[Note by Rumour] Vince Jahad

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Vince
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Vince Jahad

Vince Jahad
Name: Vince Jahad

Age: 26 arcs

Race: Lotharro

Date of Birth: Arc 691 Vhalar of the third day

Marks: N/A

Factions Joined: N/A

Languages Spoken: Fluent Common, Broken Ancient Language (if allowed if not Haitunga)

Partners: N/A
Appearance

A young adult male with a height of around 6' 1" (6 foot 1 inche) and jet black hair with eyes of an auburn flame. Has an above average build with muscles defined from constant travel and carrying of his provisions as well as training to ensure he stays fit and able to survive the wilds. His usual attire consists of a white set of plainclothes and black pants matched with a trench coat that wraps up the ensemble beneath it. Often carries his travel pack with him wherever he goes unless he is staying at an inn. Footwear consists of three sets, one set of black boots, one set of snow shoes and a set of fancy footwear for more refined events with matching clothes to boot.
Personality

An absentminded wanderer who enjoys the thrills of nature and exploring the unexplored who tends to be a little bit on the blunt side when it comes to conversation skills. He enjoys almost everything that allows for freedom and pleasure while loathing anything and anyone who would deny such things such as slavery or persecution of pleasures. His voice tends to be more on the soft side to appease the masses and avoid confrontation as well as to lure in ladies with his flirtatious manners.
There are only a few views that Vince absolutely despises, two as listed above are slavery and preventing people from pleasures while another includes politics.
Vince is absolutely crazy about three things, Adventure, pleasures of various sorts and getting his hands on anything that suits his fancy be it material possessions or a fine lady (or man) that catches his eye.
Traits: Flirtatious, Blunt, Absentminded, Wanderer and Impious
Virtues: Adaptable, Charming, Creative, Friendly and Willful
History

Raised by his family in the Lotharen horde lands, he grew up with two older brothers and one younger. As the middle child he wasn't really payed any special attention nor was he completely ignored. He grew up with a simple life enjoying the comforts of his home and family until the age of roughly sixteen arcs. Vince had been learning of the path of hunters from his many peers and reincarnated brethren, the times he spent honing his skills and enduring hardships earned him respect from his fellow brothers as well as his family members. From then he found a love for travelling when his father had taken him to a visit in a nearby city to sell excess furs, hides and various dried meats to not only attain some extra money but to build better relations with the nearby cities. His fondness of the travels and all the sights he had seen spurred him into a life of adventure making his mind spin with each thought of a grand journey that would take him across the lands. An arc later he was travelling the world on his own and carving out a name for himself while learning various things along the way, some tales from other travelers would spur him even more until he would wear himself out.

As he traveled the lands he had stumbled upon a rather splendid display of puppetry unlike any he had seen before,
baffled as to how the man had made his puppets move in such a way, he decided to follow him afterwards and inquire about it. The older gentleman took an interest in his curiosity and taught Vince how to use necromancy magic to put his will to the puppets and make them move in a more life like fashion. It took a long while for him to understand the concept despite it seeming so simple when viewed although he was hesitant at first with the negative stigma that often followed the practice of necromancy, spending roughly half an arc just to learn the basics and how it could be applied in a more fulfilling and peaceful manner. Through his hard work and even hardier determination he was able to learn the skills necessary in order to animate the small dolls, though not nearly as well as the old man had. In exchange for the services the man had provided Vince had hunted animals for him using his trappings skills learned during the time of his youth when he took the path of the hunter. Although he wasn't exceptionally skilled at using a bow or sword he was particularly keen of mind and creation using traps and devices to capture his prey rather than exerting his effort on something he may not even catch although the same could come of traps if not prepared properly.

Throughout his travels he had seen many cities, towns and ruins alike, finding a plethora of interesting things to catch his attention. Various knick knacks and artifacts were ripe for plundering although he could only carry so much,
mostly settling on bits of parchment and tablets with writing upon them which he later had deciphered and would sell to anyone with an interest in them, often times asking of scholars willing to purchase the items instead for an exchange of knowledge. His thirst to grow stronger physically was not his only desire, he also wished to become well learned in almost all aspects that could help his journey. When he found that some of the scripts and tablets were of the ancient language he became almost too enamored by such a thought as learning the language of the immortals. Some scholars directed him towards the frozen north of Viden to learn more and possibly gain free tutelage from the Academy, Vince hardly waited for them to finish their words before he was preparing to leave on a chase for adventure.
Housing

Vince is a traveler by nature and doesn't have a set home save for his family's house which resides within the Lotharen horde lands. It's a simple one story house more wide than long with about four rooms, a kitchen and dining area as well as one bathing area for general cleaning purposes.
Knowledge & Skills

SkillPoints AcquiredTotal Points SpentProficiency
Strength[FT]10/100 (10/100)Novice
Cartography10/100 (10/251)Novice
Endurance[RB]25/100 (25/251) Novice
Persuasion10/100 (10/251)Novice
Trap Making10/100 (10/251)Novice
Hunting 5/100 (5/251)Novice
Magic

SkillPoints AcquiredTotal Points SpentProficiency
Necromancy5/100 (5/251)Novice
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Knowledge

Necromancy: Instill Life
Trap making: Razor wire trapping
Cartography: Map Making
Hunting: Tracking
Persuasion: Silver tongue
Skill Point Ledger


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Example:
Thread or Skill NamePoints AwardedPoints SpentRunning Total
Endurance [RB] 25[RB] 2500
Starting Package 500050
Strength ..1040
Trap Making ..1030
Necromancy ..5 25
Cartography..1015
Persuasion..10 05
Hunting ..500
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Items
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    • One set of clothing: coat, shirt, pants, undergarments, and a pair of boots.
    • One set of Weather Gear: Thick coat, thick pants, undergarments, and a pair of boots.
    • Tent (sized to accommodate two people or one person and their possessions.)
    • Riding horse (Druaga)
    • One horse-pulled wagon (two feet wide, three feet long, two feet deep)
    • 100 feet of rope
    • Tinderbox
    • Six torches
    • Lantern
    • bedroll
    • compass
    • fishing net
    • blanket
    • Four rucksacks
    • A knife
    • Waterskin
    • Set of toiletries
    • Two rags.
    • A set of trapping equipment
    • Scribe's Kit
    • Barrel
    • Large Pouch x2
    • Medium Pouch
Ledger
ItemDebitCredit
Traveller's Package 25 GN 25 GN
Scribe's kit -18 GN 7 GN
Barrel -5 GN 2 GN
Large Pouch x2 -8 SN 1 GN 2 SN
Medium Pouch -2 SN 1 GN
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Total Currency: 0 ON, 1 GN, 0 SN, 0 CN
Fame Ledger
Item/ ThreadFameTotal
Starting Fame +20 +20
Lotharro +10 +10
Lotharo in Viden -10 +10
Profession (Performer) +10 +20
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Intervention!
Welcome to Standing Trials, Vince! Thank you so much for your patience with this CS review. You've created a really interesting character (lotharro necromancer with a passion for language & pleasure - awesome!). Definitely tons of potential here for great stories ahead.

Before we can move you into the Approved User group, I have a few small fixes I'm hoping you can make.
1. Please either adjust your character’s age to 25 (turning 26 in Vhalar 717) or adjust their arc of birth to 690 (turning 27 in Vhalar 717).

2. You may keep “Ancient Language” as your broken language. Please remove Haltunga from your CS.

3. Please note that since you have chosen the Traveller’s Package, you may only use your family’s home in memory threads unless you purchase a home in Uthaldria with your job earnings. If you could either make a note of this on your CS or remove the home from your CS entirely, that would be appreciated.

4. Please adjust your knowledges so they are more specific. I’ve included examples below which you may substitute for the knowledge currently in your CS.

Necromancy: How to animate a doll
Trap Making: How to make a razor wire trap
Cartography: How to draw a simple map
Hunting: How to identify deer tracks
Persuasion: How to speak with eloquence

5. Don’t forget to include your prized possession! A prized possession can be any one item worth 30gn or less excluding any sort of artifact (arcane). Prized possessions must also be named and be precious to the character and/or related to their storyline.

6. Please remove the “Starting Fame” of +20 from your fame ledger and adjust your fame total to +10 (+10 Lotharro, -10 Lotharro in Viden, +10 Performer).

7. Please update your thread list with all of your current and completed threads.
Once you've made these changes, shoot me a quick PM and I'll remove this intervention & send you your CS Rewards!

Cheers,
Ru
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