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Vaughn
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere.
Thread Name: Of the Immortal Father and Immortal's Son.
Character(s) Involved: Malcolm and Vaughn.
Quick Summary: Vaughn comes to Malcolm about his troubles with his anger and the mark of Chrien.
Requested Knowledge: Anything you see.
Other Notes: None.
Fame: Anything you see.
Devotion: I'd imagine a little devotion towards Vri, Malcolm's father, for Malcolm. And perhaps devotion towards Chrien for Vaughn.
Magic XP: Nope.
Warning: Nothing too bad. Angst mostly lol.

Thanks for reviewing! ^_^
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Neronin
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: The Journal of Mad
Character(s) Involved: Neronin
Quick Summary: Job/ Research Thread
Requested Knowledge: Well types, Well function, necromancy golems, necromancy fetches
Other Notes: Not much.
Fame: I don't think so.
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: Yes pls.
Warning: Undead mouse... not gross at all.
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Neronin
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos/ Outside Etzos
Thread Name: Better Than Home
Character(s) Involved: Noth, Neronin
Quick Summary: Neronin asks to use Noth's cave for experiments.
Requested Knowledge: Not much, Leadership for Noth (I think maybe intimidation for noth as well)
Other Notes: N/A
Fame: Maybe?
Devotion: (Yes or no to indicate whether your character did something that warrants devotion points.)
Magic XP: Noth: no, Neronin: yes
Warning: WARNING: NOTH's FACE
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Vince
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City/Area Taken Place: Scalvoris
Thread Name: [Scholar's Nook] A little bit of knowledge
Character(s) Involved: Faith and Vince
Quick Summary: A first time meeting and conversation between Faith and Vince as well as a small shopping trip. Learning knowledge of Scalvoris and the surrounding areas.
Requested Knowledge: Reviewer Discretion
Other Notes: Pg 13
Fame: No
Devotion: Possibly yes to Faith
Magic XP: No
Warning: None
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Neronin
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos/Woodlanss
Thread Name: Bonemaker: Rumor
Character(s) Involved: Neronin
Quick Summary: Neronin goes to investigate a rumor and finds a fracture.
Requested Knowledge: Fracture stuff, Wells stuff
Other Notes: Maltruism has approved acquisition of wells
Fame: no?
Devotion:
Magic XP: Yes pls
Warning: Nothibg really, Combat with a monster but no gore.
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City/Area taken place: Uleuda
Thread Name: Learning by crystal light
Character(s) Involved: Yanahalqah and Genuvah
Quick Summary: Genuvah is new to Uleuda and attends a lecture on Qa. Yana joins in and thing go awry for some reason.
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you feel like rewarding
Other Notes: It makes no sense. Nothing is explained ;)
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: none
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City/Area Taken Place:Etzos
Thread Name: Acquiring the Totem Great white
Character(s) Involved: Moon and Fridgar
Quick Summary: Moon continues to help Fridgar put his totem together.
Requested Knowledge: Fridgar probably needs some knowledge on Becoming a shark, I super need mertamorphosis knowledge. Knowledge on our races and we both could use knowledge on linguistics (if you can find some) such would be cool too.
Other Notes: this is part two of another thread.
Fame: What every you see
Devotion: nope
Magic XP: yes for Frid no for Moon
Warning: Moon says the F word and there is some blood involved but other than that not really.
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: No re?
Character(s) Involved: Noth, Fridgar
Quick Summary: Fridgar returns Noth's bow to him, the two strike up a deal to help each other with hunting if Fridgar is ever near Etzos.
Requested Knowledge: Intimidation, Detection for Noth. Becoming for Fridgar.
Other Notes:
Fame: Probably not since this is a private conversation.
Devotion: No
Magic XP: Yes for Frid, No for Noth.
Warning: N/A
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: Sniff and scratch.
Character(s) Involved: Solo
Quick Summary: Bounty thread to retrieve stolen scython cubs in Etzos. The sneaky way.
Requested Knowledge: Cooking, poison, dagger, business, disguise probably, animal stuff
Other Notes: Bounty thread of 300 per cub (so total of 600) None for the thief as Nauta is not turning him in to the authorities although I put more focus on him because I consider him the more difficult part of the bounty. If possible maybe free training for Nauta's own scython (alongside the cubs)
Fame: Bounty thread so yes
Devotion: -
Magic XP: -
Warning: -
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Ne'haer

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Arlo and Vega
Having previously told Vega that he'd been attacked by bandits when, in fact, he'd been roughed up by his horse, Arlo realises that Vega's gone off to find these imaginary baddies. However, she finds some real ones, and a big fight ensues.
Knowledge: Hunting, bow & sword, mostly, I think. Please and thanks.
Devotion: I don't think so.
Fame: We killed six bandits - and refused the bounty etc. Please!
Warning: There's a fight with bandits. Violence, but it's pg13.

Thanks for reviewing!
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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