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30th of Ashan 717

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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30th of Ashan, 717th Arc
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The pain was an incessant plague on his mind. The Etzori mage liked to think of himself as disciplined, but this wilted his otherwise strong resolve not to show suffering. Neronin winced and groaned as he tenderly touched the stop in his leg that had been stabbed. It had been tough, but Neronin had convinced Tabard he had been wounded on the expedition and had to turn home. The pain had been real and Tabard had allowed him to resume his duties. Now his leg pulsed with a familiarity that was almost sentient. It seemed to relish torturing Neronin and he hated the limb for it.

He had left work early today to hunt for a distraction from the pain. All the walking and giving tours had his leg aching and his mood souring that of the patrons. Tabard had been more than willing to let him go. Even his subtle disregard for the people who came into the museum did not match the coldness with which Neronin greeted every person he had to take on tour. The Curator had allowed his assistant to leave in the interest of keeping their visitors paying. Neronin had gladly taken his leave in pursuit of less strenuous activity.

Now he sat atop one of Etzos's high rampart walls, having found a slow shuffle up the stairs surprisingly less jarring than a simple walk. He watched Etzos's population of ravens move across rooftop and between towers with interest. His hands grasped both journal and quill, whistle the traveling inkwell he kept sat next to him. He was taking notes.

He had found the bat impractical because it required too much mechanism to control. The flight was based on rigorous flapping of limbs, in other words. When Neronin looked at the ravens and crows he saw a more regal gliding. Their obsidian feathers flickered in the wind but their wings remained still and strong. Neronin liked the idea of controlling that much more than the idea of controlling some wildly flapping thing of the night.

So Neronin took notes, carefully. He wrote in how the ravens seemed to twist to turn and how their wings caught updrafts to rise. He watched one glide across a few streets and dive. It extended vicious looking black talons and caught up a rat. The bird pumped its wings to gain altitude until it could catch another updraft and circle its way to one of the tallest towers in Etzos and feast. He took notes in his journal denoting the method of climbing and the dive. He wanted to understand the mechanics of the flight.

This was something Neronin found himself enjoying profoundly. Here were independent animals, truly free of restriction. They lived amongst the highest reaches of Etzos and preyed on the city below. They minded themselves and allowed Neronin to do the same. For a while after he finished the notes he wanted Neronin just watched the black birds swoop and glide. Eventually though, he get tired of sitting atop the wall and shoved his way back down.

The necromancer’s dull ache came back as the underlying flavor to his thoughts as he walked his way back down to the streets. He felt the agitation return and the foul moodiness. The muscles in the man’s pale jaw clenched as he fought against his own discomfort. Comfort was a luxury, and he hated luxury. This was nothing to him
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Neronin set out along the street with no real direction in mind. Eventually he found himself walking the old roads in which he had roamed for trouble as a boy. It was as if memory sought those days of special pain, to remind him of his own endurance. Neronin walked amongst the riffraff of the streets, the poor and the homeless. He saw a few boys he knew to be muggers and a few girls who had already taken to the streets to earn money. He did not know the individuals, but he knew the looks. He knew that those roles never changed around here, even if the individuals came and went. He found a few boys who had made slings with old bits of leather. They seemed to be trying to kill rats and street cats to sell for meat.

Neronin approached them with his slow, limping gait. They looked up at him with hard, untrusting eyes. Neronin smiled. These were his people, the stock he had come from. As Neronin leaned against a nearby wall and pulled out his coin-purse he was careful not let his sleeve rise too much. The back of his hand was riddled with the black veins of his witchbrand.

He pulled a single golden nel from his purse. The boys stared at it like hungry wolves. “This goes to the first who brings me a crow or raven. There’s some good lads, eh?” He said in mock kindness. Neronin rubbed the coin between his fingers, remembering a time when such money was a prize unattainable. He knew what one gold nel meant to little boys who spent their days killing rats in the hopes of selling the meat.

They all scampered off without another word, eager to be the first. Neronin slumped down, his dark, embroidered robes a stark contrast to the drab rags of the rest of the occupants of the street. The Etzori sighed and let his legs stretch out, wincing at the pain. He busied himself while he waited by throwing tiny pebbles across the street and into the empty latrine bucket by the door of a hole-in-the-wall tavern. He also watched people walk past.

As he waited his attention once again was drawn to the black veins adorning the back of his hand. He held it up in front of him, staring at the witchbrand. The mark was growing, just as his power had been. He wondered what the end would bring, what scars he would bear into the successful ascension to mastering his power. He sighed and let his mind wander to all he had accomplished since he murdered Gavrel. Since he had left these streets as a boy.

“Hey, got you a bird.” A voice interrupted his reverie. It was what seemed to be the youngest of the boys. He was holding a raven clutched about the neck in his little hand. He stood like some sort of victorious warrior in miniature, his face set sternly. He was eyeing Neronin’s coin-purse.

“So you have.” Neronin said, flashing him a thin grin. He gripped the wall and hoisted himself to his feet. Then he flipped the gold nel into the air at the boy. He caught it with his free hand, bit it, and tucked it into his thin belt. Neronin held out his hand for the bird.
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The boy handed it to him with one last glance at his face.

“Aren’t you going to ask what it’s for?” Neronin said quietly, imagining the boy’s curiosity.

“No.” He said before turning and running off down the street to hide away his prize. Neronin smiled.

“Clever boy.” He whispered, tucking the bird’s head into his belt and starting off down the street. He knew the lad wouldn’t want to be known as the one who had claimed the nel amongst his friends. It would mean they would try to take it from him. His lack of questions bonded well for him. Deep in his core Neronin hoped the boy survived the street. He probably deserved some chance at life.

When Neronin reached the privacy of his perch atop the wall again he was perspiring. The pain had grown and when he plopped down the rush of relief washed over him like a physical wave. He sighed deeply and cracked his neck. The necromancer pulled the dead raven from his belt and setting it upon the stones of the wall walkway. He glanced around to ensure his solitude, eyes darting from either narrow entryway.

Neronin then fixed his eyes upon the raven. He raised a hand and watched as the surge of magic spilled forth. The veins on his skin flickered with green light, as they hadn’t failed to do since he first received them. The will it took to animate the dead raven was nothing. He felt his magic Restore the thing. The small break in it’s neck where the pebble had killed it was fixed in only a few minutes and he splayed his commanding will across the dark feathered body.

Neronin watched lazily with a satisfied smile as the raven hopped to its feet. The thing stared at him with a tiny glowing eye, the hunger of his thralls present in smaller form. It hopped forward and Neronin threw his will at it. He felt the thing submit easily. The small form was fresh and small, making it particularly easy to control.

Neronin tried to have the bird take off. He managed to make the thing lift off the ground about two feet but when he tried to tell it to move out over the rooftops it dove into the wall directly between his feet. Neronin sighed and reasserted his will. He remembered the ravens and crows he had watched earlier and tried to mimic them. He eventually got the bird into the air, where it glided into the wall of torrent twenty feet away. Neronin was patient though. He spent the next few breaks learning how to handle the new type of thrall. He learned from afar the subtle attention to the wind that was needed. He let the thrall move more and more naturally, mimicking those ravens around that were alive.

Eventually Neronin got to the point where he could will the undead raven in a direction and the thing could fly that way. Landing was still a rough experience, but that would come in time. Neronin pushed his awareness through the Link and watched as the thrall soared over home and shop. He watched as it glided down, at his command, and witnessed the exchange between two guardsmen as they passed each other in the street. He watched as a pickpocket stole a purse and was caught by one of the guardsmen two minutes later. He watched Etzos from above. Then, later, Neronin had the raven fly back to him. He felt the Link disappear and his awareness returned to his body. He flexed his back and stood with a groan. In the thrill of the magic he had almost forgotten the pain in his own true body.

Neronin pocketed the now dead raven, his mind full of possibilities. Then he hobbled his way home.
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Necromancy Notations II: Ravens

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I really enjoyed reviewing this thread! I love the way you write Nero, the way that he walks, how he fills the gaps in time with throwing stones into latrines, it's all so very visual. Your writing is crafted beautifully and the attention to detail is awesome. This was a great thread to read, very atmospheric and I felt kind of sorry for the bird. And the group of boys. And Nero, who came from there. Great stuff, awesome and atmospheric writing. Enjoy the rewards, please do pm me if you've got any questions!

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Solo: 10 xp (these points MAY be used for Necromancy Domain Magic)

Fame: -5 (just hanging around dubious guys and getting dead birds)
Devotion: Nope

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1 x dead raven

Knowledge

Necromancy: Link: Ravens make good observation thralls
Necromancy: Small animals are easy to animate
Necromancy: Ravens need practice to control in flight
Leadership: Getting children to do your bidding
Leadership: Giving incentive
Negotiation: Children work for less than adults
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