• Solo • Olivia

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Olivia

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Vhalar 29, Arc 719

The Mortalborn was sitting in one of the two comfortable armchairs in front of the fireplace, in his salon, a book in his lap and a glass of wine that he occasionally took a sip from on the table in front of him when he heard a knock on the door. Furrowing his brow fractionally, he closed the book – a volume on Videnese mythology – and exclaimed, “Enter!”

A moment later, Elias, his Etzori servant, walked into the room. The human, brown-haired and brown-eyed and in his late thirties, bowed deeply before he stepped aside so that Doran could see the woman that stood behind him. She was human as well, but approximately ten arcs younger than Elias, with curly dark hair, freckled skin and relatively short.

While Elias was dressed in livery, being the servant of a man of considerable wealth, the woman wore a simple white blouse and a warm red skirt that came down to nearly her ankles.

“Sir”, Elias spoke. “Miss Hawkins has read your ad and would like to apply for a job as a maid.”

Doran looked at the woman, raising an eyebrow slightly. The woman looked at him. When Elias nudged her slightly, she blushed and immediately curtsied – somewhat awkwardly, he observed. Apparently, she wasn’t used to doing such. While he valued etiquette, he didn’t care about it nearly as much as some of his colleagues though – there were other things that far more important than knowing how to curtsy in his opinion.

Besides, she could always learn later on.

He inclined his head, smiling very lightly, before he gestured for her to sit down in the chair opposite of him. “Very well then, Miss Hawkins”, he spoke. “I’ve been looking for another servant quite urgently as Elias cannot take care of this place alone in the long run. I’d like to ask you a few questions first though, if you don’t mind.”

“Of … of course, sir”,
she replied, somewhat nervously, before she did as she had been told.
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Olivia looked at the man that sat opposite of her. He was … not at all what she had expected when she had read the ad, about a professor looking to hire an additional servant for his household. He was tall, taller than most of the men that she had met, with bright blue eyes, black hair and a short beard. His clothes were as fine as any noble lord’s, but his build and the way that he held himself suggested that he was anything but a pampered noble or a bookish academic, that he knew how to fight. Besides that, she had the strangest feeling, whenever she looked at him. She gulped a little.

“Now then, Miss Hawkins”, the man spoke in a deep and calm voice and met her gaze. He held himself straight, she noticed, but he was not stiff. He was – proper, was probably the correct word to describe the way he looked and held himself, she decided. “Do you have any experience when it comes to working for a man in my position?” It was a simple question, a question that she ought to be able to answer without hesitation, but she looked at him for a few moments before she began to speak, nevertheless.

“I worked for … a wealthy merchant for approximately five arcs, if that’s what you mean with a man in your position, my lord?” she asked and looked at him questioningly. She wasn’t sure if that was the answer that he had been looking for, and she wasn’t completely sure if he was a noble either. He lived where mostly Aristocrats did, though.

The professor seemed to think about her answer for a few moments before he inclined his head.

“Why did you quit?” he abruptly wanted to know.

“I didn’t”, she replied, finally finding some sort of confidence. The exceedingly luxurious apartment and the professor himself had intimidated her somewhat – he was even wealthier than her previous employer had been, but he seemed to be normal enough, she decided, and quite polite on top of it. “My employer went bankrupt, my lord. He … made a few bad investments and couldn’t afford to keep all of us servants anymore.”

“I’ve been looking for a new job ever since”,
she admitted, the tone of her voice a hint softer.

“I see”, he remarked. “As I said, you will mostly be responsible for cleaning my home together with Elias – the man that you just met. In addition to that, you will serve my guests and me. There is one room that will be off limits to you though”, he informed her, and she looked at him, her mouth forming a surprised little “o”.
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“Oh”, the woman made, and Doran couldn’t help but smirk and wonder what kind of thoughts were running through her head. Did she think that he had secrets? He did, of course, but they didn’t have anything to do with the contents of his apartment, but more with what he was.

He had been keeping his being a Mortalborn from the general public and only revealed that he was a mage now to a select few, not because he was afraid, but because he hadn’t seen a reason to tell them.

Olivia would likely eventually be told, just like his other employees though, at least if he decided to keep her ...

“As you know, I’m an alchemist”, he told her. “I have a small private laboratory here, and some of the things in it can be dangerous in the wrong hands. For that reason, I keep it clean myself. Very few people are allowed to enter it without supervision.”

“I’d rather avoid accidents if I can.”


She nodded, as if that made sense to her. Judging by the way that she furrowed her brow, she seemed to consider something. A moment later, she tentatively asked, “You said my home, my lord. Do you live alone? I’m just wondering if there are other people in the house that I’ll have to serve, a wife or a husband, or children”, she explained.

“I’m not a lord”, he told her, his tone of voice momentarily tinged with a hint of amusement. “I’m not a noble, at least not the kind of nobility that matters here. Professor is enough. And no, I live alone”, he replied with a hint of regret. Llyr had left a few trials earlier, and he’d begun to miss him, maybe more than he should, considering the agreement that they had made after his initiation.

He didn’t share that with her though.

“Now then, Miss Hawkins”, he continued. “If you agree, I will hire you for a period of thirty trials at first, and if we both decide that things are working out, I will change your contract to a permanent one – if that is all right with you?” he asked and raised an eyebrow questioningly.

The woman who had been a little shy and intimidated at first, smiled at him, he observed.

“Of course, Professor”, she replied, and he nodded.

“When can you start?” he wanted to know.

“Whenever you like. As I told you, Professor, I am currently unemployed”, she reminded him, momentarily averting her gaze, as if she were ashamed of her lack of a job.

That was a kind of behaviour that didn’t make any sense to him. Her losing her job wasn’t her fault. He didn’t say anything though as it would probably not help, but only make things more awkward, which was something that he didn’t want to happen.

“Then I’d like you to come here again tomorrow”, he decided. Elias’ leg – his servant had been a soldier once, before he had been wounded in battle and retained an injury that had nearly led to an amputation – had begun to bother him again, and although he never complained, all the work around his apartment was becoming a bit too much for him.

Taking care of such a sizeable apartment alone was quite a challenge, so he’d decided to find help for him.

“Oh, and Miss Hawkins”, he added. “What is your first name? I usually address my employees by their first name, a little quirk of mine”, he explained, smiling very lightly.

“Olivia”, she said, and he nodded before he abruptly rose from his chair and gestured for her to follow him.

“Come with me, Olivia. I will show you my home before you leave and explain a few things to you. I have one other employee besides Elias at the moment, a Naerikk by the name of Namira. She is often out of town, procuring reagents or items that I want to study for me. I expect her to return at the end of the season, so hopefully you’ll get to know her then”, he told her before he finally gave her the promised tour of his apartment – including a very brief look at the alchemy laboratory, in order to satisfy her unmistakable curiosity.

If he showed it to her now, she hopefully wouldn’t be tempted to sneak into it when he wasn’t watching.
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Skill Points: +10 (cannot be used for magic)
Magic XP: None.

Renown: +5 (hiring someone and making sure that Elias who has a bad leg doesn't overwork)

Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Loot: None.

Skill Knowledge:
  • Etiquette x5
  • Intimidation x1
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • none requested.
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Skills Used: Competent Etiquette (26x/22k), Competent Intimidation (29x/20k), Competent Detection (26x/35k), Competent Persuasion (26x/18k), Expert Discipline (76x/36k)
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.

Doran is so classy. Everything he seems to do in his off-time seems to be some enjoyment of the luxury he is able to live in, which is great. A professor of alchemy and son of Ziell reading Videnese mythology while sipping wine? I mean, what is more classy than that?

I enjoyed the momentary switch to Olivia's perspective and what she thought about it, as well. Her background, and reason for leaving her previous employer, was a nice touch though I wonder if she's being completely honest about it!

Nice touch with bringing Namira up at the end.

Great job and enjoy your rewards!

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