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Freya teaches Malcolm about Rakahi

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“They exist.” Freya responded quickly, firmly. She was no religious fanatic but the horrors she’d experienced over her lifetime, and even those within the last arc, only solidified the truth of these beings existing within the world. “How else could you explain the creatures of the shadows… or the power wielded by those in secrecy? No mortal man could conjure such illusion and to believe such a tale is foolish beyond that of a fool’s thought.” Having not realized the insult her words brought, Freya cleared her throat and straightened. “Sorry...”

Freya listened while the Warden explained further about the family, growing more perplexed. If they were such a band of drunken, sex crazed party-goers, then why did they have any interest in freeing her from a government prison? Thinking back to her limited time with Andraska, Freya knew they were interested in her drug smuggling ways, but beyond that…

Answers. That’s what Andraska had explained to her. But what answers? She knew nothing… Or at least, that’s what she thought. She knew who the Witch Doctor within Rharne was. She had connections to the black markets and the smugglers routes between the Eastern and Western Regions. Freya had enough information to sell for a pretty onyx piece, which made her valuable and dangerous...

Her brow furrowed in thought before Malcolm’s words snapped her attention back to the conversation. Wendell… A tiredness hit her at the memory of him, making her look down with a sigh. The woman had come to accept his death, but the guilt… and the anger. Those were ever present and heavy on her heart.

“My mentor was a rookid bastard. His insults over my speech kept me on the books at night.” She picked at her nails, the color of her eyes turning unnaturally bright blue. “But I suppose that was the best way to teach me.”

“No, thank you for the time.” She stood then, watching him pull the book closer and smiled. “I suppose it’s in your nature to be distrusting of others? That’s good to have, but since you won’t let me take that,” A finger pointed to the novel, “May I at least know where I can find you if I have anymore questions?”
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“No need to apologise,” he assured the woman. Freya made mention of his lack of trust, and Malcolm couldn't help but smile. “There are few I trust,” he agreed, “my line of work makes it difficult, and having seen and experienced what I have, it was a valuable lesson to learn.”
Malcolm took a piece of paper from the table and picked up a quill set in a shallow dish of ink. He jotted down the name of the street in Midtown his unit worked out of and wrote down the number she would find on the door, his name left below that in small, clear letters. “If you need to get a hold of me you can leave a note there. You can write it in common or I have a captain under my command who speaks and reads Rakahi well,” he stated.
“All the best with you search for more history.” Malcolm got to his feet and took the book with him, handing it to the librarian on the way out.
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Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:

Deception: Hiding your reason for asking questions
Discipline: Biting back fury
History of Rynmere: Seven Noble Families
History of Rynmere: Andaris built Rynmere on a hill
History of Rynmere: Andaris married a beautiful woman, called Venora
History of Rynmere: Andaris had three generals
History of Rynmere: Andaris was never king
History of Rynmere: Andaris' daughter Nora was Queen and died young
History of Rynmere: Warrick was brave and loyal
History of Rynmere: Burhan was smart and cunning
History of Rynmere: Krome was fearsome but reckless.
History of Rynmere: Krome also called the saint of death
History of Rynmere: Krome has treasure at the bottom of Lake Krome
History of Rynmere: Endor, and explorer who was terrified of the immortals
History of Rynmere: Gwayne also called the half-god
History of Rynmere: Gwayne: a man of prophecy and foresight
Interrogation: Asking follow up questions
Linguistics: Seeking commonalities in languages
Location: Andaris
Location: Andaris Library
Location: Where to leave a note for Malcolm Krome
Malcolm Krome: Met in the library
Malcolm: Stopped you stealing a book
Malcolm: Teaches history
Malcolm: Married
Malcolm: Interest in language
Malcolm: Doesn't seem overly impressed with the Venora family
Negotiation: Offering to buy what isn't for sale
Negotiation: Pointing out where you are defenseless
Politics: Rynmere nobility
Research: Finding what you're looking for in a library
Rynmere: Religion: Place mortals in sainthood.
Teaching: Show similarities


Loot:
NA
Fame:
NA
Devotion:
NA
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana
Malcolm


Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/5
Knowledge:

Detection: Noticing accents
Detection: Spotting suspicious behaviours
Freya: Met her in the library
Freya: Biqaj
Freya: Was stealing a book?
Freya: Scarred
Freya: Religious?
History of Rynmere: Andaris built Rynmere on a hill
History of Rynmere: Andaris married a beautiful woman, called Venora
History of Rynmere: Andaris had three generals
History of Rynmere: Andaris was never king
History of Rynmere: Andaris' daughter Nora was Queen and died young
History of Rynmere: Warrick was brave and loyal
History of Rynmere: Burhan was smart and cunning
History of Rynmere: Krome was fearsome but reckless.
History of Rynmere: Krome also called the saint of death
History of Rynmere: Krome has treasure at the bottom of Lake Krome
History of Rynmere: Endor, and explorer who was terrified of the immortals
History of Rynmere: Gwayne also called the half-god
History of Rynmere: Gwayne: a man of prophecy and foresight
Investigation: Putting together clues about personality
Investigation: Determining station.
Location: Andaris Library
Linguistics: Seeking commonalities in languages
Rakahi: Word: "Saint"
Teaching: Keep the amount of information manageable
Teaching: Give examples and memorable snippets of information
Teaching: Use contexts your students will relate to

Loot:
NA
Fame:
+4 (didn't just arrest her, helped her)
Devotion:
NA
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana

Overview:

Story Interesting meet and greet! I liked very much that you met over a nearly-stolen book in the romance section of the library. Lots of knowledge - I couldn't really see a lot of linguistics in there, but I got what I could. Please let me know if you think I've missed any there. Also - I've given the history knowledges to both of you as I couldn't see them in Malcolm's CS, but it makes perfect sense that he would know them. If I just missed them, please feel free to ignore!
Structure Lovely, no issues.

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