• Out of Character • Peer Review Requests

[Kazmir Saelaris]

Thread Name: Communion
Character(s) Involved:Minor NPC's
Quick Summary:Waking disoriented from a nightmare, Paladin scares patrons of Ye Olde Inn, then retreats to his room for a discussion with Pala.
Requested Knowledge:None specific off the top of my head.
Other Notes:This thread is a demonstration of how Pala and Paladin interact, argue, and how she manipulates him. As well some characterization and Paladin realizing his future goals and demonstrating his thought process. Some of it may be a bit hard to follow by design, as I was trying to hint at the chaos of his own head space.
Fame:Maybe a small adjustment for scareing the handful of patrons. Also he has been singing with an NPC on slow nights, so that may be worth something *shrugs*
Warning: None

[Aeon]

Thread Name: Not Every Lesson Is In Fighting
Character(s) Involved: City NPC(s), mostly Ryqos Ej'nacj (awaiting approval)
Quick Summary:Aeon gets taught the importance of honesty, pride, and bravery, also gets pointed towards the job of Animal handler at the Skye Verath lodge
Requested Knowledge: If you find any I'll consider you a miracle-worker
Other Notes:Thank you!
Fame:N/A
Warning: N/A

[Kazmir Saelaris]

Thread Name: [Andaris Library] Learning in a Languid Light
Character(s) Involved:Faith
Quick Summary:Faith and Paladin meet a second time. Paladin attempts to ease "Feather Head"'s vexation, and finds her to be much a different woman than before.
Requested Knowledge:Faith requests knowledge for "around politics and etiquette". I didn't end up getting to mention as I wanted, but two specific knowledge's for Paladin would be Magnesium sulfate (epsom salt), and Rynmerian death rites and Rynilist afterlife info. (according to Kingdom, for the later there's some vagueness about them going to the dream world but that's it.) >.>
Other Notes: I know the pieces fit cuz I watched them fall away
Fame:Paladin didn't piss anybody off! Yippy!
Warning: None

[Faith Augustin]

Thread Name: Party Tea Time!
Characters Involved; Yana and Faith
Quick Summary:Faith's job thread which starts out as solo and then becomes collaborative as she attends a party.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see! (Cookery for Faith, please?)
Other Notes: Thanks for grading!
Fame: Whatever you think?
Warning: None

[Kazmir Saelaris]

Thread Name: Justice
Character(s) Involved: Minor NPC, Jamal Kash'deel, Mildred Kash'deel
Quick Summary:Kazmir finds a line between Justice and Vengeance, and disregards in completely.
Requested Knowledge:How to pronounce "chiffon". Joking.
Other Notes: WARNING: This thread is VERY dark. It contains sexual reference, home invasion, torture, and (technically) murder. It is showing Paladin at nearly his most vile, twisted, and violent. It may not be suitable for all. I toned down the graphic violence, but turned up the sadism... Though not a perfect crime by any means, there was very little evidence left at the scene, save a decapitated pig an a bit of blood. And a survivor which is unlikely to talk. I pushed through the last part of it as it was, at times, very difficult to get into that head space Kazmir was in. I now need a hug. And a shower with borax. And a puppy to cuddle.
Fame:I sure as hell hope not.
Warning: WARNING: This thread is VERY dark. It contains sexual reference, home invasion, torture, and (technically) murder. Doubling the warning up.

[Yanahalqah]

Thread Name: The Die Is Cast
Character(s) Involved: Yanahalqah and a bunch of unnamed NPCs
Quick Summary: Yana does a bit of gambling at the Blacksmith Arms.
Requested Knowledge: Something on gambling, perhaps?
Other Notes: I kind of forgot where I was going with this one somewhere after the second or third post, so I just tried to end it, but it might be a bit forced or unnatural. I dunno. I just wanted it to be finished.
Fame: Whatever you see? I don't think there's anything in there though.
Warning: There's a mention of "balls" in there somewhere. But that's about it I think.

[Alistair]

Thread Name: Men of Avarice
Character(s) Involved: Alistair and Duncan
Quick Summary: Alistair hires Duncan as a mercenary... and immediately puts him to use!
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: I love you.
Fame: Any
Warning: Combat. Face melting.

PS., did I mention I love you?

[Elyna]

Thread Name: What a way to make a living
Character(s) Involved: Elyna
Quick Summary: Job thread with the Skyriders
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: +1 killing a bandit?
Warning: Not really?

[Alistair]

Thread Name: The Travesty of Coincidence
Character(s) Involved: Alistair and Kyon
Quick Summary: Alistair gets caught performing Necromancy
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Kyon is not going to RP here. He doesn't need to be graded. Also, no need to give me lores about him being a Burhan or anything like that, as that was denied. Sorry for the difficulty!
Fame: Any
Warning: Nope.

[Alistair]

Thread Name: Memento Mori
Character(s) Involved: Alistair
Quick Summary: Alistair engages in a dangerous, life threatening operation and weaves magic with medicine to save a man's life (with the help of the lovely Damien!)
Requested Knowledge: Medicine, Magical (and how they can conjoin)
Other Notes: I love you.
Fame: Good deed +1, Witness to act of heroism +2 (Damien's magical wonderfulness), New medical procedure +2, 2x (Using Necromancy to dissect, using abrogation to coagulate blood) so +4 from that
Warning: Eh, bloody. I tried not to sweat the gory details.