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Boy vs. Horse (Round 1)

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Peg had probably sensed something was different about that morning, even before her young owner had put on her harness and hitched her up to her cart. At least Arlo wondered if she knew what he'd planned for the next few breaks, based on the fact that the ordinarily patient and agreeable creature had swung her head round and nipped him when his back was turned. The sturdy brown mare was right to be suspicious. Or would have been, had the young man thought that animals were capable of any sort of prescience.

After hitching her up to her cart, he'd loaded the gear he'd purchased the previous trial into the back; along with the book he'd picked up from a local shop. As he climbed aboard the cart and drove Peg to the outskirts of Ne'haer, Arlo found himself grateful that Vega was off doing something else that trial. If she'd been there, and was to witness what he had planned as it unfolded, she'd never let him forget it. Maybe, Peg's apparent knack for divining the future had rubbed off on him after all.

A half break later, Peg was turned loose from her cart and was grazing at the edge of an open field. Arlo was seated beside her on a overlarge stone, one foot propped up and the book laid open on his knee. All the gear he'd brought with him was scattered around them on the ground. "Look here, Peg," the young man said, tapping his fingertip on a diagram at the top of the first page. "Here's a horse and her owner riding nice as you please. We're smarter than them both for sure. It ought to be a lark, yeah?" Peg didn't raise her head or cease her munching on the succulent green blades at her feet. Instead she snorted through flared nostrils, and flicked a dismissive ear his way.

"So it says here," he uttered as he skipped the first chapter and part of the second, "that I should tie you up somewhere before we start, so you don't wander off." She didn't, ordinarily, when he put her driving harness on her. But somehow he thought this time might be different. So getting up off his rock, Arlo took her lead and tied her off to the corner of her cart. He picked up the leather bridle then, with it's bit already attached. "This part ought to be easy. It's not much different than your driving headstall."

He was right about that. Except that for some reason Peg found the bit not to her liking and clamped her teeth tight together. "Quit being so stubborn Peg. You've taken a bit a dozen, even a hundred times now," he said, and slipped a finger into the back of her mouth behind her teeth to apply pressure there. She finally took it. But once he got the thing in place and tried to slip the crown piece over her ears, she flung her head up and showed him the whites of her eyes.

It was fair warning, but it passed Arlo by. "Look. I know you know what you're thinking. I've done this before and you probably remember it. But I was just a kid then, and I've forgiven you for coming back and trying to stomp me after you threw me off. It was a long time ago and no lasting harm done," he said, and tried again. Finally, through cajoling, trickery and a level of patience that was unusual for the young man bent on riding his mare, the bridle was in place, the cheek straps adjusted to fit, and the leather reins were attached.

The mare had begun pawing irritably at the ground, but she didn't seem to mind when Arlo placed the small padded blanket on her back. For that small, cooperative gesture, she received a small piece of an apple that he'd cut up before they'd left camp. Then came the saddle and turned out, there'd be more of the treats offered in quick succession. Not as rewards so much, but as desperate attempts at bribery.

Eyeing the saddle that was slung over the side of the cart and comparing it to the labeled drawing in his book, Arlo frowned. "There's an awful lot of pieces here. But it's only a few of them that appear to matter," he uttered. Still seething from the battle over the bridle, and as if she understood each and every word, Peg side checked him and sent him stumbling. It was the first real shot across the bow, apparently, and what followed was a battle of wills that would consume at least the next half break.

Half of it was spent getting the mare to let him slide the saddle on to her back without her pivoting out of the way, or hopping up on her front feet, so far as her tied off lead would allow it. She'd stepped on his foot, twice and nipped him a couple times more. But once the thing was on her back, Arlo was quick to move on to getting it secured. "So the front cinch straps across the chest," he'd said as he talked his way through it, "between the front legs and attaches to the flank cinch, which goes under the belly and hooks up with the flank cinch, which meets up again with the girth cinch."

It was an awful lot of cinches, and that wasn't all of them. There was the rear cinch too, which according to his book oughtn't be quite as snug as the front one. Peg seemed more tolerant of that rear one, so it was the first that Arlo sorted out. In fact, she didn't seem to mind the adjusting of the girth cinch either. It ought to have made him suspicious. But she'd cleverly peppered in enough of the nipping, pushing and stepping on him to stop him wondering too much.

"Snug, but not too tight," Arlo mused quietly, reading from his book and slipping a couple fingers between the thing and her belly in order to check it. And then for good measure, he gave it another tug in spite of the snorting and eyeballing coming his way. The stirrups, the book told him, ought to be adjusted on this type of saddle so that the knees were just bent...but only a little. And having not been up in the saddle just yet, his best guess would have to do.

Then came the moment of truth. And if Arlo hadn't skipped the first chapter and a half; the part that went into the thinking, disposition and wiles of horses, he might've predicted what happened next. Peg wasn't a stupid horse. In fact he'd never assumed that she was. But what he hadn't considered, was her newfound knack for conspiring against him.

He took hold of the horn, put a foot in the stirrup and launched himself up. But as soon as the whole of his weight was focused on that one stirrup, before he ever got the chance to swing a spare leg over the saddle, the air that Peg had sucked into her belly and had kept there while he'd tightened the cinch, came rushing out in one long sigh and the whole thing came toppling over. The saddle slid sideways across her back and Arlo with it, until he found himself unceremoniously dumped on the ground.

What had gone wrong? After a few well chosen curses, Arlo got up, dusted himself off, took his book and referred to chapter two, section three. Frowning deeply, he looked up at a mare that he'd swear was inwardly laughing at him. "Well played Peg," the young man muttered resentfully and picked up the saddle again, determined that by trial's end, he'd win this battle of wills.
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Boy vs. Horse (Round 1)

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If this was war, and Arlo had decided it was, or maybe it was Peg who'd decided, this was just the first round in a number of battles. But the young man was determined. He'd win every one of them. "See Peg, I was thinking we could learn some stunts," he carried on as once again, he worked at getting the cinch just tight enough, but not too tight. This time he was waiting her out. She could only hold in that big gulp of air for so long before having to let it out.

"I'm a pretty good acrobat, and you're smarter than most horses." Surely, once she figured out that horses were meant to be ridden, he could teach her a few good tricks. But he was getting ahead of himself. He hadn't managed to get up in the saddle just yet. It appeared she'd at least become more willing as a result of his own unwillingness to give up. At least it looked that way, judging by the way her head was dipped lower and her hind foot was cocked in the way it was sometimes when she was resting.

So untying her from the corner of the cart, Arlo led her away a few yards, gathered up the reins in one hand while gripping the horn, hitched a boot up in the stirrup and tried to climb aboard. He was halfway there, or thought he was, when suddenly Peg's head shot up, her foot was no longer lazily cocked and she took off at a brisk walk. "Dammit Peg, stay still," he complained, refusing to let go as he hopped along with her, finally pulling himself up and into the saddle as they went. Or at least it was what he'd expected. That she'd keep going.

Instead, sensing him fully aboard her back, the mare stopped dead in her tracks. It wasn't the gracefully climbing aboard he'd imagined, but he was there and took advantage of the moment to adjust himself and get a better seat under him. Turned out, he'd guessed right when adjusting the stirrups. So grinning, he pulled out his book from under his shirt and glanced through the pages again.

"Alright," he said more to himself than to Peg. "Posture, straight, lined up from shoulder to knee to the toe of the boot. Relaxed. Shift center of balance slightly forward, give a nudge with the calves, the heels and off we go." It sounded simple, read from a book. Arlo, as one of Jesine's favored had a very good imagination, and he could see the whole thing playing out in his mind. Just as planned.

Except that Peg hadn't read the book, and she must be imagining other scenarios. She stood stock still, as if ignorant of him being there at all. The only telling thing, had Arlo actually read the relevant section in the book, was that her ears pivoted from forward to sideways to slightly rearward. Oh, she'd heard him alright. And probably knew exactly what he wanted. The mare groaned, shifted so that she seemed to be leaning again on one rear foot, and Arlo kept nudging.

But instead of moving forwards, or even sideways, the mare underneath him seemed to be bowing down little by little. Front, then back, so subtly that Arlo didn't notice it until it was too late. If he'd noticed, he'd have thought she was dropping in the rear in order to relieve herself. But she wasn't. Instead, the back dipped, then the front, and down on her side she went, spilling Arlo out of the saddle in the process.

She'd have ended up rolling on him, or at least his leg, if not for instincts come of practicing acrobatics for breaks and trials on end. As he went, powerless to stop the mare rolling, he swung one leg over the saddle and landed on his feet, only to stumble a few paces before regaining his balance. "Aelig's nuts, Peg!" he spat out when he turned round, finding Peg already getting to her feet again and shaking herself off. "That's not funny!"

Not funny, but pretty smart, Arlo had to admit. His mare was turning out to be more clever than he'd ever assumed her to be. Faithless too, he thought uncharitably. Still, what she wasn't, he figured, was more determined than him. She'd wandered off and was grazing, probably content in thinking she'd outdone him. But she hadn't, Arlo vowed, and this time he'd show her just who was in charge here.
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Boy vs. Horse (Round 1)

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Peg was still grazing. And this time before trying again, Arlo spent some time with his book. "It says here that if the horse threatens to roll, you should nudge her into motion." Frowning deeply, he pointed out to no one in particular that he had been nudging her forward, and she'd flatly ignored him. "Stupid book," he muttered and tossed the thing away before standing up and approaching his mare.

Peg raised her head, ears pricked forward and watched him walk towards her. She didn't wander away or bolt however, so Arlo naturally assumed that she knew she was beat. "Look. I'm not asking for much," the young man said as he picked up the reins, gathered them together in one hand and prepared to climb into the saddle again. "Just a nice trot around the field. That's it, and there'll be another apple in it for you and a nice warm mash when we get back to camp." He wasn't above bribing her if that's what it took.

He didn't even complain when she took off at a brisk walk and he was forced to climb into the saddle on the go once again. Or that she went straight from walking into a lively trot before he could fully get settled into his seat. They were going forward, and that's what mattered. In fact she made a round half turn of the small field before things began to go terribly wrong. At least for Arlo.

The bounce of the trot took some getting used to. But he was served well by his skill doing acrobatic tricks. Good for balance, and by pushing down his heels and watching his center of balance, he was just beginning to congratulate himself, and Peg, on a job well done when it all went to pieces. The trot became a sudden lurch forward that tilted him back in the saddle and caused his heels to swing forward. And the lurch became a lope, which in a matter of trills turned into a full blow fit made of bucking, twisting and heel kicking.

From a distance the mare must have looked as if she had springs on the bottom of her hooves. Arlo remained aboard, served well by his knack for balance and acrobatic maneuvers. But it didn't stop him needing to grip with every part of him that could grip from arms to his toes, and he decided that book or no, there was no shame in holding on to the horn of his saddle. "Whoa! Easy! Dammit Peg, stop!" he shouted. Though if he'd he'd read the section that covered body language in the book he'd tossed aside, he'd have recognized what those ears pinned flat along back of Peg's neck actually meant.

But he'd read some of it and his mind raced. "They can't buck with their head up. Get her head up," he ground out through clenched teeth as he tried doing just that. Problem was that somewhere along the line, much of the length of those leather reins had slipped through his hands and she'd managed to get her head down and tucked up under her chest. No amount of pulling was going to change that.

It took a good deal of strength and endurance. But Arlo was convinced that he could stay aboard and wait her out. But then something changed. Suddenly Peg stopped bucking, remained still and heaving just long enough for her rider to breathe half a sigh of relief. And then out of the blue she lunged forward again and bolted towards the edge of Willow Woods.

Willow Woods, and all those low hanging branches. Arlo was convinced she meant to swipe him off under the first one she got to. So he began eyeing the ground racing by beneath him. It's not that far, he thought. I'm a very good acrobat. I can just step off and no harm done. Or so he thought. He'd gathered up the reins again but she'd built up a good head of steam already. And it seemed like a very good idea. So he shifted his weight in preparation of dropping off her back...

He'd done no more than that, and Peg, feeling that shift across her back, ducked suddenly to the left, right out from under him. Arlo caught air and then hit the ground with a Ooof! on his backside, with all the wind knocked out of him. And there he sat on the trail leading into the forest, gasping and straining to get back his wind. Peg meanwhile, had done an about turn a few yards off and had returned, trotting right past him and back into the open field. "Dammit, Peg," he gasped, a good few trills after she was gone and he'd managed to get back on his feet.

It was more than his ego that was bruised. There was his hip, his right hand scraped and his shoulder too. And his hat had come off at the leading edge of the trail. It was when he finally limped back to collect it, that he spied his mare still going. Head high, tail flagged, knees lifted, he'd never seen her move so artfully as now, when she'd abandoned him completely and was headed back to camp without him. Vega was probably there too and would witness Peg's return. And sure enough, she'd guess what had happened. "Dammit," he muttered again, and eyed the cart that he'd have to get back to camp without a horse to pull it.

He'd enlist the the help of one or two of the locals if he could find any. But this war wasn't over, Arlo determined. Eventually he'd win it. But round one? That one went to Peg.
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Boy vs. Horse (Round 1)

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Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: NA (solo thread)
Structure: 5/5
Knowledge:

Acrobatics: Falling from a horse
Acrobatics: Regaining balance
Acrobatics: Staying on a bucking horse
Animal Training:(Horse) Talk to your horse to calm her.
Animal Training:(Horse) Put your finger behind the horse's teeth to help them take the bit
Animal Training: (Horse) Feed treats to reward desired behaviours
Animal Husbandry: (Horse) Horses have moods which they show.
Animal Husbandry: (Horse) Be aware that your horse might be brighter than you
Endurance: Holding on during a good pounding
Endurance: Falling off, getting up, getting back on
Mount: (Horse) Attaching a bridle & bit
Mount: (Horse) Correct placement of a saddle
Mount: (Horse) Securing a saddle (that's a lot of cinches!)
Mount: (Horse) Getting up in the saddle
Mount: (Horse) The bounce of a trot
Strength: Keeping muscles tense during a prolonged period builds strength.

Peg: Your mare
Peg: Clever
Peg: Evil
Peg: Knows tricks to beat you

Loot:
Arlo gets cuts and bruises and scrapes. These will need to be cleaned up and will take up to 10 trials to heal completely.
Fame:
None (though I wish I could give Peg some!)
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana

Overview:

Story Oh, I laughed aloud! A great story which really is a great example of a training thread. Great fun and I'm sorry, but I was cheering for Peg in it! Your knowledge of horses shone through and this thread felt very real.

Structure All good no problems.

Please do PM me if you've got any questions or if I've missed anything. Thanks!
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