• Solo • Till and Plow

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Rei
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Rei had been alerted through gossip at the Infirmary that a community garden had been built up in the Glass Quarter. They discussing possibly buying a little plot of land for the Infirmary to grow herbs, weighing out whether or not it was fiscally better to grow their own or just buy. She hadn’t weighed in on this matter, too distracted by her own thoughts. She had been thinking about starting her own herb garden, but it was pricey to buy a swath of land outside the city walls. She knew she would never use all the space and the time it would take… but she might could manage a box garden.

When she got off work that day, she took a walk up to the Glass Quarter. The packed dirt road turned to worn cobblestone. The buildings became noticeably nicer. Rei walked off in the direction of the park, walking through and coming to the community garden on the other side. It appeared to be closed off into three sections of differently sized garden boxes. Most of them were empty, though a few of the larger ones looked to have vegetable sprouts and some of the smaller ones had just the beginning of herbs.

There was a small stone building at the front entrance, and she looked through the window and saw a man sitting at a small desk perusing through a leather-bound book that was spread open on the desk. He had a quill and ink well and was scribbling something on the parchment. Rei stepped in through the door and waved her hand in a gesture of greeting. “I’m Rei, I live down the road in the Earth Quarter. I was hoping to ask about renting a box.” She smiled down at him, noting his gray and white hair and scruffy beard. He was wearing a wide-brimmed straw hat along with brown linen trousers and a tan linen tunic.

“Gregory Plains. Pleased to meet you, miss.” He extended a hand out in greeting and Rei took it. “What are you looking to plant? We have three by three meter boxes, generally just herbs and flowers for those. Six by six, herbs and smaller vegetables. Nine by nine, start having room for larger vegetables. Ten, twenty, and thirty gold nel respectively.” Rei nodded. “Mostly just looking for herbs. I think a three by three for this season. Might branch out next season.” He stroked his beard before dipping the quill and turning to a particular page in the book, scratching the details of her name, the size box she was renting, the rate, and for what season.

Rei fished into the pocket of her hide pants and drew out ten gold nel and placed it on the desk. Gregory got up from his chair and motioned for her to follow. They walked out into the gardens, and he led her to a small box with fresh, dark soil in it. The smell of earth permeated the air along with other various scents: the spicy smell of herbs, the sweet scent of fruit, the earthy smell of vegetables, and the array of floral scents from the flowers. “This one is all yours. We’ve got tools over there in the shed you can use.” He motioned to a shed off in the corner she didn’t notice earlier. “Thanks, Gregory.”

She waved at him as he walked back to his place in the small stone building. Rei went over to the shed and found a plow. She would have to go buy seeds eventually, but she knew the first thing she needed to do was to till the earth and get the soil nice and loose. Then, she could till out lines to place the seeds in. She took the plow, grunting with its weight, and plopped it in the fresh soil. Her hide shoes sunk into the soil as she stepped into the box. Thankfully, she had plaited her hair back and woven in some leather straps. A few stray hairs were clinging to her forehead that was quickly becoming damp with sweat. She pushed the plow in a line up the box, then in a line back from the box. When she had plowed all the vertical lines, she went back and plowed horizontal lines. When she was satisfied with how she had tilled the soil, she lugged the heavy plow back to the shed.
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After she had worked up a decent sweat working with the plot, she wiped at her forehead with her hands. She needed to go buy seeds. Rei headed to the market in the Earth Quarter and into a shop off the street that sold seeds for plants. “I’m looking for some herb seeds. Mostly medicinal herbs.” The elderly female shopkeeper urged her inside the door. She pointed to a section of jars of seeds with labels. Rei could tell from the names that these were all herbs. She knelt down and went through them.

When she left, she had bought seeds for cloves, ginger, mint, rosemary, strangler fig, and brain berries. It would be enough to start with for now. She didn’t want to overload herself with more work than she could handle. The seeds were separated into individual burlap bags. She could have probably been a bit more diverse in how she had planned out her garden, but she wanted some duel purpose herbs- cooking and medicinal- and thought she would try things out first before she sank any more nel into the project. It was a risky business when you only knew the very basics of what you were doing.

Rei took the walk back. It wasn’t a short jaunt. With seeds in hand, she bypassed the stone building and went straight to her little box in the back. She left the seeds on the timber edges and went to the shed to retrieve and spade and some gloves. She slipped the scratchy gloves on her hands and gripped at the wooden handle of the spade. She started working at digging deep little holes for her seeds, making sure they were the appropriate depth and width. She dropped seeds into the holes and packed the dirt back over them carefully.

When all the seeds were planted and packed, she went to the on site well. She pulled up a bucket, wiping her forearm across her forehead to remove the beads of sweat that had formed there. Toting the heavy bucket with a few grunts to the edge of her box. She dipped cupped hands into the water and worked on scattering the water across the soil. It dampened it, but she wasn’t sure that it was good enough. Back to the well she went, sending the bucket down and pulling it up again. She took the bucket and set it by the box before repeating the watering process.

When the soil was good and dampened, she returned the gloves and spade back to the shed. The bucket was returned to the well, and she looked at her finished work with a contented sigh. The sweat was dripping down the sides of her face and dampening the underside of her hair. She turned to leave, knowing she would be back to check and water it the next day. Besides, the clouds were beginning to bank up and get darker the longer the day went on. A storm was coming.
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It had been eleven trials of going to water the budding garden, though the rain had meant that she had to go less times to keep things growing and alive. As the days went on, when she went there was occasionally a few weeds or invading mushrooms in the area that had to be dug up and pulled out by the roots. But finally, the driving rain had cleared out of the area, leaving a mostly cloudless sky with bright sun shining down. The temperature was getting a lot more pleasant outside.

Now that it had been eleven trials, she was approaching her small garden box with the knot of anticipation in her stomach. She passed by a few budding gardens and even fewer that were full-fledged. When she came upon hers, she was proud to see the little green sprouts sticking from the soil along with a few wooden sprouts. An electric shot of glee sprang through her body from her stomach and out into her fingers and toes. She didn’t know she could get such a reaction from simply growing a few plants. But she was giving life to something in a box of barren soil.

However, she noticed around the edges of the timber that there were a few spindly weeds she must have missed before. She lowered herself to her knees and grabbed the first spindly vine between her fingers and pulled. It snapped off above the soil and then dug her bare fingers into the dirt to wiggle out the roots and pull it free from the soil. She tossed it aside. She grabbed the next one and used her lesson learned, wiggling the roots from the dirt before she pulled it free. It got tossed aside next the other weed she had just pulled out.

After weeding out the edges of the garden box, she looked the plants. A few of them had a browning or yellowing leaf. Rei hoped this wasn’t a bad sign. Maybe you just had a few hits and misses when you didn’t exactly know what you were doing. She wasn’t sure if she was supposed to pick the leaves off or leave them, so she plucked the decaying leaves and piled them up with the leaves. Hopefully it would keep the rest of the plants from browning or yellowing. She smiled down at her plants and dusted off her hands on her wine colored skirt.
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Name: Rei

Knowledge:
Location: Rharne Community Garden
Gregory Plains: Community Garden Caretaker
Gardening: How to till using a plow
Gardening: The first step is to till the earth and loosen up the soil
Gardening: How to plan out a simple starter garden
Gardening: How to plant a seed
Gardening: How to determine the amount of water required for watering plants
Gardening: Weeds must be pulled out by their roots
Gardening: Plucking off browning or yellowing leaves should keep the rest from decaying… hopefully
Endurance: How to endure a long day in the sun
Endurance: Sweat is a sign of hard work
Strength: Grunts can help release physical stress

Loot: Congrats! You've rented out a 3x3 meter planter's box. Please deduct -10gn from your ledger for the Vhalar 716 rental cost of the box, as well as the price of the seeds Rei purchased.
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 0/5
Structure: 5/5
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Comments: I loved this thread, Rei. It was a beautiful peek into her life, and was woven with thoughtfulness and care. I really enjoyed the little details you included, such as the yellowing of the leaves & the persistence involved in plowing, planting, and plucking weeds. It was meditative, in a way, and showed Rei's appreciation for the outdoors and gardening. In future, you may want to include a prayer to Moseke so that you can earn devotion points. This would definitely be a prime opportunity.

One quick note - please be sure to start a new paragraph when a different character is speaking. As with my other review today, I didn’t deduct any points because this is something new that I’ve noticed. Going forward, I would encourage you to make this small change in order to avoid losing any point in Structure.

Well done, and I'm looking forward to your next thread!

If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thanks!
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