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Theo Nji'Ryn
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Warm Hands Cold Heart
Character(s) Involved: Zana and Theo
Quick Summary: Zana and Theo get together at the Lap of Luxury (brothel) to build their relationship as handler and 'employee'. She tries out one of her mortalborn abilities on him.
Requested Knowledge: Zana used her mortalborn ability "Reflected Experience" which falls under her "Reflection" Domain. Please could she have knowledge regarding it's use and limitation. Whatever else seen.
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Don't think so.
Devotion: None for Theo. Unsure about Zana
Magic XP:
Warning: This thread is marked mature. Nothing shocking, just mature theme type innuendo.

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Kali'rial
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City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris Town
Thread Name: A Little Morning Hunt
Character(s) Involved: Kali'rial
Quick Summary: Monthly Job Thread where Kali goes hunting for Cally's and to grab a hide
Requested Knowledge: Short Bow: How To Shoot An Arrow or Skill increase for hunting/tanning/shotbow?
Other Notes: na
Fame: na
Devotion: no
Magic XP: no
Warning: animal death? No descriptions of gore.
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Pash Raj'oriq
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'Haer
Thread Name: Strength in Numbers (Memory Thread)
Character(s) Involved: Zana + Pash
Quick Summary: Pash's friends take his drunk, brokenhearted self to a brothel and while he objects, he is eventually persuaded.
Requested Knowledge: Zana is a mortalborn, daughter of Delroth. Empathy magic is used. Some seduction confetti in there for good measure.
Other Notes: Writing broody Pash is hard. He's far too easy to stay sad.
Fame: Maybe?
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: Pash used Empathy magic.
Warning: This thread is Mature. It's in a brothel. Sex is inevitable. It's FTB.


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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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City/Area Taken Place: Almund, Scalvoris Island
Thread Name: I'll Have a World’s End
Character(s) Involved: Pash + Kali’rial
Quick Summary: Pash runs into Kali’rial at the World’s End Festival in Almund and convinces her to have a good time through various charming methods. It is continued in an Adult thread, but this one is finished.
Requested Knowledge: Knowledge of each other, Sev’ryn culture, etc.
Other Notes:
Fame: Nah.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: Yes. Pash uses Empathy magic on Kali. Probably not the wisest choice if you want to keep the girl later.
Warning: No. Maybe an innuendo. He does invite her home (and she agrees). But this thread is safe. LOL
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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City/Area Taken Place: Cally’s Restaurant, Scalvoris Town
Thread Name: Playing the Background
Character(s) Involved: Pash
Quick Summary: Job thread. Pash plays background music for a fancier dining experience.
Requested Knowledge: Musical Instrument-related, Performance-related, and whatever else.
Other Notes:
Fame: Yes?
Devotion: No, but I should have put something in there about Zanik. I will next time.
Magic XP: No.
Warning: Pash probably looks hot in his new clothes. That is all.
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: Weft of the Heart, Part 1[/b]
Quick Summary: Pash is initiated into Empathy magic.
Requested Knowledge: Empathy/magic-related knowledge, relationship knowledge with NPC (need to write her up)
Other Notes: No.
Fame: No.
Devotion: No.
Magic XP: Yes.
Warning: Pillow talk. PG/PG13.
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Vincent D'Ordyn
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City/Area Taken Place: Rharne
Thread Name: What Doesn't Go Bump in the Night
Character(s) Involved: Vincent
Quick Summary: Vincent takes on a job as a warehouse night guard.
Requested Knowledge: Throwing Weapons, plus any that wanna give.
Other Notes: Sorry if it's a bit boring.
Fame: What you see
Devotion: What you see
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A
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Kali'rial
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City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris Town
Thread Name: Haggling Is Half The Fun
Character(s) Involved: Kali'rial
Quick Summary: Kali goes shopping for an extra set of garments.
Requested Knowledge: Business Knowledge: How To Haggle For A Lower Price
Other Notes: spent some money, captured in my ledger and in the OOC notes.
Fame: na
Devotion: no
Magic XP: no
Warning: none
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City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: The Sunless
Character(s) Involved: Robin, Alistair
Quick Summary: Robin and Alistair meet
Requested Knowledge: Spear and maybe acrobatics for Ali, maybe some Defiance knowledge for Robin?
Other Notes: Thanks!
Fame: Nah
Devotion: Nah
Magic XP: Defiance for Robin
Warning: Nah

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Rharne
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Zana and Theo
Zana is working in the brothel and two clients get violent. It turns very unpleasant very quickly.
Knowledge: Unarmed & endurance for Zana, please. Maybe a dagger knowledge or two if seen. For Theo, sword, dagger, crossbow and intimidation, please.
Magic: No
Fame: Well, they were bad men. Killing bandits?
Devotion: No.
Warning: Yes, this takes place in a brothel and deals with violence. The men who are attacking the girls get killed. Nothing too graphic, but violent themes.

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