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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Uthaldria
Thread Name: Dancing With Shadows
Character(s) Involved: Alistair
Quick Summary: Alistair acquires his mastercraft spear and learns of a deadly style of fighting
Requested Knowledge: A lot of knowledges here, very compacted. Please pay extra attention to the acrobatics, polearm (general) and spear (specific) knowledges. Knowledges within Polearm: Spear about Shadowdancing are also appreciated.
Other Notes: Thanks!
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: Nah
Warning: Nah

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Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris

An Arrival and a Beginning
Kura and Faith
Kura arrives in Scalvoris, Faith greets her at the docks. They talk about weddings, grandparents, slavery and government.
Knowledge: As seen.
Fame: As seen.
Devotion: As seen.
Magic: Nope.
No warning.

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City/Area Taken Place: Orm'del Sea
Thread Name: Ship Life
Character(s) Involved: Vincent D'Ordyn, Sabine
Quick Summary: Vincent & Sabine spend time together during one of their initial nights on the ship from Rynmere to Rharne, and Vincent trains Sabine in unarmed combat.
Requested Knowledge: People, locations, skills (unarmed combat, tactics, teaching for Vincent, and whatever else is seen!).
Other Notes: Thank you, thank you! We hope you enjoy.
Fame: Whatever is seen.
Devotion: Whatever is seen.
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A
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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Acquiring the Totem: Willow Redbear
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Fridgar
Quick Summary: Fridgali hunt some paw thieves!
Requested Knowledge: Unarmed, Acrobatics, Becoming for Fridgar - Blade, Tactics (?) for Ali
Other Notes: Thanks dood
Fame: I dunno if this counts as "killing bandits"...
Devotion: Some for acting out of fury... MAYBE something for Frid with Ilaren, if you see anything
Magic XP: Becoming for Fridbear
Warning: Yes. Incredibly graphic violence.
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City/Area Taken Place: Welles, Eastern Settlement, Andaris.
Thread Name: Meeting Again.
Character(s) Involved: Tristan and Hart.
Quick Summary: Tristan and Hart meet up again after some time apart. They catch up and discuss Hart's involvement with the Alliance, a splinter branch of the RCA.
Requested Knowledge: Tristan would like an Elithem knowledge for having used his ability the first time. Other than that, whatever you see.
Other Notes: None.
Fame: Perhaps positive fame for good deeds. This would mostly go to Tristan. He spent 600gn to buy health masks for the people of the Eastern Settlement! Wow!
Devotion: Possibly towards Tristan's gods, Zanik or Ilaren.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: None.

Thanks for reviewing! ^_^
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City/Area Taken Place: Almund, Scalvoris
Thread Name: A Choice
Character(s) Involved: Delta and Lakia
Quick Summary: Lakia reveals the truth to Delta about how she really controls her slave.
Requested Knowledge: Anything, particularly about each other.
Other Notes: Thank you!
Fame: If you see any?
Devotion: Eh
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Involves talk of drug use.

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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name:Getting into one's skin...
Character(s) Involved: Solo
Quick Summary: Fence orientation in the Underground
Requested Knowledge: Stuff about navigating the Underground, intimidation and persuasion (or is it seduction?), poisons, vulgar words in Common
Other Notes: Raellen is a NPC for the Fence, has poison skills too
Fame: Its behind closed doors and piggy backing off Raellen so none.
Devotion: -
Magic XP: -
Warning: Implied torture
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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Uthaldria
Thread Name: Windfall
Character(s) Involved: Alistair
Quick Summary: Alistair learns more shadowdancing from Keanu
Requested Knowledge: Polearms: Spear and Acrobatics, please. Don't make me send you one of those naggy PMs!
Other Notes: Thanks a lot, love
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: Nah
Warning: Nah

Here is a link to Shadowdancing:

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Xander Andaris
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Thread Name: All that glitters
Character(s) Involved: Xander and Celeste
Quick Summary: Celeste receives a gift from Andráska and Xander is not amused. There is a heated discussion but then they make up and one thing leads to another and tahdah by the end of the 3rd of Ymiden Xander becomes a man XD
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen really, it will mostly going to be personal knowledge about each other
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for the review
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: There is the implication of sex at the end where it is a fade to black.


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Aeon
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Eastern Gauthrel, Uthaldria
Heading East [part 1]
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Aeon goes on a scouting/hunting mission with some lothar and mercenaries.
Any knowledge seen
Fame: Killing a monster x2, possibly Witness to act of heroism, up to the reviewer
Devotion/Magic/Warning: Nah
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