[Willow Woods] You, Me and a Bruxen makes Three

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Arlo Creede
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[Willow Woods] You, Me and a Bruxen makes Three

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"You're always too young to get killed by a black and evil tentacle thing," Arlo muttered, even while he'd been cleaning up Vega's cuts and scrapes, and she'd been busy resisting his efforts. Squabbling just like their usual was better, he'd think if he cared to think about it at all, than not. In reality he was worried about her. But as long as she remained prickly and hard to get along with, which was Vega's usual, she was probably alright.

And it was supposed to hurt, he insisted. The alcohol at least. It was what his mother had always told him. The effectiveness of the cure was measured by the degree of pain inflicted by applying it. And mostly, as he'd hauled her up and then eventually coaxed her into the back of the cart, Arlo ignored her babbling and the insults that came with it. She was talking and making a semblance of sense, which was all that mattered.

It wasn't easy. Arlo's own inclination was to give as good as he got. But once she was actually in the back of the wagon, he handed her his flask of water and ordered her to drink up. "Try not to roll out of the back of the cart on the way to camp, yeah?" he said and took Peg in hand to lead them all back to camp. Henry meanwhile walked alongside Vega and when she didn't drink the water, he nudged the flask in her hand with his soft muzzle. By now there was no denying the Bruxen knew what was what and who was who.

"No one's gonna leave Vega...And you're not dying if that's what you're worried about," he reminded her. "If you need reminding, just open an eye through the night and I'll be there to say so while making sure you don't wander off or do anything silly." And turned out, it was just what he'd do. Get her back to camp and settled, keep her drinking water and nibbling on light bits of food.

He and Henry would keep watch that way through the night, never letting her sleep too long. Always asking her for her name and other minor bits of information when they woke her. It was the best he could think of to do, considering his own mother had done a similar thing when he was young and had fallen off the edge of the loft in the barn and hit his head. He'd been alright after that. But if she wasn't much improved by morning or got worse through the night, then he'd be going off to find a healer instead.
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If there had been any doubt in Arlo's mind, it became obvious that trial that Vega could, would and did argue, no matter what sort of state she was in. She chastised, disagrees and grumbled about almost everything, yet to Henry she was the very epitome of kind and sweet. More than that, her insistence that she was fine and that he should just "gerroff!" did not abate, but essentially she did as she was told. Mostly.

Sometimes, she even did it the first time he told her.

She sipped the water, nibbled the food and slept. There was no doubt that she did not appreciate being woken up, but as the evening wore on she grew more lucid, complaining of a storming headache but she made more sense, her eye colours reduced to three, then two and she was as able to hold a conversation as she ever had been. When he woke her and asked her what her name was at just past midnight, Vega rolled her eyes and replied quite solemnly. "Tootsie Frumplebush. I live wiv my ma an' my pa an we shoot wascally wabbits." Her smile was genuine, then and she put a hand out to give him a friendly pat on the shoulder. "I feel ok. I don't actually know how we got here, but I'm glad we're all here in one piece. You are, aren't you?" Her fingers were bony as she stopped patting and instead prodded him, "all still in one piece, that is? How'd we get here?"

When Arlo refused to go to sleep, Vega shrugged and shook her head, just ever so slowly. "Your loss sunshine. I'm done in, though, I'm gonna get back to sleep. Hey, you." The last was to Henry who had moved to sit and then lay on the ground next to her. Vega smiled, lowered her head to go back to sleep and put her hand on the Bruxon. "Thanks, Arlo. You're a good friend." She was still pretty shaky, so she closed her eyes. "Ma an' pa Frumplebush would love you, you know. Goodnight."
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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ARLO

  • Knowledge:
    • Hunting: Sensing a Quiet Forest
    • Tactics: Swords Front, Archers Back
    • Ranged Combat: Knowing Where to Shoot Helps
    • Ranged Combat: Steady Breathing; Steady Shot
    • Bladed Combat: Blades are for Close Proximity Fighting
    • Fauna: Bruxen
    • Bruxen: Fighting with Light
    • Monster (Ne'haer): Sylvithia
    • Sylvithia: Bleeds Black Goo
    • Sylvithia: Solidifies with Light
    • Vega: Nag Nag Nag
    • Vega: Considers You a Boy, Not a Man
    • Medicine: Treating Basic Bandages
    Loot:
    • - 4 arrows
    • -1 Bandage
    • - Half bottle of alcohol
    Injuries:
    • Bruising to the right torso: Minimal damage occurred when you were struck. For the next 7-10 trials, it will hurt to breath. The bruising will be black and blue initially and fade to yellow and green before getting smaller and disappearing. Icing will reduce the swelling. No broken bones, thank the Immortals.
    Fame: +2 (Kill a monster)

    Story: 5/5
    Collaboration: 5/5
    Structure: 5/5


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VEGA

  • Knowledge:
    • Hunting: Sensing a Quiet Forest
    • Tactics: Swords Front, Archers Back
    • Tactics: The Benefit of Sticking to a Plan
    • Ranged Combat: Knowing Where to Shoot Helps
    • Fauna: Bruxen
    • Bruxen: Fighting with Light
    • Monster (Ne'haer): Sylvihia
    • Sylvithia: Fast Shadow Beast
    • Sylvithia: Solid Beneath the Smoke
    • Arlo: Killing Him Means You Get the Hat
    • Arlo: Boy-Folk
    • Strength: Kicking and Screaming Requires Muscles
    • Strength: Fear Produces Adrenaline
    Loot:
    • -2 Arrows
    Injuries:
    • Bruising to the left torso: Minimal damage occurred when you were struck. For the next 7-10 trials, it will hurt to breath. The bruising will be black and blue initially and fade to yellow and green before getting smaller and disappearing. Icing will reduce the swelling. No broken bones, thank the Immortals.
    • Generalized pain: Being thrown against a tree is painful. You may find some superficial abrasions on your back from the bark. These should heal in 5 trials or less. You will be sore for the next several trials. You might have a limp and raising our arms above your head will hurt. Oh, and might want to find some pain medication. You'll have a headache too.
    • Concussion: You will probably be ok, but the head trauma should be watched. Don't sleep for too long and mind the nausea. Probably should see a doctor in case you have brain damage.
    Fame: +2 (Kill a monster)

    Story: 5/5
    Collaboration: 5/5
    Structure: 5/5


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Comments: Quick note for structure critique for Arlo. Be careful repeating yourself in a single sentence. If you read the second sentence of your first post, you will see what I mean.

I got a chuckle reading "SHURRUP" from you Vega. You like using that word in Skype as well. Towards the end, I decided that you two are definitely more like siblings. You argue and nitpick at one another incessantly. It makes for a great relationship.

If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thank you!
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I'm bad, and that's good. I will never be good, and that's not bad. There's no one I'd rather be then me.
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