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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Uthaldria
Thread Name: Hearts of Stone
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar, Alistair
Quick Summary: Fridgar and Ali go to the Jegers for treatment, but then they decide to be dicks and attack Frid. lol
Requested Knowledge: Acrobatics for Ali (for grapping onto a spear mid-air, then lifting himself onto it and curling around it), Jeger knowledges for both maybe, and endurance and Rupturing for Fridgar
Other Notes: Thanks
Fame: IDK
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: Rupturing for Fridadon
Warning: Violence
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Zana
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Rharne

I'm not bad, I'm just painted that way
Zana (solo)
Zana works through some issues following an attack on her and another prostitute where she works. She and Billie (npc), the other girl attacked, learn some painting and drawing together.
Knowledge: Drawing and Painting, please. Maybe caregiving and psychology?
Magic: nope
Devotion: nope
Fame: as you see fit.
Warning: it's two prostitutes talking about stuff. At one point they kiss. It's very PG13

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Patrick
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Thread Name: Riding the Tide
Character(s) Involved: Rei
Quick Summary: You know what... I forgot.
Requested Knowledge: Surprise me!
Other Notes: This thread's from way back in Nov 2016, not sure how it hasn't received a review so... enjoy!
Fame: Nothing worth noting
Devotion: Ditto
Magic XP: Ditto
Warning: Ditto
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Patrick
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Thread Name: Red in Winter
Character(s) Involved: Syhera
Quick Summary: Meant to be a starting point in their friendship, never really kicked off anywhere though.
Requested Knowledge: Surprise me again!
Other Notes: Nothing worth noting
Fame: Ditto
Devotion: Ditto
Magic XP: Ditto
Warning: Ditto
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Patrick
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Thread Name: Making Home in the Void
Character(s) Involved: Freya, Wendell
Quick Summary: Shit went down in Ne'haer!
Requested Knowledge: Not sure what the other two wanted, for Patrick though I'd like to specifically request the secret lore "Crowley: Missing" as prior the end of the thread. Please?
Other Notes: Erm. Nothing really?
Fame: Well they stole a boat apparently, so you decide.
Devotion: None.
Magic XP: None.
Warning: To school for cool?
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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: So It Begins
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Hans
Quick Summary: Ali and Hans meet at an execution and form an alliance
Requested Knowledge: Politics and Empathy for Hans, anything you see for Ali
Other Notes: Thanks
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: Empathy for Hans
Warning: Nah
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City/Area Taken Place: Gauthrel, Uthaldria
Thread Name: Insomnus
Character(s) Involved: Alistair
Quick Summary: Keanu teaches Ali acrobatic and spear maneuvers
Requested Knowledge: HEAVY Spear and Acrobatics knowledges
Other Notes: Thanks
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: Nah
Warning: Nah
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Rharne, Glass Quarter:
Tea and Taste
Patrick and Zana meet, flirt, discuss their shared profession.
Knowledge: Seduction, Persuasion, Cosmetology (Zana) as seen.
No devotion (Patrick is marked by Syroa)
No magic
Warning: They talk about both being prostitutes but no more.


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Xander Andaris
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere, Andaris, Astedia
Thread Name: [Astedia] A Change of Plans?
Character(s) Involved: Xander and Celeste
Quick Summary: Celeste gives Xander some exciting news, he is going to be a father, at first all is happy but Xander has a bit of a melt down.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: Thanks in advance
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: Ethelynda for Xander
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Its all quite adorable, prepare to see the big softy within Xander!


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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: Elementary, my dear Saeri
Character(s) Involved: Yanahalqah, Sintih
Quick Summary: Yana and Sintih investigate an RCA attack on a prominent citizen and manage to find information on a potential RCA hideout in lowtown Andaris but things don't turn out as expected.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see.
Other Notes: Nothing
Fame: Maybe identifying and locating RCA members?
Devotion: Some Aelig for Sin, as usual.
Magic XP: No
Warning: Nothing
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