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Freya finds a way to earn some money before heading into Andaris City.

96th of Ashan 717

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Freya DuCarinos
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96th Trial of Ashan, Arc 717

Cyrene bay was where the pirate found herself as she wandered into the packed harbor. This place was busier than Ne’haer’s docks, and saw a number of ships coming in and out of the bay. Some were large trading vessels while others were small fishing boats. It was really quite a sight to behold after being imprisoned for such a long time, then cooped up in a manor full of luxurious food, clothing, items, and… things.

Freya took a breath, her heart yearning for a place she would probably never return to… and for a home she would never obtain. Stuffing the surge of emotions back into the bottle of nonexistence, the biqaj made her way over to a shop settled just before one of the docks. The establishment saw a number of men and women clustered up, buying and selling baits, rods, lures, strings, hooks, almost everything one would need to catch any type of creature lurking in the deep. There were also many fishermen there looking for crew to help out for the day’s harvest.

Freya approached an old man settled off to the far end of the shop, talking with two young fellows and holding a parchment in hand.

“Excuse me,” Freya addressed the man, calling green and purple eyes to her blue ones.

“What?” The man’s gruff voice answered back in Rakahi.

Freya squared her shoulders and stood straighter, having been some time since she’d spoken to another like minded individual such as herself and she’d be damned her she was made to look weak. “Listen,” She’d answered, “I was told there were captains here looking for helping hands out on the ocean. I’d like to help you for the afternoon for promise of a fair wage.”

In turn, the man crossed his arms and seized Freya up, telling by her accent that she was of foreign blood. “You’re scrawny,” He muffled thereafter, “Give me your hands.”

Holding her hand out, the fisherman took it and slid his own, calloused, rough fingers over her soft pads. It tickled somewhat, but she didn’t move. Releasing her grip, he shook his head and looked back to the parchment. “You’ve not spent time on a ship, much less the ocean. Go back to where you came from girl, before you get stolen away.”

Frowning, she took a step closer to him and pointed towards the parchment. “You’re the last to depart your ship for the day. It’s because you’re looking for an extra set of hands, right? My hands might not tell the story you wish them to, but I know how to steer a ship. I know how to set the sails given the direction of the wind for faster speed. I know how to set crab traps, oyster traps, how to bait the line and which bait for what type of catch, I know how to tie the hooks onto the line and which knots work most effective with what kind of fish we’re trying to catch, and I damn sure know how to tire a fish out before pulling his unlucky soul from the sea. So please, wait for another man to approach you. I’ll watch.”

Crossing her own arms, she stared the old man down. His lips pressed into a line while his nostrils flared, his eyes shifting into a deep blue just before he looked to the two younger lads and motioned his head toward the door. As they began to leave, the captain turned back, pointing a burly, calloused finger Freya’s way. “One slip up and you’ve lost your wage.”

Giving him a curt nod, she said nothing else as she followed him out.
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A sigh of relief passed her lips as Freya hoisted herself up on the wooden rails, using the ropes attached to the sails and beams to steady herself from falling into the waves. A large smile lifted the corners of her mouth as she felt the hull of the ship roll and rock with the sea. Laughter bubbled up, euphoric and free when she felt butterflies from a particularly large wave tickle her.

The biqaj never thought she’d be back in her element, sailing over the waves with the prospect of money in mind. She’d come to accept it long ago, that this would never happen again. That she would be alone in the darkness of the prison cell until her unfortunate demise. Now, however, she was partnered with a bunch of strangers with a similar goal in mind to catch as many large fish as they could for the sake of money. Not much of it, but enough to get her by.

“Would yah get down from ther’?” Thian, one of the two younger men that tagged along for the adventure, called, “You’re lookin’ like a mad woman.”

“Aah, I feel like it.” Freya sighed happily, using the ropes to twist her body around and glide back down to the ship deck once again. The Captain was right, her hands had lost their roughness during her prison days. The wet rope burned against her palms but she ignored it. The pain was another reminder that she was here right now and she welcomed it.

Thian quirked a brow, a smile on his own lips as his blond, curly hair whipped around in the wind. “Whadda yah say you’re name was again?”

“Freya,” She answered back, but shifted the conversation quickly before he could inquire further. “Where are we going?”

“South east, out of the harbor. We laid some pots out about this time yesterday so we’re running to collect them before they get snatched up by anyone else.”

“Pots?” Freya asked.

“Yeah. Yah did say you know how to trap crab, no? We’re catching crab today.” He grinned, “Or were yah lying back there with yer little speech?”

Looking back across the deck, Freya understood now why there were so many strange, large cages tied up against some of the supports and cabin walls. “I wasn’t lying, I’m just not familiar with these kind of tools. They’re massive.”

“Custom ordered, they are. Requested from the best smithy in Andaris.” His large hand tapped on one of the cages. “Pretty heavy to lift too. You’re gonna be hurting by the end of the day.”

“Oh? We’ll see about that.”
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It was only half a break later when a shout from the end of the deck indicated that they’d come to the first crab pot to harvest. Freya looked overboard and saw some kind of painted ball woven together with reeds floating above the waves. “That’s the pot? How big are these crabs?”

Thian laughed and shook his head, a rather large hook in his hand when Freya turned back to him, “No, tha’s just to let us know where it is. Yah ready to pull it up?”

“Sure.” The woman nodded, though she wasn’t too sure what he meant by it. They’d never done crab fishing like this back in Ne’haer. It was such a different method compared to what she was use to. However, Freya would never let them know that. She needed the money…

Watching Thian cast the hook, she saw as his hands quickly reeled in the line, pulling the hook back along with another, thicker rope. He gave the end to Freya, “Hold that now, I’m gonna get it to the top an' then we’re both gonna pull it up.” Again, her eyes examined the man as his muscles flexed against the weight of the rope and somehow, Freya found herself admiring his strength. He was taller than her, tanner with some blond scruff on his chin and wore a stained shirt that clung to his biceps as he continued to pull.

He was good looking, but he wasn’t like Wendell. Somehow, that thought murder any arousal Freya found while gawking at Thian. Gold eyes shifted blue as the hook used to pull the line in was handed to her. “Drop it down and hook the cage. Pull it up with that line and I’ll pull it with this.”

Looking over the rail again, Freya saw a massive metal box sitting out just beyond the ship. Wrapping a part of the rope around her hand, she tossed the hook down onto the cage and heard it ‘clank!’ as it hooked onto the object. Then together, the two pulled in the massive pot.

“By the Fates!” Freya grunted, her teeth gritted together by the effort it took to pull the damn thing up.

“Almost there..!” Thian responded as the sound of the box sliding up onto the ship overpowered the grunts of effort.

“Sarding—!”

The woman heaved a sigh as the pot landed on the deck with a loud bang, turning and stepping back as if to walk off the pain her muscles had exerted. When she turned around again, her eyes watched large, purple crab crawl overtop of each other, attempting to escape from the confines of the cage. They were massive, really. Bigger than the size of her torso from shoulders to hips.

“Wow…” Her words carried to a grinning Thian.

“Yes! Come, now. Time to stuff them in the barrels and throw the pot back out.”

With hands on her hips, Freya gave a sigh, shook her head, then bent down to open and remove the crab before lining it with two large bunker fish and helping Thian cast the pot back into the water.
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By the end of the day, Freya was indeed exhausted. Her hands were rubbed raw from handling the wet, worn rope— casting it out, just to pull it back in, to cast it out once more, just to pull again. Her arms ached from the amount of times she had to heave one heavy container after another over the rail, empty it of the crab with their annoying pincers, before baiting it again with cut up bunker fish.

After the seventh pot, Freya was bent over, sweat running from her temples as the harbor started to come into view on the horizon. “We’re done?” She breathed as Thian came back around, handing her a water skin that she gladly took and chugged without much thought.

Spitting some of the liquid out, gold eyes questioned the water skin before turning to Thian, “What is this?”

“Whiskey.” He laughed, leaning against the rail. “Tough drink for a sturdy woman.”

Watching him and the way he smiled at her, Freya kicked the water skin back and finished the rest of the alcohol within it, coming to stand next to him against the rail as the made their way back into the harbor.

When they arrived, the woman helped unload the barrels of crab, most of them being heavy and full of water. It was a strenuous process with effort that kept them well into dusk. When they were finished, however, the captain approached Freya with a sack of coin that clanged together loudly. He said nothing but nodded to her, then walked off towards the same shop she’d found him in before. Biqajs were a strange people, she concluded.

“So where yah off to now?” Thian asked with a small smile, stepping off the ramp that led onto the ship.

“The road.” She answered, looking up at the tall man, leaning closer to him. His quirked brow only rose as her hand met his cheek right before her lips met his own. He was caught off guard, she could tell, but he didn’t lead onto it and instead, found his hands against her backside. Pulling away from him after the short, heated exchange, her finger snaked through his belt loop and beckoned him to follow her as her feet took them both to the closest tavern.
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Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: NA (solo thread)
Structure: 5/5
Knowledge:

Climbing: Hoisting up on ropes
Climbing: Lowering yourself efficiently on a rope
Discipline: Pushing your emotions away
Endurance: A long day working is exhausting
Endurance: Using muscles you haven't used for a while.
Endurance: Repetition of movement demands endurance
Fishing: Catching crabs in pots
Fishing: Crab fishing: The Rynmere Way
Negotiation: Offer a fair day of work for a fair wage
Negotiation: Accepting their point, but adding your own spin to it.
Negotiation: Clearly define what you're offering
Negotiation: Exploit the fact that you're offering their best option.
Seafaring: Rolling the sails
Seduction: Eye contact is vital
Seduction: Come hither, hunk!
Strength: Hauling metal boxes up using ropes
Strength: Pulling against the seas
Strength: Repetition of movement builds strength
Strength: Lifting heavy barrels

Loot:
NA
Fame:
+3 (Gained respect and got known among the crew)
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana

Overview:

Story A straightforward story, expertly told. I love how you write, phrases like "Stuffing the surge of emotions back into the bottle of nonexistence," are just so evocative! The negotiation with the older chap at the beginning was fun, you packed a lot into a small amount and it was a pleasure to read and review.

Structure Lovely!

Please do PM me if you've got any questions or you feel like I've missed anything!
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