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Alistair

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Hans
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So It Begins

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Hans watched the dribble of wine down Alistair's chin, as he licked it up with a lack of grace Hans had come to expect from nobles - and he knew the Houses of Rynmere had an even higher sense of importance than those in Ne'haer. It made him grin, easily, attractively, as he watched in appreciation at the way Alistair laughed.

Hans stood up, following Alistair. In the space between the chairs, they stood close to each other. Tall and broad men as they were, there was little space between them, and Hans could feel the heat emanating off the other man's body.
He could smell the scent of the man, and it seemed to be calling him, drawing him in, but for now, Hans resisted.

"Allies, then?" Hans thought about it, carefully. What would the Amielles say about Hans agreeing to such an alliance? He did not necessarily need to report back to them on this. He could tell them he had met the Venora, and tell them he had requested an audience, but he did not need to tell them that he had made a personal alliance as well. Hans very seldom formed personal alliances that were at odds to those of Lysoria, but in this instance, his instincts were telling him that perhaps the two went hand in hand.

"Ah, Kaernhad." It wasn't a question. It was a statement. "I wish you luck in claiming that cursed land. Surely you've heard the rumours. But, well, for all I've seen of you, I think you might just be the first man to have some luck in that region." With a smile, he held out his hand for Alistair to shake. "Allies, then. I'll set up a meeting for you with House Amielle, to garner their support. They trust my advice. As for what I would ask of you? Well, let's save that one for later." A flirtatious wink. "Shall we drink to our new alliance?"
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Due to his Competency in Empathy, Hans can 'taste' emotions.

While these tastes always stay the same, Hans is either repulsed or attracted
to certain tastes due to his own current emotional states.

While happiness might be delicious to him at one time, this could be disgusting to him
if he is in a troubled personal state.
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Alistair
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Hans drew closer, as Alistair invited him too. Whilst the Ambassador paid extra note to the heat and the proximity, the mage remained cool and distant in his own way; perhaps such a thing was intentional, a method of drawing further interest. Or maybe he was simply keen to be aloof. Whatever the reason for the restraint, it was there - he would not compel Hans further. Not yet, at least.

Allies, then? the man asked. Clearly, the Baron's lips curled into a smirk, and he nodded his head lightly.

"Allies, indeed," he responded. Good. Even if informal, their alliance would mean exceptional things for Alistair. To have the favor of a neighboring nation's ambassador was an incredible perk, an acquisition he commended himself for. But, surprisingly, it was not only due to his role as a statesman that he sought this friendship with Hans. In the span of Ree's execution to now, he'd grown keen on him, in a manner of speaking. His interest was high -- he wanted to see what this suave, cunning gentleman could do. He wanted to see his magic, his mind, the sharpness of his wit - more of it all.

So, the toast. "We shall," he replied, raising his glass of wine. "To prosperity for all - but especially for us," he grinned, taking a sip.

"I appreciate it, Ser Ambassador," he called him with a hint of faint laughter beneath his words. "But genuinely, though. Thank you, Hans," the Venora whispered, bowing his head slightly, and gently grabbing the man's forearm. Within moments, he released, and disappeared in a violent burst of black energy.
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Hans

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What an intriguing pc! I love this character and how you write him. Hans seems like a tightly controlled individual who has loads of hidden depths bubbling away under the surface. I really enjoyed how you write him and how he seems to be one thing but, underneath seems to be so much more. Great stuff. Drop me a PM if you've got any questions!

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XP:15 (these points may be used for Domain Magic: Empathy

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Skills Knowledge:
Empathy: Knotting a Thread
Empathy: Knowing When Not To Use Magic
Politics: About Knowing Your Enemies and Your Allies
Politics: Making An Ally
Politics: Being Owed Favours Gives You Power
Rhetoric: Knowing the Proper Place for a Conversation
Rhetoric: Explaining Family History

Non-Skills Knowledge:
Ree Dornae: Mage (Executed)
The Ne'haer Council: Uses Propaganda
The Coven of Ellasin: Ne'haer Base
Alistair: Attractive


Alistair

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I very much enjoyed the way you wrote Alistair in this thread. He played his cards close to his chest, yet also was very open. I enjoyed the relationship between the two of you - you were almost circling each other, I felt. That push-pull was really interesting. Nice exit, too! Drop me a PM if you've got any questions!

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