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[Lair] Wandering Child

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The window gave easily. A simple clasp unhooked, while her siblings slept, and Omesintihlih slipped onto the second-floor ledge of their small Shanty house. She tiptoed along until she reached the nearest bloodlight post. The girl spun down the black iron, and landed with a flourish of an outstretched hand. It was night, but that didn't matter in Cylus. It was always dark without sun, only the crimson of the bloodlight fruits strung up on the far corners of the Shanty blocks.

Murmurs encouraged her. Let's go north, Omesintihlih. No, no, south is a much better way. Do we even know which way is which? I rather think we should go up instead of down. No one cares what you think. Omesintihlih, this ice would make for an excellent stage.

"I most agree," she said. She lifted her ragged skirt slightly and jumped over the curb of the cobblestone street. The girl had tried to lace the skirt with ribbons but didn't understand how to sew well enough. Instead, the ribbons had fallen out and left behind torn holes in the hem. Still, it was the best dress she had. Unlike the rest of her clothes, it had color to it: a faded green. Omesintihlih wore a cloak of black and slippers of gray with straps over her ankles. She glanced at the open window of the bedroom, then sprinted away to get out of the bloodlight's glow.

She ran through the streets of Shanty, and followed the whispers of The Things that Spoke to Her. They led her away from those who lurked in the alleys. There were no Dragoons to worry about here, few people to bother the young girl and inquire why she was out in the pitch dark of Cylus.

The Yludih girl crossed the border between Shanty and Lair without even realizing it. She danced through an abandoned house, left to disrepair, that'd been looted long ago. The frames were too bare, and thus too cold, to make for a squatting house for any homeless. Omesintihlih skittered out a broken window, and sprinted down an alley that led out into one of the main streets of Lair.

Here, the bloodlights were more numerous and brighter. Here, people weren't asleep in rest for their work. Work that would begin once the morning church bells rang. Here, work went through while the heralds and tribunals slept. Omesintihlih had never been to this district before, but she'd heard of it.

Omesintihlih folded her hands behind her. She skipped along the center of the street, uncaring about the horses or carts or carriages that rolled past on either side. Her attention was far too fixed on the various people who decorated the Lair from the entrances to the balconies and past windows. She listened to the lilt of laughter over music. The dark-haired Quacian twirled about so her cloak flared out with each of her spins. Her slippers slid against the ice, but she kept her balance as always with arms outstretched to help her along. She didn't, perhaps couldn't, hear the shouts from a few adults to get out of the road.

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𝔠𝔥𝔞𝔬𝔰, 𝔲𝔫𝔯𝔢𝔩𝔢𝔫𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔥𝔬𝔯𝔯𝔦𝔣𝔦𝔠𝔞𝔩𝔩𝔶 𝔟𝔢𝔞𝔲𝔱𝔦𝔣𝔲𝔩 𝔠𝔥𝔞𝔬𝔰
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Mother Helena was busy with her friends, or 'clients' as she referred to them sometimes. Had been since the night started, and so insisted on placing Zunylanih in the care of his erstwhile governess Geneva. She accepted reluctantly, and gave ten arc-old Zunylanih a small smile as she led him away from Helena's quarters. Down toward the crowded common room, where the hookah pipes were smoking opiate fumes, and the wine was flowing. Abruptly, Geneva stopped, and knelt down in front of Zunylanih, coming eye to eye with the boy. "Hey, you want some dessert?"

Zunylanih smiled, and nodded his head yes. That sounded good. Geneva smiled back and retrieved a pair of cupcakes from a nearby tray, and handed them to him. "My boyfriend promised me a birthday present. I have to meet him in the basement... Can you keep a secret?"

Zunylanih smiled coyly, and giggled by way of saying yes.

She smiled and gave him a tight squeeze, which made his eyes bulge wide and grin deeper. Geneva was so soft and warm. Not like many of the other women that sometimes took care of him, with their bony limbs and cold fingers. Sometimes he wished she was his mother. "Where you want me to go?" Zunylanih asked quietly.

"Hmmm..." Geneva hummed thoughtfully, casting her glance to the side, then back toward Zunylanih, "Go play in the streets?"

"Oh, my favorite!" Zuny exclaimed, then kissed Geneva on the cheek before she could dodge him, and ran out of the Fallacy.

Once out on the street, he saw that it was cold, covered in ice. His asterism complained about the temperature, deep within the illusion of the little boy that he was. Nevertheless, the best way to combat the cold around this time was to stay active. So he began his ordinary game. He took the cupcakes given him, and began tossing them in the air, to practice his juggling. Geneva had always been impressed when the ten-arc-old went through those motions. He took to it gleefully, as everything that made Geneva happy must be a good thing?

One cupcake, he sent up in circling cycles. Then, when he felt comfortable, the other. Soon enough, he was throwing them up one after the other. One then the other. He walked while he juggled, testing his balance. One cupcake after the other. He thought he actually, finally had gotten the trick! Oh how he wished Geneva were out here to watch him! He'd beg her for another cake to add to the mix, and really knock her socks off!

Presently, he drifted off toward a sheet of black ice on the street, lost his footing and swiftly fell on his behind. The cupcakes fell to the ground, and he groaned, "Oowww!" His bum was probably chipped, but that was alright. His people were special, and could regrow such chippings. They were hard beneath the funhouse illusion, and could regrow such chips and dings.

"Agh." He groaned as he clambered to his feet, but ended up slipping and sliding with his hands and feet all over the place, comically. He fell flat on his face then. "Ooof."





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Dizzy and around and around, dizzier and dizzier, Omesintihlih slid along a patch of ice. She didn't notice the horse in front of her. She barely paid attention to the rider, until the man shouted at her. The Yludih girl, slight and short, spun aside then curtsied low. It'd been a wonderful performance, she was sure of it, and the rush of her audience going every which way seemed to enjoy it. The Things had quieted for the moment or so, but Omesintihlih felt no idleness.

She jumped over the curb. Her eyes widened when she saw a couple performing a play with each other under the arch of a doorway. The woman had such a pretty dress on... Omesintihlih skipped closer, and closer. She eyed the ruffles and the ribbons... could she swipe the satin hem while the adult was preoccupied? If only she'd brought scissors along with her... She would have to find something else to make do and-

A noise distracted her. It cut through the music and a different performance took place down the way. Omesintihlih tapped her feet in a rhythm that only existed in her mind while she watched a boy stumble and fall flat on his face. Her eyes widened at this. What a natural!

She forgot about the woman's dress, and skipped down the street-side toward the boy. Omesintihlih felt the whispers of shadows coax her to do anything else. Do not speak with him, Omesintihlih. What a silly little crystal! Don't, don't, he might have a knife! Oh, imagine if he does, wouldn't that be grand? I rather think those ribbons still deserve to be taken. Omesintihlih, why don't we go home... and Stop! Stop! Or you'll slip!

The girl stopped at the edge of the black ice. She folded her hands behind her and smiled at the fallen boy.

Her leg went out in a straight form then, and she pointed her toes, the gray slipper touched against the ice. She used the ice to glide her foot to one side, then did the same with her other leg. In fleeting steps, she tapped her feet side to side then brought her legs together in a dangerously swift spin on the balls of her feet. Her balance wavered, but she followed the gravity and fell into a low curtsy. Omes' lips curled up in a pleased smile and she said, "You should try dancing next time."

Omesintihlih reached out as if to offer her hand, but then it was merely a gesture of continued freeform dance. She glided over the ice as if she wore skates. Her attention moved on, and she happily hummed a lulled melody. "Ow, ow..." she sang in a high-pitched but softened tone, as if whispering the made-up song. Her voice faded more as she got farther away, sliding and dancing along with no destination or aim in mind except to enjoy the show. "They all fall, hm hm hm, boys don't know how to flip, hm hm, or dance, ow ow, they say as they all fall down."
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𝔠𝔥𝔞𝔬𝔰, 𝔲𝔫𝔯𝔢𝔩𝔢𝔫𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔥𝔬𝔯𝔯𝔦𝔣𝔦𝔠𝔞𝔩𝔩𝔶 𝔟𝔢𝔞𝔲𝔱𝔦𝔣𝔲𝔩 𝔠𝔥𝔞𝔬𝔰
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Zunylanih wasn't long on his duff, trying and struggling like a crab to get up off of the slippery ice, when another child approached him. He was wearing simply some sackcloth trousers, pants, and some leather boots. Nothing as grand as this one.

A little girl, with dark hair, green dress, and grey slippers. He stopped trying to stand for a few moments, just to acknowledge and watch as she moved up next to him. With all the grace of one of those fancy dancers that sometimes performed on the streets, the lass came right up to him, doing a jig on the ice. His eyes widened in astonishment, and he almost cried out in alarm until she followed the gravity, by performing a low curtsy. Somehow she was able to maintain her feet through it all.

"Hahahaha! Yes!" He clapped his hands, delighted at the performance. "Dance? Like the horizontal tango?" Zunylanih asked her. The only dance he had heard of being that which went on in his home.

He listened to her half-whispered, half sung song about bows falling down, and felt a smile creep across his lips. She was funny! He wanted to take her in to the basement theater, to spy on Geneva. It got lonely making snide comments in the darkness as strangers did their dance in the dark.

Zunylanih was getting cold sitting on the ice, so he managed to clamber to his feet after finding a dry patch on the ice, and bowed from the waist for his new acquaintance. "Hi, my name is Z... Keque. Wanna be friends?" He asked simply. His mother hadn't taught him much about how she made friends, so supposed he'd best ask first.

"I live in the Fallacy! With Mother Helena, Mother Minerva and Sister Geneva... Where are you from?"

Before she could answer, he picked up the cupcake that'd fallen to the ground, and stuck it out for her. "Wanna dessert?"

If she tried to take it, he'd snatch it away, and try to hold it over her head, playing a new game.

Hahahah!"




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Of course he clapped. Why wouldn't he clap? Her dance had been marvelous. Her singing was a mere encore. She had little idea as to the question about dance that the boy had asked, and barely even paid attention to him. Until she rounded back, to head toward him again. His clapping had sounded much sweeter than the applause of the shadows. When she returned, she lightly hummed and repeated her song while he bowed to her.

"You want to be in my show?" she asked him in a sing-song voice as he asked about being friends. Such a word was something her family used. She knew her siblings' friends, and she knew her father's friends, and she knew the other Shanty children sometimes brought over that her mother insisted were Omesintihlih's friends. Those children were all so boring, and cried so easily, and didn't understand art nor the ways of performance.

The bow was a good start, though. She regarded the boy with a tilt of her head one way, then the other. Her long dark hair fell alongside like a curtain. She said, "My name is O..."

Tell him a lie. Tell him two lies. Why not make it three then? What of your actual name? Which one? He might find someone to take you back home.

She smiled slightly. She glanced about in darted looks around at the Lair street. Luckily the boy kept talking, as if he hadn't heard her small attempt. Perhaps he hadn't. Perhaps she hadn't spoken aloud at all. Omesintihlih pulled at her long woolen gloves. The wool had gotten frayed along the arms and she picked and pulled at the threads.

"Where am I from, Z... Keque," it was the first thing she said without a melodic tone to her words. Was it a question? A statement? A mockery? She danced her feet about in light steps and then twirled. As her cloak and skirt lowered down around her, when she looked at him again, the girl saw a cupcake in offer to her.

Omesintihlih reached to take the offered gift, but it soon went out of her grasp. She knew this game. Her siblings played it with her before... until they stopped. Her eyes widened, round and fascinated, then she slid closer and tried to grab the little cake again.

Again, she failed though Keque wasn't particularly taller than her. She grabbed onto his sleeve and tried to reach for the cupcake again. She slid up, to stand on top of the boy's feet. The soles of her slippers settled over the tops of his leather boots. Their balance wavered, still standing over icy stone.

Her arms wove around his arm that held the treat out of her reach. She kept the limb steady, then leaned closer and promptly bit down on Keque's bicep as hard as she could. Her gaze watched the cupcake to wait for it to fall. This was always the most dramatic rendition of this scene. Everyone else was so boring about it, with just giggling and trying again and again until giving up or getting the item. Omesintihlih preferred to hear the shocked cries of an audience.

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𝔠𝔥𝔞𝔬𝔰, 𝔲𝔫𝔯𝔢𝔩𝔢𝔫𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔥𝔬𝔯𝔯𝔦𝔣𝔦𝔠𝔞𝔩𝔩𝔶 𝔟𝔢𝔞𝔲𝔱𝔦𝔣𝔲𝔩 𝔠𝔥𝔞𝔬𝔰
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"Oh! You want to play, right." He nodded slowly at that, "Too soon to know if we should be friends."

He watched her carefully as she capered about, and seemed to catch words on the wind, as if hearing her parents or someone calling to her. He smiled, then, realizing something.

"Where are you from? Why, you're from the Plenty, one of them big red ants with the mandibles. The Arthwraiths! Ahh help! Arthwraith! Get it off me!" He laughed and giggled as he held his cupcake just out of her reach, even as she stepped on his boots, and climbed his arm. He snickered at her efforts, until she took a bite out of his arm.

"Ow! Ow!" He cried. "It bit me! My arm my arm, oh oh! It's gone, it's eating my aaaarm!"

Zunylanih slid, and dropped to the ground, writhing and moaning in agony. Inside his pockets were some cave grapes, which were red as any blood light. These he smashed into his garment, to give the appearance of bleeding. It was always a fun prank that really scared a lot of other kids, and sent them running. This girl was different from them. He wanted to know and see how she would respond to the sight of what looked like blood.

"Oh, fie on thee Arthwraith! I'm dying, because your mandible took my arm, oow..."

As he writhed in feigned agony, he slipped a few more grapes into his mouth, and then bit down on them. The blood red fluid dripped down his lips, the corners of his mouth. Then, in a melodramatic pose, he splayed out on the pavement, and feigned death.

"I'm dead now, curse you Arthwraith... curse you..."






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A role! The boy had given her a role to play, and Omesintihlih's green eyes brightened. A giant ant, or Arthwraith, wasn't the most prestigious role though... but it would do for the time, she supposed. She couldn't be picky after all, though a dash of annoyance went through her that he couldn't recognize that she deserved such a better role than some old ant.

As he regaled the tale of his arm bitten off, Omesintihlih carried this through. She yanked at his arm, and to her imagination, it all but snapped right off with ease. The girl scurried to the side and nibbled at the pilfered limb. Her fingers danced along the act, to mimic mandibles, and then she raised her arms as if they were antenna. She watched the boy as he dropped to the ground in his death act.

How wonderful. He truly was a natural at this. The girl lowered and crawled over. She poked at him with her hands antenna, then looked at the red. Blood? Blood! Best check it. If you killed him, you have to run, Omesintihlih. Run on this ice? At this time of night? Why not find out...

Of course, what an Anthwraith would do... would be to continue to eat their prey. So she padded her antenna along his body, clicked her mandibles with noises of her tongue against the roof of her mouth. She lowered and sniffed at his clothes. There were odd scents, like... she couldn't recognize it - she didn't know the scent of floral - and she continued with noises of feigned eating: "nomnomnomnomnom"

The girl swiped her fingers mandible over the blood on his chin, then she licked at them. She knew the taste of cave grapes, she knew the trick herself. It was then that Omesintihlih sat back on her heels, knees against the ice. She dug around in the pocket of her dress, then pulled out a handful of the very same grapes. Omesintihlih squished the entire handful against Keque's face and rubbed it over his cheeks. The Yludih girl sang, "I - the Princess of the Anthwraiths - has eaten your faaaace! Here liesss Zkeque!"

She scrambled to her feet, slipping slightly on the ice but then she managed. Omesintihlih outstretched her arms and sang again in the pure Vahanic words so that it echoed in the street. Someone shouted across the way, but certainly it was encouragement to continue. Omesintihlih decided to explore the echo effect in the space, singing wordlessly in various pitches to test how loud she could make her voice. She raised her grape-stained hand outward at a pair of drunken men who walked past. They looked at the children, baffled by the whole display.

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Zuny lied still as he could, though his chest vibrated in restrained laughter as she crept up on him. She was actually staying to inspect his 'wounds'! He could scarcely contain himself as she worked her fingers over his torso, in mocking eating of his innards. He very nearly lost his control when she started omnomoming into his chest. A laugh caught in his throat, sounding more like a convulsion, before he regained his composure.

Then she began using her own stored snacks of cave grapes that she was carrying, and spread them all over his face. Juice covered him, sticky, and warm from her fingers. And thus was his face eaten.

Her song, it was so nice and delightful, yet humorous. He wanted to jump up and clap for her, but he was part of this play. That wouldn't do at all! And there was but one more scene to play before they were done. And so, the necromancer from deep under the Plenty resurrected the fallen farmer Zkeque. The Zombie Zkeque jumped to his feet, his lost arm going limp, while the other reached out in stiffness.

"Wuuuuuuuuhhhhh...." Zuny groaned in zombie-like, death rattle fashion. "Brains! Do Arthwraiths even have brains! I think Princesses of Arthwraiths do..." He omnomed on his way over toward her, chopping his teeth, the gore in his mouth making it appear as if he was truly a zombie. It was the perfect costume!

Before he arrived at her, he heard a shriek from behind him.

He recognized the voice, it was Geneva!

"Keque!! Keque, where did you go?!" He turned his head to see where she was, and saw that she had red stains running down her neck, and some red juice dribbling down her lip. Had she been using cave grapes as props while playing with her friend? It looked like some burst in her pocket, as they ran down her legs, visible through her thin slip.

She sounded really upset, which gave Keque pause. He wanted to see what was wrong with her, if there was anything wrong, but he was enjoying this game with his new playmate.

However, the choice was made for him, as he felt an arm tugging his cave-grape stained arm from behind, dragging him back to the Fallacy. "Waait! No, I must eat the Princess of the Arthwraiths!!! Vengeance will be mine!!" He reached out for the princess, trying to pull her along but his arm wasn't long enough to reach.

In mere moments, they were through the door, which slid shut behind him. Geneva was crying. Wow she was really selling it.




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The Zombie Zkeque groaned like the undead told about in stories of liches and necromancers. Omesintihlih briefly thought of the necromancers who lived down the street from her family's home. They had a zombie that stood near the door at all breaks, that her mother told her to stay away from. She compared the vision of that to the performance of the boy, briefly, then raised out her hands to the drunken men. She sang to them, "Thy foul undead comes to tear off my head!"

Omesintihlih prepared for her operatic screech. She placed the back of her hand against her forehead and tilted. Before she opened her mouth though, another shriek pierced through the night. She blinked. The audience scurried away, even crossing the street to get away. Her moment of glory had been stolen! By... another woman!

The young girl grabbed onto the skirt of her dress in little fistfuls of fabric. She didn't know who this woman was, but she had used the cave grapes much better. It looked so realistic in the bloodlight glow. Omesintihlih stared up, quiet... her breath held. Her mind whirled about. A challenger! She isn't as talented as you, Omesintihlih. We should go home. No, this theater is much better! Yes, yes, we have to find more audiences. You have to show them why you're the star.

The girl slid down to her knees in dancerly motion. She placed her hands against her chest, her asterism in flux. She outstretched her arms toward the boy as he was dragged away and sang, "Alas, the Dread Necromantress steals my prey from final death! Shall she give him many arms to destroy me one day? Always eat the body!

The Quacian girl turned away from the odd fool boy, and gestured toward the street and the various people she could catch sight of. "Alas, Alas, learn what the Anthwraith Princess has, always eat all of the body! The arms and legs! The face and limbs! Eat, eat, eat, until nothing is left to be taken by thine necromantic lords and ladies of death!"

She stood, spun around, then heard another clap of hands from across the way. A bottle landed and crashed nearby. Glass shattered near her feet. There was a trio of what looked to be foreigners in the balcony - with their fair hair and pale skin - and she curtsied to them. By the time she glanced over, she saw that her new friend was gone. She moved on without much care, to dance around the glass for those on the balcony.
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Acting: Using props to convince people of the reality of your play.
Acting: Playing dead.
Acting: Playing undead.
Deception: Using cave grapes to pretend that you're wounded/bleeding.
Discipline: Restraining your laughter.
Endurance: Falling on your behind hurts.
Endurance: Falling flat on your face hurts.
Combat: Thrown (Baked Goods): Juggling one at a time, until you can add another to the rotation.
Combat: Unarmed (Food Fight): Holding a cupcake out of reach of your playmate/opponent.

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Well, Zunylanih certainly embodies that of a comedic performer. I think my favorite parts of the thread were just reading his dialogue during his acting. I don’t think I’ve ever read anything quite like this and I look forward to seeing what his motivations are in future threads. Enjoy your rewards.



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Acting: Using props to convince people of the reality of your play.
Acting: Playing the role assigned to you.
Acting: Considering how you move.
Dancing: Using your core to balance.
Dancing: Using your arms to balance.
Dancing: Gliding on thin ice.
Endurance: Always ready for an encore.
Stealth: Sneaking out of a house while others sleep.
Singing: Performing a song you can hear in your head.
Singing: Projecting your voice.

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This was a nice innocent thread with a heavy comedic tone. It was nice to read how your two characters met and the improvised show that you both put on. Good job giving people something to watch and enjoy your rewards.
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