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6th of Saun, Arc 716

He'd woken up. It was the sixth trial and dawn had begun to spring forth, his windows lighting up as the sun rose to the sky. The rain had come and gone, and now yet again Andaris was sunny, bright and hot. He hated the heat. He was sweating as he woke, his brow practically drenched. There was no reprieve from the heat in the rather basic apartments of Andaris. In his home in Sabaissant, living in the palace, the cool winds came through the open windows as he slept and kept him always in a condition of perfect tempo. The man groaned as he rose and removed his undergarments, wiping his body with a wet cloth and then drying himself with a towel he'd kept on his desk. He yawned, looking into the room's small mirror and ensuring his hair looked suitable for that of a professor.

Alistair made his way to his dresser, and from it pulled out his grey suit and bowler hat. He tucked two books beneath his shoulder, and put his Venora crest pin against his skin to let everyone know just who they were messing with. The books he brought with him were The Scholar of Viden and Anatomical Surgery in Rynmere. Each of these books were instructional texts meant for guiding individuals into the process of basic surgeries, with the Scholar of Viden covering a variety of particular cases in which the man perfomed Eye Cataracts, Blocked Bowel Surgeries, Arrow Removal and Childbirth, and the Anatomical Surgery text covering Amputations, Brain Surgeries, the basics of anatomy and an unfortunate array of surgeries that were actually discredited by this text, such as bloodletting and the use of basic leeches for a variety of diseases and illnesses.

Today he was going to teach his students a lesson on the contemporary knowledge of amputation, with practices such as cautery, hot iron bars and disinfectants applied to the wounds. Honestly, he was not quite the expert himself, but he possessed enough experience in live surgery to properly instruct his students on amputation without a great deal of experience in it. It would be new and interesting - this was his first term as a professor and until recently he'd mostly been guiding students on basic things such as arrow removals and telling them what not to do - namely, as mentioned before, bloodletting. Peasant's superstition was far removed from decent surgical practices.

The man walked through the streets of his neighborhood and towards the University, his eyes running past the stalls and glancing at the men and women running them. He surely lived in a shit neighborhood - the people here were of low quality and much lower wealth. Hopefully his combined surgical procedures and university job could buy him a more suitable apartment in Andaris.

As the man came upon the university, he was stopped by one of his students, a young ambitious individual who had what he'd describe as a fixation when it came to surgery involving the internal organs. Her name was, if he recalled, Dehlila Fairfax. "Doctor Venora," she called out to Alistair. The man paused in his place and stared. "It's good to see you before class! I was actually hoping to ask you a question before the lesson." The woman was always eager, of course. Many of his students were - the field of medicine was advancing, if slowly, and this caused new and enthusiastic minds to enter the field. Alistair stayed silent but nodded his head. "Will we be performing an actual live amputation?" She asked. "I adored that demonstrative skull inspection surgery you performed for the class, but it's not quite the same as with an actual body." Somehow, this young woman didn't even find such provocative statements as being slightly . . . odd. Alistair shook his head.

"No . . . I don't tend to have a line-up of prospective amputees for my lessons, Dehlila. That would be a bit too convenient. And indeed, let me just state very clearly - it would be exceptionally ill-advised to perform a live surgery for educational purposes, as the stress of being operated on in such an open environment can cause unfortunate incidents to occur." The man thought such a thing was obvious - that surgeries were always to be performed in controlled environments if possible, but perhaps the student was a bit less intelligent than he'd imagined.

"Couldn't you just like, do it on a slave or something? You'd really be raising the educational standard by performing surgeries live." She was highly determined in this assertion. The man merely rolled his eyes. "Our field is designed to help people, not hurt them. You'd do well to remember that, Ms. Fairfax. I must in fact get to class, as you know. Ta-ta." He waved her off and went his own way towards the university, unable to believe the conversation he'd just engaged in. Live surgeries. He almost laughed at the thought.
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Faith was here again. She knew that she shouldn't spend any more time here at the university, but equally she couldn't quite help it. Malcolm was here and, these trials she looked so very different. She wondered whether he'd notice her if he saw her now, if he might turn and smile in surprise and amazement at how very grown up she looked. Maybe he'd even realise that she wasn't a child, no, she was much much more than that. Her spare break each trial had been spent here thus far and it seemed that, until what could only be described as her teenage crush on the Professor abated, it probably would conitnue to be. After all, she was wearing such a pretty yellow dress, the black corset was so tight around her waist and it pushed up her breasts and gave her curves. Her hair was well cared for and she wore make up - not much, just a touch, but still. Still, she looked *good* she knew and maybe, the quiet but hopeful voice in the back of her mind whispered to her, maybe Malcolm would walk past her, do a double take at this beauty in the university gardens and then he would realise that she and he.....

But, of course he didn't.

And she was just about ready to make her way back home when she heard a voice calling a name. Doctor Venora the name called and Faith turned around and watched. Stepping forward, she wondered if this was... searching for the name, she could not remember it, but it did not matter. Master had mentioned that one of his cousins was a doctor, so this much be him. She wondered, suddenly and fiercly if perhaps he knew Malcolm, but then a much greater desire won out. He was a doctor? Here? At the University? Faith felt the breath leave her body as she realised that she had a means of getting in which wouldn't cost Master money, but which would allow her to learn, to develop. And maybe he would be needing an assistant or some such, she wondered. Maybe he would allow her to just hide in the back of the class, she'd be no trouble. She stepped towards him, where he was speaking with the young woman who had called his name.

Faith was five steps away, although still close to a tree and so not in sight, when she heard the conversation. She stopped and waited. Of course, it would make more sense if she did not listen but she could not help but do so. She knew, she *knew*, but in that moment she gave thanks to Famula for Master and his kindness. His concern. But yet, as she stood there, waiting for Doctor Venora to finish with the free woman who wished to cut off slaves limbs so that she might learn (as was her right, of course), Faith felt the decorative slave collar that Master had put around her neck weigh heavier than it ever had. Perhaps she was wrong to come here, she wondered. Maybe it gave her ideas that she should not have. Yet, in there, there was so much to learn and Master wanted her to learn. He had told her so.

So, as the handsome (undeniably so. She couldn't help but wonder if all Venora were) Doctor Venora separated from the free woman and he started a different walk, she made a decision and she started to follow him. "Doctor Venora? E..excuse me?" she said, in a voice that was better suited to libraries and morgues than anywhere else. Naturally quiet, almost hushed. When she had his attention, the young woman in front of him looked up at him with silver-grey eyes the colour of morning mist and she spoke again "Forgive me, Doctor Venora, but I am Faith. My Master is His Lordship, Tristan Venora. He is... that is... he has instructed me that I must learn all that I can and I have worked, previously as an undertaker and assisted in an autopsy. I was... that is" she breathed in and then got her courage up and spoke again, all of it tumbling out "Please might I be allowed to be in your classroom, Doctor Venora, when you teach about the amputation I can help if you wish it please thank you I am sorrry" there was no breath, no punctuation, but there was a lot of very genuine desire from the young woman in question.
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Immediately after he parted ways with the at least slightly morbid Ms. Fairfax, another individual approached him. A young woman with black hair, fair skin, a yellow dress and a corset. She looked relatively well dressed, though that was not a surprise so close to university campus. Immediately though, judging her posture and the way she presented herself, he could feel a divide in her etiquette and his. She was oddly . . . timid in appearance, and it resonated like an aura, all around her. Doctor Venora, she said. Perhaps she was a student? He had not met a few of them yet - those who had missed the first lessons. Of course, he waited for her to finish what she had to say before he'd properly say anything in return.

It didn't take long for her to specify her role and reasons for calling out to him. She was a servant or a slave . . . of Tristan, his younger cousin - the one he'd just told Andras not to fully trust the other day. This was awkward. Judging by how quickly she'd appeared after Ms. Fairfax had gone, he could only suspect she was waiting. But where? He always checked his surroundings. That tree over there - by the wall? Seemed likely, and oddly so. She was quite literally hiding away from sight, listening. That did not bring him comfort. Even so, he allowed her to finish all that she wished to say, and nodded his head ocassionally as she spoke. She was once an undertaker and has assisted in an autopsy before? Interesting. Alistair was quite the undertaker himself, considering all the work he had done with dead bodies. However, she was one of the more shy and forlorn types; the ones that worked in morgues and all that. He could tell very quickly, and Alistair always had a talent in gauging someone's personality.

Based on her tone of voice and demeanor, she likely was someone of low social or economic standing. She was nervous to approach Alistair - he could tell that too. Most certainly a servant or less, like he initially assumed based on her usage of the term 'master'. But since when, and why? Was Tristan too lazy to clean up after himself, or something?

"He's instructed you, you say?" The man asked. He kept a straight, stoic face, almost intimidating in his gaze. He was judging her - almost anyone would be able to tell. He was judging her based on her tone, the way in which she worded herself, and altogether the presentation of her personality. He placed his arm on his waist and rubbed his chin. "Hm. Well, firstly, I'll have to know to be quite sure if you are saying please, thank you or sorry. Additionally I need to know what your relationship to Tristan is. It's a bit odd to be approaching me at such a fortuitous moment - here I am, coming to the university before class, and here you are bumping into me. Someone with an intimate link to me by means of connection to one of my family, someone who knows my identity and thus clearly was eavesdropping on my conversation, and additionally someone with an unclear motive for wishing to delve into the complex field of surgery - why would Tristan desire of a servant the ability to properly amputate? He could surely afford an expert doctor in any such necessity." And there it was - Alistair's extremely critical nature bearing into Faith like claws. He was not necessarily a nice man, and he was very wary of others, especially those who had indulged in his conversations without his notice.

For all he knew, she could be a spy of a rival house or an investigator. He could not be sure her ridiculously shy exterior was not just a ruse, and this would not have been the first time an individual approached him in such a manor only to attempt to gain important knowledge about both himself and house Venora.

"Also, as you are not one of my students, that will be My Lord rather than Doctor Venora. Tristan clearly does not instill proper noble etiquette into his flock. Grandmother would have lashed you senseless for that indiscretion." He raised the bowler cap slightly, as it had begun to fall into his eyes and obstruct his gaze. The first thing he saw: cleavage. Also indecent for a servant, though he supposed Tristan never had decency as a virtue.
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Oh she had done this all wrong and the already pale girl lost all colour from her cheeks as Master's cousin spoke to her, his eyes boring into her with judgement and distaste and anger. She had done it wrong and now she had embarrassed Master in front of his cousin. That was not good to Faith and she listened to everything he had to say before she answered him, meekly. He had a number of points and each one of them was valid - she had behaved in a manner that horrified her as soon as he explained it to her and she knew that she had stepped well out of line.

"I am owned by Master, My Lord" she said. Indeed her slave brands were clearly visible, including the new brand of the Venora rose which was still a burn, rather than a scar. "I apologise, I acted rashly. I will inform Master of my inappropriate behaviour and your displeasure" she assured him. This might be the first time that she had done something that Master would be unhappy about and Faith wondered just what that would mean; but there was no point to such wondering for she was his to do with as he chose.

"Master instructed me that I must learn as much as I can, as he can not abide stupid slaves. I... I am allowed one break each trial, My Lord, and I come here to the University grounds. I hope to pick up learning of some kind here. When I heard the lady speak your name, My Lord, I thought it was Master's cousin, he.. he told me that he would loan me to any of his family to use as they determine. I thought that I could please Master and surprise him. I am most sorry" she gave no further explanation, because to do so would be to speak more than she needed to and it was her job to answer His Lordship's questions and nothing else. She had already made a colossal mess of things and she felt sick in her stomach for it. She could have explained that she had never been owned by a member of a noble family before, that she was a new slave to Master. Perhaps, even, she might have told Lord Venora that she had only been allowed out to meet anyone other than her owner two months ago and so her social skills were lacking. But she did not speak any of those things because they were excuses and they were irrelevant to His Lordship. She would not let Master down any further by speaking such nonsense, instead she simply spoke the facts that he asked for and nothing more.

As she stood there, stock still with her hands clasped in front of her, Faith felt waves of nausea fly over her. Not for fear of the punishment for what she had done, but because it meant that she was not being a good slave to Master and that made her feel physically ill. She had embarrassed Master, had behaved in a way that was not acceptable for one of his slaves and, worse than that, she had done so with one of his family members. Whatever punishment he gave her, Faith considered, it would not be sufficient for how she had failed him this trial. She looked at Lord Venora with her startling silver grey eyes and said no more, waiting to see what he would do now.
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He immediately noticed the brand upon her words, I am owned by Master, My Lord, she said. The brand was that of Venora. Unless she was perhaps an illusionist like the ones he'd acquainted with during his tutelage under the seekers, there was no way she would brand herself merely for information gathering. He was receptive to the concept of her being Tristan's slave, which did decrease his wariness of her presence, surely. "Fortunately for you, Tristan does not particularly care about proper etiquette and rather operates upon his nobility with amoral vices and acts that do not become him. Informing him of your improper behavior would likely gain an applause rather than a punishment. And that is fine. You do not need to be punished for your improperness in addressing me. I do not hold such pointless wrath in my heart that I would press the issue. I am merely informing you that others in this family - such as the Duchess - would have you beaten mercilessly for such indiscretion. When in her presence, you must refer to her as Your Grace. My mother demands to be called My Esteemed Lady, while the rest of the Venora family varies in their distinction. I am fine with My Lord or Ser Alistair. Either way it's of no concern." He did feel that perhaps he should take it back a peg - it was pointless to inflate fear and anxiety in this girl if she was merely a servant.

Alistair didn't really have empathy, but he didn't have wrath or antipathy either. He was simply . . . cold.

Her desire to learn was perhaps the most compelling portion of her personality, anyhow. Alistair valued effort, diligence, and distinction more than social or political class. If all she truly desired was to partake in his lessons, he couldn't simply push her aside and refuse. "Indeed, we cannot abide stupid anyone. That is perhaps the portion of Rynmere's ethics that I admire the most. Ignorance and intellectual depravity are unforgivable sins. Superstition is a crime, and the uneducated are its perpetrators. Most masters do not allow their slaves educations. You are blessed to be given to Tristan in this way, and I would be cross to find him intellectually stunting his assistants." It could be noted that he did not refer to Faith as his property, but rather his 'assistant'. Alistair did not view slavery as the relationship between a piece of property and its owner, but rather a bond forged in an economic system - one of mutual benefit. Those who treated slaves as property were being illogical and valued their worth far too greatly to call a living mortal a mere tool. As Alistair had learned in Necromancy, when a man lay dead, it matters not if a crown is seated upon his head or a straw hat. All men and women carry the same basic form, and their capabilities are of equal levels.

"I will not have you writhing in self-pity any longer. Rather, I will allow you to accompany me to my lessons in the hope that you gain some semblance of knowledge from them. Tell Tristan I was pleased of your company and that you served him well." He did not smile, though he knew that Faith would likely be enthused about his acceptance of her desires. He did not wish for her to mope about all day over something so minor as not making the proper address; honestly, his almost temperamental way of putting that forward was merely due to his weariness of her evident eavesdropping. Now that he'd collected himself, they could continue on.

"Faith. Since when have you been under my cousin's... employ?" He asked. The man began to walk to the large campus, beckoning her to follow. "I had not heard of you. I myself had a slave until recently. Fellows from Krome attempted to kill me in anger of my family 'betraying the crown', and he died in my defense. I realized at that point that slaves do know true loyalty, respect and admiration. That they are more than cowering dogs. And it is in his honor and by his legacy that I will allow you to attend my courses at the University if you so wish. But I must ask: what subject would you pursue as your passion? Surely cutting people open and messing with their insides isn't something you'd enjoy too much." He didn't peg her as the macabre type - like himself of course - and so her decision to pursue this course of all of the available ones bothered him. Surely Tristan could pull strings in order to have his slave attend. He was a Venora, after all. Not peasantry.
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He informed her of how it would have been had she been so improper with the Duchess and told her that she did not need to inform Master and Faith bowed her head in acknowledgement but said no more on the subject. She would tell Master, of course, because that was the right and correct thing to do. She did not speak but when he said that she was blessed to be owned by Master, not least in her mind for his order to learn. "Yes, My Lord" was all that she said on the matter, however, not interrupting him as he gave his exposition on the depravity of superstition and ignorance. As a woman who had been kept in ignorance of many things until sold to Master, she was not well educated in many things and, as such, she probably still fitted into his category of ignorant and intellectually deprived. But he said no more on that and so she simply remained quiet. But indeed, she did smile gently and bow her head again as he said that she might accompany him "Thank you, My Lord, you are most kind and forgiving" she said and she did indeed feel a rush of pleasure that she was about to actually enter a classroom in the actual university.

Of course, that she might see Malcolm was in the girl's mind, too, but she did not speak that, instead she walked with him and listened carefully to his questions "Master bought me at the end of Ymiden, My Lord" she said and she glanced at him to check that was enough information. Master had told her that his cousin had a slave and he had told her of a prank he played on that slave, she recalled. She didn't mention it, however, as it did not seem appropriate to do so, and when Lord Venora told her of how his slave died, she did not look surprised or shocked, but she nodded. "Thank you, My Lord. I appreciate that very much and I will give my absolute best" as to what she would do as a passion? Well she would answer that, but after she had addressed his second point, first. "My previous owner was an undertaker, My Lord. I have some experience in the preparation and autopsy of the dead. But if I was pursuing my passion?" she considered carefully and then answered as well as she could.

"My owners in Athart and my previous owner here kept me in isolation, My Lord, and the education they gave me was very focused, very limited. I am discovering that there are more things that I do not know about than I had considered. I am learning about Rynmere nobility, history and politics and I find those fascinating. So, whilst I would be tempted to say history, I feel that I need a more general education first" at least she knew what she did not know these trials, she considered. And to her that was important. "I am addressing that as quickly as I can." she assured him.

In truth, if she was given the opportunity, Faith would learn anything. Everything. It had been suppressed and ignored, but the young woman had an insatiable thirst for knowledge. Had she been afforded an education as a child, by now she would be much more knowledgeable, but the young woman had a quick mind and a quizzical one; she was always asking questions and wondering what or why things were this way. So, she smiled at Lord Venora and hoped that this answered his question suitably as she walked with him. And as they made their way into the university, Lord Venora might, or might not notice that she frowned slightly and looked around not in amazement as people usually did but with an utterly confused expression on her face.
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Faith was not a bad slave by any means, nor was she successfully dumbed down by all of these years of servitude. Most slaves couldn't recognize anything for anything outside of their craft, which only made masters further dehumanize them, seeing them as mechanical apes and pigs, incapable of learning or developing like "actual" human beings. Faith, on the other hand, was the sort of slave that made owners sympathetic - she was bright, she had potential, a desire to learn, and a desire to serve. Alistair did allow her into his classroom, as he spoke endlessly about anatomy and the utilization of metal instruments in contemporary surgery. The students observed quietly, though he knew his teaching ability was perhaps not quite up to their expectations.

Still, they concluded the day in a field experiment. He taught them of the scalpel, an instrument he called the surgeon's best friend. He taught them... many things, and when the day was over, he nodded quietly to Faith - acknowledging her merit. When that was all said and done, Alistair went on his way, content with his work and the student's learning.

...Only to receive a letter, written by the university, threatening to fire him for daring to allow a slave in the classroom. "Do you know who I am?!" he questioned at the letter, a typical noble's kneejerk reaction. Taking a breath, he shrugged. "Whatever, I'll just quit."

It wasn't like he was hurting for money, anyhow. He began on writing his reply immediately, ready to inform the University of just how little he cared about their oppressive rules.
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Knowledge:

Cosmetology: always check the hair
Cosmetology: No one likes a sweaty Noble
Discipline: standing up to injustice
Endurance: No escape from the summer heat.
Etiquette: Ignorance and Intellectual depravity are unforgivable sins
Investigation: getting a feel for someones Aura and demeanour
Investigation: looking for possible hiding places
Investigation: a knack for reading people
Investigation: be weary of strangers, especially eavesdropping ones
Intimidation: The Gaze of judgement
Interrogation: A strong personality can break weaker ones
Meditation: Everyone shares the same basic from, of equal capabilities
Politics: Crowns don’t matter when your a corpse
Surgery: bloodletting and leeches are bad practice
Surgery: basic cautery
Surgery: common disinfection
Surgery: Hot iron bars
Surgery: don’t operate on a subject in a classroom setting
Surgery: scalpel, the surgeon's best friend
Teaching: Real life experience can be a good aid
Teaching: What not to do.
Teaching: following proper protocol
Teaching: Instructing a slave on how to behave in presence of a Venora
Teaching: Making sure students are in classes that suit them
Writing: Expressing distaste in oppressive rules in a letter
Dehlila Fairfax: Ambitious student
Dehlila Fairfax: interested in intestines (gross)
Dehlila Fairfax: doesn’t have high regard for slaves
Faith: Timid women in a yellow dress
Faith: Tristans slave
Faith: Experience in surgery
Faith: previously and undertaker
Faith: A slave with the desire to learn
Faith: Finds History and Politics fascinating (barf)
Willow Venora: will beat slaves if not addressed the right way
Slavery: not property but a bond that was mutual beneficial


Loot: 
N/A
Injuries: 
N/A
Fame:
N/A
Magic:
These points can NOT be used for Domain Magic
Devotion:
N/A

Story: 
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Collaboration:
5/5
Structure:
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Faith


Knowledge:

Cosmetology: Pretty yellow dress
Cosmetology: Proper hair care
Discipline: telling your master of your wrong doings even if he’s unlikely to care.
Etiquette: Don’t act rashly
Etiquette: don’t speak more than needed
Etiguette: How to properly address a noble
Etiquette: Ignorance and Intellectual depravity are unforgivable sins
Etiquette: When a story is inappropriate to tell.
Endurance: The sickness that comes with failure
Intelligence: casual ease dropping
Meditation: find your courage
Persuasion: Talk about previous experience
Persuasion: Name dropping
Seduction: Corsets show off the girls
Stealth: quietly observing, just out of sight.
Surgery: basic cautery
Surgery: common disinfection

Malcolm: Notice me Sempai
Alistair Venora: Cousin to Tristan
Alistair Venora: Call him My lord or Ser Alistair..I guess
Alistair Venora: Acknowledges your merit
House Venora: Maybe he’s born with it, maybe its Venoraline
Duchess of Venona: refer to her as your grace or Esteemed lady or else.
scalpel: the surgeon's best friend



Loot: 
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Injuries: 
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Fame:
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Magic:
These points can NOT be used for Domain Magic
Devotion:
+1 to Famula for accepting punishment without complaint.

Story: 
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Collaboration:
5/5
Structure:
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Comments:
Nice thread, got a little rushed at the end for obvious reasons (don’t leave people hanging Alistair..yah bum) otherwise good. it’s cool seeing how much your characters have changed after reading more recent threads of yours. Good job you two.
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