Review Requests 4.0

[Celeste Andaris]

Andaris, Rynmere

Pillow Talk
Xander and Celeste
Magic: Nope
Knowledge: As seen
Devotion: Maybe for Xander? (Ethelyndra)
Fame: As seen
In the aftermath of them sleeping together for the first time, talk turns much more serious when they discuss how Xander's father had attacked Celeste.
Mature themes of violence - but kept very PG13.

Thanks for reviewing!

Will be transferring to new system thank you

[Faith Augustin]

Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris

The Next Level
Faith (solo)
This is Faith's study thread - she's beginning her Charter in Medicine. I tried to do something a little different and made her notes and stuff - but the thread is the requisite 1,500 words without those, just in case. I also wanted this to be about studying and being a student - having done the letter, certificate and diploma already, I figure they'd stop doing formal teaching and make it more seminar led. That's what this is.
Knowledge: Research, writing that kind of thing?
Magic: Nope
Devotion: It's all about Famula, all the time.
Fame: If seen.
No warning (other than Faith is an uber nerd. Soz!)

Thanks!

New system. Thank you

[Pash Raj'oriq]

City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris Town
Thread Name: You're the good one, right?
Character(s) Involved: Pash and Faith
Quick Summary: Pash applies for a job as a musician at Cally's. He is hired.
Requested Knowledge: Knowledge about Faith, Cally's, fancy restaurants, and playing music for an interview. Ha.
Other Notes: Nope.
Fame: Not sure. Yes? Scalvoris fame?
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: None.

[Symbri]

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Guardian, part 1
Character(s) Involved:Symbri
Quick Summary: Symbri fights some drunks... poorly.... saves a Mutant
Requested Knowledge: Anything really,
Other Notes:I uh, I hate writing combat and could probly use some critiques, thanks
Fame: I.. dunno I hope
Devotion: Eh? I dunno My plots are inspired by Xiur and Sym wanting to do right by him and Quylios but I'm not praying or anything.
Magic XP: NEVER!!!!
Warning: Uhm... I think I crack a dudes skull, I tried not to kill anyone!

[Doran]

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Home for Sale
Character(s) Involved: Doran, Malcolm
Quick Summary: Doran sells his house to Malcolm.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you can find.
Other Notes: Thank you for your review.
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: Probably not.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: No.

[Andráska Venora]

City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere
Thread Name: Training with Margery
Character(s) Involved: Andráska Venora, his personal npc Margery
Quick Summary: Just a training thread for his job.
Requested Knowledge: Melee Combat (Blades), Shield, whatever else you see.
Other Notes: A bit of a grinder, but I tried to incorporate a small bit of dialogue/story as well.
Fame: Confirming a rumor? Probably nothing.
Devotion: A small prayer mentioned at the end of post 2.
Magic XP: Nevah.
Warning: Safe and sound, promise. Maybe a little boring? Sorry 'bout that.

[Andráska Venora]

City/Area Taken Place: Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: Whispering Woods
Character(s) Involved: Andraska Venora
Quick Summary: Andraska goes to the woods to clear his mind. Sees dead people.
Requested Knowledge: Fieldcraft, and whatever else you see.
Other Notes: An old battlefield that has since grown into a thriving woodland, the Wisp Woods are some of the most haunted woods in all of Rynmere. Murderers and dubious actions are common in this area, and as such, it says the spirits of the dead and disturbed roam freely.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Whatever seen.
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: Slightly graphic regarding death, and violence. Innocent otherwise.

[Andráska Venora]

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: Fight Me, Bro
Character(s) Involved: Andraska Venora, Duncan Oisin
Quick Summary: The two spar and train after a little bonding, unbeknownst to either of them that they are tied to the same denominator - Alistair Venora.
Requested Knowledge: Strength, Melee, Unarmed, Endurance
Other Notes: Pretty fun.
Fame: Andras gives the gift of marijuana.
Devotion: Andras devotes his win against Duncan to Ilaren.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: Light drug use. Light violence.

[Andráska Venora]

City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere
Thread Name: Imprisoned
Character(s) Involved: Andraska Venora and Edalene
Quick Summary: The two get detention and immediately find a way to break free.
Requested Knowledge: Rakahi/linguistic, unarmed combat, and deception lores for Andras. Any and all for Edalene.
Other Notes: Short and sweet little thread I enjoyed quite a bit.
Fame: Whatever seen.
Devotion: N/A? Whatever seen.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: There's a schoolyard fight. Otherwise innocent as heck.

[Peake]

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: The Drunk Hand /viewtopic.php?f=192&t=1465
Character(s) Involved: Peake
Quick Summary: Peake is drunk.
Requested Knowledge: ???
Other Notes: My first IC post. My partner didn't even care to reply
Fame: -
Devotion: (-
Magic XP: -
Warning: I can't remember