• PM To Join • An Untouched Paradise (Max)

Qit goes to Almund to seek out part of her curse removal

Almund is a thriving township with a dark side. With houses made from the wooden bodies of decommissioned ships, there are many opportunities here, coupled with many dangers.

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Re: An Untouched Paradise (Max)

Mon Sep 03, 2018 3:06 pm

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Clothes Hater

Points awarded: 15

Knowledge:

Acrobatics: Leaping upright from a sitting position
Acrobatics: Leaping on a man's back
Intimidation: A forty yard stare is better than words
Investigation: Start with the scariest one first
Leadership: Make people earn their pay
Navigation: Further north can be over water too
Negotiation: Offer to pay for services from city folk
Tactics: When an ally fights, you fight
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Rear Naked Choke Hold
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Bite while grappling an enemy

Magic: No magic exp

Other: +5 fame for nearly doing a Mike Tyson


Mace Windu

Points awarded: 15

Knowledge:

Deception: Luring People into False Sense of Comfort
Deception: Switching Suddenly From Seductive to Dangerous
Leadership: Give an Ally Opportunity to Prove Their Meddle to Others
Investigation: Linking Symbols with Clues
Investigation: Unraveling a Riddle
Investigation: Asking Around About a Clue
Navigation: Using a Compass
Navigation: Familiarizing Oneself by Wandering
Negotiation: Reassuring Payment
Seduction: Suggestive Phrases

Magic: No magic exp

Other: +5 Fame for intimidating a crew of sailors

Notes:
Aaaaaand there goes Qit's guide. At least she still has a lead. Also Max seems much nicer than I'd been giving her credit for. Go figure.

I very much liked this thread. I think Max and Qit pair very well together, and the story moved forwards at a nice enough pace. I'm definitely up to read more of the two of you together any time!

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