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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Silence
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: none.

Requested Rewards:
Faith
No skill knowledge - it's a pc development thing.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Morning Rounds
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Medicine: Identifying a Coma
Medicine: checking for fetal movements
Psychology: Remembering and using your patcients names.
Medicine: Collecting symptoms information and identifying without seeing injury.
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Fame: no
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Caius Gawyne
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Thread Name: Sleep is for the Weak
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Just a little scuffle with two drunks.

Requested Rewards:
Darcyanna Venora
Skill Knowledge: (8+4=12 possible)
Medicine: Reevi causes feelings of joy
Medicine: Reevi causes depth perception changes
Medicine: Narcotic intoxication can cause feelings of claustrophobia
Musical Instrument (Piano): How to check your instrument is in tune
Musical Instrument (Piano): Playing a melody
Musical Instrument (Piano): Natural composition without sheet music
Musical Instrument (Piano): Chord combinations and progressions
Politics: How to properly address your noble peers
Rhetoric: Making introductions
Resistance: Building tolerance to narcotic substances

Other Knowledge:
Location: Rynmere Mid Town
Location: Rynmere University
Caius Gawyne: Is pretty decent with a sword
Caius Gawyne: Isn’t backwards about coming forwards
Caius Gawyne: Works as a printmakers apprentice
Caius Gawyne: Is studying Religion at Rynmere University

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Scrapes and bruises.
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Caius Gawyne
Skill Knowledge: (8+4=12 possible)
Blades: Saber: Steadying your grip when surprised
Blades: Saber: Slash to the face
Blades: Saber: Taking opportunities as they come
Blades: Saber: Quick slice under the ribs
Business Management: Cleaning up after the job is done
Business Management: Being the last to leave
Intimidation: That noble sneer
Politics: No delicate descriptors
Stealth: Pretending at intimacies to avoid consequences
Seduction: Knight in the dark
Seduction: More than just innocently protective
Unarmed Combat: When in doubt, put a knee to that groin

Other Knowledge:
Location: Rynmere University
Darcyanna Venora: Gets wasted at parties
Darcyanna Venora: Has a good set of lungs
Darcyanna Venora: Pianist and Student of Music
Darcyanna Venora: Sleep is for the weak
House Venora: A flaming fod-sack of an arc, politically
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised face, split lip, and sore side from being punched.
Fame: Reviewer's discretion! Positive, please. (Woman rescued, drunks busted up)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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8+4 =12
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Thread Name: Morning Then
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: This thread is not gluten free.

Requested Rewards:
Darcyanna Venora
Skill Knowledge: (8+4=12 possible)
Musical Instrument (Piano): Diatonic scale in music
Musical Instrument (Piano): Writing sheet music
Endurance: Functioning on little food
Endurance: Studying even with a hangover
Etiquette: Returning ones belongings cleaned and all
Etiquette: Ensuring you don’t push your issues onto others
Psychology: Sometimes people are actually good
Psychology: Friends without benefits
Psychology: Little dogs are adorable
Rhetoric: The light history of the House Venora
Seduction: Asking someone to accompany you to a function.

Other Knowledge:
Caius Gawyne: Has a dog called Smudge
Caius Gawyne: Knows the best place for eats
Caius Gawyne: Accepted your invitation
Smudge: Is the most adorable thing on the face of Idalos
Location: Caius’ favourite bakery

Loot: 1 Delicious pastry (eaten!).
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Caius Gawyne
Skill Knowledge: (8+4=12 possible)
Endurance: Functioning on little sleep
Endurance: Staying up that extra break to write
Etiquette: I don't sarding care
Etiquette: Nicknames instead of titles
Persuasion: I don't want your help, just your company
Persuasion: Adorable dogs are always a bonus
Psychology: Sometimes bruises are roguish
Psychology: Enjoying someone's company without strings attached
Rhetoric: Obligatory student conversation about subjects of study
Rhetoric: The family genealogy of the House of Gawyne
Seduction: Making a fool of yourself for attention
Seduction: Now she knows where you live

Other Knowledge:
Location: Favorite Bakery
NPC: Smudge the Dog: Likes Darcy
Darcyanna Venora: Goes by Darce or Darcy
Darcyanna Venora: Also "studies" Medicine
Darcyanna Venora: Likes your dog
Darcyanna Venora: Totally asked you out

Loot: Delicious pastries (eaten!), -6sn
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion (Bought Breakfast +1, Seen in public with a Venora lol, etc.)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Shipment Number None
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Puke alert! Splashdown in 3...
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Interrogation: "I know her!"
  • Acting: Hurl with nausea inducing herbs
  • Intelligence: You can learn anything from Inns
  • Deception: Don't give them a chance to think
  • Intimidation: Make yourself look important with papers
  • Linguistics: The written codes of the Fence
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: -
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Thread Name: Kenneled
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language and some violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Location: The Kennel
The Kennel: First Place of Scalvoris Employment
Dana: The Kennel Master
Gibney: The Hound Master
Endurance: Functioning Through a Hangover
Discipline: Refusing to Break Under Mild Torture
Endurance: Taking a Beating
Detection: Spotting an Expected Target
Unarmed Combat: Thrashing Body to Hinder Kidnappers
Deception: Denying Knowledge of Interest to Another

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised face
Fame: +3 (Timely Delivery of Needed Goods)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Purpose
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Sabine approaches the Thunder Priestess faction and begins the next chapter in her journey. This is story-heavy and acts as a bridge between Sabine’s old and new life.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: 1 page | 6 knowledge
Detection: How To ‘People Watch’
Detection: Signals of High Status
Persuasion: Appeal To Emotion
Persuasion: Be Clear About What You Want
Tactics: Be Loyal To Your Allies
Rhetoric: Tell A Story To Explain Your Position

Other Knowledge:
Location: Earth Market
Immortal: Ilaren
Faction: Thunder Priestess
Thunder Priestesses: Rharne’s Shield
Thunder Priestesses: Ilaren’s Sisterhood
Thunder Priestess Rank: Novitiate
Thunder Priestess Rank: Priestess
Nathalia: Thunder Priestess

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer’s choice!
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Caius Gawyne
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Thread Name: Not a Date, As Such
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: A little bit of skinny dipping in Vhalar.

Requested Rewards:
Darcyanna Venora
Skill Knowledge: (8+4=12 possible)
Cosmetology: The Clothes Maketh the Woman
Politics: Know your lower houses and their aspirations
Medicine: Fairysnuff has hallucinogenic properties
Medicine: Narcotics can numb the six senses
Resistance: Using narcotic effect to dull external weather conditions
Resistance: Adjusting for hallucinogenic effects
Musical Instrument (Piano): Quality sounds with a quality instrument
Musical Instrument (Piano): Forgetting yourself in the music
Chemistry: Bioluminescence in nature
Seduction: Getting your kit off is a sure fire way to get his attention
Endurance: Tolerating freezing water

Other Knowledge:
Caius Gawyne: Gave you a flower
Caius Gawyne: Is often late
Caius Gawyne: Got his kit off too
Caius Gawyne: Kissed you
Caius Gawyne: Swam in the Tulburn pond (they call it a lake but let’s be honest here.)
Location: Outside Andaris: The Tulburn Estate
Location: The Tulburn Garden
Location: The Tulburn's Ornamental PondUniversity

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion (seen at a social event, played piano, drugs).
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Caius Gawyne
Skill Knowledge: (8+4=12 possible)
Deception: I'm fine.
Endurance: Skinny dipping in Vhalar
Etiquette: Properly improper
Etiquette: Insulting someone with subtlety
Politics: Reminding someone of their status
Seduction: Admitting your feelings are more than platonic in nature
Seduction: Curious touches
Seduction: That first kiss, though
Stealth: Using less trodden garden paths in the dark
Stealth: Knowing how to find an alternative exit
Swimming: Getting into cold water quickly
Storytelling: You should have seen the other guy

Other Knowledge:
Location: Outside Andaris: The Tulburn Estate
Location: The Tulburn Garden
Location: The Tulburn's Ornamental Pond
NPC: Lady Anthea Tulburn, Political History Student
Darcyanna Venora: Drug Supplier for Rynmere University Students
Darcyanna Venora: Might have a drug problem
Darcyanna Venora: Pianist for hire
Darcyanna Venora: Got you out of your clothes for a swim
Darcyanna Venora: You kissed her first
Darcyanna Venora: Scars?

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion! (Seen at a social event, etc.)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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Thread Name: A Drab Home /viewtopic.php ... 253#p64253
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill:
Negotiation: Giving something can give a favorable result
Socialization: Making idle conversation for elevated mood
Socialization: Don't jump to conclusions to make a good conversation
Socialization: Finding something in common with the other party
(I can't think of any more that are applicable :D)

Non-Skill:
Ne'haer Holiday: Art Festival


Loot: A painting of a golden library. Within it, the books flying from the shelves, circling in the air above. From the books, words written in common rain down onto a desk with an Eldisi studying. The words pool into a mist that flowed into her eyes.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Notes: The market place of Ne'haer is turned into an art fair, where local artists set up stalls to show their wares. Additionally, many actors and musicians will perform on the main stage, making this a festival that celebrates the creativity of Ne'haerians.

Bonus experience approved by Jade, to be given to the following character(s) involved in this thread, only upon the completion of the review, where the character(s) demonstrated celebration of the holiday, Art Festival, on 35th Saun, Arc 717.

Bonus Experience Upon Review Completion:
Knowledge
Ne'haer Holiday: Art Festival
+2 Bonus Skill Points
Free Item: A painting by a local artist OR a leather-bound sketchpad. (See painting description)
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Neutralitis
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Alchemy: Must Be Done in Steps
Alchemy: Many Reagents Come from Animals and Plants
Alchemy: Triggers Must be Added Last
Detection: Making Assumptions Based on How Late Someone Is
Politics: Some People Don't Care If They're Giving You A Weapon


Loot:
Null Gauntlet
(Please inform Maltruism once this thread is graded so that he may review the Null Gauntlet)

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 86
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

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