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The Rise of Padfoot

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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Ashan 73rd.

Keep things quiet. Keep things quiet.
It was the rule of paw, for the Becomer that strode through the Underground. He’d been exploring Etzos, staying out of trouble for some time. Sure, he was hell-bent on putting an end to that mage, but he knew it wasn’t something he could do alone. Vuda by himself was powerful, and Mal was sure he traveled with guards. He needed help, or at least more information.
Soft pads danced across the rubble-strewn halls of the Underground, the Becomer little more than a stout dog. I believe they called me Padfoot, I wonder if they still tell stories about me? Memory had shown him some familiar places, but all the homeless had been cleared out. Where have they gone? He started paying more attention, feeling like there was something horribly wrong.
Ears twitching, the Becomer sensed the movement of boots clapping on damp stone ahead.
Guess I’ll just stalk one of ‘em til they put out.
Head bowing down, he shifted his weight, careful to lay each paw down by the big pad before taking another step, his movements quiet as a scurrying mouse. The figure picked up pace, and so did he, but he stayed well within the darkness; a human could not see as well as him in the dark.
The tailing continued for several bits, but before long his nose twitched with some fetid scent. Rot. Fekking rot. His eyes studied a nearby passage, and the smell of it all made him want to gag. There were bodies down here, places where the ceiling had given in. Their pale husks gazed lifelessly at him, and his heart rate quickened when he felt a chill ripple through his side.
That was’uh breeze, yeah. It was.
It had to be.
But he didn’t lose his tail. It all made his heart heavy, but he ignored it well enough to catch up with his prey. That human kept stepping along like it didn’t even bother him, and time ticked on. Just where is this fekking bastard going? He’s gotta be up to no good, eh?
It had been nearly half a break since Mal had begun his chase, the cover of darkness soon yielding to torch light flickering upon the cold stone. Every so often the flames hissed from water dripping above, but he watched the shape of that dark figure enter in and out of sight, his own sight blinded by the luminescence.
Muffled voices echoed out their casual conversation, vulgarities spewed like nobody’s business. He recognized their accents, and as he approached he knew the attire; criminals. Those vagrants turned vagabond, the rough sort one didn’t want to know that well.
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[M] They Lay Dead and Dying

Then he saw them. His eyes focused on the chains, the shackles. A grueling feeling rose within his stomach as their emaciated forms came into view. This is where they’ve gone. They’re fekking putting the homeless in chains. His fur bristled, eyes leering up at a man clad in leathers ushering them along. He had a whip, but the lot of them were so afraid they just jostled forward at his back and call. The man paused to stare down at the dog standing there in the dark.
”Lookie here, its’a doggie. Is’ got the strange eyes, yeah?” His gruff voice hammered Mal’s ears, and he threw them back.
The man looked to two of his nearby compatriots who emerged from the shadows, but the Becomer held his ground.
Indeed he tilted his head, knowing they were no match for him. Give me one good reason why I shan’t stain the ground with your blood, you bastard.
A low growl rose up from his throat, his lips peeling back into a snarl as that lowlife bent forward with a hand outstretched to pet. Teeth snapped at it, dragging open the flesh through a gloved hand. He could taste the crimson as it dribbled from his lips.
”Ow, fekker bit me!” His boot snatched forward, but Mal hopped back, deftly avoiding a blow. “Argh!”
The man was getting frustrated, but Mal didn’t want to blow his cover. I gotta kill Vuda. Fek, I’m sorry you poor lot. He turned and bounced out of the conflict towards the place they were going, disappearing into the dark. The man didn’t give chase, but Mal paused to give one last look at the starved men and women before turning the corner with a heavy heart.
The Underworld threw another tragedy at him. The feck? The feminine squeals of a woman pierced his ears. There was a man leading a girl around by her golden hair, and she was buck-naked and thin.
”You’re my damn wager,” he said. “Get the fek in there.”
”S-stop! Please! I don’t want to!” She struggled and tousled with him.
The whole thing sent Mal over the edge. That’s it... he seethed. The other slaves were starting to catch up, that man from before obviously using them in some kind of fecked-up gambling ring built off the backs of the homeless. The cheer of men addicted to vice met his ears, the whole crowd of ‘em welcoming the new wench.
Then the door shut, and Mal glanced at it as he walked by, noting how thick the door was. I’ll make short work of that.
Moving on, he turned the corner and began wandering a bit until he found some secluded dead-end. The spite that filled him echoed through his mind, their flagrant abuse of the dying getting to him in ways he didn’t think possible. Gonna kill ‘em all for this.
Every last one.
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Sitting his bum down against the cold stone, Mal shut his eyes and began formulating what he wanted, conceptualizing the form he would take. Yeah, bit of this. And that... Then he drew from that connection within, Borrowing from several of his totems.
The base he’d be using was the Hyx, and he held that one in his mind, wrapping several traits onto it. First came traits from the Bronze Boar; tusks of the gleaming metal, all of his thick fur changing to the material, and he even applied it to his long, sharp claws.
His body started to pop and ripple, bones shifting and snapping into place with the most sickening sounds, yet the pain barely came to mind anymore. In this fog of transformation, he continued to pull away the best of what he could: the superior reflexes of an Obsidian Panther, and its endurance. That was it; he couldn’t Borrow anymore, so he let the transformation come together.
Gleaming bronze jutted from his jaws, sharp tusks thick and powerful. A gigantic Hyx taller as your typical man at eight feet in height, his metallic claws glimmering in the firelight. He felt oh so powerful, but there was more he could do; reaching within, he Adapted the dense muscle of his Lotharro totem, layering it naturally over his entire form. His body stretched outward, growing thicker in places, his softer underbelly now packed with the dense tissue. Even his legs had a lot more ‘umph’ to them.
The feeling made him crave more, in a way.

Prepared for war, Mal knew he would be able to cause profound change. He could feel it in his bones, and his thoughts narrowed their focus on that homeless-trading gambling den. How could such a place be allowed to persist under Etzos? His paws began their trek towards War, and the thoughts and memories of the siege on Rhakros streamed into his mind like a venom.
I hate killing. He exhaled in mild pity, then narrowed his eyes with a certain ferocity. But somebody’s gotta do it.
There was nobody standing outside the den, but his sensitive ears could pick up the muffled rowdy crowds, drunk off pure joy derived from suffering.
Mal saw himself in those chains, he empathized with those emaciated husks of men and women--was there a child? There was. A young boy, but he was so focused on his vengeance that only now he remembered him among the faces.

That door looked sturdy, but he knew sharp tusks and claws would make short work of it. He backed up, then bounded forward at the door. Startled cries met his ears as those tusks splintered through, and he heaved, goring the wood apart and off to the side towards the hinges. They popped off. Then he stabbed back into the lower portion, and with a shove of his paw the door twisted from its lock into a mangled heap.
What met his Hyx eyes happened to be a flurry of chaos. Some were so lost to drugs that they didn’t care, others were brandishing their knives at him by the door. Some had weapons but didn’t want to get involved; smart, but they also held the reigns to the slaves.
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However, even they started to move when that gigantic beast plowed through the door. Metal glinted all around, dozens of eyes in this temple to debauchery glaring at him. Some were afraid, he could tell, but they still held confidence in numbers. I’ll change that.

Adapting the proper vocal chords for Lotharro speech was a simple affair. His primal, growled voice seethed at all in the room, commanding attention. Even those being enslaved by these criminals started to shake and cower, and his voice carried a certain grating tone that vibrated deep into the ear.
“All whom have abused the weaker,” he stepped further into the room, and then to the side. “Strip down to your undergarments and leave this place, or know your end!” he said.
He followed with a deep, piercing growl. A few of the cowards began to undress, causing divisions among the ranks. They hurried past, leaving their belongings behind. One clung to a coin purse, but he allowed it. These people had the sense to know they were in the wrong place, but the rest of the lot brandishing their weapons?
”Fek you, fekking monster! ‘Ye ain’t got shit on the whole lot of us!”
”Aye, we’ll gut’m.” The man center was a big burly fellow with a real sword. A few of these men had wicked-looking serrated daggers, but Mal knew they were no match.
”One more chance, fools.” Mal stomped forward, prompting a dozen men to step back, pushing into those in the second row. They started tripping over one-another. None had ever fought anything as terrifying before. Righteous anger began to fill his voice. “Your blades cannot pierce my hide. I will rip out your throats and devour every last one of you boot-wetting, pathetic excuses for humanity.”
A wild fury began to brim from within. He gave them so many chances to cut loose their wicked ways and flee, but they seemed determined to cling to their immoral proclivities.
And then one hurtled a bottle. “Fek you!”
The fire within ignited into a blaze as that glass shattered with but a swipe of bronze tusks. He grimaced, and his whole body lowered as if coiled to spring like a cat.
”Big mistake!” he growled.
”’s outnumbered, go ‘er his belly, an’ his eyes!”

He couldn’t even tell who was who, but the man from before with the whip lashed at his face. Air whistled followed by a sharp crack, but that didn’t phase him in the slightest. He had total confidence here.
What are a few poorly-armed men to a great beast?
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All the slaves were equally terrified. They were shackled to one-another, with that naked wench from before huddled in a cage suspended above a table for games, gold Nels scattered about.
Among the opponents were a couple quiet burly ones, the bouncers for this establishment, and another sitting on a comfy couch far beyond the chaotic rabble of this conflict seemed to be the owner of this little den. Though acknowledged, that individual remained ignored for now.

A sword barreled down towards his head. Again, Mal angled his tusks upward and turned the blade aside. Still ready to pounce, he bounded upward, all of that kinetic energy traveling up through his limbs as his hulking, heavy form plowed into the band of deplorables, sending their ranks scattering.
His paws took down the first individual. Mal saw his frightened face, he felt his limbs try to bring up that blade, but tooth went to neck. The life began to pour out of him. A stabbing pain shot through his side, but he wasn't phased by it in the slightest. A knife had been driven deep into his layers of sinewy muscle, the warped nature of his flesh contorting around the blade and plugging the wound. He ignored it, he would deal with it later.

Then a blade slashed down against him, and it glanced off his metallic fur. The owner of the blade seemed confused; it was like swinging his sword at a wall of thick leathers while the battle raged, and he turned to swing the knife-wielder aside while kicking the man with the actual sword with his hinds, claws rending him as they pummeled the poor sot off his feet and into the wall. The man’s belly spilled forth the contents it housed.
Facing another swordsman now, his very long and thick, heavy tail batted aside another knife-wielder who came in from behind with a snap. Then he hopped up towards the blade and took it in his metallic teeth, crunching down against it until the metal gave way and snapped.
Left with half a sword, the man backed towards another wall. One of his camarades fled out into the halls when he saw the fight wasn’t going as expected.

Tusks drove forward, impaling themselves into each lung through the man’s ribcage. Stuck, when Mal turned he slammed the flailing impaled lowlife against that big brute of a bouncer who'd just finished pushing his way through the cowards to try and resolve the situation. The man stumbled back, and that body slipped from the Becomer’s tusks where it hit the ground dead or dying.
Mal didn’t care. The idiot signed his death warrant by staying.

Now their group had been thinned, their ranks scattered out of fear and a lack of coordination. They were the type to fight for themselves, they lacked the unity to take on someone like Mal, and he could almost smell it on them through the metallic odor of crimson filling the place.
That knife in his side dug a bit as he jumped at the guard for this joint. Heavy paws wrestled him down, claws sinking onto the shoulders. Then he ripped a paw up from the flesh and smashed his face in with one heavy stomp. The skull crunched underfoot and the body spasmed a bit before it no longer moved.
”Monster!” cried one trembling man. Another with the look of fear in his eyes managed to break free of the frightening spell of such a creature and charge with a stab. The strike was smart, but with a turn of his body the blade glanced off, and Mal caught the man’s torso with a maul of his paw, slamming his lower back into a table where it fractured.

The latest victim of Mal’s War on this injustice slumped forward, passing out from the shock. More men began to flee, but he started to block off their escape, stepping into their path.
“’Ye had your chance,” he said. “Fekking fools.”
”P-please!” One stammered, pressing his back to the slaves who were equally terrified, moving his hands to lift his garments away and disrobe as if by some last-ditch effort to save his own hide.

Mal looked out beyond the three remaining combatants. ”’E’s using ‘ya lot. I’m ‘ere for them bastard abusers. ‘Ya ain’t no slaves, so do somethin’ with ‘ya lives and stand up ‘fer ‘yaselves. ‘An’ ‘ya know me as Padfoot!” There it was, the rumored name.
”You’re that dog the kids say’ll help them out?”
”’Ya, the very ‘un.” He crouched, those three remaining men pressing close for solidarity. The man on the couch behind them barely lifted a finger, just watching everything with mild curiosity.
That coward was quickly wrapped in chains and strangled by a skinny fellow, the slave’s teeth bared. “Ol’ Padfoot helped my little ‘bro!” he said.

Then Mal padded towards the remaining reserve of criminals who clearly wanted to run. Among them was the man with the whip, in the middle, who owned a majority of these false slaves. “Figure ye’d hide behind the other bodies,” Mal spat.
“Hey, hey, listen here Padfoot, we can make a deal-”
“-No.” he interrupted.
The man’s grip tightened, his brow scrunched in fierceness. Mal heard their bodies shaking. They were going to die, right? Or would he spare them?

With total control of the situation, Mal sighed and looked to either man. “You two, shed your fekking clothes and get the fek out of my sight. If I EVER see you again and it’s not to LICK my PAWS, I will rip you limb from limb,” he threatened. “Do I make myself clear?”
They both vigorously nodded and stepped aside to the ruins of scattered currency and seating areas. Mal'd never seen men take their clothes off so fast before, and it wasn't even to get in bed with a lady!
"Git lost!" he spat at them on their way out. They ducked their heads and scurried, their pale rears the last thing he saw.

"Now, for you..." he eyed the remaining man. "Strip."
"You're just gonna kill me anyway, f-fekking beast!"
"Do the fek what I tell you to do, strip the fek naked and unchain all the men 'y've got the key to. Then 'yer gonna apologize to all these fine citizens of Etzos, and THEY'LL decide your punishment. I can' do all the work."
The man's rate of breath quickened with the beat of his heart, but the fear of his own death spurred him forth. He began to turn to go undress, but Mal growled insistently. He went about it, quicker, getting to his skivvies and then some. A slave laughed at the big naked fellow, finding the irony disturbing. The very first man he freed went and got his clothes, beginning to dress himself in the garments of his former so-called 'master.'
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[M] The Rise of Padfoot

While the rest of them were distracted, Mal finally set his sights on that remaining, vile piece of trash in lavish clothes. Now, if one didn't know Mal very well, the narrator's gonna clue you in; he hates any entitled prick sitting on wealth living off the backs of others more than anything in all of Idalos.

They met eye to eye. "Give me one reason I shan't savor the taste of your fekking tendons stringing through my teeth like a damn dessert."
Unflinching, the man finally spoke, but first he chuckled and tapped his cane against the floor. "I must say this carnage you've made of the place is bad for business. “What do you want to leave this fine establishment all to its lonesome? Name your price."
”The only price ‘ta pay is one for ‘ya life,” said the chimeric Hyx.
The man wavered, eyes narrowing as if thinking long and hard. “You’ve got me in a bind, it would appear.”
“Aye, ‘ya damn right I do,” Mal said, swiping his claw over the man’s face.
The ‘gent hissed and howled in agony, his face going red. “Alright, alright!” he said.. ”Two onyx Nel!”
”Hah! As if!” Mal barked, nodding at the slaves who were very nearly free. Each of them began to dress as Padfoot spoke to the man. “You’re gonna shelter ‘em all, feed ‘em, clothe ‘em, and train ‘em to get work. Errything’s comin’ outta your money and I’ve got your scent’choo lil’ twat. ‘Ya work for me now, and if ‘ya run I’ll cross the fekking sea til I make a meal outta ‘ya.”
”That’s too expensive-”
Mal brandished his claws inches from the man’s eyes. “Hey, ‘f it ain’t worth ‘ya life you’re free to die here, scum. ‘Ya’ve got guts, or ‘ya’re just too stoop ‘ter understand, but even I can’t sit here and play babysitter. Thas’ ‘yer job.”
”Fine, I’ll do it.” The owner of this seemed none-too-happy about the arrangement.
”I’ll know if you try to screw me over, and I’ll pop in from time to time ‘fer information, and to check on my little investment.”
”I’ll be out of money in a season.” He was pinching his bloody cheek together through the sleeve of his fine fur coat.
”Get ‘em work, charge ‘em a fair rent to keep ‘ya afloat. There’s ‘ya incentive.” he said. “Preach my name, I want every little bitch who thinks ‘ey can get away with fekking an underdog ‘ta think ‘bout what I might do FIRST. I own you. I’m the alpha ‘ere.” Mal could see the resentment in the man’s eyes. “Iss’ jus’ wus’ fair ‘n wus’ right. Aye’ll let you off the hook, jus’ you redeem ‘yerself. Or is that too hard?”
“No,” the man answered simply, cowed by the Becomer.
“Then it’s settled. Now...” his eyes glanced around the room. His eyes spotted a colorful caged bird, and the chimeric Hyx went over to it. His claws rended apart the cage and he let it out to flutter around. All the armed free men watched as Padfoot snatched the bird out of the air and pinned it down by the wing. “I wonder...”

It would certainly be a help to all these good people if he could feed ‘em, even arm ‘em. Just rescuing the lot wouldn’t be enough, he had to earn their loyalty. So he looked up, and his eyes glanced over each of them, establishing his presence. “Don’t be afraid of me,” he enunciated. “I would never harm you, an’ I know this ain’t gonna look pretty but bear with me. Stick around to fill ‘yaselves up, but ‘ya can go push your luck out there if ‘ya really want to.
“‘Cept that guy, of course.” He flicked his chin at the man on the couch, who still hadn’t moved. Mal could tell he looked irritated. “Don’t trust ‘em, but maybe he’ll prove me wrong?”

Mal’s band of rescued misfits thinned out by a pair of healthy louts, and one of the scrawny ones. He watched them go with a primal smirk, then turned his attention to the bird under his paw. “Now let’s see...”

Pulling information from the totems within himself, Mal got the idea of what he wanted--a Hyx, with all the bones made of that bronze tusk material from the boar, and bronze fur. He also took that dark coloration from the Obsidian panther to make everything black, so it wouldn’t look like him, and so the bones wouldn’t glint off the light. Then he focused his powers outward, finding only a light resistance as the power traveled through his paw into the form that began to ripple and pop, growing larger underneath his weight.

It took a lot of effort, a certain kind of concentration he wasn’t quite used to. The transformation took longer than usual, and a lot of the men were starting to look pale with fear of what they didn’t understand. That bird just grew and grew, mass congealing and snapping together to form the vague outline of some canine, finally coming together into a pitch-black Hyx with black tusks that had the consistency of bronze.
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He looked up from his work, smiling as he put a paw over the shocked animal’s throat. It squirmed in pure terror, not knowing what had happened to it. Everything the creature knew was different, its own body stolen away... and its life, as Mal tore the throat out with his claws. It sputtered and eventually went still after a whole bit, the kill clean. He wished he could have given it a quicker death.
”An’ there we have it!”
”Pads,” a boy stepped forward, looking nervous and scared. He couldn’t’ve been more than fifteen Arcs.
”Speak freely, I don’t bite,” Mal assured him.
”That knife, stickin’ outta you. Doesn’t it hurt?”
The Becomer’s eyes seemed to grow distant, and he went bone-chillingly still. The pain crept back into his mind like fireworks, all that adrenaline sloughing away from his n but a moment. “Ow, shit!” he barked, turning to look at it. “Do me a fav’ah an’ pull it out?”
The boy seemed to grow nervous. “Okay,” he said coolly, and cautiously approached the terrifying beast. His scrawny hands grasped the handle and gave a tug, upsetting the wound. A bestial snarl resounded that had everyone on edge, and the boy froze.
“S-sorry!”
”Rip it out with all your strength, use your muscle! Don’t worry ‘bout hurtin’ me!” Mal said.
Finally the boy took hold with a firmer grip, this time laying his palm against his prickly, metallic fur. He began to pull, rivulets of red percolating up from the blade. Mal hissed as it gradually loosened, and the blade popped free covered in his crimson essence. Red spurted from the hole in his side, but his body felt the trauma and gradually began to seal the wound as he thought it might.
”Thanks, lad,” Mal said, one eye shut from the pain. “Was’ ‘yer name?”
”Barron, Ser.”
”I wan’ you to keep that knife. Les’ call it Redtooth. Is’ yours, alright?”
”Yeah, thanks... Pads,” the boy wiped his face casually, but he smiled.

The whole thing seemed to warm the crowd up a bit. Those that thought about leaving after seeing that bird get completely warped by magic really started to see the good side of Mal.
”Who among ‘ye can butcher ‘an cook? ‘Dun wan’ anything goin’ ‘ter waste.”
”I can, ser.”
”An’ I,”
”Guess I can too.”
”We got a lotta cooks,” Mal said. “Thas’ good, ya’ll got talents.”

The Becomer looked over to the guy supposed to be managing the place. He didn’t like that the male was just sitting there, doing nothing.
”Get off ‘yer ass and help these gentlemen get that corpse to the kitchen, carve it up, and clean the bones. After that you’re gonna change this place to a respectable tavern here in the underground.”
”Aye, Padfoot,” the gent slowly stood, popping off his hat and removing his coat. He still looked none-too-amused.
”Was’ ‘yer name, ‘ya got family?”
”Moriandis,” he said solemnly, pausing. He seemed to shift at the question. “Y-yeah, I’ve got blood, but ‘e’s not in Etzos.”
”Mori, who’ever it is they’d be really cross with you for that shit you were letting happen here,” Mal said, taking a moment to look out over all the naked bodies.
”Speaking of which, could the rest of you lot get these fekkers piled up outside so ‘e can burn ‘em later, then come back ‘ere’?”
”Sure thing, Boss.” a man said.
”Boss?”
”Well, you saved our hides,” he glanced around. “Owe you at least a bit, don’t we?” he elbowed a despondent skinny man, who piped up.
”Y-yeah.”

Moriandis was still standing there while men clad in the most sordid, bloody sundries passed him by, each content to wear the used raiment of their oppressors.
“Hey, why’re you so quiet?” he said. “The quiet ones are dangerous.”
”You’re taking my business,” Mori snapped. “Do you know how hard I’ve worked for this?”
”’Ya, so work a bit harder, pay your dues. You owe Etzos and its underdogs, you abused it, you abused them. Now things are balancing out, eh?”
“I don’t-”
“I don’t give a shit. You’ve got a kid, you’ve got someone you care about righ’? Do them proud, life’s not all about Nels, ‘ya twat.”
The gent put his face in his hands and began to sob.
”I’m makin’ change ‘round here. First the Underground, then all’a Etzos. Help me bring that change, do right. They who have too much, they don’ need it, ‘ey can share. ‘Elp me put these sods to work, anyone with the will to do it. Forgive ‘em ‘fer what they did.”

Well, I’m one to talk. I just butchered a whole Wing worth of miscreants. An’ fekkin’ hell I’m start’n to sound like Rockholm. Bastard of a Highmark.

“If they wanna change, that is.”

The men returned from their corpse run, each of them one by one sitting ‘round a table. The group of cooks had since managed to drag that cumbersome beast to the kitchen, and Mal let Mori have a few moments instead of pressing. He loomed over the skinny lads, who seemed troubled and nervous, but one remained determined--that boy of fifteen, Barron.
”Now, show’ah hands. Who knows these tunnels?” Mal called over them. Three out of nine raised their hands.

”You three, I want you to come together, I’ll give ‘ya some Nel on the ‘morrow, then you’ll go an’ buy a map. After that I want all of the rubble, the crumbled and lesser-known passageways, every secret, every nook, every locale and Etzori outpost detail.”
”Aye”
”Got it, Pads,”
”Wass’it for?”
”It’s so we can protect ah’selves. Now, these crooks, the Etzori. They aren’t gonna like us. If we have a map we can set up what’s called ‘a stratagem’, learned ‘bout these things as a war vet. I was Etzori once, but I’m a deserter.”
Some of the men reeled with surprise, blinking. “You were Etzori?”
”Yeah, but y’know Vuda, that prick? He’s a mage, an awful one. Forced my enlistment and threatened to kill some’ah my friends if I di’nt join.”
”If he’s as terrible as you say, why would I want to cross him?”
”Honestly, leave the fighting to me. We’ll pull this place up and I’ll protect you lot, then maybe we’ll get some allies. Vuda’s gotta be hated by a whole lotta people who’ve got some power of their own.” he said. He didn’t think any of these men were in any shape to fight. “’Ya should at least train to handle yourselves, those guys I let go with nothing might want some revenge.”
“I’m guessin’ you can change shape. How do we know if is’ you.”
“My eyes are always the same, an’ I got an accent.”
“Fair enough.”
”Actually a bit impress’ so many ‘ah you lot stayed, got your reasons?”
”Don’t have much else, and I think I’m losing it. Figure throwing in with a talking fox monster is a given.”
”Same here.”
”Aye.”
”I just heard there’d be food.”

The rest of the group went dead silent, and stared at the young man for a good while. Then they burst out laughing, and Mal let out a chuckle too. “Well it’s ‘ya lucky day,” he said. “Days. If ‘ya work for me you’ll never go hungry.”

Mori came over to the table and hovered, every seat filled. He had his hands behind his back, and fidgeted nervously.
“Was’ up?” Mal said.
”If you want them fed, we’ll need Nels, and I’ve got some ideas. I know you don’t like slaves, but your morals are questionable elsewhere. Would you like to outline what you’re supportive of, so we can operate without these fellows starving?
”Ah, good man Mori!” Mal chuckled. “I knew you”d come around, good ideas!”

He looked out over the men for a brief moment as if sizing them up. “Well,” he looked back to Mori. “Indentured servitude’s fine without abuse, so long as they’s paid an’ they get some time off. I guess ‘ah slave is fine too if ‘ya treat them with the same respect with free time, but that shit going on in here wasn’t right, and you know that. ‘Yer a good man, I don’t have to tell you was’ fekked up and was’ not.”
”So slave labor is fine, provided they aren’t pushed too hard, and they aren’t abused...” his voice trailed off, his mind working out the problems.
”The rest ‘ah you wanna object ‘ter this thought?”
”I think a slave should be able to earn their freedom.”
”So be it. But no slave whores, an’ no slave fighting rings. That shit’s detestable.” his eyes narrowed, and he thought about it a bit. “An Arc of labor under our business, and we turn ‘em loose. Get ‘em cheap but able, and offer ‘em a job, groom ‘em for a role we need.”
”That’s too short of a slavery term,” Mori countered. “Five Arcs?”
”Nah, one. I don’ think I wan’ us to profit off the backs o’ the lowest rung, y’know?”
”Then what are we going to do for profit?”
”Ain’t give two shits if ‘ya steal from the rich.”
”Now there’s something I can work with. I know a fence.”
”Good.”
”Any objection to the enslavement of Mr. Whippy?” Barron hooked his thumb over his shoulder, pointing at the bound and naked, gagged man, the former oppressor now oppressed that the group had decided would be their slave as punishment for his sins.
”An Arc, yeah, tis' fine. Watch 'em though." Mal said.

He thought for a moment as silence filled the table, and found a gritty subject on his mind.

”An' religion?” he questioned, weary of where this subject would lead given the nature of Etzos.
”Never bothered me much. You guys?”
"Nah," one said. "To each their own."
"We can offer protection services to temples here in the Underground," Mori smiled.
"So long as they's decent immortals. Like, don' wan' them sponsoring senseless murder an' gross shit. Lisirra had it coming when I helped burn her nest of fekking worms to the ground. Gotta be the flexible sort."
"Kiba's whole thing is neutrality, and we'll probably want support from Ethelynda and Raskalarn to fight our battles," a man with a shaved head spoke calmly. "I did a sermon for mercenaries."
"'Ya some kinda monk?"
"Sorta, lost my position in Ne'haer from drunkenness and followed family to Etzos."
"If 'ya can stay off the booze, maybe we shoul' get 'an temple goin', never been helped by an Immortal before, but it ain't hurt to try, righ'?" he looked around the table.
"I guess," said Barron.
"I'm not gonna pray or some fek-all pointless shit, but if some fancy magic thing comes down from its perch and wants to help me I'm not gonna say no."
"Name's Garn," said the monk. "A new faith coul' work, wouldn't mind it. Lotta people gonna hate us though."
"Let 'em hate. Is' fine. They'll be too afraid to cross me. I take it the motto will be 'ya dun' fek with us, we dun' fek with you? Spread the wealth, make things fair. Don't be an asshole? Fight when you gotta?"
"Yeah." The monk scratched his chin, really thinking about it.
"Sounds alright, wouldn't be opposed to it. Still shouldn' let the immortals fek with us too much though," another said. "Name's Ziggy by the way."
"Hah, glad we're all gettin' along 'n such," Mal said. "Normally in Etzos 'ya bring up faith and people are at each other's throats."
"Most of the Immortals I dun' wanna know that well. Like Faldrun. Fek that guy."
"Aye'v heard ah' that one," said Mal. "The Aukari were attacking Etzos 'n I was in the Etzori. Sounds like a prick."
"Yeah, shoul' stand against the jealous immortals, hold our own, but accept the ones that aren't tryin' to push their agendas on us."
"I can't believe I'm talking religion with a surprisingly sociable mage," Mori managed to say, though he was careful with his words.
"I don' like that word, 'mage', jus' call me Padfoot." Everyone seemed to nod in agreement, and Mal let it go.

"Y'know, I got a question, and don't bite me for this," Ziggy said.
"What's it?"
"So you's a female right, 'ya ain't got any balls back there?"

The question struck a nerve with Mal. It was a source of constant distress at times. "I'm a guy," he said.
"But you're not."
"Don' make me turn you into a female dog."
"Whelp." Ziggy crossed his arms. "The fact that I'm still alive and myself shows you guys we can trust 'em."
"Fek you too, buddy."

Everyone burst out laughing hysterically, even Barron giggling up a storm as he slapped the table. At their apex the doors to the kitchen opened, and all of Mori's silver dishes came out on a cart loaded with steaming Hyx steak. By the scent of it, the cooks had made good use of the spices available to them. Everyone had a look of wonder, and one of hunger at that.
"Well then. It's time for the first good meal you guys've had in however long."
"Forever," gasped Ziggy.
"Give," Garn reached out, taking a plate off the cart. He immediately started to chow down on the black meat, nobody really care what color it was, as starved as they were.
”Thanks,” Barron eep’d out with a plate placed in front of him. He stared, and as he did Garn finished his own serving.
“You gonna eat that?” the monk said with his mouth full.
“Gr!” Barron tugged his plate away, then dug into the meat like a wild thing.

Mal just froze. He watched all of the joy, the unity in these people who had suffered less than Breaks ago, and he felt all warm and fuzzy. Nightshade... his mind drifted back to her. Are you still within Etzos? Why am I so afraid to go looking for you?

”Thanks, all ‘a ‘ya. Especially ‘ya folks who’ve prepared this meal for us.”
”Well, you provided the kill, Pads!” said a cook.
”’Ya guys mus’ be starved. I shan’t keep you. I’ll... I’ll go keep watch. Enjoy yourselves, don’ get into any brawls, an’ ... yeah.”
The big ol’ Hyx meandered out of the place, his heart heavy. He sat by the busted door and peered out into the flickering halls solemnly. Is that really me? Can I really do these things? Who am I but a monster to these people?

“To Padfoot!” the men cheered, clanking their glasses of fine wine together. Even Mori was starting to get into the swing of things. Mal looked over his shoulder through the door, not sure if he trusted the motley thirteen that comprised this little group.
How can they share a glass with the guy who ran this shit hole?

“What have I gotten myself into...? Fek, Mal...” he sighed. All he saw in these men were more people Vuda could use to strike him in the heart. No, I’ll kill that bastard. I’ll kill him right quick, and then I’ll gut Pahrne too if I have to. But I need help. There’s gotta be mages that aren’t in the Coven somewhere, mages gearing up to strike Vuda down just like me.
I think that’s where I’ll start. But are all of them going to be fekked up?
We’ll see.
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  • Structure: 5/5
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General Lore:
  • Becoming: Borrowing
  • Becoming: Borrowing a Bronze Boar's Coat
  • Becoming: Adapting Lotharro musculature slows down a Hyx's body immensely
  • Becoming: Borrowing Bronze tusks on a Hyx's face unbalances the head a little
  • Becoming: Echoing a human voice
  • Padfoot: Friend to the victimized
  • Leadership: A good meal restores morale
  • Unarmed: The use of tusks in catching and disarming blades
  • Unarmed: Using four legs for superior combat mobility
-5 Fame for your use of magic as a savage dog-beast. You may be doing positive things, but you've likely angered powerful people.

Notes: Roit, gonna hit you with some overstepping for this one buddy. Definitely pushed all your borrowing and then a metamorphosis combined with borrowing, all that echoing and adapting musculature for your ENTIRE body. Since we're nearly to the end of the season, these Overstepping effects will hit you next season and last throughout it. Unique challenge and all that. However, you did utilize your mastery of the magic quite well...pushed some limits. So this is allowed to boost your Becoming. You did not have the knowledges for these techniques, but you had the sufficient skill level and wrote them correctly, so I will allow this to be used for magic exp, but if you try to use any other abilities you don't have the knowledge for in the future, I will not be allowing the thread to be used for magic points. Now, there will be no devotion for this thread. Devotion is specifically dedicated acts. You did all this stuff, but none of it was actually done for an Immortal, but rather your own values. Immortals are not omniscient, they do not see all acts in the world. Only acts of Devotion draw their eyes.

Also, if you look at Becoming, I have removed Metamorphosis as an ability and replaced it with another. It felt more appropriate to the magic. You won't be deducted points on this (As it happened after this thread was written) and I'm cool with this being a thing that occurred, we can come up with a reason later.

You will be deducted a point, however, for your misuse of magic. You have no Knowledges on Borrowing or Adaption and it clearly states in the guide you need Knowledges to LEARN the variants. You had none on Metamorphosis either and usually the first attempts at techniques will be unsuccessful. Mind that in future threads.

Your Overstepping penalty for next season will be Totem Restriction. You have lost access to your Hyx form for next season. Mal relies on this form almost exclusively so I'm interested to see how he'll adapt without it. The totem is not damaged, it is fine, but you won't be able to utilize it in the upcoming season.

Also, you've left people alive that have witnessed your magic. Word of a transforming demon wolf beast will begin to circulate Etzos. Don't be surprised if folks start hunting you, or seeking you out to solve their problems. :)

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