• Closed • Introduction

[Leon]

Leon blinked when the sword landed by her feet instead of in her hands. Then he sighed as she began to ramble on about another lecture. Though it did get his brain jogging. Why did he want all of this...? And what would he do once he did become a great swordsman? But, what he didn't expect was her rejection. When she tossed the sword back, he fumbled a bit with his hands in effort to keep the sword in his grasp. Though, the clumsy result of this was dropping both swords and watching her walk away. His jaw dropped in disbelief. Gritting his teeth frustratingly, he clenched his fist and shaked it at her. "Grrr...FINE! I-I don't need you! I can just find someone else...!" Leon turned around and kicked the training sword away from him angrily. He grumbled and stomped off in the other direction, marching aimlessly.

(OOC: Yeah, we can end it here and its coolio! Character consistency is what I like! But, I'm not sure how to put this up for grading, or what I gain from grading)

[Nightshade Eld]

Faith

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

These point CAN NOT be spent on magic.

Knowledge:
Business Management: Networking is necessary
Negotiation: Pointing out that all is alright
Negotiation: Clearly stating the terms for which you will act
Persuasion: Trying to persuade against violence
Persuasion: Trying to save someone from themselves.
Socialization: Being in crowded rooms
Socialization: Places with alcohol can have very different "vibes"
Sociology: Healing factions have a unique place in society
Sociology: Uniforms are a means of identification and protection
Sociology: People behave differently when alcohol is involved

Leon Carter: A young lad
Leon Carter: A poor thief
Leon Carter: Wants to be a swordsman
Leon Carter: Doesn't want to be a medic
Leon Carter: Doesn't care about Immortals

Loot: N/A

Loss: N/A

Injury: N/A

Fame: Good deed +1, Give a gift +2, Good Deed +1 = +4

Devotion: N/A

Comments: An interesting thread. As always I adore Faith's character and I love your writing style. Perfect amount of detail and beautifully in the character of the Faith that I know and love. It was interesting to see how you decided to interact with Leon, considering his own character. I feel like Faith more or less storming out at the end was the perfect touch!


So Leon, I didn't see your review request and since I didn't see it as a part of Faith's request I wasn't able to do your review. When you want your review you're going to need to post your request. When you do you can hit me up for your grade.