[Skye Verath Lodge] When in doubt, punch (Faith)

Kylar learns a thing or two about why you shouldn't punch a crossbow target

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[Skye Verath Lodge] When in doubt, punch (Faith)

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Name: Kylar

Knowledge:
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Aiming
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Firing a bolt
Unarmed Combat: Aiming a punch
Faith: A slave
Faith: Cares whether you hurt yourself
Faith: Has skill in unarmed combat
Faith: Can teach you not to break your thumb
Faith: Hates fighting
Unarmed Combat: Stance
Unarmed Combat: Movement is important
Unarmed Combat: How to make a fist
Unarmed Combat: Forward punch
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: How to load
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: How to fire
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Stance
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: How to hold it
Unarmed Combat: Center yourself
Unarmed Combat: Use height to your advantage

Loot: N/A
Injuries: Sore chest that will fade in 3 trials.
Fame: +1 general good deed

Story: 5
Collaboration: 5
Structure: 5

Name: Faith

Knowledge:
Discipline: Appearing fine when in emotional distress
Kylar: Bad with the crossbow
Kylar: Short tempered
Kylar: Was in a bar fight recently
Psychology: Recognizing self-depreciation
Kylar: Intense
Kylar: Tall
Kylar: Self-depreciating
Kylar: Doesn’t mind your brand
Unarmed Combat: Stance
Unarmed Combat: Movement is important
Unarmed Combat: How to make a fist
Unarmed Combat: Forward punch
Kylar: Saved a couple from being jumped
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: How to load
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: How to fire
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Stance
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: How to hold it
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Aiming
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Firing a bolt
Unarmed Combat: Center yourself
Unarmed Combat: Use height to your advantage

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: +1 general good deed
Devotion: +1 prayer to Famula

Story: 5
Collaboration: 5
Structure: 5

Comment:
A very good learning thread. You made the learning of the two forms of combat seem as a natural occurrence between the two of them. They have a nice chemistry together, able to joke and laugh and themselves and each other. Good collaboration and structure looked fine to me.

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