour is also mine.

The smile widened as Tristan accepted the hand, and the Immortal of Strength and Music grasped it tightly as the Blessing of Elithem was granted to the Venoran lordling. When the strength of Zanik’s aura had seeped through their firm handshake, into Tristan Venora, Zanik squeezed the hand one final time before releasing it and taking a step back.

To honour me in return, to do my gift justice,” the Immortal’s words, whilst not demanding had slightly more of an assertive tone to them, rather than the kindness of before. “You must only do your best in the arts. Share your talents with Rynmere, with the world! A sequel of this… tragic spectacle - without the true threat to life, of course,” his gaze flickered over to the Sovereign once more, his lips curling in benign amusement, “perhaps next time a comedy?

The smile remained and the eyes twinkled as Tristan profusely thanked him, over and over. It was endearing, really. This noble lordling, raised to believe that he was owed great things, humbled by a gesture from the Immortals. “I have travelled some distance, it is true.” The Immortal conceded.

Out of the corner of his eye, he saw Cassander surreptitiously backing away, a smile on his face for his friend’s success. The King’s hand signalled for the remaining two guards to follow him; they were off to interrogate the imprisoned assassin without the loyal trio’s help. Even the King knew when to let his subjects enjoy their successes. “A plate of Rynmere’s delicacies would be most definitely appreciated, Lord Venora.” Stepping to the side, he extended his hand and bowed his head - an indication the Tristan, his cousin, and his slave to head out and join the after-show celebrations. “I hear the wine is worth a try too.
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Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Awarded Knowledge

Career: Promoted to Ouroboros Guard
Discipline: Performing Under Pressure
Discipline: Functioning Without Drugs
Emerson Sands: Attended Tristan’s Play
Etiquette: How to Act Backstage
Etiquette: How to Behave at a Play
Event: A Royal Tragedy
Faith: Prepared and Cooked the Meal for Tristan’s Play
Faith: Was invited to Talk to the King
Immortal: Zanik
King Cassander: Assassination Attempt
King Cassander: Attended Tristan’s Play
King Cassander: Interested in Faith?
King Cassander: Liked the Play
Location: Rynmere Theatre
Musical Instrument, Cello: Warm up
Musical Instrument, Cello: Tuning
Musical Instrument, Cello: Bow and Strings
Musical Instrument, Cello: Invoking Emotion
Organisation: Ouroboros Guard
Slavery: Slaves are Less Important
Tristan: Blessed By Zanik
Tristan: Has a Reward Coming to Him
Tristan’s Play: Scandalous
Zanik: Immoral of Music Acting: Costumes


Awarded Extras

Loot & Losses Injuries
None Scar: 2 inches long on thigh
Fame Devotion
+10: Promotion to Ouroboros Guard None
+30: Saving the King's Life
+5: Live Performance
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Daliane Andaris


Awarded Points

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 1/5
Structure: 5/5
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Awarded Knowledge

Acting: Getting into Character
Alufa: Handsome
Andráska: A Wonderful Cellist
Emerson Sands: Attended Tristan’s Play
Etiquette: How to Behave at a Play
Event: A Royal Tragedy
King Cassander: Attended Tristan’s Play
Location: Rynmere Theatre
Tristan’s Play: Scandalous


Awarded Extras

Loot & Losses Injuries
None None
Fame Devotion
None None
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Elyna


Awarded Points

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 3/5
Structure: 5/5
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Awarded Knowledge

Andráska: A Wonderful Cellist
Emerson Sands: Attended Tristan’s Play
Etiquette: How to Behave at a Play
Event: A Royal Tragedy
King Cassander and Emerson Sands are Together?
King Cassander: Attended Tristan’s Play
Location: Rynmere Theatre
Tristan: A good Friend
Tristan: A good Man
Tristan’s Play: Scandalous


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Loot & Losses Injuries
None None
Fame Devotion
None None
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Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Awarded Knowledge

Andráska: A Wonderful Cellist
Andráska: Promoted to Ouroboros Guard
Business Management: Overseeing Staff
Business Management: Timekeeping
Cooking: Always Taste the Food you Serve First
Cooking: A Five Course Meal Fit for a King
Elyna: Attended Tristan’s Play
Emerson Sands: Attended Tristan’s Play
Etiquette: How to Behave at a Play
Event: A Royal Tragedy
Faith: Summoned by the King
Immortal: Zanik
King Cassander: Assassination Attempt
King Cassander: Enjoys your Cooking
King Cassander: In Love with Emerson Sands?
King Cassander: Interested in Me?
King Cassander: Liked the Play
King Cassander: Planning an Event?
King Cassander: Attended Tristan’s Play
Location: Rynmere Theatre
Organisation: Ouroboros Guard
Slavery: Slaves are Less Important
Tristan: Blessed By Zanik
Tristan: Has a Reward Coming to Him
Tristan’s Play: Scandalous
Zanik: Immoral of Music


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Loot & Losses Injuries
None Scar: Across palm of hand
Fame Devotion
+30: Saving the King's Life None
+3: Gaining the Attention of the King
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Odessa Andaris


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Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Awarded Knowledge

Andráska: A Wonderful Cellist
Andraska: Soulful Musician
Cosmetology: Last Minute Adjustments
Deception: A White Lie
Emerson Sands: Attended Tristan’s Play
Emerson Sands: Stunning
Emerson Sands: The Empress of Rynmere
Etiquette: How to Behave at a Play
Event: A Royal Tragedy
Intimidation: Putting a Younger Sibling in their Place
King Cassander: Attended Tristan’s Play
Location: Rynmere Theatre
Politics: The King's Time is Limited
Tristan’s Play: Scandalous


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Loot & Losses Injuries
None None
Fame Devotion
None None
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Padraig


Awarded Points

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 1/5
Structure: 5/5
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Awarded Knowledge

Andráska: A Wonderful Cellist
Cosmetology: Shaving
Emerson Sands: Attended Tristan’s Play
Etiquette: How to Behave at a Play
Event: A Royal Tragedy
King Cassander: Attended Tristan’s Play
Location: Rynmere Theatre
Tristan’s Play: Scandalous


Awarded Extras

Loot & Losses Injuries
None None
Fame Devotion
None None
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Quio


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Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Awarded Knowledge

Andráska: A Wonderful Cellist
Andraska: Plays the Cello
Andraska: Tristan’s Cousin
Daliane: Not the Main Actor?
Emerson Sands: Attended Tristan’s Play
Etiquette: How to Behave at a Play
Event: A Royal Tragedy
Hart: A Considerate Man
Hart: Not Fond of Fights
Tristan: Has casting issues
King Cassander: Attended Tristan’s Play
Location: Rynmere Theatre
Tristan’s Play: Scandalous


Awarded Extras

Loot & Losses Injuries
None None
Fame Devotion
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Rafael Warrick


Awarded Points

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 3/5
Structure: 5/5
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Awarded Knowledge

Andráska: A Wonderful Cellist
Elyna: Still Alive Vhalar 716
Emerson Sands: Attended Tristan’s Play
Etiquette: Clap even when you Don't Enjoy the Show
Etiquette: How to Behave at a Play
Event: A Royal Tragedy
King Cassander: Attended Tristan’s Play
Location: Rynmere Theatre
Tristan: Controversial
Tristan’s Play: Scandalous


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Loot & Losses Injuries
None None
Fame Devotion
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Story: 5/5
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Structure: 5/5
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Awarded Knowledge

Andráska: A Wonderful Cellist
Discipline: Formation
Emerson Sands: Attended Tristan’s Play
Etiquette: How to Behave at a Play
Event: A Royal Tragedy
King Cassander: Attended Tristan’s Play
Location: Rynmere Theatre
Tactics: Setting a Perimeter to Patrol
Tristan’s Play: Scandalous


Awarded Extras

Loot & Losses Injuries
None None
Fame Devotion
None None
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Tristan Venora


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Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Awarded Knowledge

Acting: Speaking with Confidence
Acting: Choreography
Acting: The Importance of an Understudy
Andráska: Promoted to Ouroboros Guard
Andraska: Pull through for you at the Play
Andraska: Truly gifted; The most Talented of the Venora Children?
Andráska: A Wonderful Cellist
Business Management: Running an Event
Business Management: Running in a Tight Schedule
Business Management: Timekeeping
Discipline: Staying Calm When Nervous
Drug: Fairysnuff
Etiquette: Introducing oneself to royalty
Emerson Sands: Cursed?
Emerson Sands: Attended My Play
Etiquette: How to Behave at a Play
Event: A Royal Tragedy
Immortal: Zanik
King Cassander: Admires your Long Hair
King Cassander: Amused by the Play
King Cassander: Assassination Attempt
King Cassander: Attended My Play
King Cassander: Finds you Fashionable
King Cassander: Interested in Faith?
King Cassander: Liked the Play
Location: Rynmere Theatre
My Play: Scandalous
Organisation: Ouroboros Guard
Slavery: Slaves are Less Important
Self: Blessed By Zanik
Self: Has a Reward Coming to Me
Zanik: Immortal of Music


Awarded Extras

Loot & Losses Injuries
None None
Fame Devotion
+30: Saving the King's Life Write a Play: +6 Zanik
+10: Putting a Play On Feat of Great Strength: +3 Zanik
+10: A Successful Play
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Comments


So I know I did not get to moderate all of this, and I know I only really got to thread with three of you... but it was such an absolute pleasure to be involved in this adventure! It was so much fun,
my little bit at the end, and I normally hate combat!! This one time I didn't! Yay!

I have decided not to award damage timeframes to anyone because of the time that has passed since this thread has happened, though here are scars!

If anyone wants specific Devotion/Loot/Loss/Injuries/Knowledge, please don't hesitate to PM me - there's every chance I missed something in this beast!

If you have any questions, comments or criticism about your review, feel free to send me a PM and we can discuss it.
Thank ye.
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