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[Job thread] Ismene gets a job at Doracre's Delicacies

12th of Ashan 717

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12th of Ashan, 717

Ismene stood in front of the stonewalled shop, looking in disgust at the bright pink and gold paint that covered the door and windowsills and the pink and gold scalloped banner fluttering in the breeze along the roof line. From the little she was able to glimpse beyond the pyramids of cakes piled high in the windows, the interior was gold as well, although thankfully they seemed to have used up all their pink paint on the outside. There were people streaming in and out of the door, those going in with eyes like pies, those coming out already burying eager teeth into steaming buns, or proudly swinging little muslin bags neatly tied with yet more gold ribbon.

Pushing through the colourful door, Ismene entered the bakery. Before she had even taken her first step she was surrounded by familiar and unfamiliar smells. She recognised the base notes - the warm maltiness of freshly baked bread, the smooth butteriness of flaking pastry, the strong, clean scent of flour - but she was not used to the overwhelming assault of floral sweetness. The village bakery where she had worked at home had tended to stick to good, solid farmhouse fare: crusty loaves, hearty pies, wedges of seed-studded brown bread. The fanciest they ever got was a roll worked into the shape of an ear of corn for a harvest festival. This was a different world. There were delicate mouthfuls of coloured sugar wound into intricate patterns, and little mounds of icing coiled neatly on tiny cupcakes dusted with grated nut; there were light and fluffy pastries oozing with cream, and fresh strawberries balanced precariously on dark, moist cakes. The air was so sweet it felt almost sticky.

After staring for a few bits, Ismene pulled herself together. It wasn't what she was expecting, but she was a baker in need of a job, and this was a bakery, so it would have to do. She approached an innocent-looking woman with wavy blonde hair who was standing behind the counter. 'What can I do for you today, sweetheart?' the woman said. 'An iced bun, perhaps? No, that's not right for you. Something more delicate, I think. Can I tempt you with one of these? A new recipe, this is our first batch. Try one!' She held out a tray of little biscuits of the palest purple, each topped with a juicy slice of strawberry. Ismene popped one into her mouth. The biscuit was light and buttery, crumbling deliciously in her mouth. The taste was floral, but also somehow bitter, and the tang of strawberry juice added freshness. 'It's delicious,' Ismene mumbled through her mouthful. 'Shall I make you a bag?' the woman asked.

'Actually,' Ismene cut in, 'I'm not here to buy anything. I was wondering if you needed an apprentice, or just a helper. I worked in the village bakery in Treth for a few years, and I'm a quick learner.' The woman put the tray down, and considered Ismene more carefully. 'A baker, huh?' she said. 'You don't look like one, if you don't mind me saying.' Ismene smiled her sweetest smile. She herself was well aware that she did not fit the typical image of a jolly, round-cheeked, flour-dusted baker. 'Maybe not, but I promise I can bake,' she said.

The woman hesitated for a second before sighing. 'You're in luck. Eryn - my apprentice - is... out of sorts at the moment. You can fill in for him for a while, and if I like your work there might be a permanent position at the end of it.' Ismene smiled again. 'Great. When do I start?'

'Right now, if you want. As you can see, we've got more customers than we know what to do with today. I assume you know how to make a bread roll?' 'Of course,'
Ismene replied. 'Excellent. Head through to the back and grab an apron. Tell Dalis I've found her a helper. Oh, I'm Isabelle, by the way,' the blonde woman added. 'Thank you. And I'm Ismene.'

Ismene did as the woman had told her, and found a beaming Sev'ryn woman bustling about in the kitchen at the back of the shop. 'Are you Dalis?' she asked. The woman nodded, not stopping what she was doing. 'Isabelle sent me. I'm filling in for Eryn. She said you could use some help?' Dalis did stop then, for just long enough to look Ismene up and down before shrugging and gesturing to an apron hanging on a hook in the corner. Ismene guessed she had been thinking the same as Isabelle. Tying the apron round her waist, she walked over to the counter where Dalis was working, and waited for instructions.

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Dalis pointed to large bowl full of a whitish yellow mixture. 'I've already started the next batch of rolls, there's water, sugar and yeast in there. It should be about ready for the flour, but give it a stir and see what you think. I've got an order for a decorated cake that needs to be delivered today, so if you don't mind I'll leave you to it and start on that.' Ismene nodded, and inspected the mixture in the bowl. It was creamy and smooth when she stirred it with the wooden spoon that had been laid over the top, and looked just like the bread starter mixtures she was used to at home. The recipe was one of the first she'd learnt, and she'd made bread almost every day for years, so she knew what needed to be done. She was just grateful they hadn't asked her to create anything too exotic.

She had a look around the kitchen before getting started, wanting to make sure she knew where everything was. She had always liked to keep her work area neat and well-organized, and she was pleased to see Dalis seemed to have the same attitude. The different types of flour were all arranged in labelled jars along a counter, and on a shelf above them were an array of pots, sacks and containers of salt and pepper, sugar, and various herbs and spices. Ismene pulled down the jar labelled 'Bread Flour' and sniffed it. The dusty aroma hit her in the back of the throat in the familiar way. Using the wooden scoop that was inside the jar, she spooned two large heaps of the flour into the bowl, and added a pinch of salt and some oil. Stirring the mixture all the while, she gradually added the rest of the flour, working the mixture with her hands as it got stickier and started to form into a solid, glutinous clump at the bottom of the bowl. She dusted the counter with a bit more flour, and then set to kneading. For a skinny woman she had surprisingly strong arm muscles; the result of years spent handling dough. She let her mind wander as she worked, stretching and tugging the dough or raising it to slap it back down on the counter. For all the ache in her arms, this part of the process had always been one she enjoyed. There was something meditative about the rhythmic movements, and she loved to feel the dough transforming under her hands like a living creature.

When she was done she placed the dough back in an oiled bowl, covered it with a cloth, and set it to the side. It would need to wait at least a break before it could be shaped and baked. She looked up, ready to ask what else Dalis needed her to do, when she noticed a young girl standing at the side of the kitchen. She must have been about twelve or thirteen arcs, and she had long, straight hair and piercing blue eyes that were staring straight at Ismene. The dark-haired baker glanced at Dalis, but the Sevryn did not seem concerned about the girl's presence. Ismene smiled at her, and said, 'Hello. I'm Ismene. What's your name?' The girl waited a moment before replying quietly. 'Elleth. What are you doing here?' Dalis laughed. 'Be nice, Elleth. Ismene's here to help out while Eryn's not feeling well.' The guarded expression in the girl's eyes changed to one of open suspicion. 'How long will she be here for?' The Sevryn sighed. 'I don't know, sweetheart, it depends on Eryn. Why don't you go and play outside? We're both very busy.' Elleth gave Ismene one last penetrating stare and then turned and walked through to the front of the shop.

Dalis smiled apologetically. 'She's a sweet girl, really. She just gets these moods sometimes.' Ismene waved her hand dismissively. 'Don't worry about it. I'm sure I'd find it strange if there was suddenly a stranger making bread in my kitchen.' She wasn't much interested in a teenage girl and her moodswings, so she changed the subject. 'The dough's over there proving. What else can I do to help?' Dalis had a quick look in the bowl and nodded, apparently satisfied with her new assistant's work. 'Take your pick,' she said, pointing to a handwritten listen pinned to the wall. It said 'Today: bread rolls, currant buns, chocolate pastries, macaroons, decorated cake.' Ismene had to admit sheepishly that the only thing she would feel comfortable making on her own was the currant buns. Dalis smiled. 'That's fine. We're not always this busy so there'll be plenty of time to teach you some of the other recipes another day. The Festival of Love is coming up, you see, so we've got a lot of extra orders in at the moment. For now, though, currant buns will be grand.' Ismene nodded, and got to work.

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As Ismene poured the ingredients for the currant bun mixture into a bowl, folding the sunshine-yellow butter into the white flour and then cracking a deep orange egg satisfyingly into the well she had made in the centre, she chatted casually to Dalis. 'This Eryn, then, is he ill? Isabelle seemed to think he'd be away for a while.' Dalis hesitated, looking up from her delicate icing work. 'I suppose you could say he's ill,' she said. 'He has...episodes. They're quite rare, but when they come, he normally has to rest for a while. This recent one only started a couple of days ago, so it's lucky you came along when you did.' Ismene was intrigued, but pretended not to be. She poured grainy sugar into the bowl and used her hands to mix it in, enjoying the contrast of the hard granules against the creamy butter and egg mixture. 'The poor man. Does anyone know what causes his episodes?' Again there was a slight hesitation from the Sevryn woman. She didn't look like the sort of person who enjoyed lying, but clearly there was something she didn't want to say. 'We have a good idea of what causes it,' she settled on. 'But there's nothing that can be done, so it doesn't help much.' She tucked a hair behind her ear and returned to her icing in a clear indication that the conversation was over.

Ismene added yeast and salt to her mixture, and then gradually added some warm milk, letting it pool slowly around the ridges in the gloopy mess in the bottom of the bowl before stirring it so that it all congealed together to create the familiar sticky dough. As she kneaded she caught a glimpse of Elleth standing in the doorway that connected the front of the shop with the kitchen in the back. She was amused to see the girl was glaring at her. She had no idea what she could have done to rub this odd child up the wrong way, but she couldn't help feeling a certain respect for her unblinking and instantaneous dislike. Clearly this was a youngster who knew her own mind. She went back to her kneading, and when she next looked up Elleth had gone.

'So is Elleth Isabelle's daughter?' she asked. Dalis nodded, seemingly pleased to have a question she could answer easily. 'Yes, don't they look alike?' she said affectionately. Ismene murmured her agreement, and then asked, 'and what about Elleth's father? He must be where she gets those striking blue eyes from. Does he not work in the bakery as well?' Dalis looked down sadly. 'I'm sorry to say he's no longer with us. He died several years ago. Since then Elleth's been... well, you saw her earlier. I'm not sure she's ever been happy since then. She goes off on all sorts of escapades, you know, in the wrong parts of town. Sometimes she drives her mother and me nearly mad with worry.' Ismene listened, surprised by the unexpected outpouring of information. 'Of course, when she was younger it was normally just a scraped knee or a ripped shirt, but she's starting to turn into a young woman, and I dread to think what might happen... what she might get involved in. We keep thinking it's just a phase, she'll calm down soon, but there's no sign of that. If anything, she disappears more often these days, and is even more reluctant to tell us where she's been when she gets back. Sorry,' she said suddenly. 'I don't know why I'm telling you all that. Anyway, you're probably not interested in the anxiety of an older sister.' Ismene's surprise must have shown on her face, because Dalis quickly added, 'not her real sister, of course, I'm too old to be Isabelle's daughter and anyway look!' She lifted up her arm to show the dark, smoky tone that contrasted with Elleth's pale skin and laughed. 'But I've known her so long I feel as if she's my little sister. I certainly worry about her enough.'

Ismene felt her interest in the strange child grow. There was something purposeful and single-minded in the way she had immediately made up her mind about Ismene, and the news that she regularly wandered off into trouble seemed to fit with her strangely unchildlike stare. By now Ismene had added the currants to her mixture, and left it to prove in a bowl next to her bread roll dough, which was about ready. She flipped it out onto a floury counter, and used the back of a knife to divide it into segments. She rolled each one in her hand until it formed into a rough, springy sphere, and placed them all on a tray which she then pushed into the wood-burning oven along the back wall of the room. The heat poured out when she opened the door, bathing her face and arms in a pleasurably fiery glow. Dalis called over to her to remove the loaves that were in there while the door was open, and she set them on a counter to cool before tidying up the area where she had been working. Isabelle popped her head around the door. 'How are those rolls doing?' 'Not long now,' Ismene said. 'Shall I bring these loaves through while you're waiting?' Isabelle nodded and disappeared again to respond to a customer's call.

Ismene spent the rest of the day bustling about the kitchen and back and forth between it and the front of the shop. By the end she looked more like a baker; at least, she was suitably flour-covered and rosy-cheeked from the heat of the oven. Isabelle and Dalis seemed impressed by her hard work, and she was told to come back again the next day. As she was leaving, she heard Isabelle ask, 'How's Elleth doing?' and Dalis' anxious reply, 'I don't know, I thought she was with you in the front?'

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ISMENE

  • Knowledge:
    • Cooking: Scent of Freshly Baked Bread
    • Cooking: Bread Starter Recipe
    • Cooking: Bread Rolls
    • Cooking: Kneading Dough
    • Cooking: Dough Needs To Rest
    • Dalis (NPC): Head Baker
    • Elleth (NPC): Isabelle's Daughter
    • Investigation: Sounding Casual To Prompt Intelligence
    • Isabelle (NPC): Your Boss
    • Location: Doracre's Delicacies
    Loot: None.
    Injuries: None.
    Fame: +2 - got a job.

    Story: 5/5
    Collaboration: 0/5
    Structure: 5/5


Comments: I enjoy how casually sneaky Ismene is. Also - what on earth could Elleth be up to?! Looking forward to finding out, and officially welcome to Ne'haer!

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