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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Treth, Ne'haer
Thread Name: My Cabbages!
Character(s) Involved: Brynjar, Alistair
Quick Summary: Ali kills some things attacking Brynjar's farm, then spends the night in Brynjar's home
Requested Knowledge: Blades for Ali, probably Axes for Bryn and anything else you see
Other Notes: Splintering was since changed after this thread to no longer work on organics. Please do not give any knowledge about Alistair using splintering here. Also, I dumped this thread 5ever; I'm sorry ;-;
Fame: Anything
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: Nah
Warning: Violent
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris.
Thread Name: Left Unfinished /viewtopic.php?f=192&t=3284
Character(s) Involved: Peake and Syhera.
Quick Summary: After the battle for Andaris is over, Syhera visits the wounded Peake.
Requested Knowledge: We're not really looking for anything major. We're at that point in our writing history where we roleplay solely for feels rather than rewards. But if you find anything then please drop some knowledges on us.
Other Notes:
Fame:Positive for Syhera. If you feel like you want to give Peake some positive fame, please abstain from doing so. I don't want that sh*t
Devotion: lol no
Magic XP: Love is the only magic used here
Warning: Noe
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris

You're the good one, right?
Pash and Faith
Faith employs a musician in her new business, this is the job interview.
Knowledge: As seen
Fame: Could Faith have "run a business", please? This is the first business thread she did. Other than that, as seen!
Magic: Nurp
Devotion: Don't think so.
Warning: None

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New system :)
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Life, Death and the In-Between .
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Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris

Family Matters (AKA: The Adventures of Grandpad and Tootsie Pt 1)
Faith's at home planning a romantic evening when Padraig's grandfather Cy turns up unexpectedly, having traveled to Scalvoris when he found out about them getting married. Whilst Faith is under his baleful glare, outside Pad meets Katherine - Cy's girlfriend.
Knowledge: Whatever you see, really.
Magic: Nope.
Devotion: Nope.
Fame: Probably not.
No warning.

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Moved to new system. Thanks
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Delta
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City/Area Taken Place: Almund, Scalvoris
Thread Name: (please provide a link to the thread) Snowfall
Character(s) Involved: Delta and Lakia
Quick Summary: Lakia finds Delta as she is coming down from her drug high. The two talk.
Requested Knowledge: Anything, particularly about each other.
Other Notes: Thank you!
Fame: If you see any?
Devotion: Eh
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Involves drug abuse.

Transitioned Request to new System. Thank you.
Last edited by Delta on Mon Jul 10, 2017 8:26 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 71
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Tei'serin Nji'ryn
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer/Treth
Thread Name: [Treth] A Child Found
Character(s) Involved: Tei'serin Nji'ryn, Sorin (NPC), and various NPCs
Quick Summary: Sorin has been found, but he needs to be treated for exposure to the cold. Tei'serin takes charge. This is a continuation from [Treth] A Child Lost
Requested Knowledge: Medicine knowledges in particular would be appreciated; including some on frostbite, and its lesser form, frost nip, Elderberry/Elder flower: parts of the same herb, Elderberry/Elder flower: good treating the symptoms of a cold, or flu, Elderberry/Elder flower: good for strengthening the body so the duration of a cold or flu is shortened, Elderberry/Elder flower: good for lowering fevers, Elderberry/Elder flower: safe for children, Elderberry/Elder flower: has a sweet, pleasant taste, Elderberries: more effective against the flu than elder flowers, Yarrow: good for shortening the duration of a cold, or flu, Yarrow: good for lowering fevers, Yarrow: safe for children, Yarrow: good for relieving the cramps associated with growing pains, Cayenne Powder: brings heat to the body, making it good for treating exposure to cold, Cayenne Powder: can prevent someone from getting a cold, or the flu, Cayenne Powder: shortens the duration of a cold or flu, Ginger: brings heat to the body, making it good for treating exposure to cold, Ginger: good for sore throats, Ginger: good for nausea, Ginger: too spicy to give to children without diluting it first, Ginger: can be diluted with honey or lemon, Honey: good for sore throats, Honey: good for nausea, Lemon juice: reduces phlegm, Lemon juice: builds up the body's resistance to a cold or flu, and one on Moseke's Light - Moseke's Light: knowing when to use it, and when not to
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for reviewing this!
Fame: Maybe positive?
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: None used.
Warning: None.
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Vaughn
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere.
Thread Name: Family Matters.
Character(s) Involved: Malcolm, Elyna, Vaughn.
Quick Summary: Vaughn goes to Malcolm and Elyna's house to visit his new brother Luke and they share a meal and have a conversation.
Requested Knowledge: Anything you see.
Other Notes: None.
Fame: Whatever you see.
Devotion: Whatever you see. I don't think there was anything however.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: None, just a social thread with a little family drama as usual. ^_^

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Vaughn
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere.
Thread Name: Hello Again.
Character(s) Involved: Lorena and Vaughn.
Quick Summary: Lorena and Vaughn meet up again after four arcs apart.
Requested Knowledge: Any you see.
Other Notes: None.
Fame: Any you see.
Devotion: Any you see.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: I don't think there's anything. The thread continues on in the mature section haha.

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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: Piece of Cake
Character(s) Involved: Sabine
Quick Summary: Sabine is asked to write an article for the Rynmere Gazette and does not take it well. This is a job thread for Saun 716.
Requested Knowledge: People, locations, information about Rynmere, skills (maybe Investigation, Writing, Persuasion (?), and whatever else is seen).
Other Notes: Thank you so much for the review!
Fame: Whatever is seen.
Devotion: Whatever is seen.
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A
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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: Remembrance of a Fallen Leaf
Character(s) Involved: Alistair
Quick Summary: Old ass job thread; Alistair attempts to cure a fungal infection
Requested Knowledge: Anything
Other Notes: Thanks
Fame: Maybe
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: Nah
Warning: Semi-graphic?
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